1. dksslqj's Insane (4.79 stars, 511 notes)
2. Hard (4.32 stars, 322 notes)
3. Pokie's Normal (2.21 stars, 175 notes)

dksslqj wrote:

hi ouran

Can I make diff for this map?

NotShinta wrote:

Pokie:
I'd call this 'Pokie's Normal' (or 'Pokie's Hard', depending on what it's actually meant to be) for consistency.
01:43:375 (1) - Add a finish?
02:16:175 (4,6) - This is the only overlap like this I found in the map. So while being nazi, unoverlap them?
I'd suggest mapping to the end usually, but whatevs.

Hard:
Tick rate 2 would be preferable. And I really disapprove of the SBed hitsounds, but whatever.no tick rate 2!!!!!!!!!!!. <3 SBed hitsounds
01:23:975 (4) - I'd end this on the 1/4 tick before, personally. made it end on the red tick instead
01:48:975 (1) - ^, next 1/2 ticknope
02:28:704 - I think this particular SB sound is overdoing it.nope
02:31:704 - ^nope
04:04:030 (1) - This is practically impossible to read correctly for the same reason The Fire doesn't work with all the new offsets. I would just delete this.removed

dksslqj's Insane:
Tick rate 2 would be preferable.
I must repeat my disapproval of near-silenced notes, especially when there's clearly nothing being mapped to (e.g. 00:50:175 (2)), as it leaves the player with a confused feeling.
01:42:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't care if this is meant to be an Insane, this is just very silly.and silly means?

/whinging

1. The background file name... Why not just simply call it "Mystia Lorelei BG.jpg" or something...
2. Remove the countdown. It's better without it.
3. The third timing section on Pokie has a different offset than Hard and dksslqj's Insane. Fix this.

1. 00:55:375 (1)-Add a finish?
2. 01:43:375 (1)-^?
3. 01:48:175 (2)-^?
4. 01:51:375 (1)-^?
5. 02:05:775 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
6. 02:05:775 to 02:17:75-Put a little more effort with the hitsounds please.
7. 02:24:585 (1)-Add a finish.
8. 02:28:522 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap?
9. 03:11:085 (1)-Add a finish.

1. Please put more effort with the hitsounds, man. Especially the beginning. D: Add some whistles on some parts of this difficulty
2. 04:04:030 (x)-Add a note.

1. 00:29:778 to 00:54:575-Add some hitsounds please.
2. 01:27:375 (11)-Add a finish.
3. 01:33:775 (8)-^
4. 01:40:175 (6)-^
5. 01:46:575 (4)-^
6. 02:05:775 to 02:17:775-Add some more hitsounds.
7. 03:12:579 to 04:04:120-^

Raging Bull wrote:

Damn slow song ._.

Hard:
Lower like OD and AR by 1? o.odone

Insane:
Add break between 00:55:575 - 00:58:175 ? HP drain is set to high and you lose a lot during this part with nothing mapped.
02:05:775 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - Lol copy paste
Can you resnap all notes? Or will it make notes go offbeat? fixed
Well I found nothing major or anything that bothered me. Good luck.