1. Eternal Sin (7,14 stars, 2042 notes)

_Stan wrote:

for M4M~ and I'm coming.

Eternal Sin

How about AR -> 9 ? 9.3 seems reasonable, it is 7* so high ar
hitsound 100% is too loud Changed to 60%

00:05:544 (3) - emmm, this shape is strange and not match with 00:04:453 (1,2) - how about change it? ok, changed it to match
00:15:090 (13) - recognize badly Extended slider and removed circle to better match
00:27:021 (15) - make 15 same ds with 00:26:271 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - and then NC at 00:27:090 (16) - to warn the different ds done
00:27:499 (2) - I think hide it between 00:26:612 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - it's good idea maybeKept it like it is
00:34:181 (7) - this slider is next to 00:33:908 (6) - is not ok, try this maybe?done

00:40:999 (11,12,13) - NC NC NC done
00:45:908 (6) - NC maybe? kept it like it was
00:47:067 (1) - ds Fixed
00:57:362 (11) - NC just like 00:27:021 (15) - done
01:29:544 (12) - NC done
02:40:726 (2) - you can NC warm the DS change Don't think it is necessary here
04:34:726 (13) - this slider is fast so NC make a new color done
05:41:271 (8,1) - ds, maybe a little close CHanged the ds of the circle to be closer
05:53:408 (5,8,9) - blanket it better done and also changed the placement of the 6 after to correct triangle pattern
05:59:817 (3) - NC done
06:00:908 - how about this Not completely necessary, I'll keep

06:02:544 (1,1) - blanket ??
06:07:726 (6,10) - ^ Going to keep because I prefer the pattern with the two seperated
06:33:362 (5) - too close, try add DS ,or 06:33:362 (5) - NC this DS'd it
06:52:090 (6) - make it at center of triangle? done
07:07:044 (1,2) - ds is different with 07:05:817 (1,2) - and 07:04:862 (2,3) - Changed DS
07:38:476 (1) - use note match this sound not spinner end done
07:51:362 (9,10,11,12) - there get fast but ds is long, if you wanna keep, NC this 07:51:362 (9) - NC the 9

Emm, this song maybe not my type but I don't hate, just fine, and it's too hard for me so I cannot mod great, sorry~

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  00:04:453 (1) - maybe move this slider to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5485741 it looks better imo :p
  00:14:135 (6) - move this to x:208 y:304 ??
  00:24:090 - add a circle?
  00:31:181 (1) - move this a bit up?
  00:45:908 (6) - nc?
  00:56:817 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hmm maybe change the shape of this stream? it doesnt looks good :l
  01:12:499 (10,11) - ctrl + g these?
  01:14:271 (4) - nc
  01:52:658 (2) - delete this, start the stream at white tick
  02:03:362 (2) - nc?
  02:05:271 (4) - nc?
  02:40:044 (11) - move this a bit up
  02:40:726 (2) - nc hee instead of 02:40:453 (1) -
  02:42:090 (12) - stack the end of this slider with 02:41:681 (9) - ?
  02:46:090 (3) - this spacing.. make it short, I recommend to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5485807 but if not, at least make the 02:46:090 (3) - closer
  02:48:499 (2) - move this to 02:48:453 - and end the slider at 02:48:271 - also move 02:48:453 (2) - closer
  02:49:453 (7) - delet this?
  02:51:271 (1) - delete this, end this slider 02:50:999 (11) - at 02:51:226 - and add a circle 02:51:362 - ??
  02:53:271 (18) - delete this, OR ctrl+g this 02:53:453 (19) - < also move that slider to 02:53:408 -
  03:30:635 - youre missing a beat here... I'd recommend to move this slider 03:30:362 (5) - to 03:30:635 - and end this slider 03:29:544 (4) - at the white tick, where 03:30:362 (5) - is starting now
  03:32:544 (7,8) - ctrl+g these?
  03:39:362 - add a circle?
  03:45:635 (4) - NC?
  03:50:544 (3) - move this to x:328 y:264?
  04:15:226 (3) - move this further from 04:15:090 (2) -
  04:18:703 (2) - start this slider at large white tick
  04:29:544 (6) - nc
  04:31:726 (10) - nc
  04:43:726 - start the stream here
  04:49:044 (5) - move this further, use same DS
  05:10:317 (1) - move this a bit down
  05:36:908 (2) - nc
  05:39:362 (5) - nc
  05:44:135 (1) - fix this blanket
  05:47:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - please avoid such overlap
  05:55:181 (6) - move it up and make a blanket with 05:55:317 (7) - ?
  06:01:999 (6) - fix blanket
  06:01:317 (2) - ^
  06:03:226 (3) - ^
  07:26:271 (3) - ^
  06:34:544 (2) - start this at white tick (where this slider ends 06:34:271 (1) - ) and make 06:34:271 (1) - shorter
  06:50:453 (8) - this slider should be placed here 06:50:271 -
  06:53:544 (1) - make it a bit larger?
  06:58:635 (2) - move it down

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi

00:04:453 (1) - maybe move this slider to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5485741 it looks better imo :p Moved it, but put it higher than were you had it, , so it looks better.
00:14:135 (6) - move this to x:208 y:304 ?? done
00:24:090 - add a circle?
00:31:181 (1) - move this a bit up? done
00:45:908 (6) - nc? done
00:56:817 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hmm maybe change the shape of this stream? it doesnt looks good :l done
01:12:499 (10,11) - ctrl + g these? done, but moved around more things to avoid weird patter that was created
01:14:271 (4) - nc done
01:52:658 (2) - delete this, start the stream at white tick done, plus increased distance between slider and stream
02:03:362 (2) - nc? I don't feel like it's needed
02:05:271 (4) - nc? ^
02:40:044 (11) - move this a bit up done
02:40:726 (2) - nc hee instead of 02:40:453 (1) - done
02:42:090 (12) - stack the end of this slider with 02:41:681 (9) - ? Not necessary, but it does look a bit better
02:46:090 (3) - this spacing.. make it short, I recommend to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5485807 but if not, at least make the 02:46:090 (3) - closer done, moved them closer
02:48:499 (2) - move this to 02:48:453 - and end the slider at 02:48:271 - also move 02:48:453 (2) - closer done
02:49:453 (7) - delet this? done, it isn't on any beat
02:51:271 (1) - delete this, end this slider 02:50:999 (11) - at 02:51:226 - and add a circle 02:51:362 - ?? I deleted, but I ended the slider at 02:51:362 instead, and didn't add a circle
02:53:271 (18) - delete this, OR ctrl+g this 02:53:453 (19) - < also move that slider to 02:53:408 - Ended up doing CTRL-G, but I blanketed the circle at 02:53:271 in the slider before it
03:30:635 - youre missing a beat here... I'd recommend to move this slider 03:30:362 (5) - to 03:30:635 - and end this slider 03:29:544 (4) - at the white ]tick, where 03:30:362 (5) - is starting now The sliders are folowing the guitar at that point in the song, so i'll keep[/color
03:32:544 (7,8) - ctrl+g these?
03:39:362 - add a circle? done
03:45:635 (4) - NC? done
03:50:544 (3) - move this to x:328 y:264? done, creates a cleaner pattern
04:15:226 (3) - move this further from 04:15:090 (2) - done
04:18:703 (2) - start this slider at large white tick done
04:29:544 (6) - nc done
04:31:726 (10) - nc done
04:43:726 - start the stream here ficed stream
04:49:044 (5) - move this further, use same DS done
05:10:317 (1) - move this a bit down done
05:36:908 (2) - nc I'll keep, I don't think it should be nc'ed
05:39:362 (5) - nc done
05:44:135 (1) - fix this blanket done
05:47:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - please avoid such overlap Fixed, moved them apart and changed DS on triples
05:55:181 (6) - move it up and make a blanket with 05:55:317 (7) - ?
06:01:999 (6) - fix blanket Fixed all the blankets
06:01:317 (2) - ^
06:03:226 (3) - ^
07:26:271 (3) - ^
06:34:544 (2) - start this at white tick (where this slider ends 06:34:271 (1) - ) and make 06:34:271 (1) - shorter done
06:50:453 (8) - this slider should be placed here 06:50:271 - done
06:53:544 (1) - make it a bit larger? done
06:58:635 (2) - move it down done, made it blanket better

GL!

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  00:05:544 (3) - NC, captures the energy better with having the 1 be there instead of 3
  
  00:06:635 (1,2) - Take out the NC on 1, NC on 2
  
  00:10:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should replace this with repeating sliders since they aren't actually triplets in the song but a continuous blast-beat. Something like
  this

  
  
  00:15:635 (14) - NC
  
  00:26:271 (4) - NC because you're mapping a different sound.
  
  00:27:362 (5) - NC to fit the change in sound
  
  00:31:181 (1,2) - Awkward jump, change 1 so 2 is easier to hit.
  
  00:34:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix whatever sort of blanketing thing is going on here
  
  00:40:453 (10) - NC
  
  00:42:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - For here, here is something i think sounds more like the track
  
  
  click meeeee

  
  
  00:55:999 - For the guitar part here, look at what [url=]DoKito did for this part, I'm not saying copy it by any means but maybe try something like what he did.
  
  01:02:408 (9) - NC
  
  01:22:999 (1,2) - I would make these into sliders to make it flow better
  
  01:28:453 (6) - NC
  
  01:29:271 (11) - ^
  
  01:40:317 (11) - ^^
  
  01:56:817 (11) - ^^^
  
  02:01:181 (1) - Make this the same as 02:03:362 (2,3) - and NC on 2 here
  
  02:06:635 (9) - NC
  
  02:09:226 (8) - Awkward pause here. Song has stuff going on in the background also
  
  02:15:635 - I know it seems faint but you could even put a repeating slider here to have some of the drum part mapped.
  
  02:17:408 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Really inconsisstent spacing here
  
  02:20:408 (4,5,6,7) - Awkward pattern
  
  02:21:090 (9) - NC
  
  02:24:362 - Same note as 02:15:635 -
  
  02:25:181 (10) - NC, take out the NC on the 1 after that also.
  
  02:31:726 (8) - NC
  
  02:34:862 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move 10 just not where it is now, does not flow well
  
  02:39:908 (3,4,5) - Blanket could be better
  
  02:42:090 (11) - NC, to symbolize the lead-in
  
  02:47:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - TBH i would just take this whole stream out, really out of place for this part and there isn't any streamy parts here to begin with.
  
  Just a note about that entire part, it feels incredibly dull for practically the climax of the song. I would change it up to be energetic. Again refering to DoKitos version of this if you couldn't already tell i love it c:. How he did it in my eyes is perfect.
  
  03:04:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Delete 1
  
  03:05:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  
  03:43:999 (9) - NC because of delay
  
  03:53:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If you're gonna map the drums for this stream at-least commit to the full drum fill
  
  04:13:862 (10,12) - Weird overlap
  
  04:49:726 (9) - NC here, would look a lot better IMO
  
  04:59:817 (1,3) - Fix the blanket here
  
  05:31:590 (9) - NC
  
  06:00:362 - Theres so much more you can map with this song . As torbjorn would say, "I have big plans for ye"
  
  06:03:635 (5,7) - Fix the layering
  
  06:30:466 - Same note for this whole part as above. Need more energy ;-;
  
  06:31:362 (10,1) - Fix the blanket here
  
  06:36:362 (2,3) - ^
  
  06:50:817 (1) - Ugly slider shape, just make it curved
  
  06:56:544 (2,1) - Fix the overlap
  
  07:12:362 - You left out this whole part. D: You can map the slow drums with it toooo
  
  07:43:635 (1,2) - Unsnapped?