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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 29, 2017 at 8:30:25 PM

Artist: DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa*
Title: Illumina
Source: pop'n music ラピストリア
Tags: lapistoria rhythmin julie chromoxx
BPM: 187
Filesize: 3136kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chromoxx' Futsuu (2.35 stars, 272 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (5.22 stars, 807 notes)
  3. Julie's Kantan (1.79 stars, 181 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.07 stars, 483 notes)
  5. Oni (4.38 stars, 644 notes)


Download: DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa* - Illumina
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni by me.
Futsuu by Chromoxx
Kantan by Julie.

my attempt on not being lazy for once
play surume yotyan's inner oni over here!
posted
osu file format v14

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Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa*
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Creator:KinomiCandy
Version:Julie's Kantan
Source:pop'n music ラピストリア
Tags:lapistoria rhythmin
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posted


[General]

Basic
  1. Turn off Wildscreen Support
  2. Current Ranked mapset used HP/OD : Kantan 8/3, Futsuu 7/4, Muzukashii 6/5, Oni 5/6 (This is just suggest, all the maps aren't use this)


[Julie's Kantan]

00:18:786 (20) - suddenly kat here?..
00:43:492 (22) - same sound as (19),(20),(21) so D here
01:25:845 (99) - unfinish, there's not loud sound like (100)

[Muzukashii]

00:05:149 (17) - Delete, there's no sound to add note here. then 00:05:470 (18) move to 00:05:310
00:08:197 (30) - same sound as (31) so d here
00:12:529 (49),(50),(51),(52) - wrong sound to k, change to k k d d or d d k k
00:22:315 (97),(98),(99),(100) - ^, change to d d k k
00:43:331 (80) - k here, k k d d k k will better follow
00:49:187 - forgot to add d here
01:14:855 - ^
01:44:935 (384) - same as 00:43:331 (80)

overall, well mapped map to me.
posted

Diva Days wrote:

[General]

Basic
  1. Turn off Wildscreen Support Fixed.
  2. Current Ranked mapset used HP/OD : Kantan 8/3, Futsuu 7/4, Muzukashii 6/5, Oni 5/6 (This is just suggest, all the maps aren't use this)
    Currently going with the same unless it's a problem with it.


[Muzukashii]

00:05:149 (17) - Delete, there's no sound to add note here. then 00:05:470 (18) move to 00:05:310 Fixed.
00:08:197 (30) - same sound as (31) so d here Fixed.
00:12:529 (49),(50),(51),(52) - wrong sound to k, change to k k d d or d d k k Huh? It's already d d k k.
00:22:315 (97),(98),(99),(100) - ^, change to d d k k Went for k d k k instead.
00:43:331 (80) - k here, k k d d k k will better follow Okay.
00:49:187 - forgot to add d here On purpose.
01:14:855 - ^ Sure.
01:44:935 (384) - same as 00:43:331 (80) Sure.

overall, well mapped map to me.
Thank you for the mod!
posted

Diva Days wrote:

[Julie's Kantan]

00:18:786 (20) - suddenly kat here?.. What do you mean suddenly a kat here? Note is there to keep consistent with 00:13:652 (10) - , 00:10:443 (4) - , 00:05:310 (4) - . Why kat? because when the beat fall on the clap sound, I put a kat just like here 00:13:331 (9) - and here 00:18:465 (19) -
00:43:492 (22) - same sound as (19),(20),(21) so D here Hmm nice point, changed that to D so changed this 00:44:775 (23) - to K
01:25:845 (99) - unfinish, there's not loud sound like (100) Huh? I hear a really loud cymbal in 99 and in 100 I only hear a normal clap, not sure what you mean xD
Thanks for the mods x3

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posted
Hihi~ From my Queue

[Julie's Kantan]
00:08:518 - Add a don here, as this flows better with the vocals
00:49:909 (33) - Change to a kat, as this fits in with the rising pitch
00:52:957 (38) - Add a don, this follows with the vocals and emphasises the kat on 00:53:278
I couldn't find many things wrong with this diff as it's a very nice and a simple map to play

[Muzukashii]
00:08:358 (31) - Move to 00:08:518 as it fits better with the vocals
00:12:529 (49,50,51,52) - Change to kdkd as this fits in with the loud background sounds at this part of the music
00:33:866 (39,40,41,42,43) - Change to kkddk as there is a loud high pitched sound that starts at 00:33:866
01:07:796 (201) - Add a don here to make a triplet as there is a loud sound on this beat
01:10:764 (216,217) - Ctrl+G, there's a high note on 01:10:925
The part 01:15:577 - 01:18:144 seems a little long for a Muzu, try adding breaks at 01:16:700 and 01:17:663
01:17:984 (256,257) - Ctrl+G, there is a high note on 01:18:144
01:24:401 (288) - Change to a kat
01:38:679 (349) - ^

[Oni]
00:49:267 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - Change this stream to kkddkdkdk so that it fits in with the vocals
00:51:032 (143,144,145) - Change to ddk
01:03:385 (234,235,236,237,238) - Change to kkddk, as this fits with the background music a bit better
Change 01:08:438 + 01:08:679 to kats as this follows the background music better
01:08:839 (273) - Change to a don
01:18:625 (349,350,351,352,353) - Change to kkddk as this fits in better with the background music
01:23:278 (388) - Change to a kat, there is a high pitch sound here
01:46:379 (537) - Change this to a don for consistency in your diffs

[Inner Oni]
00:02:262 (8,9) - Ctrl+G
00:29:053 (22) - Change to a don, for consistency in your 1/1 placement
01:09:641 (345,346) - Ctrl+G, this fits in better with the music
01:46:379 (642) - Change this to a d for consistency in your other diffs

That is all from me ~! Good Luck ~!
posted
Hello from my queue o/
Is Muzu -> Oni difficulty gap is too high? 3,04 ->4,44, almost 1,5. Better to ~1 ofc.
Muzukashii
  1. 00:19:267 (81) - what about moving it at 00:19:427 ?
  2. 00:30:978 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - all dons, but at 00:31:780 (31,32) we can hear loud drums. Try to change this part
  3. 00:54:561 - even there is stable density here, you can put here another tap. Or even make this part like this
  4. 01:10:764 (216,222) - can't understand thytm here :o

Well, i can be wrong, but in mapping dnb try to not make instrumental higher priority than drums. Or something like that.


Oni
  1. 00:08:197 (42) - according almost to all song you mapped sounds like that by kat, but it's don here. What do you think about kat here?
  2. 01:39:802 (490) - kat to make it smoother(if you decided to make difficulty lower)
Inner Oni
  1. 00:57:048 (230) - don better, imo
  2. 01:02:903 (277,278,279,280,281) - what about kdkdk here?


I like the way you mapped Inner :)
Hope there was something helpful.
Good luck! :)
posted
MOD~~ 

[Muzukashii]

00:06:112 (20) - delete

00:06:593 (22) - change to k?

00:08:037 (29) - delete
00:08:197 (29) - change to k
take a break

00:12:529 (49,50,51,52) - Ctrl+G
This can be convinced

00:15:096 (60) - change to k

00:49:909 (112) - change to K
According to the vocal

01:02:583 (175) - delete
break

01:07:556 (198) - change to d

01:07:716 (200) - change to k

01:38:197 (346,347,348,349) - change to k

01:43:652 (376) - delete

[Oni]

00:07:395 (36,37,38) - Ctrl+G

00:10:123 (54) - change to k?

00:17:662 (96,97,98) - Ctrl+G

00:18:465 (102,103,104) - change to kkd ?

00:22:716 (131) - insert to k?

Rust is too difficult, so I'll shave.
-----------------------------------------------------------
00:45:978 (101,102) - delete
00:47:181 (108,109) - delete
00:48:545 (118,119) - delete
00:48:786 (124) - change to k?
00:49:107 (126) - change to k?
00:49:267 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - bad;;; Is this?
00:51:112 (142,143) - delete
00:52:315 (149,150) - delete
00:56:165 (175) - change to d?
00:56:246 (176,177) - delete
00:57:449 (183,184) - delete
00:57:770 (184) - change to d
00:57:930 (185,186,187,188,189) -
00:58:812 (192,193) - delete
01:02:583 (215) - delete
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01:07:155 (245) - delete

01:10:925 (285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - Ctrl+G

01:12:048 (296) - change to k

01:12:529 (299) - change to d

01:13:652 (306) - change to k

01:13:812 (307) - change to d

01:15:577 (322) - このラインから密度が急にあがっています。休憩ポイントをもっと作る必要があります。(翻訳するの諦めた
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01:44:534 (530) - delete

01:43:973 (523,524,525,526,527,528,529) - ddkkddk?

01:44:615 (530,531,532,533,534,535,536) - ddkkddd?

[Inner Oni]

難しすぎて指摘できませんでした。ですがやって見た感じ悪いところはなさそうです。



以上です。後日ゲストの分も見ようと思います!
good luck :D
posted
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Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa*
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posted

Ceryuia wrote:

Hihi~ From my Queue

[Muzukashii]
00:08:358 (31) - Move to 00:08:518 as it fits better with the vocals Focusing on the drum here.
00:12:529 (49,50,51,52) - Change to kdkd as this fits in with the loud background sounds at this part of the music Sure.
00:33:866 (39,40,41,42,43) - Change to kkddk as there is a loud high pitched sound that starts at 00:33:866 Sure.
01:07:796 (201) - Add a don here to make a triplet as there is a loud sound on this beat Sure.
01:10:764 (216,217) - Ctrl+G, there's a high note on 01:10:925 No change.
The part 01:15:577 - 01:18:144 seems a little long for a Muzu, try adding breaks at 01:16:700 and 01:17:663 I don't know if there's any rules against this, but this was intended and I knew for a fact that it's long.
01:17:984 (256,257) - Ctrl+G, there is a high note on 01:18:144 Changed it in my own way.
01:24:401 (288) - Change to a kat No change.
01:38:679 (349) - ^ No change.

[Oni]
00:49:267 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - Change this stream to kkddkdkdk so that it fits in with the vocals Like the way it is right now.
00:51:032 (143,144,145) - Change to ddk Doesn't fit in my opinion.
01:03:385 (234,235,236,237,238) - Change to kkddk, as this fits with the background music a bit better Doesn't fit in my opinion.
Change 01:08:438 + 01:08:679 to kats as this follows the background music better Like the way it is.
01:08:839 (273) - Change to a don Doesn't make sense, because there's a drum kick here.
01:18:625 (349,350,351,352,353) - Change to kkddk as this fits in better with the background music Like the way it is.
01:23:278 (388) - Change to a kat, there is a high pitch sound here If that was the case, I would do the same with the Inner Oni. But I don't see that this is needed.
01:46:379 (537) - Change this to a don for consistency in your diffs No change.

[Inner Oni]
00:02:262 (8,9) - Ctrl+G No change, I like the way how it is.
00:29:053 (22) - Change to a don, for consistency in your 1/1 placement Changed to ddkkd instead.
01:09:641 (345,346) - Ctrl+G, this fits in better with the music Changed.
01:46:379 (642) - Change this to a d for consistency in your other diffs Same with the Oni.

That is all from me ~! Good Luck ~!

Remus wrote:

Muzukashii
  1. 00:19:267 (81) - what about moving it at 00:19:427 ? Nah, similar reason from the previous mod.
  2. 00:30:978 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - all dons, but at 00:31:780 (31,32) we can hear loud drums. Try to change this part. No change, keeping the consistency.
  3. 00:54:561 - even there is stable density here, you can put here another tap. Or even make this part like this Doesn't feel right in my opinion.
  4. 01:10:764 (216,222) - can't understand thytm here :oTrying to follow the piano along with the drum at the same time.

Well, i can be wrong, but in mapping dnb try to not make instrumental higher priority than drums. Or something like that.


Oni
  1. 00:08:197 (42) - according almost to all song you mapped sounds like that by kat, but it's don here. What do you think about kat here? Nice, changed.
  2. 01:39:802 (490) - kat to make it smoother(if you decided to make difficulty lower) Like the way it is.
Inner Oni
  1. 00:57:048 (230) - don better, imo Doesn't feel right for me.
  2. 01:02:903 (277,278,279,280,281) - what about kdkdk here? No, but I changed this part a bit.


I like the way you mapped Inner :)
Hope there was something helpful.
Good luck! :)
Thanks for the mod! Will check on KitajimaYN's mod tomorrow, updated surume's diff and added Chromoxx' Futsuu.
posted
Hi :3 NM request from my queue.

d Little Don
k Little Kat
D (Finisher)
K (Finisher)

Note: Only advice, nothing is mandatory. And my english is very bad but i try.

Open bloc notes and change this: https://puu.sh/rTdhh/a6270f3e54.png To 1.4

00:36:112 (5) - 00:38:679 (11) - 00:41:246 (17) - Delete For you give them space, they are learning to play.
01:37:716 (116) - Delete and 01:38:358 (117) - Move this to here: 01:38:037 -
01:40:283 (122,123,124) - Same here ^
00:13:545 (25) - Move to here: 00:13:812 - I think it's less confusing.
00:37:716 (80,81,82) - kdk Sound better.
00:56:968 (133) - Delete and 00:57:128 (134) - Move to here: 00:57:449 - To give some space.
01:07:074 (164,165) - ctrl + g
01:17:342 (199,200) - ctrl + g 01:17:823 (201,202) - ctrl + g
00:24:080 - Move to: 00:23:919 - To give some space.
01:16:700 (250) - 01:17:984 (258) - Delete, Leave breathe some players.
Fix this: https://puu.sh/rTeDK/e06e6c4434.png

00:57:930 (195,196,197,198,199) - Can be kddkk

Good Diff!
00:34:347 (55) - k and 00:34:427 (56,57) - ctrl + g
00:03:705 (20) - Remove the finish, not is necessary.
00:05:791 (32) - 00:16:058 (107) - 00:19:909 (138) - 00:31:941 (220) - Remove the finisher, please.
00:33:224 (226) - and 00:33:706 (229) - d
00:38:358 (264) - Remove the finisher.
00:47:342 (330) - ^ Same
00:49:909 (348) - You can add finish here.
01:05:631 (479) - Remove the finish.


Good Luck.
posted

JessiChan wrote:

00:03:705 (20) - Remove the finish, not is necessary. - fixed
00:05:791 (32) - 00:16:058 (107) - 00:19:909 (138) - 00:31:941 (220) - Remove the finisher, please. - fixed
00:33:224 (226) - and 00:33:706 (229) - d - fixed
00:38:358 (264) - Remove the finisher. - fixed
00:47:342 (330) - ^ Same - fixed
00:49:909 (348) - You can add finish here. - fixed
01:05:631 (479) - Remove the finish. - fixed


Good Luck.
im noob about finisher sound...
thank you for your mods !

@KinomiCandy
osu file format v14

[General]
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Nice streams.
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KitajimaYN wrote:

MOD~~ 

[Muzukashii]

00:06:112 (20) - delete Okay.

00:06:593 (22) - change to k? Nope.

00:08:037 (29) - delete Changed on my own.
00:08:197 (29) - change to k
take a break

00:12:529 (49,50,51,52) - Ctrl+G Okay.
This can be convinced

00:15:096 (60) - change to k Nope.

00:49:909 (112) - change to K Okay.
According to the vocal

01:02:583 (175) - delete Okay.
break

01:07:556 (198) - change to d Nope.

01:07:716 (200) - change to k Nope.

01:38:197 (346,347,348,349) - change to k Okay.

01:43:652 (376) - delete change to k Okay.

[Oni]

00:07:395 (36,37,38) - Ctrl+G Okay.

00:10:123 (54) - change to k? Nope.

00:17:662 (96,97,98) - Ctrl+G Okay.

00:18:465 (102,103,104) - change to kkd ? Okay.

00:22:716 (131) - insert to k? Okay.

Rust is too difficult, so I'll shave.
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00:45:978 (101,102) - delete
00:47:181 (108,109) - delete
00:48:545 (118,119) - delete
00:48:786 (124) - change to k?
00:49:107 (126) - change to k?
00:49:267 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - bad;;; Is this?
00:51:112 (142,143) - delete
00:52:315 (149,150) - delete
00:56:165 (175) - change to d?
00:56:246 (176,177) - delete
00:57:449 (183,184) - delete
00:57:770 (184) - change to d
00:57:930 (185,186,187,188,189) -
00:58:812 (192,193) - delete
01:02:583 (215) - delete

Applied some of them, made those part easier.
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01:07:155 (245) - delete No change.

01:10:925 (285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - Ctrl+G Okay.

01:12:048 (296) - change to k It's already k?

01:12:529 (299) - change to d No change.

01:13:652 (306) - change to k No change.

01:13:812 (307) - change to d No change.

01:15:577 (322) - このラインから密度が急にあがっています。休憩ポイントをもっと作る必要があります。(翻訳するの諦めたOK, made that part a little more easier with less streams and a few breaks.
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01:44:534 (530) - delete

01:43:973 (523,524,525,526,527,528,529) - ddkkddk? I like how it is already.

[Inner Oni]

難しすぎて指摘できませんでした。ですがやって見た感じ悪いところはなさそうです。

以上です。後日ゲストの分も見ようと思います!
good luck :D

JessiChan wrote:

00:24:080 - Move to: 00:23:919 - To give some space. Alright.
01:16:700 (250) - 01:17:984 (258) - Delete, Leave breathe some players. Deleted 01:16:700 only.
Fix this: https://puu.sh/rTeDK/e06e6c4434.png Fixed.

00:57:930 (195,196,197,198,199) - Can be kddkk No change.

Good Diff!
00:34:347 (55) - k and 00:34:427 (56,57) - ctrl + g Nice.


Good Luck.
Thanks for modding. Deleted surume yotyan's difficulty by request.
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i'm here from #modreqs :)
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:00:978 (1,2,3) - For this section..That's 1/6 kkkd,listen here carefully :D
  2. 00:01:941 - Why'd you ignore this note?There is a sound
  3. 00:03:705 (18) - Should be finisher,that sound is too loud
  4. 00:12:770 (83) - I think you should delete this..there isn't sound and seems awkward
  5. 00:25:363 (5,6) - Why this isn't 1/4 triplet?that would be good :D
  6. 00:27:930 (17,18) - Same above
  7. 00:30:497 (30,31) - I guess you got it xD
  8. 00:33:866 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - This pattern seems too awkward
  9. 00:44:775 (120) - Finisher would be better
  10. 00:55:042 (213) - Same above..Those sounds are too loud..
  11. 01:05:310 (304) - As I said... :D
  12. 01:11:887 (364,365,366,367) - That sound isn't 1/6
  13. 01:22:529 (466,467,468,469) - There isn't 1/3 sound
  14. 01:36:032 (554) - Delete this.Then 01:36:112 (555) - Add finisher
  15. 01:39:320 (584,585,586,587) - I think doublets are not fit here


Good luck :)
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zigizigiefe wrote:

i'm here from #modreqs :)
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:00:978 (1,2,3) - For this section..That's 1/6 kkkd,listen here carefully :DProbably, but I'm not starting it off rough with a 1/6. 1/4 is alright here. No change.
  2. 00:01:941 - Why'd you ignore this note?There is a sound There's sounds everywhere. If you question why I ignored that particular part, you might as well ask the same thing with the other parts I purposely ignored. No change.
  3. 00:03:705 (18) - Should be finisher,that sound is too loud Possible, but not necessary. No change.
  4. 00:12:770 (83) - I think you should delete this..there isn't sound and seems awkward ...there is no sound? Uh, try to listen again?
  5. 00:25:363 (5,6) - Why this isn't 1/4 triplet?that would be good :DIf I did that, I'd have to do the same with others to keep the consistancy with that particular section and kkd would fit in but if I keep putting in more of them it's going to get boring, no change.
  6. 00:27:930 (17,18) - Same above Same reason as above.
  7. 00:30:497 (30,31) - I guess you got it xD Same reason as above.
  8. 00:33:866 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - This pattern seems too awkward Doesn't play awkwardly for me. If you want me to change it, come up with a reason why you think so and a suggestion. No change.
  9. 00:44:775 (120) - Finisher would be better As I said, I ignored them on purpose. There's a lot of finishers I could add in through out the map but I just don't need them.
  10. 00:55:042 (213) - Same above..Those sounds are too loud.. Same reason as above.
  11. 01:05:310 (304) - As I said... :DSame reason as above.
  12. 01:11:887 (364,365,366,367) - That sound isn't 1/6 True, I had this in here when I wasn't going for ranked. Changed.
  13. 01:22:529 (466,467,468,469) - There isn't 1/3 sound Wrong, listen to it again. No change.
  14. 01:36:032 (554) - Delete this.Then 01:36:112 (555) - Add finisher Same reason about the finishers.
  15. 01:39:320 (584,585,586,587) - I think doublets are not fit here Plays well for me, no change.


Good luck :)
Thanks for modding.
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I couldn't deserve that 2 kudosu,so im gonna shoot on your map :)
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M4M

difficultry
kantan<<futsuu<<<<<<muzukasii<<<<<<oni<......
please kantan easier

・00:03:705 ~ 00:22:957 - 2/1 pattern is so long. please add 4/1 break.
・00:34:508 ~ 00:43:492 - so hard. please easier
・01:05:310 ~ 01:25:845 - this rhythm is so hard?
・01:36:112 ~ 01:45:096 - so hard. please reduce density
・00:23:599 - delete add 4/1 break. because 187bpm is fast
・00:45:417 - change to d 00:55:684 - pattern
・01:04:668 - delete same
・00:49:909 - swap k→K is hard
・01:04:347 - delete please add 1/2 break. because 187bpm is fast
・01:09:962 (212,213) - Ctrl+G fit to sound
・01:28:732 - move to 1/2 ←
・01:41:246 - change to k same
・01:42:369 - change to k ^
・00:24:240 ~ 00:33:224 - same muzukashii?? please increase density
・00:54:802 - 00:54:962 - delete and 00:55:042 - add finish 01:03:385 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226) - pattern
・01:11:326 - 01:15:176 - delete? ooooooo pattern is too hard.
・01:44:214 - 01:44:534 - delete? this stream is so hard.


inner oni is nice map ^^

good luck~~ :D:D:D:D:D
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