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Satellite
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Sing wrote:

CLSW
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CLSW




good for ctb
Akitoshi
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(՞ةڼ◔) #modreq


  1. 01:01:663 (6,7,1) - どーでもいー事だけど下からじゃなく上からTripleやってみたらどーかなー？
    SPOILER
  2. 01:06:265 (1,1,1,1) - 音楽に合わせてNC付けたのは分かるけど少し見ずらいと思いませーNC一つずつやりたいなら02:33:367 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - みたいな流れ方はどうかなー？（ジグザグ無し）
  3. 01:46:322 (2) - これもReverseに変えてみたらどうかなー面白いと思うよー
  4. 02:04:390 (6) - 多分02:03:538 (2) - とStack可能
  5. 02:36:606 (6) - Reverse取って02:36:776 - に新しく1/4 sliderとか入れてもいいと思いますヨー02:36:862 - なんかドラムっぽい物聞こえるので
    SPOILER
  6. 02:39:504 (8) - 同じく1/4 slider?
  7. 02:43:594 (5) - ^
  8. 02:44:958 (5) - ^
  9. 03:54:845 (7) - 多分03:52:884 (3) - とStack可能
なんの参考にならなかったら No kds pls
Jervis
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Jervis
カフェラテ!カフェモカ!カプチーノ!!✧ \( °∀° )/ ✧
Jervis
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Jervis

CLSW wrote:





good for ctb
so it will have a ctb diff?(
Asahina Momoko
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PyonPyon wrote:

CLSW wrote:





good for ctb
so it will have a ctb diff?(
prolly yes ;)
Len
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Len
whos ctb
Asahina Momoko
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Len wrote:

whos ctb
someone above!
Lasse
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Lasse
a

[general]
not really an issue cause it is so small, but als oeasy to fix: chcked hitsound and soft-hitclap5 has 1ms of complete silence at the start, might as well remove that (and osme silence from the end to make the file smaller) => http://puu.sh/p4Gf3/63d977a7a2.wav

[map]
00:12:231 - there is a kinda strong synth on the red tick and the drum on the sliderend would be great if clickable, so sth like http://i.imgur.com/LtPI9Pm.jpg would fit well
00:23:310 (1) - fading in the normal sliderslide goes so well with this sound http://i.imgur.com/Xx0zgSH.jpg
00:41:379 (1) - rather strong sound but suddenly gets no spacing at all after a big jump, doesnt work well for emphasis here
01:02:515 (1) - ctrlg on this would make movement from the last sldier nicer and give you a jump onto 01:02:856 (2) - which fits really well with how the music builds up
01:04:390 (5,6) - spacing this like 01:04:049 (2,3,4) - would fit more since those sounds are similarly strong or even stronger than before, so stacking doesnt work
01:23:651 (1,2,3,4) - slightly increasing sv for every slider would have a great effect here //if you do so obviously also do it on 02:50:924 (1,2,3,4) -
02:10:356 (1) - even if it's a nice pattern, such low spacing on this compared to the other strong sounds doesnt make much sense
02:45:810 (2,3) - with how you handled the 1/2 gap - stream things just before, bit less spacing for 2-3 would work better here
02:56:038 - should nc to be consistent with the 1/1 pattern here and with 01:28:765 (1) - // 04:16:577 (2) -
03:14:362 (2) - mapping this as a double like first chorus works much better because white tick is way stronger than blue so kickslider with blue emphasis feels weird
03:34:646 (1) - 1/2 gaps for the spinners => http://i.imgur.com/QM1dJmz.jpg still follows vocals nicely but also makes them end on drums which fits well
05:01:066 (8,1) - no 1/4 jump here like on most of those streams?
05:23:310 (1,2) - nice unbuffered 1/8 sliderjump right at the end : d

nice, gl
pkhg
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pkhg
hi

[chino]
  1. 00:21:776 (3) - this must end on 00:21:862 - so it follows the music properly also u can add a circle here while doing that 00:21:947 -
  2. 00:41:038 (4,5,1) - i dont see why the spacing is larger from (4) to(5) instead of (5) to (1). (1) is a downbeat and has a cymbal sound so yea
  3. 00:43:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/p7xKI/04778c3ffd.jpg
  4. 00:44:362 - ignoring this feels kinda weird
  5. 01:05:498 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/p7xQU/835d80e587.jpg so it follows the music properly cuz u seem to follow bgm more than vocals
  6. 01:47:515 - plsdontignore
  7. 02:12:400 (5) - from here its 1/8
  8. 04:01:321 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/p7yg8/61d91fbc3d.jpg
  9. 05:23:055 (2) - http://puu.sh/p7yDz/a703dee2c1.jpg
cutebg
sionKotori
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sionKotori
!!

[General]
  1. 318kbps!! mp3が古い可能性もあるのでそうだったらスルーしてください
    SPOILER
    192にしたもの貼り付けたいけど回線がめうなのでごめんなさい
[チノちゃん]
  1. 00:45:129 (1) - 緑線のSVを1.3あたりに変えて、ここに1/8スライダー持ってくるのもいいと思います
    SPOILER
    03:39:333 (1,2) - ここと同じ
  2. 01:14:788 (3) - 01:15:129 (3) - に重なってるのでずらそう
  3. 01:53:992 (2) - (意図的に変えてることを承知で)Ctrl+g?
  4. 03:12:913 (2,2) - ツインテゆらせ :)
  5. 04:01:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - DSをこっち 02:12:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - とどちらかに統一したらどうでしょう
  6. 04:16:492 (1,2,3,4) -他の同じパートのように1/8のリバーススライダーの方が合ってると思う…
こころぴょんぴょんする譜面でした :idea: :idea:
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko
Akitoshi

Akitoshi wrote:


(՞ةڼ◔) #modreq


  1. 01:01:663 (6,7,1) - どーでもいー事だけど下からじゃなく上からTripleやってみたらどーかなー？うーんパスで！
    SPOILER
  2. 01:06:265 (1,1,1,1) - 音楽に合わせてNC付けたのは分かるけど少し見ずらいと思いませーNC一つずつやりたいなら02:33:367 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - みたいな流れ方はどうかなー？（ジグザグ無し）　テストプレイ見てみて特にそうは思わなかったのでこのままで
  3. 01:46:322 (2) - これもReverseに変えてみたらどうかなー面白いと思うよー　今のほうが次のパートへスムーズに叩けるしこのままで
  4. 02:04:390 (6) - 多分02:03:538 (2) - とStack可能　流れが詰まるからこのままで～
  5. 02:36:606 (6) - Reverse取って02:36:776 - に新しく1/4 sliderとか入れてもいいと思いますヨー02:36:862 - なんかドラムっぽい物聞こえるので　それも確かにいいけど前の部分で1/4 2個のパターン使ってるし別のパターンここで使いたいかなぁ
    SPOILER
  6. 02:39:504 (8) - 同じく1/4 slider?　上と同じく
  7. 02:43:594 (5) - ^　ここは1/4合わないと思う
  8. 02:44:958 (5) - ^　同じく
  9. 03:54:845 (7) - 多分03:52:884 (3) - とStack可能　流れ悪くなるのでパスで！
なんの参考にならなかったら No kds pls

thanks for mod !

Lasse

Lasse wrote:

a

[general]
not really an issue cause it is so small, but als oeasy to fix: chcked hitsound and soft-hitclap5 has 1ms of complete silence at the start, might as well remove that (and osme silence from the end to make the file smaller) => http://puu.sh/p4Gf3/63d977a7a2.wav thanks!! replaced it

[map]
00:12:231 - there is a kinda strong synth on the red tick and the drum on the sliderend would be great if clickable, so sth like http://i.imgur.com/LtPI9Pm.jpg would fit well yes, but i wanna emphasize speed up feeling of 00:12:401 (1,2) -, so dont want to put rush objects before there
00:23:310 (1) - fading in the normal sliderslide goes so well with this sound http://i.imgur.com/Xx0zgSH.jpg sure
00:41:379 (1) - rather strong sound but suddenly gets no spacing at all after a big jump, doesnt work well for emphasis here moved 00:41:038 (4,5) - and made distance there
01:02:515 (1) - ctrlg on this would make movement from the last sldier nicer and give you a jump onto 01:02:856 (2) - which fits really well with how the music builds up hmm symmetry pattern works well here for me
01:04:390 (5,6) - spacing this like 01:04:049 (2,3,4) - would fit more since those sounds are similarly strong or even stronger than before, so stacking doesnt work this stacking has role for rest to move next 01:04:560 (1,2,3,4) -, because player have to move fast there so don't have to force aim here
01:23:651 (1,2,3,4) - slightly increasing sv for every slider would have a great effect here //if you do so obviously also do it on 02:50:924 (1,2,3,4) - yea true done
02:10:356 (1) - even if it's a nice pattern, such low spacing on this compared to the other strong sounds doesnt make much sense keep it for now, but i consider on this
02:45:810 (2,3) - with how you handled the 1/2 gap - stream things just before, bit less spacing for 2-3 would work better here moved a bit to the left
02:56:038 - should nc to be consistent with the 1/1 pattern here and with 01:28:765 (1) - // 04:16:577 (2) - ok
03:14:362 (2) - mapping this as a double like first chorus works much better because white tick is way stronger than blue so kickslider with blue emphasis feels weird hmm current one makes sense for me
03:34:646 (1) - 1/2 gaps for the spinners => http://i.imgur.com/QM1dJmz.jpg still follows vocals nicely but also makes them end on drums which fits well nice i dea, fixed
05:01:066 (8,1) - no 1/4 jump here like on most of those streams? don't want to put hard stuffs at last part so
05:23:310 (1,2) - nice unbuffered 1/8 sliderjump right at the end : d made their spacing more larger xd

nice, gl

some nice catch there, thanks!!

pkhg

pkhg wrote:

hi

[chino]
  1. 00:21:776 (3) - this must end on 00:21:862 - so it follows the music properly also u can add a circle here while doing that 00:21:947 - it starts properly i guess, and even if it'd on 00:21:862 - for comfortabl to play i keep this rhythm
  2. 00:41:038 (4,5,1) - i dont see why the spacing is larger from (4) to(5) instead of (5) to (1). (1) is a downbeat and has a cymbal sound so yea sure
  3. 00:43:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/p7xKI/04778c3ffd.jpg no
  4. 00:44:362 - ignoring this feels kinda weird added a circle there
  5. 01:05:498 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/p7xQU/835d80e587.jpg so it follows the music properly cuz u seem to follow bgm more than vocals current pattern works better to play
  6. 01:47:515 - plsdontignore don't want/have to catch that imo
  7. 02:12:400 (5) - from here its 1/8 not have to use that, also i don't want to abuse 1/8 much on entire of the map ;;
  8. 04:01:321 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/p7yg8/61d91fbc3d.jpg no
  9. 05:23:055 (2) - http://puu.sh/p7yDz/a703dee2c1.jpg ^
cutebg

thanks for mod !!

ぴよ先生

sionKotori wrote:

!!

[General]
  1. 318kbps!! mp3が古い可能性もあるのでそうだったらスルーしてください
    SPOILER
    192にしたもの貼り付けたいけど回線がめうなのでごめんなさい うおおおおAImodで出てこないから大丈夫だと思ってた・・・そのうち変えますorz
[チノちゃん]
  1. 00:45:129 (1) - 緑線のSVを1.3あたりに変えて、ここに1/8スライダー持ってくるのもいいと思います 了解！
    SPOILER
    03:39:333 (1,2) - ここと同じ
  2. 01:14:788 (3) - 01:15:129 (3) - に重なってるのでずらそう fix
  3. 01:53:992 (2) - (意図的に変えてることを承知で)Ctrl+g? 1からが極端に近くなるからこのままかなぁ
  4. 03:12:913 (2,2) - ツインテゆらせ :) チノちゃんxツインテ=最高
  5. 04:01:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - DSをこっち 02:12:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - とどちらかに統一したらどうでしょう オッケイ！
  6. 04:16:492 (1,2,3,4) -他の同じパートのように1/8のリバーススライダーの方が合ってると思う…　ラスサビだからこっちのが好きかな～
こころぴょんぴょんする譜面でした :idea: :idea:

ぴよ先生ありがとう！！
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
Asahina Momoko
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Cherry Blossom wrote:

"me irl"
Enon
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Enon
^ what
VINXIS
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VINXIS
ハミルトニアン（Hamiltonian、ハミルトン関数、特性関数）は、物理学におけるエネルギーに対応する物理量である。各物理系の持つ多くの性質は、ハミルトニアンによって特徴づけられる。名称はイギリスの物理学者ウィリアム・ローワン・ハミルトンに因む。
Asahina Momoko
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VINXIS wrote:

ハミルトニアン（Hamiltonian、ハミルトン関数、特性関数）は、物理学におけるエネルギーに対応する物理量である。各物理系の持つ多くの性質は、ハミルトニアンによって特徴づけられる。名称はイギリスの物理学者ウィリアム・ローワン・ハミルトンに因む。
it's a beautiful day outside.
Omar is memeing, Kamal is bombing...
on days like these, kids like you...

Should be burning in Niagara Falls.
VINXIS
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VINXIS
i bet u wud fuk goat mom : /
AtHeoN
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AtHeoN
QUICKMOD?!

02:53:310 (1,2) - i think this should be a slider instead

nazi blankets eks dee
00:32:174 (2) -
00:49:731 (2) -
00:57:913 (2) -
01:01:407 (4,5) -
01:07:629 (2,3) -
01:23:140 (2) -
01:20:754 (4) -
01:27:231 (2) -
02:05:583 (6) -
02:15:470 (1) -
02:17:856 (4) -
03:02:004 (2) -
03:19:560 (1) -
03:30:470 (1) -
04:27:401 (1,2) -
04:43:595 (4) -
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko

AtHeoN wrote:

QUICKMOD?! ?! thanks xD

02:53:310 (1,2) - i think this should be a slider instead hmm they have consistency woth 01:26:038 (1,2) - , also i thing they fit there :)

nazi blankets eks dee
00:32:174 (2) -
00:49:731 (2) -
00:57:913 (2) -
01:01:407 (4,5) -
01:07:629 (2,3) -
01:23:140 (2) -
01:20:754 (4) -
01:27:231 (2) -
02:05:583 (6) -
02:15:470 (1) -
02:17:856 (4) -
03:02:004 (2) -
03:19:560 (1) -
03:30:470 (1) -
04:27:401 (1,2) -
04:43:595 (4) -
adjusted some blankets better, thx AtHeoN!!
Kyuare
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Kyuare
request by great CtB player Asahina Momoko
Crystal's Captivation

  1. 00:01:151 (1,2,3,4) - You use a linear stream here, but I think a progressive stream will fit better, try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5327924
  2. 00:12:060 (1,2) - The pattern is very simple for the difficulty, I think you can find something more creative and funnier, I made an example for you https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5327953 It follow more the song and the shape is really nice imo, If you're agree you can look for
    00:55:697 (3,4) - , 01:05:242 (5,6) - , 01:17:515 (3,4) - , 01:39:333 (5,6) - , 02:01:151 (4,5) - , 02:22:970 (3,4) - , 02:32:515 (5,6) - , 03:06:606 (5,6) - , 03:28:424 (3,4) - and 05:12:060 (1,2) -
  3. 00:21:946 (6,7) - A HyperDash will fit better here, you can move 00:22:117 (7) - to x:112
  4. 00:36:606 (3,4,5) - The shape is a bit hard to catch, maybe consider moving 00:36:862 (4,6) - 1 grid to the right
  5. 00:43:595 (5,6,7,1) - The structure here can be cleaner, try to do something symmetric like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5327995
    btw i love this antiflow 00:44:276 (2,3) -
  6. 01:06:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I see the idea but I think you can curve it more, it will fit the song much better, I've made an example for you https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5328042
  7. 01:29:106 (1,2,3) - A strong antiflow would be so fun here, I tried something for you https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5328065
  8. 02:50:924 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe add a progressive SV here ? It would be interesting, try 1.2x and 1.4x if you're agree, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5328104
  9. 03:04:220 (6,1) - A HyperDash here would be great, you can Ctrl+H 03:04:560 (1) - and move it to x:48, don't forget to fix 03:04:901 (2,3,4) - if you're agree
  10. 04:01:322 (1,2,3) - Intensity rises but you end up with something simple which is not consist with 04:00:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - , try to make something more challenging and funnier please, I make an example for you https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5328152 its a bit tricky but just keep dashing and you will pass it easily, or you can do something like 05:01:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
  11. 05:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something more jumpy here like you've done for 02:53:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - will be funnier.
Fun map.
Bunnrei
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Bunnrei
placeholder for catchy!

mayb wait a week lo
CLSW
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CLSW
http://puu.sh/piWIy/3f26eb2eb8.zip

01:06:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pretty fine to keep this :/
03:04:220 (6,1) - It seems fine to go, this part hasn't not even stronger sounds at all imo.

:3 thank you!
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
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Ascendance
good for osu catch
Bunnrei
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Bunnrei
lo turns out school was less of a pain for me

[another GREAT map by the GREAT clsw (moe)]
00:01:151 (1,2,3,4) - would be nicer if these were more evenly spaced, (1,2) has ~1.3x distance while the other notes have ~1.6x distance between them
00:39:504 (5,6) - make this a repeating 1/4 slider instead maybe (it feels weird to stop momentarily midway, then move in the same direction again)
00:44:106 (1,2) - increase distance by a bit
01:30:043 (6) - would be a bit nicer if this was closer to 01:30:129 (7) - instead
01:50:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase spacing, would feel nice to just dash in this xd
05:23:651 - add a note here (or just extend the last repeating slider)

[cappuChino!!]
blanket, kds pls

not much i can point out here ><
CLSW
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CLSW
00:01:151 (1,2,3,4) - It was actually fixed by Kyuare's mod, and I prefer this style :3
00:44:106 (1,2) - Hmm, not really necessary and will ruin the flow

Thank you!

http://puu.sh/plcli/232c704b5a.zip
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

Asahina Momoko wrote:

(I mapped standardly he mapped catchy)[/centre]
pelase commit kudosu
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko

Kibbleru wrote:

Asahina Momoko wrote:

(I mapped standardly he mapped catchy)[/centre]
pelase commit kudosu
let's give a happy little kudosu for discripthion help.[/centre]
Kibbleru
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hi dyrus[/centre]
Setomi
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Setomi
A little something

[Crystal's Captivation]

00:00:470 (1) - Could move this a bit to the right... Now I know you want symmetry with (2) & (4)... But (1,2) is not as strong as (3,4) in terms of sound... Also it encourages the player to follow the pattern movement with: dash, stand still, dash, stand still, dash
00:14:447 (2,3,4) - This part doesn't flow the same way as the other ones does
00:25:015 (1,2) - I think you should turn these into a slider like you have done 00:27:742 (1) - & 00:35:924 (1)
00:26:720 (2,3) - There's no specific change in music here... Make this a slider so it's similar to the rest?
00:29:106 (1) - Give more movement to this as you did with 00:26:379 (1)
00:38:992 (2,3,4) - This feels weird because you have never used this pattern before and there's no change in music yet
00:42:060 (3) - You could make this fully vertical to keep your six box distance pattern
00:48:538 (2) - x:256
01:22:288 (1) - Could move this a bit to the left because it's not on a very low sound
01:29:788 (5,6,7) - This part doesn't flow very well... Consider changing a bit
02:00:470 (1) - Move this a bit to the right because this has less movement than 01:59:106 (1) - and it feels good to play. Move following notes accordingly if necessary
02:04:220 (7) - Could give this a bit more movement since it feels like this part has more movement in general
02:18:197 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these have very nice play and obvious play pattern but 02:20:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - doesn't have that same feeling at all. Maybe consider changing the second pattern a bit

I personally like the part from 03:37:288 to 03:39:248 but I think it's a bit too challenging compared to the rest... If you don't want to nerf at least change 03:38:651 (1,2) - removing the flow break from this

03:03:793 (3,4) - I think u could give these slightly more movement because there was a lot of movement before this
03:41:379 (1) - Add more movement to this
04:52:287 (1) - Could move this a bit to the left to fit in with the rest. And move upcoming notes accordingly if necessary

Overall a nice map that changes movement type which forces the player to keep a lot of focus to not dash to much or to little. I could come back when more mods have been applied :) Good job! & Gl!
CLSW
osu! Alumni
2,182 posts
Joined October 2010
CLSW
00:14:106 (1,2) - Similar usage like 00:16:833 (1,2) - this one.
00:42:060 (3) - Keeping symmetrical flow with 00:41:379 (1) - , so I would like to not change.
02:18:197 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Personally it seems nothing wrong (:
03:41:379 (1) - Pitch down actually exists here, so it's okay with a bit lower distance.
04:52:287 (1) - Same reason as above.

Thanks for the mod, the other parts were fixed! http://puu.sh/pq5pY/0276b789aa.zip
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Mira-san
Hi lol. I said this yesterday.


owo

[cappuChino!~]
  1. 00:21:776 (3) - How about shortening this by 1/8 and then adding a note? For me I think it would make sense to add a note there instead since there's a strong beat. Very subjective though and leaving it as it is is fine. :D
  2. 01:01:407 (4) - No beat here owo.
  3. 01:45:640 (2) - How about rotating by 45 degrees selection centre so it flows better? :D
  4. 02:15:470 (1) - I think slider + circle would be better here lol.
  5. 03:25:867 (2,3) - Though I didn't point out the earlier one like this, I think it's better if you ctrl+g 03:26:038 (3,4) - for the build-up of the music but either way it's good.
  6. 03:29:447 (1,2) - Kinda weird. You can probably change (2) a little bit. c:
  7. 03:50:242 (4) - Could be a triple instead because of the beat.
  8. 03:50:498 (5) - Can probably only be just a slider and not a repeat one, but I think you're following the synth in the background here.
  9. 04:25:186 (2,1) - RIP distance. they almost hit each other lol

  10. lol tags "gochuumon wa usagi desuka??" two question marks lol jk :D
That's what I can find lol. Nice map :D
GL~
Asahina Momoko
1,008 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Asahina Momoko

Mira-san wrote:

Hi lol. I said this yesterday. oh thx!!


owo owo

[cappuChino!~]
  1. 01:01:407 (4) - No beat here owo. oh i can hear the synthe owo
  2. 01:45:640 (2) - How about rotating by 45 degrees selection centre so it flows better? :D hmm i prefer current one xD
  3. 03:25:867 (2,3) - Though I didn't point out the earlier one like this, I think it's better if you ctrl+g 03:26:038 (3,4) - for the build-up of the music but either way it's good. i wanna keep copy-pasted form so keep this
  4. 03:29:447 (1,2) - Kinda weird. You can probably change (2) a little bit. c: consider to do that, im planning to remap this section for now lol
  5. 03:50:242 (4) - Could be a triple instead because of the beat. keep for now but i can get your point so consider later
  6. 03:50:498 (5) - Can probably only be just a slider and not a repeat one, but I think you're following the synth in the background here. same as avobe
  7. 04:25:186 (2,1) - RIP distance. they almost hit each other lol yea but all of this pattern is just rotated and not bad to play imo xd

  8. lol tags "gochuumon wa usagi desuka??" two question marks lol jk :D lol exactly, fixed


That's what I can find lol. Nice map :D
GL~
deleted=fixed
thanks for mod!!
Shoga
232 posts
Joined January 2015
Shoga
Athy 's mod strikes again

AtHeoN wrote:

QUICKMOD?!

02:53:310 (1,2) - i think this should be a slider instead

nazi blankets eks dee
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Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
sorry for late. i didnt notice that he finished so yeah



osu!catch:

AR9.3~4가 적당한거같아요 지금은 너무 빠르네요
00:01:151 (1,2,3,4) - 하고 00:01:492 (1) - 를 강조할려면 http://puu.sh/q4yf1/cfe7bd19a4.jpg -> http://puu.sh/q4yfw/6abd5f180e.jpg 이런식의 흐름이 되어야 강조를 주기 쉽고 받을때 조금 더 흥미를 가지게 할수있을듯
00:00:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
224,160,470,5,0,3:0:0:0:
80,179,640,2,0,L|96:227,1,47.9999985351563,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
330,202,810,1,0,3:0:0:0:
432,179,981,2,0,L|416:227,1,47.9999985351563,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
176,256,1151,5,2,3:2:0:0:
208,328,1237,1,0,3:0:0:0:
287,344,1322,1,2,3:2:0:0:
374,328,1408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,1492,6,0,P|41:199|107:178,1,143.999995605469,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:10:015 (1) - 리버스를 없애고 00:10:356 - 여기에 복붙한다음 x415정도에 하나 넣어두면 조금 움직임이 생겨서 계속 조금씩 조금씩 움직이던 그 흐름이 끊기지 않는것같네요. 리버스가 있으니까 머ㅜㄴ가 여기서 중심잡기를 해야하나 움직여야하나 애매한
00:12:060 (1,2,3,4) - 하고 00:12:572 (4,1) - 이거 받기가 조금 힘든감이 있는데 00:12:060 (1,2,3) - 에서 13 거리를 조금 줄여보시는것도 혹은 00:12:572 (4) - 를 줄이거나
00:20:924 (1,2) - 두개를 중심으로 1그리드만 옮겨주시는건 어떤가요 Tiny기준
00:21:606 (1,2) - 애매하게 이 흐름이 잘 받아지지가 않는데 http://puu.sh/q4yzj/1e3816b691.jpg 이렇게 바꾸고 나니 잘 받아지더군요 한번 try해보시는건..?
00:23:310 (1) - 이걸 x316정도로 오른쪽으로 옮기시는것도 좋을것같네요 지금 위치는 그 전의 7을 받고나서 뭔가 애매한 위치라고해야하나 조금 떨어뜨리는게 괜찮아보입니다
00:23:310 (1,1,2,3) - 그리고 이 흐름도 뭔가 받기가 힘든면이 없지않아 있는데 00:23:651 (1,2) - 를 조금 세운다음 00:23:651 (1,2,3) - 거리를 각각 좁혀 조금 더 수월하게 받을수 있게 만드시는것도 좋을것같네요. 대충 이런느낌? http://puu.sh/q4yHH/c3715ae79f.jpg 바꾸시게된다면 00:24:674 (4) - 도 약간 왼쪽으로 옮기셔야할것같네요
01:06:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - x4정도 오른쪽으로?
02:00:470 (1) - 이거 너무 길게 뻗어져있어서 02:00:810 (2,3) - 받기가 너무 힘든데 조금 http://puu.sh/q4z0L/277fe1b06e.jpg 이정도만 기울여보시는건 어떤가용
02:01:407 (5) - 이건 반대로 x208 정도에 옮겨서 02:01:237 - 여기에 하이퍼가 달리는게 더 받기가 좋아보입니다
02:12:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 점점 가운데가아닌 점점 멀어지는 느낌으로 하는게 더 좋을것같습니다 http://puu.sh/q4z53/4b1df29ba7.jpg 이런느낌?
02:57:231 - 여기하고 02:57:572 - 여기 각각 강조가 있었다면 좋았을텐데 라는 생각
03:39:333 (1,2) - 이걸 받을생각에 미처 03:40:015 (1) - 를 받을 준비를 못한나머지 조금 당황스러운 03:40:015 (1) - 를 x12정도 오른쪽으로 조금만 이동시켜주는건 어떤가여
03:50:754 (4) - 를 03:50:327 (2) - 꼬리에 스택? 지금은 뭔가 칼타이밍같네요
03:56:975 (3) - 이거 받을때 뭔가 어색하고 빈 느낌이 좀 있는데 노트하나하고 1/2 슬라로 나누어주시는것도 좋을것같아요
04:20:072 (3,4,5,6) - 이거 뭔가 오른쪽으로 갔다가 왼쪽으로 돌아오는게 아쉬운데 차라리 이런 흐름을 만드시는건 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/q4zxZ/0ce31ae884.jpg 04:20:924 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 위치도 약간 손봐서 04:20:753 (6,1) - 에 하이퍼 안생기게하구
04:19:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
32,128,259560,5,0,3:0:0:0:
192,128,259731,2,0,L|208:176,2,47.9999985351563,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,260072,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,124,260242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,148,260413,2,0,L|488:196,2,47.9999985351563,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,260753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,176,260924,6,0,L|204:176,1,143.999995605469,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,176,261265,2,0,L|236:176,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,180,261606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,261776,2,0,L|112:256,1,95.9999970703126,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,262117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
05:04:560 (1) - 도 00:10:015 (1) - 와 동일
05:23:310 (1) - 이렇게 끝나는거 뭔가 어색한데 조금 세부적으로 나누시거나 05:23:566 - 또는 05:23:609 - 에 하이퍼넣어서 05:23:651 - 이부분을 강조하고 끝내는 방법도 나쁘지는 않을것같네요

ar이 너무 높지만 않았다면 엄청 좋았을것같은데 꼭 고려해보시길 바랍니다. 오랜만에 캐치맵을 칝님의 맵을 봐서그런지 스트림은 역시 여전히 잘 짜시고 흐름 좋게 만드시네요 나중에 시간이 된다면 배우러가겠습니다 잘만드셨어요!


momoko:

00:00:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - ctrl H + J

all stuffs are really good tho!



all mods are just opinion so u can reject all of my shit things! no need to fix
good luck xd
Kaifin
745 posts
Joined April 2013
Kaifin
hi comin in with a free mod for the cutest song i've ever heard in my whole life

chino

  1. unlucky
  2. 01:10:356 (2,3,1,2) - perfect line?? would look nicer imo and doesnt effect any other structure
    SPOILER
  3. 01:27:231 (2,1) - nazi blankt
    SPOILER
  4. 02:39:163 (4,5,6,7,8,10) - this blanket could b improved really easily
  5. 03:07:970 (1,2,3,4) - this flow felt really awkward, i think that it would be improved a lot with higher spacing like all the other patterns like this in this section have, it doesn't have to be as big as those if you want to keep this kind of emphasis, but rn it just feels kind of ehh to me, i broke here on sightread z
  6. 03:18:197 (1) - all of these other streams have stream jumps at the end except this one, pretty easy to add in since 1 isn't structured on anything luckily
    SPOILER
  7. 03:20:924 (1) - lol this slider end is stacked on neither of these notes 03:20:157 (4,5) xDxdXDdd
  8. 04:24:504 (1,2,3) - out of all these kick patterns, this is the only one that stood out on my playthroughs as being awkward, i think its the flow from 1 to 2, if you changed the angle a little this plays a lot better imo (2 and 3 are moved in the screenshot)
    SPOILER
  9. 04:25:186 (2,3,4,1,1) - my mind is blown
  10. 04:50:924 (1,3) - super nazi
    SPOILER
  11. 05:04:220 (5) - ctrl g ?!
  12. 05:23:651 - surprised to not see a note or even 1/4 slider here because of the sound, the fadeout is fine too though

    minor mod because your map is so g o o d
    take my star

good luck with rank!
Asahina Momoko
1,008 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Asahina Momoko

Kaifin wrote:

hi comin in with a free mod for the cutest song i've ever heard in my whole life　Chino is cute and so is this song Cx

chino

  1. 05:04:220 (5) - ctrl g ?! hmm i wanna keep copy pasting pattern here XD
  2. 05:23:651 - surprised to not see a note or even 1/4 slider here because of the sound, the fadeout is fine too though your idea is also good but i prefer this fadeout

    minor mod because your map is so g o o d
    take my star

good luck with rank!
deleted=fixed

it helps me a lot, thank you Kaifin!! :)

@Len thanks xdddd
Karen
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Joined August 2013
Karen
mp3 is 318kbps orz, lower it to 192 first
00:00:470 - volume setting conflicts here
01:37:459 (2,3) - i think this should be a jump to emphasize 01:37:629 (3) - like you did on 01:37:970 (1,1,1) -
02:12:656 (8,1) - 04:01:747 (8,1) - this can be harder
02:20:924 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a bit weird, the directions orz, try this http://puu.sh/qkyz1/72bb1d8cd4.jpg
03:04:901 (3) - same
04:25:356 (3) - same
05:23:310 (1,2) - the spacing is almost the same with 05:23:055 (2,1) - this, consider reducing it a bit

i don't know fruits and i don't see any ctb bns here yet so i can only give std icon, poke me if you need me
Asahina Momoko
1,008 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Asahina Momoko

Karen wrote:

mp3 is 318kbps orz, lower it to 192 first　replaced to 192kbps xd
02:12:656 (8,1) - 04:01:747 (8,1) - this can be harder i think it's enough to be emphasized here

i don't know fruits and i don't see any ctb bns here yet so i can only give std icon, poke me if you need me
others fixed, thanks Karen :)
Power Supply
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Joined September 2015
Power Supply
Yo i just updated the map and now the song file is gone????
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