1. Uncontrollable (5,97 stars, 1282 notes)

Painketsu wrote:

Literally another pp map, wtf Taeyang?

Lassikko wrote:

Nice map Made a small mod for it.

General

• Audio bitrate is over 192kbps so filesize is over 10mb without video -> recompress or something to make it 128 to 192 kbps I'll do that when I have the time, completely forgot the bitrate is too high

Uncontrollable

• Make the map ar9.2 Okay
  Make hp a little bit lower too, maybe 7 Sure
  00:07:481 (4) - flip this slider upside down maybe Nah, it's following the same style as 1 and 2 in that combo (both sliders pointing the same way)
  01:27:844 (6) - make this straight Aight fam
  01:30:390 (2) - move this up so 01:30:208 (1,2,3) - triangle is symmetric I think the asymmetry fits it well to contrast the other triangles
  04:07:662 (1) - move the beginning of this slider up so it's behind 04:07:299 (2) - or just move them both up a bit Not sure what your intention here was but no, it's fine

800pp for 96.1% HDDT FC

Painketsu wrote:

Literally another pp map, wtf Taeyang?

meme source

Dank Memes wrote:

A short (nazi) mod here:
Set drum sampleset for the first beat of these repeat sliders: 03:43:117 (1,1) - to make it more in line with the other drum beats Done

04:02:571 (1) - should be at the same spot as 04:01:662 (2) - this slider

04:45:662 (1) - same as above, should be directly under the slider end before it Fixed both

03:46:390 (2,3,4) - switch these up somehow, maybe make them have a higher spacing or just short slider + note Tried something else, it was pretty bad in my opinion too

01:26:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I feel you should increase the spacing on these ones a bit Ehh, I think their spacing gives a good contrast to the map seeing how the spacing jumps up quite a bit after that, it fits the song imo

- Physical - wrote:

Shit's lit.

[General]
Title: リモコン
Romanised Title: Remote Control
Tags: jesus-p じーざすp rimokon wonderful*opportunity kagamine rin len glider ぐるたみん gurutamin Added all this shit

[Uncontrollable]
00:03:481 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Try to even out the distance between the circles and sliders after them, or just lower it. Done
00:26:026 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is a little too big for this quiet part of the song, you should lower it a bit. Lowered
00:36:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above, only these are way too spaced. Lower the spacing. Remapped that part with lower spacing
00:57:299 (1,2) - This jump is way too big. Reduce the spacing. Yup
01:07:481 (1,2) - Spacing is too low compared to 01:07:844 (2,3) . Increase it a bit or even it out. I can even :^)
01:42:753 (1) - Try making this slider faster to fit the shout. Yus
03:37:662 (3,4,5) - You got the slowly intensifying vocal just right with the spacing just before these sliders, but then it suddenly goes slow on these. Make them more spaced. Aye aye
04:36:935 (5) - Seeing how the vocal pattern change between this slider and the previous, you should place circles here instead.
04:48:571 (6) - ^ Fixed them

Minor suggestions:
03:07:662 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Probably just my pedantry speaking, but maybe make some of these into 1/6 repeat slider.
03:10:208 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^ Changed a couple
04:34:026 (1,1,1,1,2) - Lower the slider ends volume to 5%. Ok

[Hitsounds]
Chill out on the finish sample m8. Seriously though, hitsounds are done well for the most part, though what you did in the verses sounds kinda off. Just for your consideration. Yeah m8 I'll revisit hitsounding at some point, I sorta blitzed right through it without much thought

[New Combos]
If I believe an NC should be switched it's because it either starts too early or too late (before/after the instrumental/vocal pattern changes), or because of what I believe is inconsistent within the map itself. This part is especially nazi, since I don't know whether or not the NC right now stands as rank-able or not. I heavily suggest you change these, but because of my subjectivity, it's still up to you (in case your'e unsure yet, wait to see if anyone else comments about the NC, then take these into consideration).

NC Changes

00:10:753 (5) - NC
00:12:208 (3) - ^
00:16:208 (1) - Remove NC
00:16:571 (2) - NC
00:18:026 (3) - ^
00:18:571 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:481 (4) - NC
00:23:662 (1) - Remove NC
00:23:844 (2) - NC
00:32:571 (6) - ^
00:35:299 (1) - Remove NC
00:35:481 (2) - NC
00:40:935 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:299 (2) - NC
00:47:117 (5) - ^
01:27:844 (6) - ^
01:28:208 (1) - Remove NC
01:36:571 (3) - NC
01:39:481 (9) - ^
01:39:844 (1) - Remove NC
01:42:390 (5) - NC
01:42:753 (1) - Remove NC Nu uh, this now has a new different slider velocity and should therefore have the NC
01:43:844 (5) - NC
01:44:208 (1) - Remove NC
01:45:299 (5) - NC
01:45:662 (1) - Remove NC
02:07:117 (7) - NC
02:07:481 (1) - Remove NC
02:08:571 (6) - NC
02:09:117 (1) - Remove NC
02:10:026 (4) - NC
02:11:481 (6) - ^
02:11:844 (1) - Remove NC
02:28:753 (1) - ^
02:28:935 (2) - NC
02:46:390 (3) - ^
03:00:935 (4) - ^
04:35:481 (2) - ^
04:35:662 (1) - Remove NC

I changed all of these because I'm fairly sure you know more about this combo stuff than I do (I frankly suck at it), but with one exception which I have marked.

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

for my bae

20:52 Cassu2: wait do you do any modding anymore
20:52 Cassu2: I could bribe you with supporter if you agreed to mod my Remote Control Kappa
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: ahhhhh
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: if i find time
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: and motivation
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: D:
20:55 Cassu2: feelsbadman
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: just met my first potential boyfriend last month
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: my life has changed LUL
20:55 Cassu2: oh
20:55 Cassu2: OH
20:55 Cassu2: gz my nigga
20:55 Fatfan Kolek: thx ^__^
20:56 Fatfan Kolek: mhh, is irc mod enough?
20:56 Fatfan Kolek: i can do it now then
20:56 Cassu2: yeah that's fine
20:57 Fatfan Kolek: 00:31:753 (7) - inconsistent spacing
20:57 Fatfan Kolek: 00:30:208 (4,5) - except u did it here nvm then :d
20:58 Cassu2: Kappa
20:58 Fatfan Kolek: 00:39:481 (4,5,6,7,1) - mhhh, curve may be too sharp when u're coming from 00:39:117 (3) - I disagree, though I'm open to change it if more people mention it
20:59 Fatfan Kolek: 00:49:662 (7) - u could do a slider with higher sv for emphasis or just higher spacing + nc for this part I agree
21:01 Fatfan Kolek: 01:29:299 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - very weird ncs
21:01 Fatfan Kolek: 01:40:935 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do it like these Sure
21:02 Fatfan Kolek: 02:00:935 (1,2,3,4,5) - this curve looks also kind of weird to me I think it's fine, sorta "follows" (precedes?) how the next jumps go in the same direction
21:02 Fatfan Kolek: a curve to the left would look better maybe?
21:03 Fatfan Kolek: 02:40:208 (1) - make it last to the blue tick like u did before Sure
21:04 Fatfan Kolek: 01:24:571 (1) - like here
21:04 Fatfan Kolek: 02:58:390 (1,2) - this antijump is huge, id not do that, it ruins momentum for the higher sv slider Fixed
21:06 Fatfan Kolek: http://puu.sh/q7aLi/79f740e80e.jpg this would play better
21:06 Fatfan Kolek: 03:45:299 (1,2) - i think blanket can be improved, not sure tho :d Sorta improved it
21:07 Fatfan Kolek: 03:48:208 (1,2) - looks too boring with just repeat sliders, i'd put circle streams there instead for the emphasis I agree!
21:08 Fatfan Kolek: 04:28:571 (1,2) - bad antijump againFixered
21:08 Fatfan Kolek: (imo)
21:09 Fatfan Kolek: 04:55:844 (3,4,5,6) - listen more to the "vocals" here, u can do a few circles for every "vocal" here instead of just 4 sliders Done
21:09 Fatfan Kolek: that's kind of it
21:09 Fatfan Kolek: just random thoughts
21:10 Cassu2: aight man
21:10 Fatfan Kolek: change the things u agree with
21:10 Fatfan Kolek: not everything i said
21:10 Fatfan Kolek:
21:10 Cassu2: yeah I mostly agree tbh
21:10 Fatfan Kolek: aaaand u should work on your NCs, i can help when you're about to poke a BN
21:11 Fatfan Kolek: because it looks inconsistent
21:11 Fatfan Kolek: other than that
21:11 Fatfan Kolek: i'm pretty sure it will hit the approval status
21:11 Fatfan Kolek: just don't give up
21:11 Fatfan Kolek: and poke a BN soon
21:11 Cassu2: yeah thanks, I'm honestly pretty bad with NCs so any and all help is appreciated LOL
21:11 Fatfan Kolek: looking for too many mods is useless, just saying :p
21:12 Cassu2: yeah well what is the minimum number of mods needed to technically get stuff ranked
21:12 Cassu2: shouldn't there be some lower limit
21:14 Fatfan Kolek: there are maps that got ranked with 2 BN bubble and hearth "mods" just because it had 12 star rating
21:14 Cassu2: oh aight LUL
21:15 Fatfan Kolek: can you /savelog and send it to me, can't find it in my folder for some reason
21:16 Cassu2: oh is that some sort of a chat command LOL

gl, u can do it :3

-Jordan- wrote:

bad mod by request

SPOILER

00:45:299 (4,5,6,7,1) - These patterns look ugly compared to the others and you use it a couple of times. You should shape them like this instead. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5671650 Yeah sure

00:57:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds out of place since the other 1/2 sliders to 1/4 doubles before it all happen on a 1/2 bar, and this one doesn't, so I think you change it to this rhythm. https://gyazo.com/118241746950feaf6bef6df86f9ba2ca Not really 100% sure what you meant but I changed it to fit better anyways (imo at least)

01:52:208 (3,1,2,1,1) - Awkward to read, maybe have 01:53:117 (1) - in between 01:52:935 (2,1) - then place 01:53:481 (1) - over 01:52:571 (1) - like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5671767 (https://i.gyazo.com/e6791a1f5848cc4c190bda8d1d0e37fb.mp4). It doesn't matter how you do it, just make it less stupid to read. Done

03:03:481 (4) - I think you could just make this a 1/2 slider. Nope, the slider end would be in a different "section" of the song, listen to it. I wanted the player to tap a key on the first bar of that "calmer" section.

03:08:935 (5,6,7) - This triple doesn't really fit so you could remove 03:09:026 (6) - and have 03:09:117 (7) - be on top of the end of 03:09:299 (1) - or something. I disagree, I think it fits perfectly well. Am open for suggestions if others think it's weird too.
03:43:117 (1,1) - Shorten these two by 1/8th so they both end on blue ticks like the rest. Nope, listen to the change of pace of the "vocals". There's some (1/8) room for a space for all the other ones EXCEPT the last two, they are completely next to each other.

03:43:844 - Fits better since the snare initially hits on the blue tick, then fades on beat, and also keeps your symettry. https://gyazo.com/1508a0fa2025f6218536010e791f6ce3 Dunno what you're meaning to say here, no changes made

03:51:117 (6) - Replace with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5677050 ? I want to avoid mapping in stuff that doesn't exist in the song. There is nothing in it that warrants a triple in that part.

04:35:117 (1) - SV 1.7 makes this cooler. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5677005 But also less consistent, and doesn't really fit the pace of that particular part in the song (feels slower)

04:47:117 (1,2) - Replace these two with a slider like 04:47:481 (3,4,5) - . I feel they're consistent enough, and imo a necessary "buffer zone" between the higher spacing jumps and the regular spacing jumps after it

04:56:571 (5,6) - ^ Same That was changed by the suggestion from Fatfan Kolek in his mod, and I happen to like it

Silverboxer wrote:

m4m for my best finald friend

control pun diff

00:07:549 (4) - ctrl g maybe Nah, maybe if more people complain about it
00:11:367 (2) - why so close to last slider? move to right Didn't even notice that before, fixed
00:12:094 (2,1) - same here. you even put finish on it because it's a strong note. move further away!!!! Calm down m8
00:15:185 (1,2,3) - angle on triple is weird in this pattern. move 3 towards the next note, not away Fixed
00:16:276 (6,1) - ctrl g on one of these. doesn't matter which one, see if you like either variation better Sure thing buddy
00:21:549 (4) - put on same spot as 00:20:821 (4) pls Ye
00:37:003 (1) - overlap with 00:36:276 (1) pls Aye
00:45:367 (4,5,6,7,1) - last mod suggests this shape but this is super awkward because of the next jump. either change this back to a softer curve or move 00:45:912 (2) Reverted changes
01:11:639 (4) - move left one square Sure
01:11:912 (1,2,1,2) - I'm not a fan of two short jumps with big jump in middle. maybe this is better? http://puu.sh/qgRdC/8ff96025e8.jpg Didn't do it completely like you suggested but sorta changed it a bit
01:53:185 (1) - honestly this is intense enough to overlap with 01:53:549 (1) Yup
02:55:367 (4) - I know overlap on purpose but maybe move up and left? my opinion because I don't like perfect overlap like this normally I agree!
02:58:458 (1) - this sound isn't like the other screams in the song. this slider should be zigzaggy or something if you want to keep higher sv. it doesn't come off to me as a more intense sound, just stands out a little Idk changed it to a regular 1/2 but kept the SV change
03:07:730 (4,5,6) - missing 1/8th notes between these I think? doesn't sound like 1/8 or 1/6 to me so I dunno Meh sounds like two 1/6th or something, can't make it play well tbh
03:08:276 (1,2,3) - same here Same thing
03:20:276 (1,2,1) - tough angle going into the slider. maybe ctrl g slider Ye sure
03:52:821 (1) - no nc
03:53:003 (1) - no nc
03:53:367 (5) - nc
03:53:730 (1) - no nc Yes to all of these
03:57:730 (1) - overlap end with 03:57:003 (1) Fixed
04:28:639 (1) - same as other slider like this Fixed it the same way as I did the first one
04:12:276 (1,2,3,4) - this section is really intense, the circle jumps are good distance but some sliders like this can be a bit further apart for this last kiai. especially the very last section after 04:35:549 (1) I disagree, I think the sliders are okay. I will tweak them if it becomes an issue
04:44:276 (3,4,5) - same here Na
04:59:003 (2) - excuse me mister there is no sound here in the song!!!! Shush :^)

nice mappu

Mango Juice wrote:

From #modreqs, shitty mod \o/

00:19:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Doesn't play too well Then what do you suggest? No change
00:40:639 (5,6,7) - (5) and (7) overlap, ew. Fixed
00:45:367 (4,5,6,7,1) - Ugly imo I'm open to change the pattern, but no change for now
01:11:549 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ Same
01:17:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda hard to read How come? I can read it perfectly well
01:27:549 (4,5) - something like that No element in the song to map like that (no sound playing on the blue tick)
01:30:730 - missing beat imo Same as above
01:39:276 - ^ Same
03:30:458 (2,3,4) - Couldn't read Changed it by a bit, should be a bit more readable now
03:43:185 (1,1) - too spaced Lowered the spacing a bit
03:55:912 (1,2,1,2) - a bit too spaced I disagree

That's everything I guess. Good luck!

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Uncontrollable

00:07:185 (3,4) - The flow here is really weird, how about you ctrlg (4) for a better movement? Sure, gotten enough complaints about it that I'm finally willing to change it, although I still sorta disagree with you guys :^)
00:07:185 (3) - This one needs a nc considering the nc pattern you did before. fix
00:10:094 (3) - Same here fix
00:17:367 (1) - Remove nc to fit in with the nc pattern fix
00:09:367 (1,2,3) - Why did you decide to use such a low distance here? You havent done that before, and theres nothing mentionable in the song to suggest such a thing. Moved 2 on 3, should make it flow better
00:20:276 (1) - Delete nc for consistency. (I think you should check your ncs, the nc patterns are inconsistent) Uh sure
00:29:003 (3,4) - Why a 3/4 slider here? I think it would be better if (3) is 1/2 slider and you'll just place a circle 00:29:276 - here instead. I sorta disagree but at the same time I see the merit of doing that so I guess I can change it
00:45:367 (4,5,6,7,1) - This is a weird stream pattern, kinda hard to follow and it feels uncomfortable to play. Fix?
01:11:549 (3,4,5,6,1) - same here Seems good to me, I'm open to change it if there's more complaints though
01:11:912 (1,2,1,2) - Why the low ds suddenly? You havent done that here 01:06:094 (5,6,7,1) -. They sound decidedly different, and this one is calmer and in my vision the low ds fits well
01:21:730 (1) - Wouldnt it fit if you increase the sv of the slider? Will fit with the nc aswell Fixered
01:43:185 (2) - This one needs a nc because of the sv change fix
01:53:003 (2,1) - To make this more clear I suggest that (2) should get a nc and that you remove the nc of (1). Its less confusing that way and players can see that it is 1/2 and not 1/1 Sure
02:18:094 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is akward to play, the flow is very bad since it goes against the movement of (1) I disagree, it follows the exact same cursor movement as 1 and 2 before that pattern (I copied them and placed the stream exactly where the second slider would start)
02:37:367 (1) - same as 01:21:730 (1) - fix
02:58:821 (2) - nc because of sv change fix
04:06:094 (1) - same as 01:21:730 (1) - fix


Not bad overall, but it still needs a lot of work with the new combos.
Good Luck~