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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 22 janvier 2018 at 21:34:53

Artist: Imperial Circus Dead Decadence
Title: Uta
Tags: ICDD DANCE ASK extol ou song declare express ode to the dreadful sacrament 惨劇の血に赫く染まった愛と絶望の黒い死とが紡ぐ最期の物語 sangeki no chi ni kagayaku somatta ai to zetsubou no kuroi shitoga tsumugu saigo no monogatari rib:y(uhki) l.g.c. kim kylie hull vaguedge another stream kimiko peath2 tome あにょ marathon
BPM: 140
Filesize: 15664kb
Play Time: 08:47
Difficulties Available:
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Madness

Thank you everyone for supporting me, couldn't achieve it without you. Have fun !!

Band: Imperial Circus Dead Decadence (ICDD) (http://icddecadence.com/)
Illustrator: ASK (https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1980643)
Illustration: DANCE (https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=60515982)
Madness background by NanoMortis: https://nanomortis.deviantart.com/art/I ... -597615924
Hitsound by Aqliva

Lyrics
Found it here: https://mirrorofparanoia.com/2012/03/18 ... decadence/
失われたのではなく、
形を変えて想いは生まれ続ける。
貴女達は、
永遠に見守られ続ける。

What has been lost won’t come back
Even if your feelings change as you keep born
You all will be
Watched over for the eternity.

再び訪れる成れの果て、
人は命の形を様々に変えながらも、
やがて此処へ行き着いてしま。
愚かしさ故の冒涜か、
だがしかし、
其の理を知るものは陽として知れず――。

Again, I see the shadow of myself,
The same person that, while changing other’s lives,
In the end, arrived here.
Is this because of a foolish curse?
However,
Not even the sun knows the true reason――.

「またしても終わってしまう
余りに儚い
だがこの痛み悲しみは彼らの自業である
さぁ
終りを迎える 貴女と私の姿は…

And once again, it ends
Way too soon
However, this painful sorrow comes from their own deed
That’s it.
Accept this end, as thee and I together…」

オフェストラの名の下に 血潮が燃えている
今まさに其の時が来たのだ 武器を取れ
我が正義を貫いた先にある
勝利の意味を記して 後世に伝えようぞ

In the name of “Ophestra”, my will becomes strong
Now, the time has come. Draw your sword
This is the justice I’ve always carried
My reason of victory will be remembered, bequeathed by posterity

「だが其の争いそのものの愚かしさから目を背け続けて得たモノは真の勝利と言えるのだろうか?
同属が争い合い続ける限り其れは永遠に繰り返されるのだから――。

A conflict is stupid by itself, yet you keep your eyes closed to not see it. Can you really call this a victory?
People will keep fighting each other forever, again and again――.」

大いなる世界の中で我等は無力
疵付けあい 死に絶えるまで終わらない
人は儚く小さい 其れは覆らない
今を生き続けて 其の命を燃やしながら

Inside this vast world, we are powerless
We hurt each other and don’t stop until one dies
People are transient beings and that can’t be changed
Keep living seizing the day as our lives burn

「学んだとて人は生まれながらに背負った罪によって、
縛りつけられている
そして、
人というものは本質的にわかりあえないものである――。

I learnt that people are burdened with sins since their birth,
They are tied to them
And,
Those I call “people”, are beings that don’t understand each other――」

無い在る等らと言う 無意味な神論を
我が力で問おう 黒き闇を召還した

Being and not being are meaningless god’s theories
We asked for strength and summoned the black night

「悪魔との契約に従い、私の想いは遂げられた。
この力をもってしてロストフェルを討つのだ。

Because of my contract with devil, my feelings ended.
By using this power, I will defeat Rostfel」

崩れ果てて 壊れて
失ってから気づく
千切れ朽ちて 流れて
気付いてからじゃ遅く
前を向けず 頭垂れて
それでも生き続けて
せめて夢を見させて
願い遂げて

Falling, dying, breaking
All because I’ve lost, I know it
Collapsing, rotting, vanishing
It’s too late to realize it
Don’t look back, lower your head
And then, keep living
At least, you will dream of
Your wish coming true

大いなる世界の中で彼らは強く
殺し合い 死に絶えるまで終わらない
人は儚く小さい 其れを受け入れなさい
今を生き続けて 其の命輝かせて

Inside this vast world, they are powerless
They kill each other and don’t stop until one dies
People are transient beings, they have to accept it
Keep living seizing the day as your lives shine

「悲しみを孕んだ物語
悲劇の愛
古き神々の悲しみ
血に塗れ、腐乱し、灼かれて
狂気の闇に飲みこまれた」

「A tale born out of sadness
A tragic love
The sadness of the old gods
Stained in blood, decomposed, burned
Engulfed into this night of madness」

生きるという 苦しみこえて
絶望もすべて 私と
命を見た 其処には心
私たちはここで聖餐の詞を謳う
貴女へと――。

To live means to cross hardships,
And despair as well, together with me
I saw the life, my mind is there
And we, in that place, celebrate the “Eucharist”
For you――。

囚われ 孤独さも 風を待つ 雛鳥のように
目を逸らすな この痛みを 愛の姿は刻薄
哀れなこの子らも 羽を持つ 手は いらない 儘で
忘れないで この思いを 愛に似た哀しみを 今も――。

Captured, isolated, I wait the wind like a little bird
Don’t look away from this pain, the faces of love are cruel
Those pitiful children who now have wings have lost their hands
I won’t forget this feeling, this sadness which resembles love, never――.

大いなる世界の中で我等は無力
疵付けあい 死に絶えるまで終わらない
人は儚く小さい 其れは覆らない
今を生き続けて 其の命を燃やしながらも

Inside this vast world, we are powerless
We hurt each other and don’t stop until one dies
People are transient beings and that can’t be changed
Keep living seizing the day as our lives burn

生きるという戦いは 惨禍の中で
命を愛する心だということ
そして私は生き 愛することを謳おう
どんな困難な道も越えて叫び続けよう――。

Living is a battle within calamities
Love your life, that’s your heart
And then, I will live, celebtrating what I love
And I’ll keep shouting it as I cross difficult paths――.

“生きる”という戦い、
惨禍の中で命を愛する心――
私は”生きていく”ことを讃歌しよう――。

“Living” is a battle,
Within calamities, I’ll love my life, my heart――
I will praise what you call “living” ――

命を見た、其処には心がある。
たとえどんな困難が待っていようとも、
私はここで叫び続ける――。

I saw the life, where my heart is.
Even if many difficulties are awaiting,
Here, I will keep screaming――.
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<3
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Second... ;w;
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I did leave out a few parts as I don't want much nerfing.
"I hate to be one of those who tells a mapper to do this and that as an order when it's their map, and not the modders. It's the modders job to come with ideas and solutions to improve the map, not make it their own."
Madness
01:24:629 (1,2,3,4) - This part follows the same sounds as 01:22:873 (1) -, 01:23:459 (1) - so an idea would be something like this? http://imgur.com/kfpbI1x spacing might be too tight compared to the others, but see how you like it :3
01:41:312 (4,5,6) - Why is the spacing on these tripples different than the others that work the same way in this section? 01:37:215 (2,3,4) - 01:39:556 (6,7,8) - (Examples)
03:17:117 (5,6,7) - I see what you're trying to do, but is tripples the right answer? I feel like keeping the pace might be better as tripples don't follow the sound imo. If not, try to experiment a bit with it.
03:24:629 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This was lit 👌👌🔥🔥👌👌🔥🔥👌👌
04:53:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 👌👌🔥🔥👌👌🔥🔥👌👌

06:24:950 (8) - Ctrl+G As the 2 first ones have a perfect follow up after each one I have to disagree with this.
08:32:413 (1,2) - I feel like the distance between 1 and 2 is a bit too far. Try this little nerf. http://imgur.com/TEZEFqI
Logs
Before Submission
12:20 Exothermia: 00:33:703 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) Those are rather "simple" or whatnot compared to what the map offers later on, so maybe switching them to a 45degree left in 2, then the same to right and back left using the seventh slider to merge with the 8th in the middle.(6th green) Kinda hard To explain without having the exact notes etc
12:23 Kyuare: I see, but I really think it fits better because this is the beggining
12:23 Exothermia: Also some of 01:32:532 (6,7,8) - these could potentially be more of a 01:34:873 (6,7,8) - to increase the minor movements that is needed and in my personal opinion increases the fun. It's like that one part in pirnha slightly after those single tap sliders at the 300 combo mark
12:24 Kyuare: good idea
12:25 Kyuare: done
12:26 Exothermia: Some of them are to some extent fitting with the pervious patterns such as 01:35:166 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - where the red 01:37:215 (2,3,4) - do indeed fit a bit better, so having a distinction between where it should be placed and not can work well I believe.
12:30 Exothermia: I don't want to mention the first stream as it works well, however the second one at 01:45:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda feels awkward compared to the first. So I tried switching the 01:45:410 (1,2,3,4) - greens with 01:45:702 (1,2,3,4) - blues and found it to feel more natural. It might be too much of a nerf in a sense, but it looked nice
12:31 Exothermia: That's just what small adjustments I could suggest, but as always you've done a good job :D
12:31 Kyuare: I see, I will fix it in my way
12:31 Kyuare: thank you :p

After Submission
15:11 Exothermia: 04:14:239 (7,8) - when you play it, it seems like you have to move to the left a tad bit , but that fucks you over, so having 8 straight under 7 makes a clear indication on you having to switch sides and doesn't mentally fuck you
15:12 Exothermia: See what i mean?
15:12 Kyuare: yeah
15:12 Kyuare: you're right
15:12 Kyuare: fixed
15:17 Exothermia: That's the only thing that I have noticed when playing it normally. I'll take a deeper look later on. And this is just a personal feel and might be my attachment to this part of the std song, but 07:33:453 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - seems a bit over the top.
15:18 Kyuare: fixed
15:20 Exothermia: The sounds appear similar up until 7.42 after the break, so why one part is mapped as if it's sped up feels weird. Just in case you want reasoning.
15:21 Kyuare: yeah, I made it 1/3 like others patterns
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Exothermia wrote:

I did leave out a few parts as I don't want much nerfing.
"I hate to be one of those who tells a mapper to do this and that as an order when it's their map, and not the modders. It's the modders job to come with ideas and solutions to improve the map, not make it their own."
Madness
01:24:629 (1,2,3,4) - This part follows the same sounds as 01:22:873 (1) -, 01:23:459 (1) - so an idea would be something like this? http://imgur.com/kfpbI1x spacing might be too tight compared to the others, but see how you like it :3 I prefer my pattern sorry, less shitmissable imo
01:41:312 (4,5,6) - Why is the spacing on these tripples different than the others that work the same way in this section? 01:37:215 (2,3,4) - 01:39:556 (6,7,8) - (Examples) moved the triplet to x:320
03:17:117 (5,6,7) - I see what you're trying to do, but is tripples the right answer? I feel like keeping the pace might be better as tripples don't follow the sound imo. If not, try to experiment a bit with it. stacked them
03:24:629 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This was lit 👌👌🔥🔥👌👌🔥🔥👌👌
04:53:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 👌👌🔥🔥👌👌🔥🔥👌👌

06:24:950 (8) - Ctrl+G As the 2 first ones have a perfect follow up after each one I have to disagree with this. Ctrl+G and moved to x:288
08:32:413 (1,2) - I feel like the distance between 1 and 2 is a bit too far. Try this little nerf. http://imgur.com/TEZEFqI Fixed in my way
Logs
Before Submission
12:20 Exothermia: 00:33:703 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) Those are rather "simple" or whatnot compared to what the map offers later on, so maybe switching them to a 45degree left in 2, then the same to right and back left using the seventh slider to merge with the 8th in the middle.(6th green) Kinda hard To explain without having the exact notes etc
12:23 Kyuare: I see, but I really think it fits better because this is the beggining
12:23 Exothermia: Also some of 01:32:532 (6,7,8) - these could potentially be more of a 01:34:873 (6,7,8) - to increase the minor movements that is needed and in my personal opinion increases the fun. It's like that one part in pirnha slightly after those single tap sliders at the 300 combo mark
12:24 Kyuare: good idea
12:25 Kyuare: done
12:26 Exothermia: Some of them are to some extent fitting with the pervious patterns such as 01:35:166 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - where the red 01:37:215 (2,3,4) - do indeed fit a bit better, so having a distinction between where it should be placed and not can work well I believe.
12:30 Exothermia: I don't want to mention the first stream as it works well, however the second one at 01:45:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda feels awkward compared to the first. So I tried switching the 01:45:410 (1,2,3,4) - greens with 01:45:702 (1,2,3,4) - blues and found it to feel more natural. It might be too much of a nerf in a sense, but it looked nice
12:31 Exothermia: That's just what small adjustments I could suggest, but as always you've done a good job :D
12:31 Kyuare: I see, I will fix it in my way
12:31 Kyuare: thank you :p

After Submission
15:11 Exothermia: 04:14:239 (7,8) - when you play it, it seems like you have to move to the left a tad bit , but that fucks you over, so having 8 straight under 7 makes a clear indication on you having to switch sides and doesn't mentally fuck you
15:12 Exothermia: See what i mean?
15:12 Kyuare: yeah
15:12 Kyuare: you're right
15:12 Kyuare: fixed
15:17 Exothermia: That's the only thing that I have noticed when playing it normally. I'll take a deeper look later on. And this is just a personal feel and might be my attachment to this part of the std song, but 07:33:453 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - seems a bit over the top.
15:18 Kyuare: fixed
15:20 Exothermia: The sounds appear similar up until 7.42 after the break, so why one part is mapped as if it's sped up feels weird. Just in case you want reasoning.
15:21 Kyuare: yeah, I made it 1/3 like others patterns
Thank you for modding !
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this map can be ranked?
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Imperial Circus Dead Decadance - Uta


Madness
Combo colors

01:01:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

01:33:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

01:38:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

02:07:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

02:23:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

02:30:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

03:13:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

03:25:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

03:33:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -

03:41:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

03:57:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

04:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

04:09:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

05:29:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

06:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

06:19:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

06:21:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

06:23:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

06:25:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

06:28:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

06:30:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

06:35:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

06:37:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

06:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

06:51:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

07:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -

07:57:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

08:38:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
Les suggestions

07:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Je trouve le stream trop horizontal et donc dangereux pour un moment calme, peut etre essayer de reduire l'horizon

03:42:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pas tres esthétique, pas trop exploiter et trop proche tu peut peut etre essayer de créer un mouvement de gauche-droite au lieu de devoir se mettre au milieux

04:06:190 (5,6,7) - Hypedash sur le 6 pas tellement agreable et que je trouve pas vraiment justifier comparer au reste du pattern juste avant

03:16:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream trop "déformé" essaye de le fluidifier et de créer des nouveaux mouvement

06:36:658 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stream pas tres jolie qui t'oblige a rester immobile tu peut tres certainement l'exploiter pour créer un mouvement
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Hibari wrote:

Imperial Circus Dead Decadance - Uta


Madness
Combo colors

01:01:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

01:33:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

01:38:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

02:07:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

02:23:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

02:30:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

03:13:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

03:25:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

03:33:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -

03:41:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

03:57:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

04:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

04:09:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

05:29:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

06:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

06:19:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

06:21:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

06:23:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

06:25:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

06:28:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

06:30:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

06:35:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

06:37:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

06:46:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

06:51:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

07:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -

07:57:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

08:38:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
Les suggestions

07:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Je trouve le stream trop horizontal et donc dangereux pour un moment calme, peut etre essayer de reduire l'horizon

03:42:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pas tres esthétique, pas trop exploiter et trop proche tu peut peut etre essayer de créer un mouvement de gauche-droite au lieu de devoir se mettre au milieux Le pattern est fait pour qu'on le gauche-droite en fait, je vais garder ce pattern comme il l'est

04:06:190 (5,6,7) - Hypedash sur le 6 pas tellement agreable et que je trouve pas vraiment justifier comparer au reste du pattern juste avant

03:16:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream trop "déformé" essaye de le fluidifier et de créer des nouveaux mouvement

06:36:658 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stream pas tres jolie qui t'oblige a rester immobile tu peut tres certainement l'exploiter pour créer un mouvement Tu trouves ? Moi je le trouve très joli et il colle bien avec la musique, je l'ai amélioré pour qu'il crée plus de mouvement mais la forme reste la même
Merci ! J'ai fixé le reste
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would be awsome as a Final Tiebreaker :D x3
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Hello :)
[Madness]

00:23:283 (3,4) - Highlight these and move to x:384 since they're kinda built on the same pattern
00:25:777 (1) - Feels like this could be a bit more to the right (x:320) if you follow sound
00:29:973 (5,6,7) - Could space these a bit
00:37:215 (1) - I don't think this should be as close as it is to 00:36:922 (4) - Consider moving a bit to the left (You can't really pick up on any sound change here... Even tho there might be a little)
00:43:361 (2,3) - These should be a bit more to the right because the pattern start 00:43:361 not 00:43:068. This 00:43:068 (1) - is connected to the previous stream. This also means that you gotta move upcoming notes accordingly
00:51:556 (4,5) - Think you could add more distance to these since they are on 1/2's and shouldn't be easier
00:53:166 (6,7,8,1) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. Doesn't really fit the overall style... Consider adding more distance here
01:03:556 (3) - Move a bit to the left (x:232)
01:04:142 (1) - This should have more distance from 01:03:849 (4) - because of sound. Move following notes accordingly. Could highlight 01:04:142 (1,2) - and move to x:208
01:14:678 (3) - Could add more distance here
01:35:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Think you should add more spacing in this
01:57:995 (4) - Consider nc on this
01:58:434 (2,3,4,5) - Could space these a bit
02:06:190 (5,6) - Consider giving these more movement... Doesn't really fit with the rest
02:17:166 (4) - & 02:17:605 (7) - should have more movement due to the voice getting "louder"
02:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's opportunity for some sliders if you want to switch things up
02:48:776 (7,8,1,2) - Think you should make this vertical like you did here 02:47:459 (5,6,7,8)
02:49:361 (7) - & 02:49:507 (1) - are on two big sounds... Consider adding more distance
03:12:922 (1,2) - Could give this a bit more distance
03:14:093 (2,3,4,5) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. There's also three different sounds in 03:14:385 (5) - maybe don't have this as reverse slider
03:22:873 (1,2,3) - Think you can give these more movement since they're 1/2's
03:25:361 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Highlight these and move to x:328 for better flow
03:33:556 (1) - Feels a bit weird that this is so close to 03:33:410 (12)
03:49:215 (1,2,3) - Any special reason they're this close here?
03:55:166 (2) - & 03:55:361 (1) - could be moved a bit to the left (x:280) while moving 03:55:459 (2) - accordingly... I think it gives it a good touch
04:08:824 (3) - Way to close to (2) considering the sound
04:09:556 (4) - ^ "(3)
04:52:873 (2) - You could remove this and add one more tick on 04:52:434 (1) - because it doesn't have to be HDash here
05:14:386 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part doesn't really follow the music... Could do a better job following the vocals here
05:24:337 (3,4,5) - These have way more movement than the other three's (05:21:995 (3,4,5) - & 05:22:580 (3,4,5) -) Maybe consider making 05:24:337 (3,4,5) - just like them

There is nothing wrong with the part from 05:50:268 to 06:06:918... But I think you could add more movement here to amplify the omnious feeling and make players nervous (this could be done by just spacing a bit more)

From the kiai time that starts from 06:28 and ends at 07:10 is a bit easy compared to the overall difficulty of the map. Normally this would be replaced with a difficult stream but since this part doesn't allow that you've decided to map the vocals (for the first half). This could as I said be made more difficult by maybe adding slider velocity and bigger spacing and I think this is necessary to keep good consistency. The second part of the kiai is a bit more difficult but still has some parts that could be made challenging like 06:54:511 (5,6,7,8) - & 07:04:170 (6,7,8)

07:32:965 (1,2) - Feels a bit weird that these start so far away consider these two sounds are almost silent
07:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This could be mapped a bit more spaced and/or difficult due to the sound on all these being "loud"
08:10:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Feels a bit weird how all of these are mapped without any flow break... Consider adding some... Maybe here 08:11:193 (1,2)?
08:20:852 (2,3) - These shouldn't be on the same distance away from eachother since they're on very different sounds in vocal
08:30:510 (5,6,7) - These should have more movement to fit in with overall difficulty of this part
I really like this map and I think it's good but could still need one or two other experienced modders to check this out

GL!!
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Setomi wrote:

Hello :)
[Madness]

00:23:283 (3,4) - Highlight these and move to x:384 since they're kinda built on the same pattern
00:25:777 (1) - Feels like this could be a bit more to the right (x:320) if you follow sound
00:29:973 (5,6,7) - Could space these a bit
00:37:215 (1) - I don't think this should be as close as it is to 00:36:922 (4) - Consider moving a bit to the left (You can't really pick up on any sound change here... Even tho there might be a little)
00:43:361 (2,3) - These should be a bit more to the right because the pattern start 00:43:361 not 00:43:068. This 00:43:068 (1) - is connected to the previous stream. This also means that you gotta move upcoming notes accordingly
00:51:556 (4,5) - Think you could add more distance to these since they are on 1/2's and shouldn't be easier
00:53:166 (6,7,8,1) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. Doesn't really fit the overall style... Consider adding more distance here
01:03:556 (3) - Move a bit to the left (x:232) Fixed in my way
01:04:142 (1) - This should have more distance from 01:03:849 (4) - because of sound. Move following notes accordingly. Could highlight 01:04:142 (1,2) - and move to x:208 Fixed in my way too
01:14:678 (3) - Could add more distance here
01:35:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Think you should add more spacing in this
01:57:995 (4) - Consider nc on this
01:58:434 (2,3,4,5) - Could space these a bit
02:06:190 (5,6) - Consider giving these more movement... Doesn't really fit with the rest
02:17:166 (4) - & 02:17:605 (7) - should have more movement due to the voice getting "louder"
02:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's opportunity for some sliders if you want to switch things up No sorry I will keep circles
02:48:776 (7,8,1,2) - Think you should make this vertical like you did here 02:47:459 (5,6,7,8)
02:49:361 (7) - & 02:49:507 (1) - are on two big sounds... Consider adding more distance
03:12:922 (1,2) - Could give this a bit more distance
03:14:093 (2,3,4,5) - Feels a bit weird that they're so close to eachother. There's also three different sounds in 03:14:385 (5) - maybe don't have this as reverse slider
03:22:873 (1,2,3) - Think you can give these more movement since they're 1/2's
03:25:361 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Highlight these and move to x:328 for better flow
03:33:556 (1) - Feels a bit weird that this is so close to 03:33:410 (12)
03:49:215 (1,2,3) - Any special reason they're this close here? Increased the distance
03:55:166 (2) - & 03:55:361 (1) - could be moved a bit to the left (x:280) while moving 03:55:459 (2) - accordingly... I think it gives it a good touch No sorry, It would be so hard and very shitmissable imo
04:08:824 (3) - Way to close to (2) considering the sound
04:09:556 (4) - ^ "(3) I will keep as it is because I want to keep the linear shape
04:52:873 (2) - You could remove this and add one more tick on 04:52:434 (1) - because it doesn't have to be HDash here
05:14:386 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part doesn't really follow the music... Could do a better job following the vocals here remapped
05:24:337 (3,4,5) - These have way more movement than the other three's (05:21:995 (3,4,5) - & 05:22:580 (3,4,5) -) Maybe consider making 05:24:337 (3,4,5) - just like them

There is nothing wrong with the part from 05:50:268 to 06:06:918... But I think you could add more movement here to amplify the omnious feeling and make players nervous (this could be done by just spacing a bit more) I will think about it, but I will keep as it is for now

From the kiai time that starts from 06:28 and ends at 07:10 is a bit easy compared to the overall difficulty of the map. Normally this would be replaced with a difficult stream but since this part doesn't allow that you've decided to map the vocals (for the first half). This could as I said be made more difficult by maybe adding slider velocity and bigger spacing and I think this is necessary to keep good consistency. The second part of the kiai is a bit more difficult but still has some parts that could be made challenging like 06:54:511 (5,6,7,8) - & 07:04:170 (6,7,8) Made them a bit more challenging but not too much

07:32:965 (1,2) - Feels a bit weird that these start so far away consider these two sounds are almost silent
07:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This could be mapped a bit more spaced and/or difficult due to the sound on all these being "loud"
08:10:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Feels a bit weird how all of these are mapped without any flow break... Consider adding some... Maybe here 08:11:193 (1,2)?
08:20:852 (2,3) - These shouldn't be on the same distance away from eachother since they're on very different sounds in vocal
08:30:510 (5,6,7) - These should have more movement to fit in with overall difficulty of this part
I really like this map and I think it's good but could still need one or two other experienced modders to check this out

GL!!
Thank you very much !
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If ill have a lot of imagination may I storyboard this?
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00:01:641 (1) - 00:30:180 (7) - Make the notes more quiet.


Looking forward to seeing this ranked, I love this song so much.
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Shot 5 kudos, go for it Kyu !
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literally same

idk when, and no promises, but I'll try to mod this sometime. Don't wait on me though and dont expect an icon cuz i cant play this
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[Madness]
00:13:641 (4,5,6,7) - The way this stream is formed right now would suggest a follow up stream instead of just 1, I reccomend changing it up because it is slightly awkward to play like this. Also i'm not talking about nerfing the distance for (5) and (6). I'm talking more about how you should just change it up completely, if you look later on in the map you can see yourself using this type of stream pattern later so that's also a reason!
01:22:873 (1) - CTRL+G x160 This kind of pattern makes it more flow:ish to go to 01:23:166 (2) -
01:23:459 (1) - CTRL+G x112 Same thing here makes more sense to go to 01:23:751 (2) - afterwards.
01:32:532 (2,3,4) - CTRL+H then https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5470615 Makes for a very good pattern imo.
01:34:873 (2,3,4) - Move these to here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5470632 makes a good hyper.
03:01:800 (1) - CTRL+G x80 makes it more logical to go into 03:02:093 (2) -
03:02:971 (1) - CTRL+G x416 Basicaly same thing as ^ makes it easier to go to 03:03:264 (2) -
03:50:824 (5) - x432 makes a cool hyper at the end of the slider.
04:53:020 (2) - x352 This desperatly needs to be a hyper, just saying.
06:46:316 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5470824 Can't really leave this triple without a hyper imo.
08:45:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Imo I think this whole stream should be going outwards instead of inwards reminding you it is like the last part of the map. Also it's a lot more fitting then it going inwards right?
I demand this map to be HP7 instead of HP6 going after that there is a lot of rains with HP7 even, this may be a "marathon" more than just a simple Overdose, but I still do believe it should be harder to pass... Right?
03:42:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm thinking these would fit a lot better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5471088
The part 05:50:268 to 06:08:999 is kind of tame right now tbh, if you want to make this part better, I would strongly just recommend increasing the distance of like every single note placed, also don't just increase distance on them make them also work together. Like progressively more hard during the part.
Might have to take another look at this map later on. Ranked soon hypep?!
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Negri_sk wrote:

[Madness]
00:13:641 (4,5,6,7) - The way this stream is formed right now would suggest a follow up stream instead of just 1, I reccomend changing it up because it is slightly awkward to play like this. Also i'm not talking about nerfing the distance for (5) and (6). I'm talking more about how you should just change it up completely, if you look later on in the map you can see yourself using this type of stream pattern later so that's also a reason!
01:22:873 (1) - CTRL+G x160 This kind of pattern makes it more flow:ish to go to 01:23:166 (2) -
01:23:459 (1) - CTRL+G x112 Same thing here makes more sense to go to 01:23:751 (2) - afterwards. No, it would be so hard imo, and I like the actual pattern, no change
01:32:532 (2,3,4) - CTRL+H then https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5470615 Makes for a very good pattern imo. No sorry I want to keep this antiflow for the consistency with 01:34:873 (2,3,4) -
01:34:873 (2,3,4) - Move these to here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5470632 makes a good hyper.
03:01:800 (1) - CTRL+G x80 makes it more logical to go into 03:02:093 (2) - Fixed in my way
03:02:971 (1) - CTRL+G x416 Basicaly same thing as ^ makes it easier to go to 03:03:264 (2) - ^
03:50:824 (5) - x432 makes a cool hyper at the end of the slider.
04:53:020 (2) - x352 This desperatly needs to be a hyper, just saying.
06:46:316 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5470824 Can't really leave this triple without a hyper imo.
08:45:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Imo I think this whole stream should be going outwards instead of inwards reminding you it is like the last part of the map. Also it's a lot more fitting then it going inwards right?
I demand this map to be HP7 instead of HP6 going after that there is a lot of rains with HP7 even, this may be a "marathon" more than just a simple Overdose, but I still do believe it should be harder to pass... Right?
03:42:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm thinking these would fit a lot better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5471088
The part 05:50:268 to 06:08:999 is kind of tame right now tbh, if you want to make this part better, I would strongly just recommend increasing the distance of like every single note placed, also don't just increase distance on them make them also work together. Like progressively more hard during the part. Increased the discance a bit
Might have to take another look at this map later on. Ranked soon hypep?!
Thank you !
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Kyuare wrote:

I want my map to be funnie
haha this mod may be ROUGH
be careful!!


[Madness]
00:35:459 (3) - Ctrl G
00:37:507 (2,3) - Move to the right until Hdash is placed between (1) and (2)
00:41:898 (9,10) - make difference with former stream and make smooth the flow between 00:42:044 (1)
00:59:166 (7,8) - How about remapping here
00:59:166 (7,8) - make more distance in x axis not y
01:03:995 (8,1,2,3) - make distance
01:15:849 (1) - Ctrl G plz
01:17:312 (5,6,7,8) - curve to upside
01:32:532 (2,3,4) - is it rankable?
01:34:873 (2,3,4) - ^
02:25:142 (2,3,4) - ayyyyy too confuseeeeeee If you wanna keep this direction, reduce the width of 02:25:142 (2)
02:28:654 (2) - move to the right a little little little
02:28:947 (4) - move to the left a little little little
02:33:410 (5,6,7,8) - what a nice line... 02:33:483 (6,7,8) - move to the right a little and it will be comfortable to catch them (If hdash is disapeared move also 02:33:702 (1) to the right)
02:53:166 (2,4) - widen 2 blocks in grid level 3?
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ohhhhhhhhh too good parts
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06:40:755 (3,4) - why there's no hdash ;w;
06:59:780 (1) - move to the right (about x368?)

Check AiMod, There're 5 of unsnapped Objects
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_Asriel wrote:

Kyuare wrote:

I want my map to be funnie
haha this mod may be ROUGH
be careful!!


[Madness]
00:35:459 (3) - Ctrl G
00:37:507 (2,3) - Move to the right until Hdash is placed between (1) and (2)
00:41:898 (9,10) - make difference with former stream and make smooth the flow between 00:42:044 (1)
00:59:166 (7,8) - How about remapping here
00:59:166 (7,8) - make more distance in x axis not y
01:03:995 (8,1,2,3) - make distance
01:15:849 (1) - Ctrl G plz
01:17:312 (5,6,7,8) - curve to upside
01:32:532 (2,3,4) - is it rankable? Yes, but its so hard. I made them linear, its easier now
01:34:873 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:25:142 (2,3,4) - ayyyyy too confuseeeeeee If you wanna keep this direction, reduce the width of 02:25:142 (2)
02:28:654 (2) - move to the right a little little little
02:28:947 (4) - move to the left a little little little
02:33:410 (5,6,7,8) - what a nice line... 02:33:483 (6,7,8) - move to the right a little and it will be comfortable to catch them (If hdash is disapeared move also 02:33:702 (1) to the right)
02:53:166 (2,4) - widen 2 blocks in grid level 3?
~~~~~~
ohhhhhhhhh too good parts
~~~~~~
06:40:755 (3,4) - why there's no hdash ;w;
06:59:780 (1) - move to the right (about x368?)

Check AiMod, There're 5 of unsnapped Objects
Thank you ! My map is funnier now
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_Asriel wrote:

00:59:166 (7,8) - How about remapping here
I wrote wrong timeline ;w;

00:53:605 (1,2,3) - How about remapping here. Making distance can make fuunnn
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