Shimamura Uzuki, Shibuya Rin, Honda Mio, Otsuki Yui, Kamijo

Vanillas

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Vanillas 2016-05-22T10:53:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年7月1日 at 18:17:50

Artist: Shimamura Uzuki, Shibuya Rin, Honda Mio, Otsuki Yui, Kamijo Haruna
Title: Snow Wings (Game Version)
Source: THE IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS STARLIGHT STAGE
Tags: 346 production idolmaster starlight stage i@mas animation project -Irina Avaron-
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4168kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:

Irina's Adv@nced (3.74 stars, 350 notes)
M@ster (4.75 stars, 468 notes)
Norm@l (1.71 stars, 157 notes)

Download: Shimamura Uzuki, Shibuya Rin, Honda Mio, Otsuki Yui, Kamijo Haruna - Snow Wings (Game Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beatmap for Idol M@ster.

Re-download if downloaded before 2016/6/6
Norm@l / M@ster by me;
Irina's Adv@nced by -Irina Avaron-

I wanna a hard diff...(about 2.85 stars...)

Last edited by Vanillas 2016-07-01T09:23:30+00:00, edited 12 times in total.

-Irina Avaron-

-Irina Avaron- 2016-06-05T13:23:17+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63874
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38724
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Snow Wings (Game Version)
TitleUnicode:Snow Wings (Game Version)
Artist:Shimamura Uzuki, Shibuya Rin, Honda Mio, Otsuki Yui, Kamijo Haruna
ArtistUnicode:島村卯月, 渋谷凛, 本田未央, 大槻唯, 上条春菜
Creator:Vanillas
Version:Irina's @dvanced
Source:THE IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS STARLIGHT STAGE
Tags:bandainamco 346 production idolmaster starlight stage i@mas animation project 00 st@rter best
BeatmapID:994527
BeatmapSetID:459143

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Gust 2016-06-05T16:48:02+00:00

不膜不给玩

[General]
还有难度吗？1.69-3.69有点问题，中间加个2.7左右的diff吧

[Norm@l]
00:44:114 (5,6,1) - 感觉没必要节奏和前面00:41:958 (1,2,3) -下的一样，因此漏了00:44:473 (7) - 这个比较重的音而打起来别扭的话就不值了
00:45:371 (2) - 感觉也是一样，slider尾落在红线，然后白线起个1/2slider，长白线补note
01:37:287 (1) -01:40:162 (1) - 01:43:395 (1) - normal转盘后要空2/1拍，这个只有1/1。想想怎么改比较好

[Irina's H@rd]
00:06:654 (5,1,2) - 擦边和遮挡不好看..不改也无所谓
00:23:994 (3,4,5) - 我觉得这个DS变化还是加个NC什么的比较好。
个人觉得hard还是不要DS变化这么大比较好，像00:29:024 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:24:713 (1,2,3) - 这种在AR8的hard里很坑爹很难读，肯定会被一堆人吐槽的，后边类似的就不说了
00:31:180 (4) - 你跟我的一张图犯了一个错误，这个0.5的变速和1.0的00:30:461 (1) - 看起来一模一样，按照QAT的说法是，100%unrank。变速设个新NC，然后考虑换个sv倍率
00:42:677 (3) - 00:44:114 (4) - 类似的，设个NC吧。。
00:43:575 (2) - 不太喜欢重音落在slider尾..
kiai部分挺不错的。。

[M@ster]
00:20:760 (2,3) - 考虑拆了slider变成单circle+你那个坑爹梗~~其实一点不不坑~~。现在这个DS怎么看怎么别扭
00:32:437 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 很是建议做成2组移动三连
00:47:886 (2,3) - 我觉得舒缓段做成短slider可能更好。。反正少了几个这种梗也没事
01:02:976 (4,5,6) - DS继续增大啊。。怎么减少了，vocal明显是更高昂了
01:20:401 (2,3) - 建议不要叠，前后都没有叠这里突然来一个，打起来有点难受。。
01:22:198 (1,2) - 因为你这张图全是01:23:096 (3,4,5) - 这种梗，这里突然来了个小DS梗会让人混乱，要么用NC区分，要么看看怎么改使得这个梗更容易读一些
01:36:928 (2,3) - 同之前的
01:47:527 (5) - 可以起个NC

没了，液

-Irina Avaron-

-Irina Avaron- 2016-06-05T18:09:35+00:00

Frost Moon wrote:
00:06:654 (5,1,2) - 擦边和遮挡不好看..不改也无所谓先保留一下，感觉问题不大
00:23:994 (3,4,5) - 我觉得这个DS变化还是加个NC什么的比较好。有的细节有点疏忽..(要考试了 >.< √
个人觉得hard还是不要DS变化这么大比较好，像00:29:024 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:24:713 (1,2,3) - 这种在AR8的hard里很坑爹很难读，肯定会被一堆人吐槽的，后边类似的就不说了找了几个人打，确实不好读，√
00:31:180 (4) - 你跟我的一张图犯了一个错误，这个0.5的变速和1.0的00:30:461 (1) - 看起来一模一样，按照QAT的说法是，100%unrank。变速设个新NC，然后考虑换个sv倍率大概改了下，√
00:42:677 (3) - 00:44:114 (4) - 类似的，设个NC吧。。 √
00:43:575 (2) - 不太喜欢重音落在slider尾.. 唔...
kiai部分挺不错的。。谢谢!

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-06T04:56:48+00:00

Frost Moon wrote:
不膜不给玩

[General]
还有难度吗？1.69-3.69有点问题，中间加个2.7左右的diff吧 GD一高兴做炸了（跑

[Norm@l]
00:44:114 (5,6,1) - 感觉没必要节奏和前面00:41:958 (1,2,3) -下的一样，因此漏了00:44:473 (7) - 这个比较重的音而打起来别扭的话就不值了我觉得有必要一样。。。还有那个（7）在哪里。。。
00:45:371 (2) - 感觉也是一样，slider尾落在红线，然后白线起个1/2slider，长白线补note No, I followed vocal here
01:37:287 (1) -01:40:162 (1) - 01:43:395 (1) - normal转盘后要空2/1拍，这个只有1/1。想想怎么改比较好转盘扔了塞满

[M@ster]
00:20:760 (2,3) - 考虑拆了slider变成单circle+你那个坑爹梗~~其实一点不不坑~~。现在这个DS怎么看怎么别扭 reject, 这梗很常见，而且之前你摸过的pata mom的图也用过，而且滑条结尾判定很松，这个又不难打
00:32:437 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 很是建议做成2组移动三连 reject，我非常不喜欢移动三连
00:47:886 (2,3) - 我觉得舒缓段做成短slider可能更好。。反正少了几个这种梗也没事 reject, I wanna make them clickable, and 鼓点很明显的时候不用短滑条好
01:02:976 (4,5,6) - DS继续增大啊。。怎么减少了，vocal明显是更高昂了 fixed
01:20:401 (2,3) - 建议不要叠，前后都没有叠这里突然来一个，打起来有点难受。。 fixed
01:22:198 (1,2) - 因为你这张图全是01:23:096 (3,4,5) - 这种梗，这里突然来了个小DS梗会让人混乱，要么用NC区分，要么看看怎么改使得这个梗更容易读一些 reject 如果Insane这都不会读的话真水平不够，而且中间空了一小节的节拍我不喜欢开着DS把两个物件间距弄得很大，满屏幕跑非常难看
01:36:928 (2,3) - 同之前的同之前的
01:47:527 (5) - 可以起个NC 感觉没啥必要，Keep

没了，液

感谢摸图~

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-06-06T08:18:22+00:00

M4M

[General]

gder tag

[Normal]

00:19:683 (2,5) - 00:23:635 (4,1) - 要这么摆的话，就还是ar5吧，被干的概率低
00:46:090 (3) - 不太舒服
SPOILER
00:47:707 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然没什么问题，不过个人认为这里音乐明显有变化，鼓点也很弱，如果换条轨跟会比较有趣，还是全程1/1稍显无聊
00:59:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Hard]

我看的应该是你改摸之前的，你有把改完的文件发给creator吗？
fm的摸里说改了的我就不再多说了。补一句00:31:180 (4) - 这种地方别说50%，我认为变多少都没必要，hard里有一个简单的代替方案，你可以弯一个弧度比较大的滑条，这样实际打起来的感受是变慢的。hard比较建议的也就是整段整段变sv，比如kiai或者是某些乐曲明显放慢的地方。
00:02:529 (1,2,3) - 00:21:659 (1,2,3) - 这个bpm不低了，你整张图的三连ds都很高，非常难，超纲
00:05:529 (1,2) - 也是有点超纲
00:07:217 (1,2) - 这种地方可以使用视觉ds，就是让2跟1滑条头的距离保持ds，而不是滑条尾，这样会更好看
00:08:717 (4) - 至少要加nc。跟fm说的类似，这里虽然好些，但我也不建议弄得跟00:07:217 (1) - 一样长，建议依然是不要变sv
00:10:217 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:22:198 (4,1,2) - 这一类在hard也都偏难
00:22:557 (1,2,3,4) - 00:23:275 (1,2) - 00:23:994 (3,4,5) - hard别这么搞，nc也不管用，就别这么摆
00:25:431 (2,3,4) - 难读，hard里由于ar低，这种基本都会用折返滑条，至少也是滑条+note
后面还有好几个
00:29:024 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这个你大概已经改了
00:39:802 (1) - 很莫名的变sv，这个跟hard已经没关系了，什么难度这里感觉都没道理变
00:41:419 (5,7,1) - 不好看
00:42:677 (3) - hard里没必要，要强调就用俩note
后面也是
00:42:677 (3,1) - 这里你需要放得更远些，因为是隔一拍
00:43:575 (2,3) - 节奏反过来
00:46:629 (3,4,1) - 这个可能还行……不过也是有点难读，两次一个隔一拍一个一拍半
00:53:455 (1,1,2,3,1) - 这个ds
01:01:180 (1,2) - 视觉ds
01:02:796 (1,2,1) - ds
01:43:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 6的ds，hard不建议这么放
01:46:629 - 还是加个东西。而且你这个01:45:910 (1,1) - ds也读不出
总得来说，我觉得还是要先规矩地作图，尤其是低一些的难度。这个图里有些地方还算有趣，放到insane会比较合适，有些梗感觉本身就不合适，跟难度无关。先多做一些规矩的图之后才会比较容易掌握那些不规矩的东西的用法，加油~

[Master]

bpm虽然不算高，但也不算低了，接近5星的话建议ar9。你可以简单地试试本地搜索“bpm>160 bpm<170 star>4.5”，看看这些图的ar，可能老图会有不少小于9，新一点大体上都有9吧。况且你的图也不是全都很规矩的读图，有这些东西00:01:592 (4,5,6) - 01:22:198 (1,2) - 的存在
00:09:092 (1,2,3) - 自创节奏感觉没必要。想放点东西的话可以把00:08:717 (5) - 改成一个低sv长滑条
00:11:810 (1) - 转盘尾静音（整个转盘其实都可以静音）
01:40:880 (1,2) - 滑条头有点近
01:43:754 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑到乐器音，这里应该是前4个适合note之后俩滑条
01:46:180 - 其实这里也是有声音，这里连打节奏怎么处理你可以再考虑一下
01:47:168 (4,5) - ds有点不舒服
没啥大问题~

GL~

-Irina Avaron-

-Irina Avaron- 2016-06-06T10:58:42+00:00

Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:
怎么说呢...确实做的不怎么样,有的地方很难看,自己作完的和平常打的差距很大......
看到这么长一大篇很开心. 十分感谢您花这么长时间看这个diff. xD

您提出来的这些,基本全部改掉了.------ ALL FIXED √

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-06T11:37:18+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
M4M

[General]
gder tag
[Normal]
00:19:683 (2,5) - 00:23:635 (4,1) - 要这么摆的话，就还是ar5吧，被干的概率低这其实是个Easy，是否干掉还是看bn吧，keep
00:46:090 (3) - 不太舒服很舒服
SPOILER
00:47:707 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然没什么问题，不过个人认为这里音乐明显有变化，鼓点也很弱，如果换条轨跟会比较有趣，还是全程1/1稍显无聊这是个easy，而且没这段算是平静了，keep
00:59:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

[Master]
bpm虽然不算高，但也不算低了，接近5星的话建议ar9。你可以简单地试试本地搜索“bpm>160 bpm<170 star>4.5”，看看这些图的ar，可能老图会有不少小于9，新一点大体上都有9吧。况且你的图也不是全都很规矩的读图，有这些东西00:01:592 (4,5,6) - 01:22:198 (1,2) - 的存在 8.5就这样吧，问题不大，AR9太难，keep
00:09:092 (1,2,3) - 自创节奏感觉没必要。想放点东西的话可以把00:08:717 (5) - 改成一个低sv长滑条有必要，并不觉得有什么违和
00:11:810 (1) - 转盘尾静音（整个转盘其实都可以静音）10%
01:40:880 (1,2) - 滑条头有点近还好
01:43:754 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑到乐器音，这里应该是前4个适合note之后俩滑条圈多了难
01:46:180 - 其实这里也是有声音，这里连打节奏怎么处理你可以再考虑一下有声音，不是我要采的
01:47:168 (4,5) - ds有点不舒服还好
没啥大问题~
GL~

谢摸~

-Zelos-

88 posts

Joined January 2013

-Zelos- 2016-06-06T13:27:28+00:00

Hi, M4M from my queue~

[General]

use big size BG? :3
http://puu.sh/piLAl/9baabd2310.jpg

[N@rmal]

00:47:707 (1,2) - i dont think that it fit music because 00:48:066 - there is not sounds.
my suggestion
00:50:581 (1,2) - ^ same point.
00:53:455 (1,2) - also dont think it fit. there is a sound 00:53:814 - but so small volume. pick the vocal and slider extend 00:53:994 - ?

[Irina's @dvanced]

00:39:802 (1) - only this point sound normal sampleset. miss? or it is your attention, plz ignore mod. but similar part this 00:28:305 (1) - isnt normal.
01:00:281 (2,1) - maybe stack miss a little

i dont discover strange point. maybe good diff :3

[M@ster]

01:03:156 (5) - there isnt sound. delete (5).
01:04:233 (4,9) - stack?
01:47:527 (5,6,7,8,9) - this 5stream dont put hitsound?. i think (5,7,9) on whistle sound good :3

sory my poor modding skill, so could not mod many points.

In return, i shoot star this map.
good luck~

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-07T13:15:54+00:00

-Zelos- wrote:
Hi, M4M from my queue~

[General]
use big size BG? :3 Thanks a lot~~
http://puu.sh/piLAl/9baabd2310.jpg
[N@rmal]
00:47:707 (1,2) - i dont think that it fit music because 00:48:066 - there is not sounds. Fixed~
my suggestion
00:50:581 (1,2) - ^ same point. Fixed~
00:53:455 (1,2) - also dont think it fit. there is a sound 00:53:814 - but so small volume. pick the vocal and slider extend 00:53:994 - ?Fixed~

[M@ster]
01:03:156 (5) - there isnt sound. delete (5). um, I'll keep now, add (5) just to make flow, I found I wanna click something here. Remove it just make me uncomfortable.
01:04:233 (4,9) - stack? Fixed~
01:47:527 (5,6,7,8,9) - this 5stream dont put hitsound?. i think (5,7,9) on whistle sound good :3 Nice idea~
sory my poor modding skill, so could not mod many points.
In return, i shoot star this map. Thanks a lot~~ :)
good luck~

Thanks a lot for modding~~~

-Irina Avaron-

-Irina Avaron- 2016-06-08T18:09:02+00:00

-Zelos- wrote:
[Irina's @dvanced]
00:39:802 (1) - only this point sound normal sampleset. miss? or it is your attention, plz ignore mod. but similar part this 00:28:305 (1) - isnt normal. my mistake here..... FIXED √
01:00:281 (2,1) - maybe stack miss a little FIXED √
i dont discover strange point. maybe good diff :3

Thanks a lot !

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Snow Wings (Game Version)
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ArtistUnicode:島村卯月, 渋谷凛, 本田未央, 大槻唯, 上条春菜
Creator:Vanillas
Version:Irina's @dvanced
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Kobayakawa Sae

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Joined December 2013

Kobayakawa Sae 2016-06-09T15:57:43+00:00

爱马仕灰姑娘大法好！先射为敬！

[Norm@l]
可以，很清真

[Adv@nced]
00:07:217 (1,2,3,1) - 这个地方的节奏我感觉有点奇怪，我个人的看法是：将(1,3)都改成单点
还有就是我觉得前奏比较安静而00:01:779 (5) - 00:03:279 (5) - 00:04:217 (3) - 00:05:717 (3) - 00:06:654 (5) - 00:08:717 (1) - 00:11:717 (5) 这些滑条的滑条尾的音都不是很明显加5%音量的绿线消音一下应该会好点的样子
00:28:305 (1) - 这里的节奏建议还是跟鼓点
00:34:593 (2) - ↑
00:36:928 (2) - ↑
00:39:802 (1) - ↑
00:47:707 (1) - 这个3/4滑条建议改成1/2滑条然后00:47:976补上一个circle弄成1/2滑条接连打这样应该会好打一点
00:48:245 (3) - 这个1/1滑条可以改成一个单点接一个1/2滑条
00:48:964 (2) - 这个1/1滑条试试改成1/2折返？
00:49:862 (5) - 建议改成1/1滑条现在你这个有点overmap的感觉打起来也是有点意义不明的
00:52:557 (7) - 00:52:736 - 00:52:916 这两个地方都是有鼓点的音所以我的看法是改成1/2滑条接单点或者是改成3个单点
00:54:533 这个地方漏音了建议改成四连接滑条
00:56:239 漏音
00:58:215 ↑
01:04:144 ↑
01:04:233 (3) - 可以改成1/2滑条然后 01:04:503 放一个圈这样和前面的滑条接圈接滑条连贯起来
01:07:108 (1,2) - 这里也是可以改成滑条接圈接滑条
01:18:605 (1) - 同上
01:11:239 (2) - 建议改成1/2滑条
01:27:048 (6,7) - 改成三连好点
01:28:485 (1) - 建议改成circle
01:29:922 (3) - ↑
01:32:168 (1) - 这之后到 01:43:395 这一整段建议跟跟伴奏remap一下
01:43:575 这个地方是三连
01:45:645(1,2) - 这里可以改成1/1拍时间间距的单点注意01:45:730 这里有个三连的音
01:46:629 漏音
01:47:347 (4) - 这个折返应放在01:47:527这个位置然后减少两次折返
01:48:355 (1) - 这个转盘的结尾建议建议5%音量并且到01:50:211结束

总结一下：这首歌鼓点节奏明显，建议多跟跟鼓点下节奏，有些太快听不清的可以25%播放速率仔细听听，然后就是合理利用3/4滑条接滑条，因为你这个用得有点太多了所以有时候打起来感觉不是很舒服，还有就是该放连打的时候就放连打，不要怕会变难，正确处理了物件的时间距离和空间距离，你的图就会变得既不难又好玩。最后 GOOD LUCK!

[M@ster]
00:02:154 (5,6) - 说实话我感觉这里的音不是很明显去掉或者改成滑条应该会好点
00:03:654 (5,6) - 这里的话感觉就是真的没音了建议去掉
00:04:967 (5) - ↑
00:06:467 (5,7,8) - ↑
00:08:529 (4) - ↑
00:11:248 (5) - ↑
00:14:563 (9) - ↑
00:20:311 (7) - ↑
00:49:413 (3) - ↑
00:09:092 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏感觉有点牵强试试去掉然后00:08:810这里放个到00:09:842的转盘或者把00:08:717 (4) 改成长滑条
00:13:934 (5,6,7) - 我听到这里的应该是持续一拍时间的连续的音因此我认为应该改成1/1滑条
00:44:653 (1) - 感觉这个滑条离上一个物件太远了
01:47:976 漏音

总的来说做的很好！真的。祝早日起飞！ GOOD LUCK!

水完摸跑路~

-Irina Avaron-

-Irina Avaron- 2016-06-09T21:10:27+00:00

林偶像

[Charlie Lam] wrote:
林偶像无敌!
建议采取了一半,帮助挺大的：
消音是我疏忽了...
有的漏音我知道，不过不影响打图的话，能不加我就没有加了(只要有三连，难度就会上去，确实做得不像是hard，无限接近I.
我喜欢跟人声，所以有的鼓点我没有跟
除非是一定要空拍的地方，否则我一般都用滑条带过去...
kiai不准备改了,3/4这个东西我觉得还凑合
那些转盘REMAP了.

前奏比较安静而00:01:779 (5) - 00:03:279 (5) - 00:04:217 (3) - 00:05:717 (3) - 00:06:654 (5) - 00:08:717 (1) - 00:11:717 (5) 这些滑条的滑条尾的音都不是很明显加5%音量的绿线消音一下应该会好点的样子 √
00:47:707 (1) - 这个3/4滑条建议改成1/2滑条然后00:47:976补上一个circle弄成1/2滑条接连打这样应该会好打一点 不是按这种方法改的，不过节奏改的一样了 √
00:49:862 (5) - 建议改成1/1滑条现在你这个有点overmap的感觉打起来也是有点意义不明的改成了2个1/2滑条，应该不OVERMAP了 √
00:54:533 这个地方漏音了建议改成四连接滑条√
01:04:233 (3) - 可以改成1/2滑条然后 01:04:503 放一个圈这样和前面的滑条接圈接滑条连贯起来
01:07:108 (1,2) - 这里也是可以改成滑条接圈接滑条不好改，先保留一下，等别人看法
01:27:048 (6,7) - 改成三连好点 √
01:32:168 (1) - 这之后到 01:43:395 这一整段建议跟跟伴奏remap一下√
01:43:575 这个地方是三连√
01:45:645(1,2) - 这里可以改成1/1拍时间间距的单点注意01:45:730 这里有个三连的音√
01:46:629 漏音√
01:47:347 (4) - 这个折返应放在01:47:527这个位置然后减少两次折返√
01:48:355 (1) - 这个转盘的结尾建议建议5%音量并且到01:50:211结束√

谢谢偶像花这么长时间提出这么多建议！

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372,268,57766,6,0,P|409:228|416:184,2,75,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,340,58665,2,0,L|232:320,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,220,59024,6,8,P|284:168|236:208,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,1:1:0:0:
368,180,59563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,180,59742,6,0,P|336:112|264:84,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,148,60281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,148,60461,6,0,P|102:163|28:159,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,61000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,252,61180,6,8,P|80:308|56:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,224,61718,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,276,61898,6,0,B|332:276|380:312|380:312|352:328,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,360,62437,2,8,P|204:344|180:312,1,75,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,224,62796,5,8,0:0:0:0:
360,200,62976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,60,63335,6,0,B|168:56|116:100|116:100|128:98,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,56,63874,2,0,P|36:112|44:136,1,75
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340,100,65311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,200,65491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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368,196,68006,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,72,68186,2,0,P|448:64|492:84,1,89.9999972534181,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,212,68545,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,68724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,352,68904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
403,231,69084,2,0,P|360:220|316:223,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,248,69443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,320,69623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,223,69802,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,223,69892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,223,69982,2,0,P|292:172|264:148,1,89.9999972534181,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,70341,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,220,70521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,84,71239,2,0,B|316:68|368:80|368:80|344:96,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,92,71599,2,0,P|348:160|360:192,1,89.9999972534181,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,296,71958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,316,72138,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,316,72317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,336,72497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,356,72677,2,2,B|64:368|10:369|10:369|60:336,1,179.999994506836
160,259,73215,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,148,73395,2,2,B|152:100|92:40|92:40|96:88,1,179.999994506836
100,196,73934,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,212,74114,2,2,B|308:208|372:184|372:184|328:172,1,179.999994506836
364,280,74653,2,0,P|392:340|460:324,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,332,75012,6,0,L|484:224,1,89.9999972534181,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,128,75371,2,0,L|381:214,1,89.9999972534181,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,160,75730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,60,75910,1,10,0:0:0:0:
388,32,76090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,92,76269,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,44,76449,6,0,B|136:32|80:44|80:44|100:56,1,134.999995880127
98,55,76808,2,0,P|104:118|88:156,1,89.9999972534181,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,248,77168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,268,77347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,332,77527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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176,360,78425,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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356,116,79862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,68,80042,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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182,108,80940,2,0,P|204:64|200:12,1,89.9999972534181,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,104,81299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,196,81479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,184,81659,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,280,81838,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,156,82018,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,284,82198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,248,82378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
228,248,82736,2,10,B|260:184|256:108|256:108|284:144,1,179.999994506836
368,236,83275,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,100,83455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,184,83635,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,248,83814,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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332,200,85431,2,8,L|422:200,1,89.9999972534181,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,260,85790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,344,85970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,86150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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136,212,86868,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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152,300,87407,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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300,92,87946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,92,88126,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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168,192,89563,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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256,356,90641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,256,90820,6,8,P|180:200|212:176,1,89.9999972534181,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,120,91898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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452,232,93156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,252,93335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,164,93515,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,104,93695,6,8,P|220:92|188:96,2,89.9999972534181
308,265,94413,5,0,0:0:0:0:
170,220,94683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,338,94952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,95132,6,0,P|340:247|377:245,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,95491,2,0,P|394:351|361:334,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,264,95850,2,0,B|440:192|420:136|420:136|400:168,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,88,96389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,96569,6,0,P|232:148|208:136,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,96928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,140,97108,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,140,97198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,140,97287,2,10,P|24:196|24:272,2,112.5
108,216,98006,6,0,P|144:208|196:212,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,288,98365,2,0,P|192:296|140:292,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,209,98724,2,0,P|265:213|316:256,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,352,99353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,352,99443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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309,265,99802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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456,276,100162,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,188,100341,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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108,176,101599,2,0,B|140:236|116:292|116:292|156:276,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,272,102317,6,0,P|360:256|396:260,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,44,104832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,372,106988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-07-01T09:16:44+00:00

[Charlie Lam] wrote:
爱马仕灰姑娘大法好！先射为敬！

[Norm@l]
可以，很清真清真~~

[M@ster]
00:02:154 (5,6) - 说实话我感觉这里的音不是很明显去掉或者改成滑条应该会好点虽然说没音不过我觉得加了挺舒服的，先暂时去掉好了
00:03:654 (5,6) - 这里的话感觉就是真的没音了建议去掉好
00:04:967 (5) - ↑ ↑
00:06:467 (5,7,8) - ↑ ↑
00:08:529 (4) - ↑ ↑
00:11:248 (5) - ↑ keep~
00:14:563 (9) - ↑ keep~
00:20:311 (7) - ↑ keep~
00:49:413 (3) - ↑ keep~
00:09:092 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏感觉有点牵强试试去掉然后00:08:810这里放个到00:09:842的转盘或者把00:08:717 (4) 改成长滑条嗯
00:13:934 (5,6,7) - 我听到这里的应该是持续一拍时间的连续的音因此我认为应该改成1/1滑条 keep~
00:44:653 (1) - 感觉这个滑条离上一个物件太远了改了
01:47:976 漏音加了~

总的来说做的很好！真的。祝早日起飞！ GOOD LUCK! 感谢林偶像~

水完摸跑路~

SeaRasp

693 posts

Joined August 2014

SeaRasp 2016-07-01T22:53:21+00:00

Hi, M4M from your queue

M@ster

00:04:217 (3,4) - Maybe increase the spacing here as the sound gets higher pitched.

00:08:342 (3,4) - Increase spacing a bit as it should be bigger than 00:08:154 (2,3) - cause the beats are further appart.

00:28:305 (4,5,6,7) - Try something like this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5517406 it would fit the vocals and the beat better.

00:34:593 (1) - NC would be good.

00:39:982 (4,5) - Make this a tripple to cover the blue tick vocals.

00:44:114 (3,4,5) - Don't like this pattern it doesn't play nicely. Here's a suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5517476. Not the best but something like that would be better.

00:46:090 (1) - NC ?

00:54:174 (3) - Stack with 00:54:892 (1) - for aesthetics.

01:03:335 (6,7) - This should be a 1/1 slider cause 01:03:515 (7) - isn't placed on any beat

01:07:377 (2) - If you are follow the vocals you should definitly cover this blue tick.

01:18:605 (1,2) - ^

01:48:245 (2) - Remove NC, no need to spam.

Ok that's all for this diff.

Advanced

00:13:934 (4,5) - Blanket can be better

00:22:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Perfect star would look nice, you can make it my using the ctr+shift+d shortcut.

00:33:695 (1) - Don't think NC is necessary here.

00:45:192 (1) - ^ and many other similar patterns. NC should be used to indicate a SV change or another change. Usually just place them every big white tick..

01:12:138 (1,2) - Try to unstack these it's feels weird.

01:37:108 (3) - Remove NC

01:40:162 (1) - ^

Overall just take a look at your NC pls !

Ok that's all for me, sorry I'm not good at modding anything under Insane usually xD

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2016-07-02T03:38:48+00:00

lol I can make Hard diff

M4M mod from your queue

[Normal]
00:28:305 (2,3) - blanket
00:49:862 (6) - actually there's no sound for 1/2. (00:50:042 - just blank)
00:52:736 (6) - same, you can change it to 1/1 slider or one circle
01:18:605 (5) - inconsistent with 01:07:108 (5) - . same sound but different rhythm
01:35:132 (1,1) - there's not enough ready time for circle after spinner.. just change spinner to long slider~~art~~ would be better.
01:40:880 (1,1) - same

[Advanced]
How about calling this 'Light Insane'? first, normally Advanced is lower diff than Hard. and DS is really far if it's hard diff.

Advanced<Hard

anyway, I'll mod not considering difficulty.

NC in every 1 downbeat (long white tick) if there's no special reason. 00:23:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is correct example.

00:29:742 (1,2,3,1) - flow is not good i think.. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5518883 ?
00:34:593 (2) - I'm really sad you missed all beats in this slider.
00:42:317 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5518890 flow better?
00:46:629 (3,4) - should use more distance here. 00:46:090 (2,3) - = 1/2 , 00:46:629 (3,4) - = 1/1 but same distance?
00:46:629 (3,1) - this overlap doesn't look good and you can avoid it.
01:11:958 (4,1,2,3,4) - linear moving is really unsuitable in this part of song i think. and flow also not good.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5518901 ?
01:45:192 (7) - NC
01:45:730 (1) - NC off

[Marster]
NC every 1 downbeat pls (1 downbeat = 1 long white tick)
00:02:529 (1,2,1) - I can understand your intention of this pattern, but looks dirty in editor. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5518994 how about this?
00:04:029 (1,2,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5519002
00:05:529 (5,6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5519005
and else..

00:44:114 (3,4,5) - flow isn't that comfortable..linear but different DS make cursor movement bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5519014 how about this?
00:47:886 (2,3,4) - how about just stack this kind of triplets..? it doesn't fit in this song.
01:45:910 (5,6,7) - i think it's overmapping

Good Luck!

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