star

nice~

楽しい！

chibiヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

finally someone start to do this

val0108 wrote:

一番☆～

☆ありがとう！
thank you for irc mod~

皆さん☆ありがとです

offset about 3612 (+11)

don't kud.

NatsumeRin wrote:

offset about 3612 (+11)

don't kud.

Fixed~

thx~~!!

good~

kami datta~

S o r d a wrote:

kami datta~

Rucker wrote:

good~

Rigeru wrote:

:D

thx star~

nice map

star~

Apriだが（

[general]
you have a lot of useless timing sections. I won't point them out because it's nazi stuff. If there are two identical timing sections in the osu file, one after the other, you can safely delete the later ones.
you have a halfway decent spread with 4 maps, but normal is 700,000, hard is 10,000,000. I think you need a ~3-7 million map.

[normal]
any particular reason you don't want to use the same colors as the other beatmaps?

[hard]
this is insane, or hard+ at the very least

[insane]
01:20:496 (2,3,4,6) - made up notes. No sound in the background.
02:27:696 (2,3,4,6,8,6,8) - ^ There's also some 8ths if you want to map them.
02:50:325 (3) - made up note

Everything else is perfect, or I just missed it. There might be some hitsounds stuff, but I don't care about those. Very good considering only one mod before me...

ziin wrote:

[general]
you have a lot of useless timing sections. I won't point them out because it's nazi stuff. If there are two identical timing sections in the osu file, one after the other, you can safely delete the later ones. Fixed
you have a halfway decent spread with 4 maps, but normal is 700,000, hard is 10,000,000. I think you need a ~3-7 million map.

[normal]
any particular reason you don't want to use the same colors as the other beatmaps? changed

[hard]
this is insane, or hard+ at the very least Fixed

[insane]
01:20:496 (2,3,4,6) - made up notes. No sound in the background.
02:27:696 (2,3,4,6,8,6,8) - ^ There's also some 8ths if you want to map them.
02:50:325 (3) - made up note

Everything else is perfect, or I just missed it. There might be some hitsounds stuff, but I don't care about those. Very good considering only one mod before me...

Thank you for mod

starr

nice map!

:3

thx star~~~

One of those insane diffs where I don't really get what's going on, but somehow still hit everything.
Nice!

Kyami map..

thx star~~~

Qrool wrote:

Kyami map..

SPOILER

[Hard+/Hit sound]
故意の様にも聞こえますが 下記の方が良いと思います。
01:32:325 (2) - Timing of these changes (whistle,finish,clap) at 01:32:412
03:24:782 (6) - ^ at 03:24:869

普通に間違えてました･･･ｗ
アリガトウ！！

As per your request:

[General]
What an odd resolution for the bg... oh well. It's 4:3 still, hehe. It's cute too~ <3
01:21:612 - I recommend putting the preview time here, that way the fade in doesn't affect the vocal.

[Easy]
00:24:182 (5,1) - Hrm, may be confusing as to when this repeating slider is going to end for easy players. Please try something different here.
00:38:840 - Uh, return this extended break back to where it goes by default please.
00:54:696 (5) - New combo
00:58:983 (1) - Not a very good place for a spinner on this level of difficulty. It's kind of short and sudden. I recommend you just map through this with maybe a long slider.
01:31:382 (5,1) - Same thing as before. Please try a different pattern/rhythm.
01:43:897 (1) - Kind of a short spinner again... maybe start it from 01:42:697 - ?
02:01:896 (5) - New combo
02:06:182 (1) - Not a very good place for a spinner on this level of difficulty. It's kind of short and sudden. I recommend you just map through this with maybe a long slider.
02:12:182 (5) - I really don't recommend you make stacks under sliders in Easy difficulties. Hard to discern the rhythm.
02:17:325 (5) - ^
02:38:582 (5,1) - Yup, same as before
02:51:096 (1) - Same suggestion as before

[Apriy's Normal]
4 objects unsnapped!
00:27:953 (1,2) - Move these two back to the red tick, starting at 00:27:783 - . If you do, add a beat at 00:29:326 - and start 00:30:011 (5) - at 00:30:183 -
00:32:411 (3) - Remove a repeat
01:02:582 (6) - Move this to 01:02:412 - and it'll even be spaced more correctly
01:13:553 (6) - Same suggestion here
01:09:439 (3,1) - Eh, spacing is a bit close here.
Same rhythm change suggestions from the previous chorus
01:45:097 - Extend the beginning of the break to here?
02:09:782 (6) - etc
02:10:126 - Insert a break please
02:20:753 (6) - etc
02:21:440 - Insert a break please
02:42:353 (1) - etc

[Hard+]
00:38:840 - Please return this extended break to where it goes by default
01:46:040 - ^
03:03:269 - End the break extension here instead of where it is now.
03:33:268 (4) - Maybe reduce one repeat and start the spinner right after this?
Fun, but definitely fitting of the Hard+ tag.

[Insane]
18 objects not snapped!
01:31:039 (3,1) - This didn't feel like a good place for a stack. It breaks the general motions that you have set up and feels jarring.
Gaaah, I keep failing at the last section because of so many returning overlaps. ;_;

The harder difficulties are good - give some good focus on the easier ones. I am also kind of worried about the difficulty jump between Normal and Hard+, but a difficulty inbetween would be kind of dumb.

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
What an odd resolution for the bg... oh well. It's 4:3 still, hehe. It's cute too~ <3 Changed 800×600
01:21:612 - I recommend putting the preview time here, that way the fade in doesn't affect the vocal. Changed

[Easy] Remap~~><
00:24:182 (5,1) - Hrm, may be confusing as to when this repeating slider is going to end for easy players. Please try something different here.
00:38:840 - Uh, return this extended break back to where it goes by default please.
00:54:696 (5) - New combo
00:58:983 (1) - Not a very good place for a spinner on this level of difficulty. It's kind of short and sudden. I recommend you just map through this with maybe a long slider.
01:31:382 (5,1) - Same thing as before. Please try a different pattern/rhythm.
01:43:897 (1) - Kind of a short spinner again... maybe start it from 01:42:697 - ?
02:01:896 (5) - New combo
02:06:182 (1) - Not a very good place for a spinner on this level of difficulty. It's kind of short and sudden. I recommend you just map through this with maybe a long slider.
02:12:182 (5) - I really don't recommend you make stacks under sliders in Easy difficulties. Hard to discern the rhythm.
02:17:325 (5) - ^
02:38:582 (5,1) - Yup, same as before
02:51:096 (1) - Same suggestion as before

[Apriy's Normal] All Fixed
4 objects unsnapped!
00:27:953 (1,2) - Move these two back to the red tick, starting at 00:27:783 - . If you do, add a beat at 00:29:326 - and start 00:30:011 (5) - at 00:30:183 -
00:32:411 (3) - Remove a repeat
01:02:582 (6) - Move this to 01:02:412 - and it'll even be spaced more correctly
01:13:553 (6) - Same suggestion here
01:09:439 (3,1) - Eh, spacing is a bit close here.
Same rhythm change suggestions from the previous chorus
01:45:097 - Extend the beginning of the break to here?
02:09:782 (6) - etc
02:10:126 - Insert a break please
02:20:753 (6) - etc
02:21:440 - Insert a break please
02:42:353 (1) - etc

[Hard+]
00:38:840 - Please return this extended break to where it goes by default Fixed
01:46:040 - ^ Fixed
03:03:269 - End the break extension here instead of where it is now. Fixed
03:33:268 (4) - Maybe reduce one repeat and start the spinner right after this? Changed
Fun, but definitely fitting of the Hard+ tag.

[Insane] All Fixed
18 objects not snapped!
01:31:039 (3,1) - This didn't feel like a good place for a stack. It breaks the general motions that you have set up and feels jarring.
Gaaah, I keep failing at the last section because of so many returning overlaps. ;_; ahaha

The harder difficulties are good - give some good focus on the easier ones. I am also kind of worried about the difficulty jump between Normal and Hard+, but a difficulty inbetween would be kind of dumb.

Thank you for mod~~~

Mucha wrote:

:)

thx star~

This is one of the best Insane maps i have played in a while, it's just that great.

Can get a little tough to read sometimes, but very very nice job on it!

i only looked a little fast on your insane diff, and i can't really point out anything wrong with it.

[Insane]
01:31:211 (1,2,3) - This part was a tiny bit confusing, you don't have to change it, but i would suggest increasing the spacing a little like this http://puu.sh/12OY

Don't forgett to snap them notes hehe

Gabi wrote:

This is one of the best Insane maps i have played in a while, it's just that great.

Can get a little tough to read sometimes, but very very nice job on it!

i only looked a little fast on your insane diff, and i can't really point out anything wrong with it.

[Insane]
01:31:211 (1,2,3) - This part was a tiny bit confusing, you don't have to change it, but i would suggest increasing the spacing a little like this http://puu.sh/12OY Fixed

Don't forgett to snap them notes hehe

Thank you for star & mod~~~

Pretty nice!

Bubbled.

Edit : mapper modified some hitsounds , bubble repair.

kioukiou wrote:

Pretty nice!

Bubbled.

Thank you~

thx Bubbled~!!