Hello
I really like this map and I think it's good but could still need one or two other experienced modders to check this out
GL!!
[Madness]
00:23:283 (3,4) - Highlight these and move to x:384 since they're kinda built on the same pattern
00:25:777 (1) - Feels like this could be a bit more to the right (x:320) if you follow sound
00:29:973 (5,6,7) - Could space these a bit
00:37:215 (1) - I don't think this should be as close as it is to 00:36:922 (4) - Consider moving a bit to the left (You can't really pick up on any sound change here... Even tho there might be a little)
00:43:361 (2,3) - These should be a bit more to the right because the pattern start 00:43:361 not 00:43:068. This 00:43:068 (1) - is connected to the previous stream. This also means that you gotta move upcoming notes accordingly
00:51:556 (4,5) - Think you could add more distance to these since they are on 1/2's and shouldn't be easier
00:53:166 (6,7,8,1) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. Doesn't really fit the overall style... Consider adding more distance here
01:03:556 (3) - Move a bit to the left (x:232)
01:04:142 (1) - This should have more distance from 01:03:849 (4) - because of sound. Move following notes accordingly. Could highlight 01:04:142 (1,2) - and move to x:208
01:14:678 (3) - Could add more distance here
01:35:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Think you should add more spacing in this
01:57:995 (4) - Consider nc on this
01:58:434 (2,3,4,5) - Could space these a bit
02:06:190 (5,6) - Consider giving these more movement... Doesn't really fit with the rest
02:17:166 (4) - & 02:17:605 (7) - should have more movement due to the voice getting "louder"
02:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's opportunity for some sliders if you want to switch things up
02:48:776 (7,8,1,2) - Think you should make this vertical like you did here 02:47:459 (5,6,7,8)
02:49:361 (7) - & 02:49:507 (1) - are on two big sounds... Consider adding more distance
03:12:922 (1,2) - Could give this a bit more distance
03:14:093 (2,3,4,5) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. There's also three different sounds in 03:14:385 (5) - maybe don't have this as reverse slider
03:22:873 (1,2,3) - Think you can give these more movement since they're 1/2's
03:25:361 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Highlight these and move to x:328 for better flow
03:33:556 (1) - Feels a bit weird that this is so close to 03:33:410 (12)
03:49:215 (1,2,3) - Any special reason they're this close here?
03:55:166 (2) - & 03:55:361 (1) - could be moved a bit to the left (x:280) while moving 03:55:459 (2) - accordingly... I think it gives it a good touch
04:08:824 (3) - Way to close to (2) considering the sound
04:09:556 (4) - ^ "(3)
04:52:873 (2) - You could remove this and add one more tick on 04:52:434 (1) - because it doesn't have to be HDash here
05:14:386 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part doesn't really follow the music... Could do a better job following the vocals here
05:24:337 (3,4,5) - These have way more movement than the other three's (05:21:995 (3,4,5) - & 05:22:580 (3,4,5) -) Maybe consider making 05:24:337 (3,4,5) - just like them
There is nothing wrong with the part from 05:50:268 to 06:06:918... But I think you could add more movement here to amplify the omnious feeling and make players nervous (this could be done by just spacing a bit more)
From the kiai time that starts from 06:28 and ends at 07:10 is a bit easy compared to the overall difficulty of the map. Normally this would be replaced with a difficult stream but since this part doesn't allow that you've decided to map the vocals (for the first half). This could as I said be made more difficult by maybe adding slider velocity and bigger spacing and I think this is necessary to keep good consistency. The second part of the kiai is a bit more difficult but still has some parts that could be made challenging like 06:54:511 (5,6,7,8) - & 07:04:170 (6,7,8)
07:32:965 (1,2) - Feels a bit weird that these start so far away consider these two sounds are almost silent
07:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This could be mapped a bit more spaced and/or difficult due to the sound on all these being "loud"
08:10:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Feels a bit weird how all of these are mapped without any flow break... Consider adding some... Maybe here 08:11:193 (1,2)?
08:20:852 (2,3) - These shouldn't be on the same distance away from eachother since they're on very different sounds in vocal
08:30:510 (5,6,7) - These should have more movement to fit in with overall difficulty of this part
00:23:283 (3,4) - Highlight these and move to x:384 since they're kinda built on the same pattern
00:25:777 (1) - Feels like this could be a bit more to the right (x:320) if you follow sound
00:29:973 (5,6,7) - Could space these a bit
00:37:215 (1) - I don't think this should be as close as it is to 00:36:922 (4) - Consider moving a bit to the left (You can't really pick up on any sound change here... Even tho there might be a little)
00:43:361 (2,3) - These should be a bit more to the right because the pattern start 00:43:361 not 00:43:068. This 00:43:068 (1) - is connected to the previous stream. This also means that you gotta move upcoming notes accordingly
00:51:556 (4,5) - Think you could add more distance to these since they are on 1/2's and shouldn't be easier
00:53:166 (6,7,8,1) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. Doesn't really fit the overall style... Consider adding more distance here
01:03:556 (3) - Move a bit to the left (x:232)
01:04:142 (1) - This should have more distance from 01:03:849 (4) - because of sound. Move following notes accordingly. Could highlight 01:04:142 (1,2) - and move to x:208
01:14:678 (3) - Could add more distance here
01:35:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Think you should add more spacing in this
01:57:995 (4) - Consider nc on this
01:58:434 (2,3,4,5) - Could space these a bit
02:06:190 (5,6) - Consider giving these more movement... Doesn't really fit with the rest
02:17:166 (4) - & 02:17:605 (7) - should have more movement due to the voice getting "louder"
02:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's opportunity for some sliders if you want to switch things up
02:48:776 (7,8,1,2) - Think you should make this vertical like you did here 02:47:459 (5,6,7,8)
02:49:361 (7) - & 02:49:507 (1) - are on two big sounds... Consider adding more distance
03:12:922 (1,2) - Could give this a bit more distance
03:14:093 (2,3,4,5) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. There's also three different sounds in 03:14:385 (5) - maybe don't have this as reverse slider
03:22:873 (1,2,3) - Think you can give these more movement since they're 1/2's
03:25:361 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Highlight these and move to x:328 for better flow
03:33:556 (1) - Feels a bit weird that this is so close to 03:33:410 (12)
03:49:215 (1,2,3) - Any special reason they're this close here?
03:55:166 (2) - & 03:55:361 (1) - could be moved a bit to the left (x:280) while moving 03:55:459 (2) - accordingly... I think it gives it a good touch
04:08:824 (3) - Way to close to (2) considering the sound
04:09:556 (4) - ^ "(3)
04:52:873 (2) - You could remove this and add one more tick on 04:52:434 (1) - because it doesn't have to be HDash here
05:14:386 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part doesn't really follow the music... Could do a better job following the vocals here
05:24:337 (3,4,5) - These have way more movement than the other three's (05:21:995 (3,4,5) - & 05:22:580 (3,4,5) -) Maybe consider making 05:24:337 (3,4,5) - just like them
There is nothing wrong with the part from 05:50:268 to 06:06:918... But I think you could add more movement here to amplify the omnious feeling and make players nervous (this could be done by just spacing a bit more)
From the kiai time that starts from 06:28 and ends at 07:10 is a bit easy compared to the overall difficulty of the map. Normally this would be replaced with a difficult stream but since this part doesn't allow that you've decided to map the vocals (for the first half). This could as I said be made more difficult by maybe adding slider velocity and bigger spacing and I think this is necessary to keep good consistency. The second part of the kiai is a bit more difficult but still has some parts that could be made challenging like 06:54:511 (5,6,7,8) - & 07:04:170 (6,7,8)
07:32:965 (1,2) - Feels a bit weird that these start so far away consider these two sounds are almost silent
07:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This could be mapped a bit more spaced and/or difficult due to the sound on all these being "loud"
08:10:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Feels a bit weird how all of these are mapped without any flow break... Consider adding some... Maybe here 08:11:193 (1,2)?
08:20:852 (2,3) - These shouldn't be on the same distance away from eachother since they're on very different sounds in vocal
08:30:510 (5,6,7) - These should have more movement to fit in with overall difficulty of this part
I really like this map and I think it's good but could still need one or two other experienced modders to check this out
GL!!