Shiny Spoon wrote:

sorry im so very late on this

Mod 4 Mod.

[General]

The background, at first i thought this was a rwby song, I'd consider changing it to something more fitting to the song, because I cant find how this background gives you a feel for the song by preview. (I think it seems to be forgotten nowadays, unless its something like dragonforce where the backgrounds are basically just known for that at this point)

[Incredible End]

00:04:017 (1) - No NC

00:16:017 (1,2) - bad flow

00:19:971 (2,3) - same

00:31:153 (4,1,2,3,4) - The flow into this jump is so janky and bad, I'd consider changing.

00:32:926 (1,2) - a little hard to read and bad pattern.

00:39:199 (2,1) - Make the jump a bit wider between these two, would make for a better pause imo.

00:40:290 (4,1) - same but not too much for both of these.

00:47:926 (1,1) - Like that.

00:47:926 (1) - NC Unneeded tho

01:48:199 (1,1) - Not so much a problem, but because im really nitpicky. ew those slider shapes.

[End]

00:08:517 (2) - Either end the slider earlier on the blue tick and start this repeat on the white ending at the blue, or make these hit circles. 9/10, sliders starting on blue ticks, are absolute aids.

00:15:062 (2,4,6) - same thing

00:38:926 (2,3) - space these out a bit more, hard to read.

01:38:243 (1,2,3) - Considering the last jump, this has bad flow.

01:50:380 (1) - ew this slider, you should make it prettier ecks dee.

[Extra]

00:13:416 (1) - BLUE TICIK SLIDERO AUJWEFAESADDHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, pelase fix.

01:30:734 (1) - slider end...? wat? please change to something better.

[Final Thoughts]

Couldn't find much, i like just woke up to find out that I had m4ms, I completely forgot about my queue because of some other stuff. I like the maps, songs are nice. I would also consider changing the combo colors more suited to the background. I wish you luck on ranking.

Good Luck!

- Spoon

Pentori wrote:

hi. from my queue
you requested i mod End

[General]
you know that according to RC only your highest diff can have a custom name. or if your difficulty naming convention suits a theme then thats ok too. but right now you have End and Incredible End. so i don't think this is allowed
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you also should honestly clean up your map. i noticed that the timing isn't the same in all diffs and tonnes of timing points are unsnapped. i assumed you changed your offset but didn't change your timing points with it. you can do this by hitting Ctrl + A in the timing menu and moving them all by a set offset.
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[End]
00:01:426 (1) - this spinners end is stupidly loud when theres no sound. i'd turn it down
00:04:971 (5,1) - the distance is awkwardly close here
00:05:653 (1) - why don't this end on blue tick like you did with 00:03:471 (1) . this lets 00:06:199 - be clickable like 00:07:290 (7)
00:07:835 (1) - ^
00:10:017 (1) - ^ and yea you literally did this every slider so u should fix that
00:17:108 (2,3) - and swap these
00:17:653 (4,5) - ^
00:20:926 (1) - this ds should be the most to place emphasis on the downbeat yet to me it looks pretty small
00:21:471 (1) - remove this finish here. not good to spam that applause when nothing is really happening..
00:22:017 (5) - mm like since the music happens in 4's you should nc this like you did with 00:19:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 00:22:562 (1,2,3) -
00:22:835 (3,1) - and yea again, no emphasis
00:24:471 (1) - remove nc
00:24:744 (3) - add nc
00:25:017 (1) - remove nc
00:25:017 (1,3) - blanket
00:25:290 (3) - downbeat needs to have a nc to place emphasis on it since it also has a finish. tonnes of nc errors in this map. the basics to it is keeping something consistent that makes sense
00:26:790 (2,2) - stack or overlap these
00:28:835 (1) - more nc problems. not gonna point them out anymore
00:31:153 (3,1) - overlaps weirdly
00:34:017 (1) - this is pretty much out of playfield and it overlaps a lot of the HP bar
00:41:108 (1) - why does this need an nc. also it would look a lot nicer as a curve using 3 slider points
00:51:471 (5) - curve
00:52:016 (1) - why random ncs
00:55:835 (1) - same thing i mentioned at the start where the white tick is the one that needs to be clicked to follow the music like u have here 00:59:107 (1,3)
01:11:108 (2) - why no mario going WEW or any applause?
01:27:607 (2,3,1,2) - why reduce dc to an almost stack?
01:48:199 (1) - let some of the outline show. currently its like a blob
01:50:380 (1) - this slider looks bad imo

a lot of my mod just repeats itself throughout the map. i think you need to do a lot of work on nc's, adding emphasis to important notes, and structure to make the map look nicer overall. anyways gl!

SherryCherry wrote:

Привет.
Интересно, я бы получил кудоску лишь из-за того, если бы сказал, что у тебя получилось гораздо лучше чем у диггера? Спс

00:04:017 (1,2,3) - почему разное расстояние а зачем его делать одинаковым ?00:03:471 (1) - и зачем стакать с концом ну прям уже вначале мапы, места же куча. В том то и дело, что некуда ставить. справа неудобно будет на сингл тапчики переходить, если выше поставлю то некрасиво. Ниже ставить смысла нет изза того что очень медленная часть идет.
00:04:017 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - рандом нк Ну как бы 2 слайдера и нота как маленький паттерн, а потом идет отделные сингл тапы
00:06:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - опять разный спейс, это сбивает. И сделай их более симметричными. Ну как бы 7 стар, я могу по углам ставить ноты, но еще не та часть просто А насчет симметрии, я не понимаю зачем там делать симметрию, + скучно.
00:17:653 (3,1) - оверлапать не обязательно было Тут можно очень многое расписать тебе. Начнем с того что эта нота 00:18:199 (1) - не в комбо с прошлой ноты - следовательно фолоупоинта к ней идти не будет. Если я поставлю в другое место эту ноту к примеру в нижнюю часть то это будет джамп без фолоупоинта , а такой джамп некрасивый + мне эту ноту надо поставить в такое место где последующий слайдер мог бы норм выглядеть,Но если на эту ноту будут много жаловатся, то я найду другое место ей.
00:35:653 (5) - здесь же звука нет Во первых есть, Да он тихий очень, но свободный 1 тик без звука будет сложно прочитать, я уже кидал пацанам 2к мапу, они согласились с таким слайдером.
00:40:562 (1) - некрасиво выглядит, хотя бы 2 слайдерпоинт опусти ниже немножк Ну да, ты прав. Я сделал его прямым под музыку
Я заметил, что ты юзаешь часто два слайдера 00:47:108 (1) - 00:45:471 (2) - просто копипастить их не вариант. Попробуй разнообразить Ну понятное дело полукруглые слайдеры будут похожы, но я их не копировал, максимум что я копировал это 2 тайминг поинта под 1 бит секции. Я их не копирую !!!
00:52:017 (1,2) - можно было бланкет сделать Я и так оверлапнул 2 слайдера, думаю еще нота сверху точно испортит эту картину, но я поменяю положение ноты немного чтобы не возникало такого.
00:52:699 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - сделать симметрично по сетке Окей подровнял
00:53:653 (1) - рованенько в центр
00:58:017 (1,1,2) - классный кисласлайдер, да еще и закрыт стаком, его же не видно ОК поменял положение
01:02:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - не очень симпатично Ну я хз, вроде нормально получилось типо крадратом заканчиваю и другой начинаю
01:07:699 (4,5) - оверлап ОК
01:19:835 (1) - я не буду считать сколько вот таких слайдеров у тебя, но их очень много, разнообразь Что поделать , когда они подходят под музыку
01:26:380 (1) - ^ Повторяю, они у меня в музыку, я не юзаю похожих джампов и это самое главное
01:43:835 (1) - но не так разнообразить, он не очень смотрится Поменял
01:44:926 (6) - нк что ли Ну это тройная звезда, не вижу смысла ставить нк, чтобы не путать людей

В общем, удачки тебе)

Hpocks wrote:

[General]
Stop trying to copy Fort. This is just plagarism at this point
NONE OF YOUR INHERITING POINTS ARE SNAPPED!

[Incomprehensible]
00:07:426 (3) - This slider should not start on a blue tick, not only because it is inconsistant with other sliders like this, but also because it sounds bad.
00:11:653 (1) - I suggest this is slightly moved away from 00:10:562 (1) - so it is like 00:11:790 (2,1) -
00:14:926 (1) - Fix blanket by moving up 1 tiny space
00:19:562 (3,3) - Should be the same slider considering they belong to the same type of pattern
00:21:471 (1) - This would look better blanketed
00:22:971 (2,1) - Blanket this by taking the slider and moving the white point of the head one tiny grid point to the right
00:35:653 (5) - This would look better as two close ranged, slow sliders
00:35:653 (5) - Also, put an inheriting point here to lower the volume
00:56:517 (2) - Should be on white tick
00:58:699 (2) - ^
01:00:880 (2) - |
01:01:426 (4) - |
01:01:971 (2) - |

1. Map's difficulty spread isn't fine, your Hard is too harder than Normal is, you need Advanced here for sure.
2. Well, you've a lot unsnapped green line in each diff, fix that. They MUST stay at ticks.
3. Lunatic is name for Insane for Touhou themes and arranges. So rename that diff.

1. 00:19:290 - it sounds a bit off, but I think it's fine.
2. 00:23:926 (2,3) - but this pattern sounds and looks as bad as possible. Those two beats 00:24:199 - and 00:24:744 - they just MUST be emphasized here
   this sounds a lot better
   
3. 00:21:744 (2,1) - as it's the easiest diff in the mapset, this overlap is unrankable. Avoid it.
4. 00:34:835 (2,3) - the same thing as above, those white ticks just MUST be emphasized, otherwise it sounds really off.
5. If you want to make multi SV in Normal (that I'm highly against in an easier diff) make single 1x SV green point here 00:35:653 - because those others lines like 00:36:199 - / 00:37:801 - / 00:39:812 - make no sense. And because of it spacing looks sooooo bad, what is really critical in Normal.
6. 00:52:562 (1) - delete NC. Put NC here 00:49:290 (4) - and delete it here as well 00:49:290 (4) - .
7. 01:23:108 (3,1) - well, you got it.
8. 01:32:380 (3,1,2) - make good accurate curve and good blanket.
9. 01:33:744 (2,3) - not clickable white ticks, which must be clickable.
10. 01:43:017 (3,4,5) - some inconsistent patterns, please. Well, ye, looks inconsistent compares to whole diff, make slider instead.
11. 01:43:017 (3,1) - awful overlaps again.
12. 01:44:926 (3,4) - I'd recommend you to do the same rhythm as you did here 01:44:926 (3,4) - . Sounds pretty good.

1. 00:22:562 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like to remove those circles, that would be a bit complex for Hard players, especially after that jumps 00:21:471 (2,3,4,5) - .
   00:24:744 (1,2,3,4) - those and so on. Jumps are enough imo. Just make the spacing higher.
2. I honestly don't like this diff because of those 110 BPM stream, just they are so random and make no sense. They are fitting rhythm fine, but not fitting the playable side. Just my thought. But. Sliders will fit better.
   Nothing to say, the whole diff looks bad for me, sorry.

Namki wrote:

Hello Fort wannabee. Won't touch the highest diffs.
[General]

1. Map's difficulty spread isn't fine, your Hard is too harder than Normal is, you need Advanced here for sure.
2. Well, you've a lot unsnapped green line in each diff, fix that. They MUST stay at ticks.
3. Lunatic is name for Insane for Touhou themes and arranges. So rename that diff.

[Normal]

1. 00:19:290 - it sounds a bit off, but I think it's fine.
2. 00:23:926 (2,3) - but this pattern sounds and looks as bad as possible. Those two beats 00:24:199 - and 00:24:744 - they just MUST be emphasized here
   this sounds a lot better
   
3. 00:21:744 (2,1) - as it's the easiest diff in the mapset, this overlap is unrankable. Avoid it.
4. 00:34:835 (2,3) - the same thing as above, those white ticks just MUST be emphasized, otherwise it sounds really off.
5. If you want to make multi SV in Normal (that I'm highly against in an easier diff) make single 1x SV green point here 00:35:653 - because those others lines like 00:36:199 - / 00:37:801 - / 00:39:812 - make no sense. And because of it spacing looks sooooo bad, what is really critical in Normal.
6. 00:52:562 (1) - delete NC. Put NC here 00:49:290 (4) - and delete it here as well 00:49:290 (4) - .
7. 01:23:108 (3,1) - well, you got it.
8. 01:32:380 (3,1,2) - make good accurate curve and good blanket.
9. 01:33:744 (2,3) - not clickable white ticks, which must be clickable.
10. 01:43:017 (3,4,5) - some inconsistent patterns, please. Well, ye, looks inconsistent compares to whole diff, make slider instead.
11. 01:43:017 (3,1) - awful overlaps again.
12. 01:44:926 (3,4) - I'd recommend you to do the same rhythm as you did here 01:44:926 (3,4) - . Sounds pretty good.

[Hard]

1. 00:22:562 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like to remove those circles, that would be a bit complex for Hard players, especially after that jumps 00:21:471 (2,3,4,5) - .
   00:24:744 (1,2,3,4) - those and so on. Jumps are enough imo. Just make the spacing higher.
2. I honestly don't like this diff because of those 110 BPM stream, just they are so random and make no sense. They are fitting rhythm fine, but not fitting the playable side. Just my thought. But. Sliders will fit better.
   Nothing to say, the whole diff looks bad for me, sorry.

good luck

-Bumblebee- wrote:

Hello, M4M ^^

Hard

1. 00:23:108 (1,1) - blanket
2. 00:35:653 (5) - why this? this is a calm part, imo that's not necessary :/
3. 00:36:199 (1,1) - fix this e.e
4. 00:38:380 (1,3) - ^
5. 00:41:108 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:42:608 (6,1) - fix this overlap
7. 01:19:562 (6,1) - you know
8. 01:21:744 (2,1) - ^
9. 01:21:744 (2,3) - stack this

Insane

1. 00:35:653 (1) - as in the previous diff
2. 00:38:380 (1,3) - blanket
3. 00:44:926 (1,1) - fix this blanket (just a bit)
4. 00:51:199 (5,1) - you could make here a blanket
5. 01:01:835 (3,4) - that's too high, reduce that, because it's still calm the flow
6. 01:03:471 (1,2) - same
7. 01:13:290 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/pLJiV/fbba9b4633.jpg
8. 01:17:380 (5,1) - ^
9. 01:19:835 (1,3) - you can blanket this, but it's up to you
10. 01:23:790 (3,1) - please :/
11. 01:35:108 (1,2) - fix this blanket

Extra

1. 00:20:653 (5,1) - my eyes are burning
2. 00:28:971 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/pLJTu/7222bb8508.jpg
3. 00:35:653 (1) - as the previous diff
4. 01:35:926 (2) - maybe you can make this like 01:36:744 (5) - this one

Nice song, hope it was helpful ^^

1. 00:01:290 (1) - hmm suggestion: make you make a slow long slider instead of spinner at the beginning?
2. 00:04:426 (2,3) - ds? or rotate slider to (-) degree more
3. 00:05:653 (1) - improve
4. 00:06:608 (2,3) - ahh now its long jump?
5. 00:07:699 (5,1) - awkward position
6. 00:16:562 (1) - improve
7. 00:17:517 (2,3) - less
8. 00:17:653 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/pMAuW/e76803276c.jpg
9. 00:19:153 - hahaha tell someone to fix the crowd sounds
10. 00:23:790 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why jump? why not like this 00:19:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
11. 00:20:926 (1) - imrpove
12. 00:30:199 (1,2,3,4) - idk this XD
13. 00:31:699 (3) - put it on center
14. 00:35:653 (5) - nc and make it .75 slower?
15. 00:37:290 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I like it, 00:37:426 (2,2,2,2) - improve more
16. 00:39:335 - empty
17. 00:40:426 - ^
18. 00:40:426 (4,1,1) - ds
19. 00:42:744 (1) - why not going to top? or imrprove
20. 00:45:471 (2) - improvements of the red thing
21. 00:46:017 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - improvements, i think youre out of patterns XD
22. 00:48:062 - empty
23. 00:49:153 - ^
24. 00:52:562 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - how about new patterns?
25. 00:53:653 (1) - improper positioning
26. 00:53:926 (1) - move to 00:53:790 -
27. 00:56:380 - IDK what happened this part but, can you make the same with this and the first part?
28. 01:02:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - aww
29. 01:06:199 (1) - move more top left
30. 01:07:835 (5) - HAHAHA y?
31. 01:11:108 (1) - IMPROVE MORE! XD
32. 01:19:699 (4,1) - dont to this
33. 01:24:744 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can still fix this
34. 01:26:926 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
35. 01:28:562 - empty
36. 01:36:744 (1,2) - ds
37. 01:39:335 (3,1) - weird
38. 01:41:108 (1,2,1,2) -
39. 01:46:153 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove This Part, its the end becuase the last beat is done.

1. 00:04:835 (1,2) - weird to put the sliders here
2. 00:07:290 (7,8) - ahhh this is better =v=
3. 00:06:744 (3) - nc
4. 00:07:290 (7) - nc
5. 00:09:471 (1,2) - jump at slow part? ds and http://puu.sh/pMBsf/c41c9a47b7.jpg
6. 00:10:562 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - did you want to make a sqaure patterns? reminds me of the newbie patterns (NO OFFENSE SORRY :dd)
7. 00:13:562 (5,6,1) - new pattern*
8. 00:18:744 (1) - make it not simple?
9. 00:19:835 (1,4,5) - IMPROVE PLS :c
10. 00:24:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i like the jump patterns at the end, awkward
11. 00:26:926 (5,6) - thats more like it!
12. 00:28:562 (1) -
13. 00:31:017 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - choose: improve or repatterns? because i dont see star patterns in kiko
14. 00:33:608 (5) - can you put http://puu.sh/pMDMr/347771fe78.jpg
15. 00:35:653 (1) - slower more
16. 00:35:653 (1,3,4) - change positions
17. 00:57:880 (8) - change the position
18. 00:59:517 (4) - move to upper right
19. 00:59:517 (4,5,6) - hard jump, suggest to reduce
20. 01:02:926 (1,2,3,4) - i like this part <3
21. 01:03:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not do it again?
22. 01:17:653 (1) - improve
23. 01:19:835 (1) - put it down the hard curve?
24. 01:28:562 - empty
25. 01:33:471 - lol r u tired making jumps? XDD
26. 01:44:926 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - so the last part all circles?
27. 01:48:199 - remove, cuz its ending

1. Why not change into "Another" Difficulty, make it same like Highscore :S
2. 00:01:426 (1) - same this part
3. 00:12:881 (3,4,5,6) - this is just only starting... Reduce
4. 00:18:062 (6) - wat is this hitsounds?
5. 00:21:880 (4,1) - weird reposition?
6. 00:38:108 (4) - rotate ctrl + <//> ? http://puu.sh/pMEKC/d0b3720ac6.jpg
7. 00:59:926 (3) - move lower right
8. 01:06:199 (1,2,3,4) - its too early to jump now,
9. 01:07:562 (4) - ^
10. 01:26:244 (4,1) - change the slider position
11. 01:28:562 - empty
12. 01:48:199 (1,1,1,1) - pls remove the ending part

zeroallies wrote:

m4m
i like kiko
wat is kiko? .-.
WANNA TRY THIS? XDDD

[Incomprehensible]

1. 00:01:290 (1) - hmm suggestion: make you make a slow long slider instead of spinner at the beginning? no
2. 00:04:426 (2,3) - ds? or rotate slider to (-) degree more Why not put with spacings?
3. 00:05:653 (1) - improveddone
4. 00:06:608 (2,3) - ahh now its long jump? 7 stars
5. 00:07:699 (5,1) - awkward position changed
6. 00:16:562 (1) - improve done
7. 00:17:517 (2,3) - less changed
8. 00:17:653 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/pMAuW/e76803276c.jpg
9. 00:19:153 - hahaha tell someone to fix the crowd sounds ??
10. 00:23:790 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why jump? why not like this 00:19:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
11. 00:20:926 (1) - imrpove done
12. 00:30:199 (1,2,3,4) - idk this XD changed
13. 00:31:699 (3) - put it on center done
14. 00:35:653 (5) - nc and make it .75 slower? no
15. 00:37:290 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I like it, 00:37:426 (2,2,2,2) - improve more done
16. 00:39:335 - empty there is no sound
17. 00:40:426 - ^ ^
18. 00:40:426 (4,1,1) - ds ?
19. 00:42:744 (1) - why not going to top? or imrprove done
20. 00:45:471 (2) - improvements of the red thing done
21. 00:46:017 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - improvements, i think youre out of patterns XD done
22. 00:48:062 - empty there is no sound
23. 00:49:153 - ^ ^
24. 00:52:562 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - how about new patterns? I see no reason to make a different pattern
25. 00:53:653 (1) - improper positioning done
26. 00:53:926 (1) - move to 00:53:790 - done
27. 00:56:380 - IDK what happened this part but, can you make the same with this and the first part? Why ?
28. 01:02:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - aww
29. 01:06:199 (1) - move more top left done
30. 01:07:835 (5) - HAHAHA y? done)))
31. 01:11:108 (1) - IMPROVE MORE! XD done
32. 01:19:699 (4,1) - dont to this
33. 01:24:744 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can still fix this
34. 01:26:926 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
35. 01:28:562 - empty and ?
    
36. 01:36:744 (1,2) - ds
37. 01:39:335 (3,1) - weird done
38. 01:41:108 (1,2,1,2) -
39. 01:46:153 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove This Part, its the end becuase the last beat is done.

[Extra]

1. 00:04:835 (1,2) - weird to put the sliders here
2. 00:07:290 (7,8) - ahhh this is better =v=done
3. 00:06:744 (3) - nc done
4. 00:07:290 (7) - nc done
5. 00:09:471 (1,2) - jump at slow part? ds and http://puu.sh/pMBsf/c41c9a47b7.jpg done
6. 00:10:562 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - did you want to make a sqaure patterns? reminds me of the newbie patterns (NO OFFENSE SORRY :dd) changed
7. 00:13:562 (5,6,1) - new pattern*
8. 00:18:744 (1) - make it not simple? changed
9. 00:19:835 (1,4,5) - IMPROVE PLS :c done
10. 00:24:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i like the jump patterns at the end, awkward
11. 00:26:926 (5,6) - thats more like it!
12. 00:28:562 (1) -
13. 00:31:017 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - choose: improve or repatterns? because i dont see star patterns in kiko repatterns
14. 00:33:608 (5) - can you put http://puu.sh/pMDMr/347771fe78.jpg done
15. 00:35:653 (1) - slower more no
16. 00:35:653 (1,3,4) - change positions done
17. 00:57:880 (8) - change the position done
18. 00:59:517 (4) - move to upper right done
19. 00:59:517 (4,5,6) - hard jump, suggest to reduce and ?
20. 01:02:926 (1,2,3,4) - i like this part <3
21. 01:03:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not do it again?
22. 01:17:653 (1) - improve done
23. 01:19:835 (1) - put it down the hard curve? done
24. 01:28:562 - empty ??
25. 01:33:471 - lol r u tired making jumps? XDD
26. 01:44:926 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - so the last part all circles?
27. 01:48:199 - remove, cuz its ending

[Expert]

1. Why not change into "Another" Difficulty, make it same like Highscore :S a lot of people say that I steal the fort, so I do not want to take it even name
2. 00:01:426 (1) - same this part
3. 00:12:881 (3,4,5,6) - this is just only starting... Reduce done
4. 00:18:062 (6) - wat is this hitsounds? ?
5. 00:21:880 (4,1) - weird reposition?
6. 00:38:108 (4) - rotate ctrl + <//> ? http://puu.sh/pMEKC/d0b3720ac6.jpg done
7. 00:59:926 (3) - move lower right
8. 01:06:199 (1,2,3,4) - its too early to jump now, he easy
9. 01:07:562 (4) - ^ ^
10. 01:26:244 (4,1) - change the slider position done
11. 01:28:562 - empty
12. 01:48:199 (1,1,1,1) - pls remove the ending part

You can be a pro mapper if you improve more!
Nice Map <3
GL~

Just Miracle- wrote:

классная мапа),картинка супер

Спасибо за поддержку

DWShin wrote:

im new to modding but im going to try to help :p

SPOILER

Incomprehensible


00:03:471 (1) - dont really get why this one has got a red anchor point in there, since all of the other sliders in that part of the map dont look like that one


00:07:153 (1) - doesnt flow very well, feels uncomfortable to play, i would make the angles way more sharp (unless its intended for them to be uncomfortable; if so concept should be more clear)


00:23:108 (1) - the direction of the slider is not pointing towards the next object, feels weird (if that is the concept behind the mapping, it should be more consistent or apparent)
00:25:290 (1) - ^
00:40:562 (1) - ^
00:42:744 (1) - ^
00:45:471 (1) - ^


00:48:199 (1) - slider shape seems out of place here, other shard sliders in this map dont have snappy slider paths as this one, would smooth it out a bit
https://gyazo.com/ee9b91897020a14d65041fdc90d6f754


00:57:335 (4) - doesnt feel good to play " would make the angles way more sharp (unless its intended for them to be uncomfortable; if so concept should be more clear)"


00:58:017 (1) - slider is not facing towards the next circle


01:02:926 (1) ~ 01:10:562 (1) i would really suggest for you to not keep this part especially " would make the angles way more sharp (unless its intended for them to be uncomfortable; if so concept should be more clear)"


01:19:290 (4) - same thing as in 00:58:017 (1) ; but also i would make 1 slider then copy it and rotate it to make it look more clean and organized


01:26:244 (4) - suboptimal flow, its really easy to miss this circle


01:26:926 (1) - same thing as in 00:58:017 (1)


01:28:562 (1) - i think it would be very fitting to add a spinner here, since you also added one in here: 00:53:790 (1) -


01:32:653 (4) - same thing as in 00:58:017 (1)


01:46:153 (1) - i would replace this with a slow slider, like you have in here: 01:48:199 (1) -
01:50:380 (1) - curves look kind of rough, would be nicer if you added a couple more anchor points like this: https://gyazo.com/0966be2bdf005fc07bf1c5136f8911b1
01:52:562 (1) - curves dont look very smooth, i would adjust the anchor points like this:
https://gyazo.com/679bb0896a37baecff962dc67e874208

^^^ that part would look more organized if you kept one concept of sliders, also while this one: 01:48:199 (1) faces to the next slider/circle, the rest of them dont


anyways, i would highly suggest you to watch these videos if you havent already, it helped me out by quite a bit
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ig7nTSbWwVc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYGatwQszwQ
(also all of his other ones haha)



i hope i was able to help you a little bit :0