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Matsuda Akirahito - Junchona Hibi
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m4m
Hard
00:09:546 (4) - move closer to 00:09:684 (1) the change of distance is too fast
00:18:018 (5) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267318
00:20:240 (3) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267285 (this fits alot better, do this on the others too 00:22:462 (3,3,3,3) - )
00:31:907 (1,2) - this doesnt fit do this instead http://puu.sh/p98eQ/d5c361ab7b.jpg
00:51:629 (2,4) - just turn them into hit circles this is hard diff and not at 3* this would confuse players
00:58:157 (4,5,6,7) - i dont think you should do stuff like this in low diffs, make this constant instead
Everyday
00:04:962 (2,3) - lessen the distance(even for a little)
00:18:018 (4) - improve blanket
00:46:768 (1,2) - i dont really hear any sound on the white tick, hit circle fits better imo
01:10:796 (2) - this looks a lot better http://puu.sh/p990F/1454b21106.jpg
01:39:684 (1) - slider looks bad imo
02:05:240 (3) - slider looks bad imo
02:11:907 (2) - why not extend to the white tick instead of repeat
Good luck
Hard
00:09:546 (4) - move closer to 00:09:684 (1) the change of distance is too fast
00:18:018 (5) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267318
00:20:240 (3) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267285 (this fits alot better, do this on the others too 00:22:462 (3,3,3,3) - )
00:31:907 (1,2) - this doesnt fit do this instead http://puu.sh/p98eQ/d5c361ab7b.jpg
00:51:629 (2,4) - just turn them into hit circles this is hard diff and not at 3* this would confuse players
00:58:157 (4,5,6,7) - i dont think you should do stuff like this in low diffs, make this constant instead
Everyday
00:04:962 (2,3) - lessen the distance(even for a little)
00:18:018 (4) - improve blanket
00:46:768 (1,2) - i dont really hear any sound on the white tick, hit circle fits better imo
01:10:796 (2) - this looks a lot better http://puu.sh/p990F/1454b21106.jpg
01:39:684 (1) - slider looks bad imo
02:05:240 (3) - slider looks bad imo
02:11:907 (2) - why not extend to the white tick instead of repeat
Good luck
Topic Starter
I've done all of your mod except for the :Term Akatski wrote:
m4m
Hard
00:09:546 (4) - move closer to 00:09:684 (1) the change of distance is too fast
00:18:018 (5) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267318
00:20:240 (3) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267285 (this fits alot better, do this on the others too 00:22:462 (3,3,3,3) - )
00:31:907 (1,2) - this doesnt fit do this instead http://puu.sh/p98eQ/d5c361ab7b.jpg
00:51:629 (2,4) - just turn them into hit circles this is hard diff and not at 3* this would confuse players
00:58:157 (4,5,6,7) - i dont think you should do stuff like this in low diffs, make this constant instead
Everyday
00:04:962 (2,3) - lessen the distance(even for a little)
00:18:018 (4) - improve blanket
00:46:768 (1,2) - i dont really hear any sound on the white tick, hit circle fits better imo
01:10:796 (2) - this looks a lot better http://puu.sh/p990F/1454b21106.jpg
01:39:684 (1) - slider looks bad imo
02:05:240 (3) - slider looks bad imo
02:11:907 (2) - why not extend to the white tick instead of repeat
Good luck
00:51:629 (2,4) *the number 4 slider*
Thx for the mod now it feels better to play !
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M4M
You should consider the Snap Distance and the Symetry.
For example,
Use 2,0x Snap distance from 00:00:000 - to 00:09:684 -
Then Use 2,5 for the rest of the map.
I repeat, for example, because the snap distance is necessary for the hole map.
If you use always the same snap distance on one combo, there will be no confusions.
Try to use it,
00:09:979 (1,2,3) - here for example, you didn't used it, you should use it almost everytime, because is hard diff. On hard diffs you can make some jumps but when you do it, you should change the combo.
00:19:962 (3,4,5,6) - Don't add notes, here I just hear 4 Notes.
There are a lot like those.
00:32:740 (5,1) - Here is another example.
00:45:518 (7) - Instead of 1 Slider, you can put NC (New Combo) and make a stream. A slider with a lot of bounces isn't very good. A stream is just better, rememer to use Snap Distance in every Stream.
00:47:740 - Here you should add 2 more notes, remember don't add notes that you don't hear, but if you hear notes, you should put them.
00:51:907 (3,6) - Overlaps, overlaps everywhere.
00:57:462 (2,6) - Overlap.
01:00:796 (3,2) - Overlap.
01:11:907 (2,1) - Overlap.
Fix overlaps, they are very ugly. Those where just some examples.
02:17:601 (1) - This slider should start here - 02:17:462 - and end here - 02:20:796.
You should consider the Snap Distance and the Symetry.
For example,
Use 2,0x Snap distance from 00:00:000 - to 00:09:684 -
Then Use 2,5 for the rest of the map.
I repeat, for example, because the snap distance is necessary for the hole map.
If you use always the same snap distance on one combo, there will be no confusions.
Try to use it,
00:09:979 (1,2,3) - here for example, you didn't used it, you should use it almost everytime, because is hard diff. On hard diffs you can make some jumps but when you do it, you should change the combo.
00:19:962 (3,4,5,6) - Don't add notes, here I just hear 4 Notes.
There are a lot like those.
00:32:740 (5,1) - Here is another example.
00:45:518 (7) - Instead of 1 Slider, you can put NC (New Combo) and make a stream. A slider with a lot of bounces isn't very good. A stream is just better, rememer to use Snap Distance in every Stream.
00:47:740 - Here you should add 2 more notes, remember don't add notes that you don't hear, but if you hear notes, you should put them.
00:51:907 (3,6) - Overlaps, overlaps everywhere.
00:57:462 (2,6) - Overlap.
01:00:796 (3,2) - Overlap.
01:11:907 (2,1) - Overlap.
Fix overlaps, they are very ugly. Those where just some examples.
02:17:601 (1) - This slider should start here - 02:17:462 - and end here - 02:20:796.
Topic Starter
Green= ApprovedMisterJeton wrote:
M4M
You should consider the Snap Distance and the Symetry.
For example,
Use 2,0x Snap distance from 00:00:000 - to 00:09:684 - I think close distance is okay because the note sounds close to each other
Then Use 2,5 for the rest of the map.
I repeat, for example, because the snap distance is necessary for the hole map.
If you use always the same snap distance on one combo, there will be no confusions.
Try to use it,
00:09:979 (1,2,3) - here for example, you didn't used it, you should use it almost everytime, because is hard diff. On hard diffs you can make some jumps but when you do it, you should change the combo.
00:19:962 (3,4,5,6) - Don't add notes, here I just hear 4 Notes.Okay
There are a lot like those.
00:32:740 (5,1) - Here is another example.Done
00:45:518 (7) - Instead of 1 Slider, you can put NC (New Combo) and make a stream. A slider with a lot of bounces isn't very good. A stream is just better, rememer to use Snap Distance in every Stream.I think no because with stream it will be hard to play and it's too slow for a stream
00:47:740 - Here you should add 2 more notes, remember don't add notes that you don't hear, but if you hear notes, you should put them.Ah i miss it XD kay then i will ad a slider
00:51:907 (3,6) - Overlaps, overlaps everywhere.fixed
00:57:462 (2,6) - Overlap. uhhhh
01:00:796 (3,2) - Overlap. uhhh
01:11:907 (2,1) - Overlap. uhhhh
Fix overlaps, they are very ugly. Those where just some examples.
02:17:601 (1) - This slider should start here - 02:17:462 - and end here - 02:20:796.fixed
Red= No
Hi~
Lovely melody
[Everyday!]
First about song setup. OD, AR and HP are too large. The value that equals 8 is appropriate for hard Insane, but not for your diff. And my advice to you, is reduce their. Perhaps OD=6 HP=6 would be good choices. In the case of AR maybe you ought to think about it similarly. I'm telling you this, because the player does not expect such difficulty level on 3 stars map. Then you should consider question about disabled countdown. Now it too rarely found. In terms of rhythm we got a good thing going here. Following piano was good, but truthfully, I don't like long sliders that cover individual piano notes, such as 01:56:768 (2) - and 02:13:434 (4) - Yes, I think perhaps it would be a good idea if you could add a few circles instead. Also it can be difficult to play a circle on blue tick right after a circle on white tick, such as 01:17:462 (2,3) - you could maybe add 1/2 slider to prevent confusion. And in the end you should move this beautiful slider to white tick I'm sure.
[O-M's Hard]
The same slider velocity in Hard and Insane isn't very good. Perhaps this value should be reduced. I'm not really sure about this spinner 00:49:719 (1) - It's too fast and suddenly. Anyway osu! can't get 4000 score. I'd advise you to do something with it. I think the work in progress, because there is nothing after 01:39:684 -. Anyway I wish you that you have completed the map. Also AR is too large. I think it is unacceptable. You should agree on a difficulty setup between maps. And be careful of slider velocity multiplier. I consider spread of values is too high.
[eclip's Normal]
Couple of comments about Normal. Same thing about slider velocity multiplier in this diff. I think the value should be constant in Normal, considering that Easy absent. Obvious thing that SV should be less than SV in Hard or Insane Also try to use only 1/2 circles and sliders for this diff. So it will be easier for new players. 01:40:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is too hard for Normal as well. Try to avoid it. 01:49:407 (7,2) - Overlapping looks bad. It's not good. Well, think of something better.
Also Open AiMod and fix problem that you can find there.
Good luck and have a good day!
Lovely melody
[Everyday!]
First about song setup. OD, AR and HP are too large. The value that equals 8 is appropriate for hard Insane, but not for your diff. And my advice to you, is reduce their. Perhaps OD=6 HP=6 would be good choices. In the case of AR maybe you ought to think about it similarly. I'm telling you this, because the player does not expect such difficulty level on 3 stars map. Then you should consider question about disabled countdown. Now it too rarely found. In terms of rhythm we got a good thing going here. Following piano was good, but truthfully, I don't like long sliders that cover individual piano notes, such as 01:56:768 (2) - and 02:13:434 (4) - Yes, I think perhaps it would be a good idea if you could add a few circles instead. Also it can be difficult to play a circle on blue tick right after a circle on white tick, such as 01:17:462 (2,3) - you could maybe add 1/2 slider to prevent confusion. And in the end you should move this beautiful slider to white tick I'm sure.
[O-M's Hard]
The same slider velocity in Hard and Insane isn't very good. Perhaps this value should be reduced. I'm not really sure about this spinner 00:49:719 (1) - It's too fast and suddenly. Anyway osu! can't get 4000 score. I'd advise you to do something with it. I think the work in progress, because there is nothing after 01:39:684 -. Anyway I wish you that you have completed the map. Also AR is too large. I think it is unacceptable. You should agree on a difficulty setup between maps. And be careful of slider velocity multiplier. I consider spread of values is too high.
[eclip's Normal]
Couple of comments about Normal. Same thing about slider velocity multiplier in this diff. I think the value should be constant in Normal, considering that Easy absent. Obvious thing that SV should be less than SV in Hard or Insane Also try to use only 1/2 circles and sliders for this diff. So it will be easier for new players. 01:40:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is too hard for Normal as well. Try to avoid it. 01:49:407 (7,2) - Overlapping looks bad. It's not good. Well, think of something better.
Also Open AiMod and fix problem that you can find there.
Good luck and have a good day!
O-Moei
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Term Akatski wrote:
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Hard
00:09:546 (4) - move closer to 00:09:684 (1) the change of distance is too fast Oh, you're right ! xd
00:18:018 (5) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267318 No
00:20:240 (3) - make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5267285 (this fits alot better, do this on the others too 00:22:462 (3,3,3,3) - ) But that changes my style :\
00:31:907 (1,2) - this doesnt fit do this instead http://puu.sh/p98eQ/d5c361ab7b.jpg Not really
00:51:629 (2,4) - just turn them into hit circles this is hard diff and not at 3* this would confuse players It's not that confusing, But I guess the spacing too far eh xd, I'd change to a nicer patterns
00:58:157 (4,5,6,7) - i dont think you should do stuff like this in low diffs, make this constant instead It's readable and rankable. Suit the rhythms. And btw, it's not low diff, it's hard diff. It's hard for something :\
Good luck
Announcement :WooWooWoo wrote:
Hi~
Lovely melody
[O-M's Hard]
The same slider velocity in Hard and Insane isn't very good. Perhaps this value should be reduced. I'm not really sure about this spinner 00:49:719 (1) - It's too fast and suddenly OMFG ! you're correct ! I forgot about the diff here I guess xd. This spinner deleted ^^. Anyway osu! can't get 4000 score. I'd advise you to do something with it. I think the work in progress, because there is nothing after 01:39:684 -. Anyway I wish you that you have completed the map Ah, sorry. It was the creator needed mods for a beginning feed backs. But you ended up modding mine, I guess. Mine hasn't completed already xd. Also AR is too large AR8 too fast?, okie, changed to 7. I think it is unacceptable. You should agree on a difficulty setup between maps. And be careful of slider velocity multiplier. I consider spread of values is too high.
Also Open AiMod and fix problem that you can find there. I always did :3
Good luck and have a good day! Thank you !
O-M's Hard changed to O-M's Light Insane
PM me azunyan for O-M's Update
Topic Starter
WooWooWoo wrote:
Hi~
Lovely melody
[Everyday!]
First about song setup. OD, AR and HP are too large. The value that equals 8 is appropriate for hard Insane, but not for your diff. And my advice to you, is reduce their. Perhaps OD=6 HP=6 would be good choices. In the case of AR maybe you ought to think about it similarly. I'm telling you this, because the player does not expect such difficulty level on 3 stars map.Fixed Then you should consider question about disabled countdown.Fixed Now it too rarely found. In terms of rhythm we got a good thing going here. Following piano was good, but truthfully, I don't like long sliders that cover individual piano notes, such as 01:56:768 (2) - and 02:13:434 (4) - Yes, I think perhaps it would be a good idea if you could add a few circles instead.Ah yes i agree XD so i misheard all this time lol Also it can be difficult to play a circle on blue tick right after a circle on white tick, such as 01:17:462 (2,3) - you could maybe add 1/2 slider to prevent confusion.I follow the main piano... So i think i will made it just like that And in the end you should move this beautiful slider to white tick I'm sure.Fixed
WooWooWoo wrote:
[eclip's Normal]
Couple of comments about Normal. Same thing about slider velocity multiplier in this diff. I think the value should be constant in Normal, considering that Easy absent. Obvious thing that SV should be less than SV in Hard or Insane Also try to use only 1/2 circles and sliders for this diff. So it will be easier for new players. 01:40:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is too hard for Normal as well. Try to avoid it. 01:49:407 (7,2) - Overlapping looks bad. It's not good. Well, think of something better.
All problem fixed except for the consistent SV. I do what i should there, and ppl read those SV really well. If the problem is the normal diff SV higher than higher diff, they need to make it higer instead of forcing me reduce thoso stuff
sadnjads
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136,144,121907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,136,122184,2,0,L|60:76,1,53.999995491028
12,72,122740,2,0,L|32:10,1,53.999995491028
136,36,123573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,24,124129,6,0,B|264:76|216:148|248:192,1,161.999986473084
272,228,125240,2,0,P|308:264|416:244,1,161.999986473084
448,208,126351,2,0,P|452:136|356:180,1,215.999981964112
376,252,127879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,312,128296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,128573,2,0,P|212:264|104:300,1,161.999986473084
76,308,129684,2,0,L|88:192,1,107.999990982056
172,268,130796,6,0,L|160:384,2,107.999990982056
87,200,132462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,164,133018,2,0,P|196:124|180:80,1,80.999993236542
112,48,133851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,84,134129,2,0,P|44:140|296:264,1,431.999963928224
256,192,137462,12,0,141907,0:0:0:0:
Here from M4M contract
Great song!
[General]
Just my preference but I think the sv is too fast for this. The sliders are too long for kiai part
You should use ds more often on shapes
Get a silent slidertick hitsound. There shouldnt be a slidertick sound since its such a quiet map
timing seems a little off. maybe ask someone to help (i cant time >.<)
[Everyday!]
00:12:323 (2) - It may seem like this is a small thing but it would really look nicer if it was more in line with the slider like this http://puu.sh/pPNVa/956f05d3f1.jpg or you could change it to a short slider (which sounds nice actually)
00:22:462 (1) - make this longer and remove 00:22:879 (2) - I think it's overmapped like that
00:26:907 (1) - straighten this slider and use ds 2x to align 00:27:323 (2) to it
00:28:851 (5,6,7) - I reccomend using ds here
01:03:018 (4) - okay so I know what you said about the overlap thing but you really should get rid of it.
01:04:546 (2,3) - ^
01:05:657 (2) - ^
01:07:879 (2) - ^
01:08:296 (3) - This slider doesn't make sense, change it to circle pls
01:10:518 (1) - The song is getting louder so you should separate this from the next slider. Or even raplace it with two circles and make a pattern (not overlapping pls)
01:11:629 (1) - ^
01:13:018 (1) - The song is slowing down here so sv should be lower (again, just my personal preference)
01:19:684 (6) - The slider is too far away from the previous one. Make it closer without letting it overlap.
01:24:962 (7,1) - I think there needs to be a circle in between these two objects, it's kinda lacking something without it
01:26:351 (2) - overlap :/
01:27:184 (2) - could be a long slider instead
01:28:573 (4) - ^ (just one tick)
01:56:768 (2) - It's too far from the previous object and would probably confuse the player.
Please don't get salty from my mod
Good luck~ and don't give up on ranking it :p
Great song!
[General]
Just my preference but I think the sv is too fast for this. The sliders are too long for kiai part
You should use ds more often on shapes
Get a silent slidertick hitsound. There shouldnt be a slidertick sound since its such a quiet map
timing seems a little off. maybe ask someone to help (i cant time >.<)
[Everyday!]
00:12:323 (2) - It may seem like this is a small thing but it would really look nicer if it was more in line with the slider like this http://puu.sh/pPNVa/956f05d3f1.jpg or you could change it to a short slider (which sounds nice actually)
00:22:462 (1) - make this longer and remove 00:22:879 (2) - I think it's overmapped like that
00:26:907 (1) - straighten this slider and use ds 2x to align 00:27:323 (2) to it
00:28:851 (5,6,7) - I reccomend using ds here
01:03:018 (4) - okay so I know what you said about the overlap thing but you really should get rid of it.
01:04:546 (2,3) - ^
01:05:657 (2) - ^
01:07:879 (2) - ^
01:08:296 (3) - This slider doesn't make sense, change it to circle pls
01:10:518 (1) - The song is getting louder so you should separate this from the next slider. Or even raplace it with two circles and make a pattern (not overlapping pls)
01:11:629 (1) - ^
01:13:018 (1) - The song is slowing down here so sv should be lower (again, just my personal preference)
01:19:684 (6) - The slider is too far away from the previous one. Make it closer without letting it overlap.
01:24:962 (7,1) - I think there needs to be a circle in between these two objects, it's kinda lacking something without it
01:26:351 (2) - overlap :/
01:27:184 (2) - could be a long slider instead
01:28:573 (4) - ^ (just one tick)
01:56:768 (2) - It's too far from the previous object and would probably confuse the player.
Please don't get salty from my mod
Good luck~ and don't give up on ranking it :p
Topic Starter
Thx for the mod!Seaweed wrote:
Here from M4M contract
Great song!
[General]
Just my preference but I think the sv is too fast for this. The sliders are too long for kiai part
You should use ds more often on shapesFixed
Get a silent slidertick hitsound. There shouldnt be a slidertick sound since its such a quiet mapI think the sound is okay
timing seems a little off. maybe ask someone to help (i cant time >.<)
[Everyday!]
00:12:323 (2) - It may seem like this is a small thing but it would really look nicer if it was more in line with the slider like this http://puu.sh/pPNVa/956f05d3f1.jpg or you could change it to a short slider (which sounds nice actually)Fixed
00:22:462 (1) - make this longer and remove 00:22:879 (2) - I think it's overmapped like thatFixed
00:26:907 (1) - straighten this slider and use ds 2x to align 00:27:323 (2) to itFixed
00:28:851 (5,6,7) - I reccomend using ds hereFixed
01:03:018 (4) - okay so I know what you said about the overlap thing but you really should get rid of it.Fixed
01:04:546 (2,3) - ^Fixed
01:05:657 (2) - ^Fixed
01:07:879 (2) - ^Fixed
01:08:296 (3) - This slider doesn't make sense, change it to circle plsFixed
01:10:518 (1) - The song is getting louder so you should separate this from the next slider. Or even raplace it with two circles and make a pattern (not overlapping pls)Fixed
01:11:629 (1) - ^Fixed
01:13:018 (1) - The song is slowing down here so sv should be lower (again, just my personal preference)No
01:19:684 (6) - The slider is too far away from the previous one. Make it closer without letting it overlap.Fixed
01:24:962 (7,1) - I think there needs to be a circle in between these two objects, it's kinda lacking something without itFixed
01:26:351 (2) - overlap :/Fixed
01:27:184 (2) - could be a long slider insteadFixed
01:28:573 (4) - ^ (just one tick)Fixed
01:56:768 (2) - It's too far from the previous object and would probably confuse the player.Fixed
Please don't get salty from my mod
Good luck~ and don't give up on ranking it :p
I really appreciated it
ajarannya moe nih shooting star ke map sendiri banyak banyak www
Topic Starter
mksdnya gimana :'Time Capsule wrote:
ajarannya moe nih shooting star ke map sendiri banyak banyak www
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