Hobbes2 wrote:

Hi, this is from my queue Thanks for posting in it.

[Easy]

00:31:404 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here fixed
00:49:757 (3,1) - I don't think you should try to blanket these since the Distance spacing is pretty low and it'd be hard to shape fixed
00:55:404 (3) - This slider's kinda ugly :/ fixed
00:58:227 (3) - gross! Don't try to blanket this with 00:56:816 (1), it'll look bad. Try a new shape. fixed
01:08:110 (1,2) - Don't try to blanket these It ruins pattern :/
01:20:816 (1) - This spinner should extend until the downbeat (01:22:227) fixed

[Normal]

00:17:286 (1) - Repeat sliders that are this big aren't very popular nowadays i'd remap this fixed
01:20:816 (1) - Extend spinner like I mentioned in easy fixed

[Hard]

00:24:345 (3) - NC to be consistant fixed
00:42:698 (1,2,3) - Double repeat 1/2 sliders are pretty lame, esp in a hard; i'd remap this part fixed
01:20:816 (1) - Same deal as above fixed

Alright so for the hard you only map the main melody and skip over the drums. When you get to hitsounding you'll realize you really want those drums inbetween the melody mapped. Esp. since if you're only mapping the melody and ignoring the drums between the gameplay starts to feel like "play, break, play, break" which can be boring.

Other than that, it's a good map.

Good mapset overall! You had some nice slider designs, and the flow felt nice in a lot of parts.

Good luck!

100bit wrote:

Oh. It's my mistake.
Remove from Tags:
"ganar" because you have it in Artist
"sahara bounce" because you have it in Title
DO NOT GIVE KUDOSU!

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ M4M from your queue

General

1. Add some combo colours (yellow, green, orange and etc) I'll add

Easy

1. 00:03:169 (1,1) - this pattern looks like not good. try second (1) move for smooth jump fixed!
2. 00:08:816 (1,1) - ugly sliders fixed!
3. 00:25:757 (1) - ^ fixed!
4. 01:12:345 (3) - ^ fixed!
5. 01:15:168 (4) - ^ fixed!
6. 00:17:286 (1) - nc fixed!
7. 00:22:933 (1) - delete and this is unrankable (few place for focusing for amateurs and here's nothing, you can add sliders and circles) fixed!
8. 00:33:521 (3,1) - move for this look 00:31:404 (1,2) I think it's good
9. 00:38:463 (3) - this slider can be better fixed!
10. 00:43:757 (2) - delete fixed!
11. 00:44:110 (1) - cut to 00:45:521 fixed!
12. 01:20:816 (1) - ^ to 01:21:874 fixed!
13. 00:49:757 (3) - slider's end set to x:160 y:44 fixed!
14. 00:52:580 (3,1) - this pattern can looks better fixed!
15. 00:58:227 (3) - ^ fixed!
16. 01:08:110 (1,2) - ^ fixed!
17. 01:10:227 (4) - don't do repeat on red tick Hmm... I need to think about it

Normal

1. 00:05:992 (1,2) - copy 00:03:169 (1) fixed!
2. 00:09:874 (2) - too far fixed!
3. 00:11:639 (1) - ugly slider fixed!
4. 00:14:463 (1,2,5) - ^ fixed!
5. 00:19:404 (5) - ^ fixed!
6. 00:25:757 (1) - ^ fixed!
7. 00:56:110 (6) - ^ fixed!
8. 01:01:051 (1,2) - ^ fixed!
9. 00:13:051 (2,3) - cut 1 repeat, because amateurs can not understand that pattern fixed!
10. 00:44:110 (2,3) - ^ fixed!
11. 00:45:521 (1) - this slider can be better fixed!
12. 00:48:345 (1) - move slider's end for smooth jump fixed!
13. 00:51:168 (1) - ^ fixed!
14. 01:03:874 (1,2) - this pattern can looks better fixed!
15. 01:17:639 (4,5,1) - ^ fixed!
16. 01:20:816 (1) - cut to 01:21:874 fixed!

Hard

1. 00:03:169 (1,1,1,2) - ugly sliders fixed!
2. 00:34:227 (1) - ^ Sorry, but I love this slider xd
3. 00:41:286 (1,2) - ^ fixed!
4. 00:15:168 (3) - this slider can looks better fixed!
5. 00:16:580 (3) - ^ fixed!
6. 00:20:816 (2) - ^ I think it's good
7. 00:33:168 (3) - ^ fixed!
8. 01:10:933 (1,2) - ^ fixed!
9. 01:12:345 (2,4) - ^ fixed!
10. 00:20:021 (5) - start at red tick fixed!
11. 00:23:639 (2) - ctrl + H O.o I miss it, fixed!
12. 00:10:227 (2) - nc fixed!
13. 00:28:580 - 00:31:404 - map something fixed!
14. 00:37:404 (2,3) - this pattern can looks better fixed!
15. 00:42:698 (1,2) - ^ I need to think about it
16. 01:03:698 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I need to think about it
17. 01:20:639 (4) - move to 01:20:463 fixed!
18. 01:20:816 (1) - cut to 01:21:874 fixed!

Good Luck~

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello~ from CDFOdeuka Modding Queue

[General]

• Your map has two empty .wav file for hitsounds

Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.
NOTE: Due to a technical issue having any files that are 0 bytes in size in the beatmap folder will cause files after the (first) 0-byte file to be missing. Please do NOT use any 0-byte files. The one linked above is 44KB in size and won't cause issues.
*About this read the rules: Ranking Criteria - Audio Fixed!

You should replace these files. Also, you should delete one of them: according to the rules you can't use sliderslide and slidertick at the same time - if they don't have sound.

• Hmm, I think the volume hitsounds can be made more perfect by adjusting it to the music.
For this you need to add a section here: 00:05:992 - and set the volume to 30%
then here 00:03:169 set the volume to 20%
00:08:816 put here section and to set sound 40%
00:11:639 put here section and to set sound 50%
00:14:463 put here section and to set sound 60%
01:10:933 sound 100%

So we got better hitsounds. Fixed!

I did not find anything here! all is well

[Easy]

next, walk through the [New Combos!]

• It is not necessary so often to put a new combo. New combo needed if rhythm changes. In this case, you have an Easy Diff and a new combo is best to put on a big white tick.

00:16:580 (1) , 00:29:992 (1) - remove new combo Fixed!
00:17:286 (2) , 00:28:580 (3) - add new combo Fixed!


[Spacing]

This is the easiest difficulty in your mapset, but you use several spacings like:
Here 00:03:169 (1,1,1,1) - 1.0x spacing.
here 00:11:639 (1,1) - 1.3x spacing
here 00:14:463 (1,1) - 1.1x
00:16:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - 0.9x
00:20:110 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1.0x
and so on..... The spacing shouldn't jump! In the easy diff of your mapSet the spacing should be one on all the time. It should be predictable and understandable for new players. You need to alter the spacing in EasyDiff. Fixed!

• 00:03:169 (1) - post it here х:57 у:108. then remove that slider 00:05:992 (1). then make a copy of this slider 00:03:169 (1) and make Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J - and take away a new combo and Get perfect patterns! Fixed!

• 00:08:816 (1,1) - do the same as with the previous sliders: 00:08:816 (1) - post it here x:108 y:216. then remove that slider 00:11:639 (1). then make a copy of this slider 00:08:816 (1) and make Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J - and take away a new combo. Fixed!

• 00:16:580 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlapping objects on top of each other.

• 00:43:757 (2) - add note. Do not break the rhythm of the music. it can also confuse players Fixed!

• 00:45:521 (1) - hm... I'm not sure that this spinner is good here. Replace with a slider? it can be difficult for new players Fixed!

• 00:53:992 (1,3) - Make it so that the slider (3) blankets the other slider (1) ( so for example http://puu.sh/p51Km/d041cdee9a.jpg ) Fixed!

• 00:58:227 (3,1) - ^ perfect blanket http://puu.sh/p51PL/f1347c1f4d.jpg Fixed!

• 01:17:639 (2,3) - ^ Fixed!

[Normal]

[New Combos!]

• 00:58:227 (1) , 01:01:051 (1) , 01:03:874 (1) - remove new combo Fixed!

[Spacing]

• Here as well as in EasyDiff the spacing should not be changed! Do one distance. Fixed!


• 00:46:933 (1) - the spinner is too complicated! replace it with the slider. between the spinner and the next object must be at least 1.5 seconds for Easy and Normal diffs Fixed!

• 01:20:816 (1) - too short of a spinner. replace it with the slider

I can't list any more problems because you have to fix the spacing.

[Hard]

• 00:03:169 - slowing to 0.9 is not relevant here. it is not felt. if you want to slow down objects that do at least 0.75х Fixed!

• 00:11:639 (1,2,3) - In music not there is this rhythm. change it on one long slider Fixed!

• 00:47:110 (1) - he should start here 00:47:286 and here 00:47:110 - 00:47:198 - add note I think it's good...

• 00:51:874 (6) - Replace it with a slider which will end here 00:52:227 Fixed!

• 00:54:698 (6) - ^ the slider should end here 00:55:051 Fixed!
01:00:345 (5) - ^ at the next white tick In my opinion it doesn't sound good, but I'll remap this part...
01:03:168 (5) - ^ at the next white tick I added circle at the next white tick

• 01:06:345 (1) - add circle Fixed!
01:09:168 (5) - ^ Fixed!
01:11:992 (3) - ^ Fixed!
01:14:816 (1) - ^ Fixed!
01:17:639 (1) - ^ Fixed!
never miss the main rhythm in music! Ok

[New Combos!]

00:27:168 (3) , 00:38:463 (5) , 00:46:227 (3) , 00:49:756 (4) , 00:52:580 (2) , 00:55:403 (2) , 00:58:227 (2) , 01:01:050 (2) , 01:06:698 (2) , 01:09:521 (2) . 01:12:345 (2) , 01:15:168 (2) , 01:17:992 (2) , - new combo
00:52:404 (1) , 00:55:227 (1) , 00:58:051 (1) , 01:00:874 (1) , 01:06:521 (1) , 01:09:345 (1) , 01:12:168 (1) , 01:14:992 (1) , 01:17:816 (1) - remove new combo Fixed!

Good luck. Thanks!

XVoIR wrote:

irc mod here

HERE

2016-05-28 14:51 Chalwa: Elo
2016-05-28 14:52 XVoIR: cze
2016-05-28 14:52 Chalwa: Mógłbyś luknąć moje mape?
2016-05-28 14:52 XVoIR: którą
2016-05-28 14:52 Chalwa: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/981616 Ganar - Sahara Bounce]
2016-05-28 14:52 Chalwa: Tą
2016-05-28 14:52 XVoIR: um
2016-05-28 14:52 XVoIR: daj mi chwilę
2016-05-28 14:53 Chalwa: Na spokojnie
2016-05-28 14:55 XVoIR: IMo trochę za małe AR na hardzie xaD
2016-05-28 14:55 XVoIR: xD
2016-05-28 14:55 XVoIR: możę jakieś 7.7
2016-05-28 14:55 Chalwa: Dobra chuja jebnę AR 8
2016-05-28 14:55 Chalwa: Na bogato xD
2016-05-28 14:55 XVoIR: 00:03:169 (1,2) -  jak są te slidery to weź może zrób by byly takie równiejsze xD
2016-05-28 14:56 XVoIR: http://vori.s-ul.eu/zXk5tBXW o tak o
2016-05-28 14:56 Chalwa: Ty weź mi kompa nie wirusowywuj xD
2016-05-28 14:56 XVoIR: bo teraz po drugim czerwonym punkcie idzie za bardzo do góry
2016-05-28 14:56 Chalwa: Jakieś długie linki xD
2016-05-28 14:56 XVoIR: czym niby :/
2016-05-28 14:56 XVoIR: i jakie długie xD
2016-05-28 14:57 Chalwa: Ja tam korzystam tylko z scr.hu i puu.sh
2016-05-28 14:57 Chalwa: xD
2016-05-28 14:57 XVoIR: ja używałem scr.hu ale limity
2016-05-28 14:57 XVoIR: puu.sh to mi nie podobalo się to że nie zatrzymuje obrazu przy robieniu screena :/
2016-05-28 14:57 XVoIR: 00:08:816 (1) - tutaj zamiast Clapa to Whistle by lepiej pasował
2016-05-28 14:58 Chalwa: Takie git?
2016-05-28 14:58 Chalwa: http://scr.hu/7wpi/3ksys
2016-05-28 14:58 XVoIR: nomx D
2016-05-28 14:58 XVoIR: 00:14:463 (1,3) - za blisko jest 1 do 3 :/
2016-05-28 14:59 XVoIR: http://vori.s-ul.eu/QAhs9waR bardziej moze coś takiego?
2016-05-28 14:59 XVoIR: 00:19:404 (4) -  to by się przydało przesunąć by był blanket
2016-05-28 15:00 Chalwa: O kurde, nie zauważyłem
2016-05-28 15:00 XVoIR: 00:20:463 (1,2) - tutaj o coś takiego http://vori.s-ul.eu/MovpxEQq
2016-05-28 15:00 XVoIR: 00:21:521 (1,3) - tutaj możesz skopiować 1, dać CTRL+H i CTRL+J i na górze ustawić xD
2016-05-28 15:01 Chalwa: XD
2016-05-28 15:01 XVoIR: 00:27:874 (4,5) -  za blisko są
2016-05-28 15:01 XVoIR: 00:29:286 (2) - CTRL+SHIFT+R i jakieś ~17 stopni
2016-05-28 15:02 XVoIR: 00:30:698 (2) - dla lepszego wyglądu możesz to w prawo przesunąć
2016-05-28 15:02 XVoIR: 00:38:110 (4) - zrób to równolegle do następnego slidera
2016-05-28 15:03 XVoIR: 00:45:521 (1,2,1,2) - na hardzie to tu lepiej jest zamienić na dwa repeat slidery
2016-05-28 15:03 XVoIR: 00:47:286 (1) - wątpię by takie spinnery były rankable na hardach
2016-05-28 15:03 Chalwa: Kuźwa ciągle to źle jest xD
2016-05-28 15:03 XVoIR: co xD
2016-05-28 15:03 Chalwa: Każdy chce inaczej xD
2016-05-28 15:03 Chalwa: Te cztery slidery
2016-05-28 15:03 XVoIR: a xDD
2016-05-28 15:04 Chalwa: Ale nie zgadniesz nad czym najdłużej pracowałem xD
2016-05-28 15:04 XVoIR: 00:51:874 (6) - x:184 y:26 to będzie dobry kwadrat ale trzeba blanket poprawić
2016-05-28 15:04 XVoIR: nad czym xD
2016-05-28 15:04 XVoIR: 00:53:286 (3,4) - rip blanket
2016-05-28 15:04 XVoIR: 00:57:168 (2,3) - zaostrz 3
2016-05-28 15:04 Chalwa: http://scr.hu/7wpi/0dt2x
2016-05-28 15:05 XVoIR: a xD
2016-05-28 15:05 XVoIR: spoko ja kompletnie nie umiem slider artów
2016-05-28 15:05 Chalwa: Ja też nie, ale taki mi się fchuj spodobał
2016-05-28 15:05 XVoIR: 01:07:051 (2) - lekko w prawo
2016-05-28 15:05 XVoIR: 01:09:345 (6) - x:220 y:35
2016-05-28 15:06 XVoIR: 01:14:816 (6,7,1) - ten distance meh xD
2016-05-28 15:06 XVoIR: 01:17:639 (4,5,1) - tu też
2016-05-28 15:06 XVoIR: 01:18:345 (2,3) - tutaj to coś w stylu http://vori.s-ul.eu/5MFzlyMj ale lepiej bo mi to krzywo wyszło teraz xD
2016-05-28 15:06 Chalwa: ;-;
2016-05-28 15:07 Chalwa: A tak BTW. jakiego programu do screenów używasz?
2016-05-28 15:07 XVoIR: sharex
2016-05-28 15:07 XVoIR: no i jako hosting to s-ul.eu
2016-05-28 15:08 Chalwa: Ale wrzucasz to na forum xD. Bo nie nadążam modować xD
2016-05-28 15:08 Chalwa: Fri kudosu xD
2016-05-28 15:08 XVoIR: wiem xD
2016-05-28 15:08 XVoIR: dam loga
2016-05-28 15:08 XVoIR: btw to czas na normal \:D/
2016-05-28 15:08 XVoIR: a przynajmniej spróbuję
2016-05-28 15:08 XVoIR: bo kompletnie nie umiem modować a tym bardziej map łatwiejszych od insane
2016-05-28 15:08 XVoIR: 00:07:316 (4) - tutaj chyba trochę zeszło z blue ticka
2016-05-28 15:08 Chalwa: 00:07:404 (4) - Wiem
2016-05-28 15:08 Chalwa: xD
2016-05-28 15:08 Chalwa: Poprawilem
2016-05-28 15:09 XVoIR: 00:19:404 (5) - tutaj maybe normalny punkt a nie czerwony?
2016-05-28 15:09 Chalwa: Mi chodzi o blankety dużo...
2016-05-28 15:09 XVoIR: e tam xD
2016-05-28 15:09 XVoIR: 00:25:757 (1,2) - tutaj to dziwnie wygląda
2016-05-28 15:09 XVoIR: jakby miał być blanket
2016-05-28 15:09 XVoIR: ale nie
2016-05-28 15:10 XVoIR: jakbyś przeniósl 2 lekko w dół to by było lepij
2016-05-28 15:10 XVoIR: 00:29:639 (2) - coś w stylu x:304 y:176 
2016-05-28 15:10 Chalwa: http://scr.hu/7wpi/md20c xD
2016-05-28 15:10 Chalwa: Nowy styl sliderów?
2016-05-28 15:10 XVoIR: 00:31:404 (1,2) -  tu tak samo
2016-05-28 15:10 XVoIR: zauważyłem xD
2016-05-28 15:10 XVoIR: takie wtf xDD
2016-05-28 15:11 Chalwa: Ale wygląda fajnie ;;-;
2016-05-28 15:11 XVoIR: 00:38:463 (3) - obróć o 7 stopni anti-clockwise
2016-05-28 15:11 Chalwa: 00:41:286 (3,4) - Wiem, że the best pattern ever xD
2016-05-28 15:11 XVoIR: xD
2016-05-28 15:12 Chalwa: Grasz w LoLa?
2016-05-28 15:12 XVoIR: 00:48:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - takie coś to tak średnio jak się robi normale IMO
2016-05-28 15:12 XVoIR: nom
2016-05-28 15:12 XVoIR: 00:53:992 (1) - x:445 y:227?
2016-05-28 15:12 Chalwa: To potem podaj nick, bo nie mam z kim grać xD
2016-05-28 15:12 XVoIR: 01:03:521 (4,5) - rip blanket
2016-05-28 15:13 XVoIR: 01:17:639 (4,5) - trochę się popsulo
2016-05-28 15:13 XVoIR: 01:20:816 (1) - za szybki spinner
2016-05-28 15:13 Chalwa: To co? w 01:20:816 Slider długi?
2016-05-28 15:13 Chalwa: Ło chuj
2016-05-28 15:14 Chalwa: Zepsuło się
2016-05-28 15:14 Chalwa: xDD
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: albo jedno kółko ://
2016-05-28 15:14 Chalwa: I jak myślisz, kiedy prosić o BN moda??
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: najlepiej jak najszybciej xD
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: bo są najbardziej doświadczeni
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: wiesz
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: ja mam 84 SP u siebie
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: łącznie 45 modów
2016-05-28 15:14 XVoIR: 5 miesięcy
2016-05-28 15:15 XVoIR: A ŻADEN BN NIE ZMODOWAŁ :DD
2016-05-28 15:15 Chalwa: To ja mam 7 dni, 10 modów 15 SP i Kibbleru mi pomógł na początku
2016-05-28 15:15 Chalwa: Chyba 10
2016-05-28 15:15 Chalwa: Bo nie pamiętam
2016-05-28 15:16 XVoIR: no i w sumie tyle xD
2016-05-28 15:16 XVoIR: na easy się nie znam
2016-05-28 15:16 Chalwa: k
2016-05-28 15:16 Chalwa: Ja moduję tylko <4,5* bo wyżej nawet mapy nie passnę xD

kabmi wrote:

Hey! Sorry for my bad english, I'm ukrainian >,< Hello! No problem, I'm Polish

[Hard]

00:10:227 (2) - I don't like this hitsound Fixed!

00:34:227 (1) - Divide this slider/ It's good

00:43:404 (3) - Maybe slider ? Fixed!

01:08:374 (2,3) - Do not place the circles under the slider It's good

01:08:639 (4) - Maybe circle and slider? Screen: Hmm... I need to think about it

SPOILER

01:15:168 (1,2) - So bad, it is better to do as in the image below: I change it, but no like in screen

SPOILER

Do not know how modding low-diff, I'm sorry >,<

Well, I finished. Good luck with the map Thanks!

1. missing source (if there isn't just ignore this)
2. with the song being so intense, I really recommend that an Insane difficulty be made
3. this link will help you improve your sliders, it helped mine a lot

1. I think the Approach rate is a little bit too fast here
2. 00:23:639 - add something here, too spaced
3. 00:25:051 - same here
4. 00:31:404 (1) - fix the blanket
5. 00:34:227 (1) - fix the blanket
6. 00:36:345 - the beats here are very strong, I don't think it would be good to ignore it
7. 00:38:463 (3) - this slider looks ugly
8. 00:41:286 (3) - same here
9. 00:48:345 (1,2) - blanket these on each other
10. 00:51:168 (1,2) - try blanket these
11. 00:52:580 (3) - fix the blanket
12. 00:55:404 (3) - no need for this slider to be that exotic, just a simple slider would be fine
13. 00:58:227 (3) - the slider can be improved, it looks bad
14. 01:02:463 (1) - fix the blanket
15. 01:20:816 (1) - this spinner is too short for easy difficulty

1. 00:03:169 (1,2,3,4) - all these and so on, I recommend 2/1 sliders since the beats on the repeat destroys the mood of the song
2. 00:05:992 (3) - New combo
3. 00:07:316 (4) - resnap this
4. 00:13:051 (2,3) - I'm not sure about this, but it's quite overmapped for a Normal difficulty
5. 00:23:286 (2) - it would be better as a circle then 1/1 slider because we can hit on a strong beat
6. 00:24:698 (4) - same here
7. 00:28:580 (1) - I think this L shaped slider is not that much required, it's kinda ugly for me
8. 00:31:404 (1) - same here
9. 00:35:992 (4) - circle then slider?
10. 00:37:757 (2,3,4) - blanket these?
11. 00:41:992 (4) - I don't think overlapping sliders are good for Normal difficulties
12. 00:45:521 (1) - this slider is not good in appearance, try fixing it
13. 00:53:992 (1) - try to adjust this slider to blanket something
14. 01:02:816 (2) - straighten this with the previous slider, copy and paste the (1) or you may do it like this
15. 01:03:874 (5,6) - try something like this
16. 01:17:992 (5) - use this slider as blanket
17. 01:20:816 (1) - this spinner is very short for a Normal difficulty

Paloch VeGa wrote:

moddings from TH Modding Group queue

normal point outs
just my opinion
serious issue

[General]

1. missing source (if there isn't just ignore this) I dunno what's source of this song
2. with the song being so intense, I really recommend that an Insane difficulty be made I can't map good Insane diff :/
3. this link will help you improve your sliders, it helped mine a lot Oh... Thanks!

[Easy]

1. I think the Approach rate is a little bit too fast here Fixed!
2. 00:23:639 - add something here, too spaced Fixed!
3. 00:25:051 - same here Fixed!
4. 00:31:404 (1) - fix the blanket Fixed!
5. 00:34:227 (1) - fix the blanket Fixed!
6. 00:36:345 - the beats here are very strong, I don't think it would be good to ignore it Fixed!
7. 00:38:463 (3) - this slider looks ugly Fixed!
8. 00:41:286 (3) - same here Fixed!
9. 00:48:345 (1,2) - blanket these on each other Fixed!
10. 00:51:168 (1,2) - try blanket these Fixed!
11. 00:52:580 (3) - fix the blanket Fixed!
12. 00:55:404 (3) - no need for this slider to be that exotic, just a simple slider would be fine Fixed!
13. 00:58:227 (3) - the slider can be improved, it looks bad Fixed!
14. 01:02:463 (1) - fix the blanket Fixed!
15. 01:20:816 (1) - this spinner is too short for easy difficulty Fixed!

[Normal]

1. 00:03:169 (1,2,3,4) - all these and so on, I recommend 2/1 sliders since the beats on the repeat destroys the mood of the song Fixed! Make 4/1 sliders
2. 00:05:992 (3) - New combo ^
3. 00:07:316 (4) - resnap this Fixed!
4. 00:13:051 (2,3) - I'm not sure about this, but it's quite overmapped for a Normal difficulty Fixed!
5. 00:23:286 (2) - it would be better as a circle then 1/1 slider because we can hit on a strong beat Fixed!
6. 00:24:698 (4) - same here Fixed!
7. 00:28:580 (1) - I think this L shaped slider is not that much required, it's kinda ugly for me Fixed!
8. 00:31:404 (1) - same here Fixed!
9. 00:35:992 (4) - circle then slider? Fixed!
10. 00:37:757 (2,3,4) - blanket these? Fixed!
11. 00:41:992 (4) - I don't think overlapping sliders are good for Normal difficulties Fixed!
12. 00:45:521 (1) - this slider is not good in appearance, try fixing it Fixed!
13. 00:53:992 (1) - try to adjust this slider to blanket something Fixed!
14. 01:02:816 (2) - straighten this with the previous slider, copy and paste the (1) or you may do it like this Fixed!
15. 01:03:874 (5,6) - try something like this I think it's good
16. 01:17:992 (5) - use this slider as blanket Fixed!
17. 01:20:816 (1) - this spinner is very short for a Normal difficulty Fixed!

Well, the map looks promising, but it still needs a lot more attention to it, try looking at good maps and extract tricks and tips from them.
Good luck Thanks! ^^

ReFaller wrote:

eemm...Elo

Tak mi sie sposobał utworek, że jestem w stanie ci Insana wyczarować, jak tylko dasz mi znać. Wtedy też zrobie modzika przy okazji.

CZARUJ

_Stan wrote:

Hey from my modq, ok there;s my simple mod

[Easy]
00:17:286 (1,1) - ds? Fixed!
00:31:404 (1,2) - blanket it better Fixed!
00:49:757 (3,1) - ^ Fixed!

[Normal]
00:14:463 (1,2) - ds 1.2 but 00:15:168 (2,3,4) - ds 1.1 then 00:16:580 (5,1) - ds 1.2 make it same Fixed!
00:25:757 (1,2) - blanket or adjust the slide I think it's good
00:28:580 (1,2) - ^ Fixed!
00:36:361 - ?? why there are blank? If you wanna have break there, maybe delete 00:35:992 (4) - and just stop at the long white line. Fixed!
00:50:110 (5,1) - ds 0.85??? Fixed!
00:57:874 (4,5) - ds Fixed!
01:02:815 (2,3) - ^ Fixed!

[Hard]
00:34:227 (1) - strange slide Fixed!
00:37:051 - this place better a note not end of slide, cuz its a new part and have tympany there I think it's good

for EZ and NM, watch out the DS~, good luck

CookieBite wrote:

Hello there, from your modding queue!

[Easy]
i think AR 3 is better Fixed!
00:24:345 (2) - do this = better? Fixed!

00:33:521 (3,1) - blanket improve Fixed!
00:36:345 (3) - ctrl + h Fixed!
00:43:757 (2,3) - blanket? Fixed!
00:49:757 (3,1) - blanket improve Fixed!
00:55:051 (2,3) - ^ Fixed!
00:58:227 (3,1) - ^ Fixed!
01:06:698 (3,4) - ^ Fixed!

[Normal]
OD = 4 Fixed!
HP = 4 Fixed!
00:17:992 (2,3,4) - this makes newbie players confuse Add slider
00:22:933 (1,2) - blanket improve Fixed!
00:28:580 (1,2) - ^ Fixed!
01:05:286 (1,3) - too close Fixed!

[Hard]
00:19:227 (3,4) - blanket improve I think it's good
00:19:933 (5) - the start point should be 00:20:021 - Fixed!
00:22:050 (2) - cannot hear any beat here, remove it Fixed!
00:32:992 (2) - ^ Fixed!
00:34:227 (7) - miss a lot of beats here Sorry, but I'll leave it
01:00:521 - add a circle Fixed!

gl with your map! Thanks!

Yanganof wrote:

Heyo~
from queue

Nice Song

General
Decrease Hitsound Volme after kiai time? Fixed!

Easy
00:16:580 (2,1) - blanket? Fixed!
00:52:580 (3,2) - stack? Fixed!

Normal
00:18:698 (3) - fix DS Fixed!
00:19:404 (4) - fix DS Fixed!
00:21:168 (2,1) - stack? Fixed!
00:24:698 (4) - blanket improve Fixed!
00:27:874 (3) - fix DS Fixed!
00:28:580 (1) - ^same Fixed!
00:31:404 (1) - ^same Fixed!
00:38:463 (3) - ^same Fixed!

Hard
I think you should fix these Ds issues, as they don't seem to be jumps.
00:16:580 (3) - fix DS Fixed!
00:44:110 (1) - blanket? Fixed!
00:44:816 (3) - ^same Fixed!
00:49:580 (3,3) - stack? Fixed!
01:01:757 (3) - Improve blanket I think it's good
01:08:639 (4) - fix DS Fixed!
01:09:168 (5) - ^same Fixed!
01:09:345 (6) - ^same Fixed!
01:18:699 (3) - Improve blanket Fixed!

gl with your map Thanks ^^

Trent83 wrote:

From my queue



*= Important!

[General]

General things

Bg Png and Jpeg: please try to erase one of them, if you doen't gonna use them at least try to reduce the size of the map - Fixed!

[Easy]

Easy diff

00:22:580 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:31:404 (1,2,3,1) - ↑ Fixed!
00:34:227 (1,2,3) - Really weird combination of sliders and weird flow Fixed!
00:43:757 (2,3) - Fix blanket Fixed!
00:51:168 (1,2) - ↑ Fixed!
00:52:580 (3,1) - ↑ Fixed!
00:53:992 (1,2) - ↑ and try to evade stacks in normal diffs Fixed!
00:55:404 (3,1) - overlap Fixed!
00:58:227 (3,1) - Overlap and fix blanket Fixed!
01:06:345 (2,3,4) - fix blanket Fixed!
01:08:110 (1,2) - ↑ Fixed!
01:08:816 (2,3) - bad flow Fixed!
01:11:639 (2,3) - overlap Fixed!

Your map isn't really bad... but is mapped like in a 2011/2012 mapping style...
but you need to remap some parts... please read this forums before remap
Flow Tutorial 1

Flow Tutorial 2

blanket guide
Ohhh... Thanks! ^^

ReFaller wrote:

Twój wielmożny Insane przybywa: http://puu.sh/pgCzM/d0687244ad.osu. Teraz dawać bębny średniowieczne!!!

Hitsoundowałem po swojemu, nie wiem czy używasz kopiarki, ale jakby wpadło ci do głowy skopiować moje wypociny, to i tak nie otrzymasz identycznego efektu.

Dzięki ziom

propasy wrote:

Normal

00:11:639 (1,2) – feels strange how you lower the difficulty and flow of the map compared to 00:08:816 (1,2,3,4) – perhaps switching these two positions? Fixed!
00:22:933 (1,2,3,4) – perhaps adding some circles in the empty white ticks like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5326586 Fixed!

Hard

00:08:816 (1,2) – I think non repeating sliders would be better in this case since the hit sound of when the slider repeats feels off Fixed!
00:17:286 (1,2,3) – feels strange how you add a delay now, if you wanted to create a delay in the patterns, you should have done it at the beginning (i.e. 00:14:463 (1) -) Fixed!
00:25:757 (1) – would be a good spot to have a abstract curve that times with the singing Fixed!
00:45:521 (1,2) – I think these repeating sliders overstayed a bit too long, perhaps having 4 repeating sliders instead? Fixed!
00:47:286 (3) – try replacing this to a slider. Might be a better alternative Fixed!

propasy wrote:

Refaller’s insane

00:04:580 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – I think you can afford a bit more space between each note i don't feel increase more spacing, music presents only 4/1 notes and some other sounds
00:28:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – you shouldn’t make these single tapping streams easier than before (i.e 00:20:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -) , add more spacing between these what reason?
00:32:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – same with this ^ explain me
01:16:227 (1,2,1) – add more distance between each of these notes this distance, because specific sound stopped playing at this 1/1 moment

ReFaller wrote:

propasy wrote:

Refaller’s insane

00:28:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – you shouldn’t make these single tapping streams easier than before (i.e 00:20:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -) , add more spacing between these what reason?

woops i think i was suppose to mean 00:28:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sorry, anyway i mean this because over at 00:20:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -, the spacing was actaully harder than here, but from what i can see, the beatmap is suppose to get harder over time, hence i through making the spacing easier isn't the way to go

00:32:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – same with this ^ explain me

Same with this^

Worminators wrote:

Random NM
ReFaller's Insane

1. 00:46:138 (8,1,2,3) - Check spacing and improve the stream's curve What spacing? and what is wrong with stream? lol.
2. 00:52:580 (3,4,5) - Improve this pattern improve? what exactly?
3. 01:03:874 (3,4,5) - ^Same ???

Worminators wrote:

Random NM

Meta

1. Convert bg to jpeg to save some space I will change it

Easy

1. 00:16:580 (2,1) - Improve blanket Fixed!
2. 00:22:580 (4,1) - ^Same It's good O.o
3. 00:43:757 (2,3) - ^Same It's good
4. 00:58:227 (3,1) - ^Same Fixed!
   
5. 00:49:757 (3,1,2) - Blanket spacing is different between sliders Fixed!
6. 01:06:345 (2,3,4) - ^Same Fixed!
   
7. 00:51:874 (2,3) - Increase spacing a bit (it overlaps) Fixed!
8. 01:07:404 (4,1) - ^Same But it doesn't overlap O.o
   
9. 01:15:168 (4,1) - Decrease spacing Fixed!
   
10. 00:22:933 (1,2) - Claps on big white ticks? Fixed!
11. 00:53:992 (1,3) - ^Same Fixed!

Normal

1. 00:25:757 (1,2) - Improve blanket Fixed! Move the circle a bit to down, cause it was overlaped.
2. 00:28:580 (1,2) - ^Same Fixed!
3. 00:45:521 (1,2) - Try to blanket pls (maybe add more anchor points) Fixed!
4. 00:49:580 (3,4) - Remove notes and make the previous slider a reverse (then fix spacing with the next slider) It ruins my mapping style :/
5. 01:17:992 (5,1) - Blanket Fixed!

Hard

1. 00:03:169 (1,1) - Maybe you can stylise these sliders a bit more Made new sliders
2. 00:15:168 (3,3) - Copy one of the slider and replace the other one so they are the same Made new sliders
3. 00:19:227 (3,4) - Improve blanket Fixed!
4. 00:34:227 (6,1) - Try to blanket Fixed!

wajinshu wrote:

Q
5 Volume change to 10 pls because Unrankable Fixed!

Easy:

1. 00:42:698 (1,3) - A litlle overlap Fixed!
2. 00:52:580 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/poRDz/da03592796.png Fixed!
3. 00:59:639 (1) - Ens on white tick please >~< Didn't saw this . Fixed!
4. 01:12:345 (3) - Maybe trying somthing like this? http://puu.sh/poRV9/282066eb86.png Fixed, but I'm not good at arts sliders (I dunno how I can name it )
5. 01:15:168 (4) - Something another form just make ^ ot red point x: 509 y: 324 ^
6. 01:17:992 (3) - Red piont in x: 486 y: 78 Fixed!

Normal:

1. 00:03:169 (1) -The pattern imo look better http://puu.sh/poSo9/f2e6c2abab.png Fixed!
2. 00:05:992 (1) - just copy ^ + Ctrl + J and put here http://puu.sh/poSwn/c2206f0686.png ^
3. 00:17:286 (1,2,3,4) - uhm where hitsounds? uhm... I forgot
4. 00:23:286 (2) - Slider end clap Here I made claps in big white ticks, but I'll Change it!
5. 00:24:699 (5) - ^ ^
6. 00:23:992 (3) - Remove clap Fixed!
7. 00:24:345 (4) - Clap Fixed!
8. 00:31:404 (1,2) - Blanket pls Fixed!

Hard:

1. 00:34:051 (5,1) - Stack this two? Fixed!
2. 00:34:227 (6) - Red piont x: 245 y: 214 I move this not on this position, but it's now on slider tick
3. 00:57:521 (3) - Clap in the start? Fixed!

Gl >~< Thanks ^^

ReFaller wrote:

Info dla ciebie Chalwa

co on ci chrzani że 5% voluma jest unrankable, 0-4% jest unrankable, ale dzisiaj jest to tylko możliwe jak wpiszesz te wartość w notatniku, w F6 tak nie zrobisz, w skrócie 5% voluma jest w 100% rankable

Zamalowane żeby ten na górze co modował ci diffy nie wiedział o co chodzi XD

1. 00:19:404 - honestly, might as well put a 1/1 slider here since you did at 00:16:580 (2) -
2. 00:24:345 (2) - if you delete the center node on this, the slider will have a more natural curve.
3. 00:51:168 (1) - Blanket could be fixed here, if you didn't adjust the DS already.
4. 00:52:580 (3,1) - this one really needs fixing. Make sure you try using the approach circle or something to help with your blanketing.
5. 00:56:110 (4) - having this curve off to the left actually makes the 00:55:404 (3) - look very uneven when wrapping around the (4)
6. 01:12:345 (3) - These L shaped sliders can look a little unappealing when used longer than 1/1 try adding a couple curves into it or something.
7. 01:15:168 (4) - ^
8. 01:20:463 (2) - Try placing this up higher. About the same height as where the tail of 01:17:992 (3) - is?

1. 00:09:874 (2,3,4) - this is a bit too dense imo. There really isn't any sound to back this rhythm here. A simple slider like 00:08:816 (1) - where the (3) is would work just fine.
2. 00:15:874 (3,4) - Try placing these on the outside so it loops around in a circle instead. It'll feel like 00:15:168 (2,5) - has symmetry that way.
3. 00:17:286 (1,2) - These would be better if they were placed on the same Y axis. If not, even adding a simple curve on them works wonders for these.
4. 00:19:404 (4) - Probably just a curve as well, or change (3) to match (4). It helps when you are doing similar slider shapes everywhere.
5. 00:21:521 (3) - Loosen off the curve by the tail here, then copy paste it to (4). Just so it's a bit smoother.
6. 00:24:699 (5,1) - A little bit too close. Try moving the (1) a bit further away.
7. 00:41:286 (3,4) - Move the (3) up a little, and then copy paste it for (4) so it staircases down.
8. 00:46:933 (2) - Try adding a red point where the ball is at 00:47:286 - then maybe curve the last bit or something?
9. 01:00:168 -shouldn't this be a whistle instead? (the tail)
10. 01:16:580 (1) - Try something like x217 y142 instead.

1. 00:14:463 (1) - From like 00:14:463 (1) - to 00:37:051 - you should really be using mostly 1/1s or at least don't use hitsounds to create a beat that doesn't exist. 00:33:168 (2,3,4,5) - for example you can't even hear in the music.
2. 00:15:168 (3,3) - Ends of both these sliders need to be resnapped.
3. 00:25:757 (1) - Doesn't make sense to slow this down if you don't slow it down at 00:28:580 (1) - imo. I'd just use the normal speed here.
4. 00:28:227 (5) - Just a circle imo. You don't need the extra 1/2 from the slider.
5. 00:54:874 (6,7) - You can move these down a little. It's pretty close to the (5) otherwise.

Lanturn wrote:

Ganar - Sahara Bounce
Nice Insane.
00:10:227 (2,3) - oh no. 0.03 Fix it please! Hehe

Hmm a bit short. Might be time to take a break soon.