1. Collab (5.63 stars, 1394 notes)

Term Akatski wrote:

kore wa hontoni gei desuwa

O-Moei wrote:

Hello (again) !, from #modreqs. Oh, Drum N' Bass ?, not really my interest, but what a nice mapping though. I hope I can be helpful here.

General :
Oh, audio bitrate is too high. Try to convert it first ! If you don't have the converter, here's my recommendation http://download.cnet.com/Audacity/3000-2170_4-10058117.html
Check the AI Mod (Ctrl + L.Shift + A)

Collab :
04:17:798 (5) - 04:24:998 (1) - 04:46:598 (4) - Slider end not snapped
03:55:342 (2) - Offscreen
02:42:999 (3) - Maybe put this to :" X 336 Y 366 " will be nicer
03:30:313 (1) - Nicer too if it stacked with the slider end before. Yours to decide !

Phew, that's all I can give. Like before, it's perfect !. I hope I'm correct, helpful and not changing the style XD . Good luck !

DavidEd wrote:

Quick mod request from IG <3 It's not like I wanted to or anything...

Don't know your motive behind your use of NC so I wont comment on that.
Suggested Kiai time: 02:12:485 to 02:33:838

00:05:627 (4) - I know it might be a bit picky, but since the map focuses alot on the visual, fixing all the blankets would be awesome!
00:20:713 (1) - Map the downbeat for better impact (add note)
00:27:399 (1) - Blanket
01:22:685 (5) - Ghost note


Great song, great map. Can't get any better than that.
Good luck guys!

1. pls hitsound
2. reminder again for audio bitrate

1. 00:01:170 (1) - repeat instead? covers the background sound better 00:02:370 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - especially since ur following it here
2. 00:04:256 (10) maybe just a slider for 00:04:256 (10,11,12) - ?
3. 00:04:599 (1) - i dont think you should follow the vocal since your following the background here anyway, probably better to just follow thru with it and ignore the vocal. the slider gives a rather unnatural pause i feel
4. 00:08:713 (1) - extend to red tick? 00:08:370 (1,2,1) - i think pattern feels better if so otherwise NCing doesnt fit very well
5. 00:09:656 - maybe note here?
6. 00:25:170 (1) - maybe two 1/4 sliders instead to follow vocal?i think different rhythm gives this better feeling since same rhythm here 00:23:799 (1,2) -
7. 00:26:199 (1) - just going to mention stream ends here,probably not noticeable in gameplay but gives you some options in rhythm here
8. 00:26:542 (1) - maybe just me but i feel that following these just give the map a strange pause
9. 00:37:513 (1) - simple 1/1 maybe better, i feel that the next section is just suddenly fast
10. 00:46:599 (1,2) - isnt this a bit on the sudden side?
11. 00:46:256 (3) - maybe experiment with replacing it with a 1/8 repeater might be a better feeling
12. 00:48:827 (3) - extend to blue tick and remove repeat and add note at 00:48:827 (3) - captures the drums better
13. 00:49:856 (1) - end on white/red tick?
14. 00:52:599 (1,2,3) - maybe should try different rhythm here, something like this for example i diont think long slider is good because so much is happening in background
15. 00:55:342 (1) - extend to 3/4?
16. 01:34:085 (2) - NC here instead?
17. 01:39:056 (4) - 1/8 here
18. 01:48:827 (1,2,3) - not too sure about this, i feel that a repeat here is better or just skipping this beat 01:48:913 (2) - since its rather faint in comparison
19. 01:50:199 - 02:10:770 - i think you can do some really creative things here instead of mindless following the drum beat since you get a new sound to work with
20. 02:20:370 (1) - shortening this and adding a note at 02:20:713 - feels better i think
21. 02:29:285 (1) - extend to blue?
22. 02:35:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 02:41:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 02:46:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - is 3 ds changes really necessary? it doesnt look too nice i think
23. 02:42:999 (3,4) - ds mistake?
24. 02:45:399 (2,3,4,5) - smooth this out? the zigzag stream seems to be reserved only for the sharp change in music for reference 02:40:599 (6,7,8,9) -
25. 02:41:970 (1,2,3,4) - 02:52:942 (8,9,10,11) -
26. 03:30:999 (3) - maybe replace with 2 1/4 sliders? better rhythmic variety
27. 03:35:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 1/4 sliders in this section? just seems a bit strange to skip this part of the buildup
28. 03:43:685 (5,6,7,8,1) - this stream etc why space last slider but not from here 03:57:399 (5,6,7,8,1) - etc spacing just seems a bit random in this section
29. 04:02:713 (1,2,3,4) - (these caught me offguard lol since its randomly hitsounded lol)
30. 04:04:942 (2,3) - extend 2 to red and note here 04:05:199 - ?
31. 04:10:085 (1) - feels strange to me since vocal here 04:10:256 -
32. 04:42:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe this rhythm here is better
33. 04:46:770 (1) - maybe better to just have it end on red tick and note on blue