Hi
[Normal]
00:30:288 (6) - Placing it at (5)'s right reduces its impact a lot imo.
01:07:462 - repeating the slider at the less noticeable sound is not a really good idea. The only instrument that would justify it starts here 01:06:973 -
01:17:571 (2) - ^
01:22:462 (1,2) - This part deserves to be more intense. Use more circles please.
01:45:615 - 01:48:223 - 01:50:180 - is there any reason to skip them ?
01:53:767 (6,1) - Considering it's the only stack in your diff it may be really unpredictable and hard to read for beginners, gather more opinions.
[Advanced]
Consider increasing CS a bit so it fits better with the spread (normal : 2,8 ; hard : 4). And you should increase AR a bit too, this might be hard to read https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5638561
00:21:158 - What about a direction change here ?
00:22:462 - Feels kinda weird to skip the claps like that tbh. You should at least replace (4) circles by sliders so it kinda fits better with the last sound while mapping them.
01:05:995 (2,3) - and 01:05:995 (2) - are not following the same instrument. It makes the empty blue tick at 01:05:669 - feel kinda weird. Consider changing this. Same goes for next patterns.
01:23:278 - Is there any reason to skip it ?
01:33:875 - The break here is too short. It will kill most of the beginners.
[Hard]
00:10:397 (6,1) - Stack these ? It would give (1) much more impact and sense since the piano kinda stops on 00:10:397 -
00:18:223 (4) - I can see how it can be closer from (1) than (3) tbh lol
00:20:180 (4,1,1) - This spacing is really really confusing and unexpected. Consider changing it.
00:46:919 (4) - Replace it by a circle since there's no piano on 00:47:082 -
00:47:897 - I can't get why you suddenly skip these since you were mapping piano just before
00:53:604 - Make it clickable so it's more coherent with what you're mapping here 00:53:767 (1,2,3,4) -
01:08:604 (2,3,4) - The flow is weird here, especially the speed increase at 01:08:930 - . Consider making it smoother.
[Insane]
00:11:375 (2) - remove whistle on its end ?
00:38:115 (1) - Its shape doesn't really fit with the song.
00:49:691 (6) - This is way too loud. Reduce it please.
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - The stack gives too much emphasize to 00:55:886 (5) - imo.
01:05:506 (1,3,5) - nazi but unperfect
01:05:669 (2,4,6) - ^
01:17:408 (1,2) - CTRL+G so it's as smooth as 01:06:647 (6,1,2) -. Plays better like that.
[Extra]
00:23:767 (1,2,3) - Use a slider instead so it fits better with the flute since it's what you intended to map according to 00:25:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - .
00:34:202 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:636 (3,4) - overlap
00:49:691 (4) - Same as Insane, reduce its volume please.
01:08:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Reduce its spacing, it feels like 01:07:462 (4,5,6,7) - actually
01:19:038 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:44:799 (2,3,4) - Probably exagerated tbh.
I'm maybe too weak but I didn't find any major flaw.
[Normal]
00:30:288 (6) - Placing it at (5)'s right reduces its impact a lot imo.
01:07:462 - repeating the slider at the less noticeable sound is not a really good idea. The only instrument that would justify it starts here 01:06:973 -
01:17:571 (2) - ^
01:22:462 (1,2) - This part deserves to be more intense. Use more circles please.
01:45:615 - 01:48:223 - 01:50:180 - is there any reason to skip them ?
01:53:767 (6,1) - Considering it's the only stack in your diff it may be really unpredictable and hard to read for beginners, gather more opinions.
[Advanced]
Consider increasing CS a bit so it fits better with the spread (normal : 2,8 ; hard : 4). And you should increase AR a bit too, this might be hard to read https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5638561
00:21:158 - What about a direction change here ?
00:22:462 - Feels kinda weird to skip the claps like that tbh. You should at least replace (4) circles by sliders so it kinda fits better with the last sound while mapping them.
01:05:995 (2,3) - and 01:05:995 (2) - are not following the same instrument. It makes the empty blue tick at 01:05:669 - feel kinda weird. Consider changing this. Same goes for next patterns.
01:23:278 - Is there any reason to skip it ?
01:33:875 - The break here is too short. It will kill most of the beginners.
[Hard]
00:10:397 (6,1) - Stack these ? It would give (1) much more impact and sense since the piano kinda stops on 00:10:397 -
00:18:223 (4) - I can see how it can be closer from (1) than (3) tbh lol
00:20:180 (4,1,1) - This spacing is really really confusing and unexpected. Consider changing it.
00:46:919 (4) - Replace it by a circle since there's no piano on 00:47:082 -
00:47:897 - I can't get why you suddenly skip these since you were mapping piano just before
00:53:604 - Make it clickable so it's more coherent with what you're mapping here 00:53:767 (1,2,3,4) -
01:08:604 (2,3,4) - The flow is weird here, especially the speed increase at 01:08:930 - . Consider making it smoother.
[Insane]
00:11:375 (2) - remove whistle on its end ?
00:38:115 (1) - Its shape doesn't really fit with the song.
00:49:691 (6) - This is way too loud. Reduce it please.
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - The stack gives too much emphasize to 00:55:886 (5) - imo.
01:05:506 (1,3,5) - nazi but unperfect
01:05:669 (2,4,6) - ^
01:17:408 (1,2) - CTRL+G so it's as smooth as 01:06:647 (6,1,2) -. Plays better like that.
[Extra]
00:23:767 (1,2,3) - Use a slider instead so it fits better with the flute since it's what you intended to map according to 00:25:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - .
00:34:202 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:636 (3,4) - overlap
00:49:691 (4) - Same as Insane, reduce its volume please.
01:08:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Reduce its spacing, it feels like 01:07:462 (4,5,6,7) - actually
01:19:038 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:44:799 (2,3,4) - Probably exagerated tbh.
I'm maybe too weak but I didn't find any major flaw.