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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 5 de mayo de 2018 at 16:58:23

Artist: The Flashbulb
Title: Lawn Wake III
Tags: Red Extensions Of Me LW3 Chromoxx
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3520kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chromoxx' Hell Oni (6,8 stars, 1434 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2,55 stars, 460 notes)
  3. Inner Oni (5,16 stars, 1215 notes)
  4. Insomnia (7,25 stars, 1402 notes)
  5. Kantan (1,74 stars, 269 notes)
  6. Muzukashii (3,32 stars, 662 notes)
  7. Oni (4,29 stars, 1008 notes)


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Hell Oni by Chromoxx
posted
checking out the highest diff from the modding discord

[Relentless Oni]
00:10:205 (20) - change to k because of that sweet high-pitch buzz noise?
01:27:005 (601) - ^

man that's really it, sick diff
posted
Get 2 or 3 mods.
posted

Raphalge wrote:

checking out the highest diff from the modding discord

[Relentless Oni]
00:10:205 (20) - change to k because of that sweet high-pitch buzz noise?
01:27:005 (601) - ^

man that's really it, sick diff
Applied both

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Get 2 or 3 mods.
Will do :^)
posted

Midnaait wrote:

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Get 2 or 3 mods.
Will do :^)
Mod1 for low diffs

-General-
281-(268)>549-(262+)>811-(190+)>1001
El gap entre Muzu y Oni creo que esta un poco muy bajo comparado con las otras, asi que creo que buffearia el oni un poco

-Kantan-
00:43:205 (77) - Que tal d? sera consistente con los finales que pusiste anteriormente en los patrones
01:16:205 - Por Que no kdk? para que sea consistente con los kdk que hiciste despues
01:31:205 - Quizas podrias probar con 2/1 k d K? para que el K sirva en enfatizar el break
01:32:405 - podrias seguir algunas notas aca, no hay mucho
02:09:005 (56) - un k aca serviria imo, iria bien con el sentido de "corrupcion" que hiciste

-Futsuu-
00:38:405 (136) - que tal d? ahi es consistente con los patrones que hiciste antes
01:25:805 (308) - d serviria aca imo (opinion)
01:51:605 (375) - finisher realmente cabria aca por el empiezo del kiai y tambien del sonido al principio
01:53:705 (384) - un k aca serviria para que no sea tan incomodo con el ddd
02:08:105 (435) - un finisher aca para que sea consistente con 01:56:105 (392) - (mismo sonido)

-Muzukashii-
No puedo ayudar mucho aca, soy malo en muzus
00:00:455 - 00:00:530 - pondria unos k ahi, para que no sea tan confuso
00:44:405 - 01:03:605 - yo realmente pondria mas variacion aca, esta muy repetitivo
01:03:605 - de aca para complementar lo anterior, pondria un poco mas de triplets

-Oni-
00:51:605 - Esta parte es identica a la muzu, demasiado creo yo, quizas querras buffear aca
No mucho que sugerir

Suerte uwu
posted

Vulkin wrote:

Mod1 for low diffs

-General-
281-(268)>549-(262+)>811-(190+)>1001
El gap entre Muzu y Oni creo que esta un poco muy bajo comparado con las otras, asi que creo que buffearia el oni un poco yo creo que esta bien lol

-Kantan-
00:43:205 (77) - Que tal d? sera consistente con los finales que pusiste anteriormente en los patrones
01:16:205 - Por Que no kdk? para que sea consistente con los kdk que hiciste despues
01:31:205 - Quizas podrias probar con 2/1 k d K? para que el K sirva en enfatizar el break Lo cambie, menos el finisher
01:32:405 - podrias seguir algunas notas aca, no hay mucho
02:09:005 (56) - un k aca serviria imo, iria bien con el sentido de "corrupcion" que hiciste

-Futsuu-
00:38:405 (136) - que tal d? ahi es consistente con los patrones que hiciste antes
01:25:805 (308) - d serviria aca imo (opinion) Creo que lo dejo en k, sigue mejor la batería
01:51:605 (375) - finisher realmente cabria aca por el empiezo del kiai y tambien del sonido al principio Creo que no es lo suficientemente fuerte como para tener un finisher lol
01:53:705 (384) - un k aca serviria para que no sea tan incomodo con el ddd
02:08:105 (435) - un finisher aca para que sea consistente con 01:56:105 (392) - (mismo sonido)

-Muzukashii-
No puedo ayudar mucho aca, soy malo en muzus
00:00:455 - 00:00:530 - pondria unos k ahi, para que no sea tan confuso Ya de por si es confuso que la canción empieze en un blue tick, no estoy seguro
00:44:405 - 01:03:605 - yo realmente pondria mas variacion aca, esta muy repetitivo
01:03:605 - de aca para complementar lo anterior, pondria un poco mas de triplets Lo haría pero quedaría bastante denso comparado con el Futsuu

-Oni-
00:51:605 - Esta parte es identica a la muzu, demasiado creo yo, quizas querras buffear aca Nerfeé el muzu para compensar
No mucho que sugerir

Suerte uwu
5 meses tarde pero te respondí :^)
posted
IRC Log

Basically changed Kantan-Futsuu-Muzukashii a lot in structure and adding breaks in Muzukashii and Oni, while removing some breaks in the kiai part of Oni that were every 3/1 so it caused serious flaw issues.

Call me back after 1 mod or 999
posted

-Kazu- wrote:

IRC Log

Basically changed Kantan-Futsuu-Muzukashii a lot in structure and adding breaks in Muzukashii and Oni, while removing some breaks in the kiai part of Oni that were every 3/1 so it caused serious flaw issues.

Call me back after 1 mod or 999
Gracias man

y never4get, Passa no señala :^)
posted
Kantan
00:07:505 (11,12) - Since 12 has the highest pitch out of the three notes here, ctrl+g 11 and 12 so that it becomes ddk
00:12:305 (19,20) - ^
00:26:405 (44,45,46) - If you don't agree with the above two suggestions, you've done this here, which should change your mind
02:25:205 (241,242) - I hear high pitch and then low pitch here, so consider ctrl+g
02:34:505 (259,260) - ^

Futsuu
01:10:505 - Having no note here feels awkward. Consider adding a k here
01:20:105 - ^
01:29:555 (251) - Consider moving this to the next white tick to go with the high pitch
01:56:105 (312) - I don't really see the point of this being a K; the sound present isn't strong enough to signify the use of a finisher
02:08:105 (353) - ^
02:10:505 (362) - ^

Muzukashii
00:26:405 (63,64,65,66) - kd dk fits pitch better, you should also do this on the other diffs
02:19:430 (511) - Delete this note. ddddd at this BPM is likely to be too straining for players of this difficulty level

Oni
00:00:755 (6) - Since this is an Oni (obviously) I don't think you should dive into hard patterns right at the start. It'll catch players new to Oni difficulties by suprise. Try having a steady buildup of difficulty, so consider deleting this note

Inner Oni
01:18:005 (457) - Make this k to go with the high pitch
01:32:330 (576) - Make this d. I really think the high pitched noise on the last note should be emphasized

Chromoxx' Hell Oni
00:00:305 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The 1/6 sound really starts from 00:00:355 (3) - , so consider deleting 00:00:305 (2) -
00:08:555 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - You've completely missed the 1/6 sound here lol. Start it from 00:08:705 (60) -
00:13:355 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - ^
01:33:605 (773,774,775,776) - I think you should remove these finishers. The music here is supposed to be the calmest part of the entire song. The sound you have mapped the k to is quiet and tranquil, so there is no need to emphasize those sounds as they are, in my opinion, better-sounding with small notes than they are with finishers
01:39:605 (779,780) - ^

Insomnia
Can't find anything wrong here, good diff~

That's all from me, hope this helps~
Good luck! :)
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No reply = changed

_DUSK_ wrote:

Kantan
00:07:505 (11,12) - Since 12 has the highest pitch out of the three notes here, ctrl+g 11 and 12 so that it becomes ddk
00:12:305 (19,20) - ^
00:26:405 (44,45,46) - If you don't agree with the above two suggestions, you've done this here, which should change your mind
02:25:205 (241,242) - I hear high pitch and then low pitch here, so consider ctrl+g Following drums here
02:34:505 (259,260) - ^ same

Futsuu
01:10:505 - Having no note here feels awkward. Consider adding a k here I know it feels weird, but have to place a break here to be consistent and because it needs to have it lol
01:20:105 - ^ ^
01:29:555 (251) - Consider moving this to the next white tick to go with the high pitch Following drums here :^)
01:56:105 (312) - I don't really see the point of this being a K; the sound present isn't strong enough to signify the use of a finisher
02:08:105 (353) - ^
02:10:505 (362) - ^ I'll keep this one, i think it's strong enough

Muzukashii
00:26:405 (63,64,65,66) - kd dk fits pitch better, you should also do this on the other diffs I think dk kd follows better for both drums and bass
02:19:430 (511) - Delete this note. ddddd at this BPM is likely to be too straining for players of this difficulty level I'll think about it, it doesn't seem too hard considering you have a decent break after it and the slider

Oni
00:00:755 (6) - Since this is an Oni (obviously) I don't think you should dive into hard patterns right at the start. It'll catch players new to Oni difficulties by suprise. Try having a steady buildup of difficulty, so consider deleting this note It feels empty without it, but i think it's ok

Inner Oni
01:18:005 (457) - Make this k to go with the high pitch Been following drums most of the time, so I'll keep
01:32:330 (576) - Make this d. I really think the high pitched noise on the last note should be emphasized

Chromoxx' Hell Oni

(I'll change for him, he let me btw)

00:00:305 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The 1/6 sound really starts from 00:00:355 (3) - , so consider deleting 00:00:305 (2) -
00:08:555 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - You've completely missed the 1/6 sound here lol. Start it from 00:08:705 (60) -
00:13:355 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - ^
01:33:605 (773,774,775,776) - I think you should remove these finishers. The music here is supposed to be the calmest part of the entire song. The sound you have mapped the k to is quiet and tranquil, so there is no need to emphasize those sounds as they are, in my opinion, better-sounding with small notes than they are with finishers
01:39:605 (779,780) - ^

Insomnia
Can't find anything wrong here, good diff~ :^)

That's all from me, hope this helps~
Good luck! :)
thank :^
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