osuplayer111 wrote:

This bitch seems to be ready so <3

Bubbled~

Broetchen8441 wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

This bitch seems to be ready so <3

Bubbled~

Well, there are too many innocent girls in that video to fit to the song, but yeah... nobody cares 'bout girls like Nagisa beeing called a bitch
-.-

Sakura Hana wrote:

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
00:46:067 (1,2,3,4) - I have a problem seeing these notes as their dark color blends in with the video in this section
00:47:942 (1,2) - Same as above
00:51:692 (1,2,3) - Here as well
00:58:958 (2,1,2,3) - even tho 2,1 is stacked it's still hard to read as the stack will move 2 above and hitbursts will still hide 2 and 3 from appearing so i'd imagine it's a full 4 note stack at 1/2. you have a point, changed
01:08:333 (1,2) - This goes by so fast and i still had the hitburst on top of the previous note i didnt even know (2) existed. (However from similar parts i had already learned how this pattern worked so it was fine, but remember that a pattern must be readable at all times, and not because of experience/memory >.<) but this time i have to explain , this pattern is readable for one main factor, and that is its powerful contrasted combo colours, obv by having a stacked note it makes the note itself a bit harder to see, but then due to the contrasted combo colours at this point it makes it almost impossible to miss, the pattern aint readable because of experience/memory, it becomes readable due to an design idea what makes the pattern vibrant
01:39:505 (1) - Can't see approach circle due to blending with the video in this section
01:51:223 (1) - Cant see approach circle either for the same reason
[...] And there are plenty others that by this point i'd just recommend you change that colour. to all notes of combo colours, i kinda agree and thus made the colours readable

Sakura Hana wrote:

Mod request by someone who shall not be named.
[General]
You are missing spinner-approachcircle.png in your beatmap set -added

[Hard]
http://puu.sh/3AOS let's see this pattern appears... 7 times! that's quite a lot dont you think? i'd suggest for future maps use less copy/paste =/ -normally i dont use copypaste, it just fits the songs pretty good imo, and plays good aswell
00:30:598 (1) - This circle is blending with the background on this part of the video i'd recommend you color hax it to another of your combo colours
00:43:255 (6) - Once again combo colour is blending i suggest you color hax this combo
01:06:223 (1) - Once again ^
[...] Just like jericho, repeat the process or change the colours. -used jericho's new combo colours

Sakura Hana wrote:

Rechecking~
[Normal]
00:27:317 (2,3) - Spacing error - fixed
00:32:473 (1,2,3) - i dont get this sudden change of spacing. - i didn't change the spacing here ._. but i moved them a bit better
I recommend you double check the spacing here, there are more of these issues in the map - yes sir

[Easy]
03:02:005 (5) - Why stack this note? it feels like you ran out of space to place notes rather than you wanted to stack it o.o - actually i wanted to stack it, but looks better without stacking, so changed it.

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
23.4 MB seems huge for a file, and 18 of that comes from the video. I'm having trouble opening the video on my computer (it says "derp need codec"), so. . . if there's audio on the video, please remove it~. - it has no audio ^.^
You might need an [Explicit Content] or [omg this language] or whatever, because of the language. Oh, and the softcore porn in the 1st break ;D - they're even saying "you bitch" in kindergarten so its not so bad but added it to the beatmap description.

Hard:
02:35:051 (4) - No me gusta. Probably make this a tilde (~) or something moe ~ - yes sir
02:59:895 (4) - Go into the Scale tool, and scale it smaller until both sides are proportional (both of the endpoints are in the center of the circle :3 - looks a bit better now ~.~
03:00:833 (5) - ^ - ^

Easy:
00:05:989 (1) - I like this, but to the easy player, they'll be too busy going "HRRRNGGHH MAXIMUM POINTAGE" and won't be able to regain control fast enough to hit the next note, so you can either shorten this, or make it a long slider~. - i thinks it's ok :V
01:15:364 (1) - ^ - ^
02:18:880 (1) - Multiple repeats are boring D: - all easys are boring, and this still seems ok to me :V

Cool stuff~

ztrot wrote:

I thought I would point this out before this get ranked I think it would help improve the flow of the insane.

But in jeri's insane patterns like this are slightly confusing without snaking sliders turned on.

00:15:364 (1,2) - this one

00:17:239 (1,2) - here is one more

00:19:114 (1,2) - same song and dance

He only uses that patter a few times so asking him to change it for better playability shouldn't hurt.

Nice set I also noticed the hitsounds are much softer in the non guest diffs any real big reason?