This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on onsdag 24. mai 2017 at 15.01.41

Artist: Quarks (kradness&Camellia)
Title: Intro + Dualive
Tags: hardcore dubstep drumstep Beako cametek kamelcamellia jcore glitch hop かめりあ Ultima Fox
BPM: 190
Filesize: 8484kb
Play Time: 00:00
Difficulties Available:

1. ga yma p (0 stars, 1 notes)
2. Imagination feat. Beako (6,06 stars, 1264 notes)
3. Supreme (5,06 stars, 435 notes)

Download: Quarks (kradness&Camellia) - Intro + Dualive
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more diffs coming through agagagagaga

Imagination feat. Beako - old map and keeping it old style :sunglasses:
Supreme - Supreme

BG Source

I love this <3 <3

HeyGuys

00:00:592 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - inconsistent spacing

00:22:855 (2,3) - increase spacing a bit

00:25:381 (7,8) - delete them and make it a slider, works better that way

00:26:802 (3) - overlap

00:28:223 (4) - NC and shorten to the white tick so you can make 00:29:013 (5) - a reverse slider and move it to where the end of (4) is currently (or add a circle there)

00:35:486 (7) - remove and extend 00:35:644 (1) - + move it to (7)'s position

00:36:749 (3,4) - stack less

02:00:324 (3) - delete and put a slider at 02:00:640 (3) -

02:04:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I suggest fixing these squares and using ctrl+D

02:32:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here

03:10:114 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - not sure about that NC spam

03:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - get's more spaced at the end, intentional?

03:32:850 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spam

03:53:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are the notes on the blue ticks in and after this part intentionally placed there? Something about this part until 04:01:981 (1) - feels wrong

04:23:376 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2) - holy NC spam

04:38:849 (2,3) - move them a bit out of the slider to make them more visible

04:39:481 (5,6) - same

04:40:112 (2,3) - same

04:53:533 (11,12,1) - NC at 11 pls and remove at (1)

04:55:902 (11) - NC

05:13:270 (11) - NC




no kds needed

N00dle wrote:

HeyGuys

00:00:592 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - inconsistent spacing

00:22:855 (2,3) - increase spacing a bit

00:25:381 (7,8) - delete them and make it a slider, works better that way

00:26:802 (3) - overlap

00:28:223 (4) - NC and shorten to the white tick so you can make 00:29:013 (5) - a reverse slider and move it to where the end of (4) is currently (or add a circle there)

00:35:486 (7) - remove and extend 00:35:644 (1) - + move it to (7)'s position

00:36:749 (3,4) - stack less

02:00:324 (3) - delete and put a slider at 02:00:640 (3) -

02:04:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I suggest fixing these squares and using ctrl+D

02:32:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here

03:10:114 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - not sure about that NC spam

03:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - get's more spaced at the end, intentional?

03:32:850 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spam

03:53:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are the notes on the blue ticks in and after this part intentionally placed there? Something about this part until 04:01:981 (1) - feels wrong

04:23:376 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2) - holy NC spam

04:38:849 (2,3) - move them a bit out of the slider to make them more visible

04:39:481 (5,6) - same

04:40:112 (2,3) - same

04:53:533 (11,12,1) - NC at 11 pls and remove at (1)

04:55:902 (11) - NC

05:13:270 (11) - NC




no kds needed

thx for mod, free kudosu OpieOP

brdzxh wrote:

N00dle wrote:

no kds needed

thx for mod, free kudosu

Doesn't want kudosu.
Bird gives kudosu anyway

GoodGuyBird

Hi!

well first, you started the sliders at the beginning too early? start them from 00:00:749 - also, reduce the volumen, the sound its too loud for the music
I would say to check or remake some slider shapes like this one 00:35:960 (2) - it doesnt seem good
00:45:907 (1) - move this to the right of the screen, the movement is a bit confusing but if you move to the right, it will be ok
01:41:693 (1) - move this a bit closer to slider end or start with a slider, because offset changes, I'd recommend to use the sliders first (01:47:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ) and then the circles so you get used to the new rythm better
02:09:956 (1,1) - no need NC on these
03:30:166 (3) - this stack here killed me every time xD
04:12:639 (7) - nc?
04:19:112 (1) - remove nc
04:37:428 (2,3,4,5,6) - here we got some beats in the back, maybe transform those circles to mini sliders? :p
04:44:691 (6) - ctrl g
map is fun to play, I just noticed some inconsistency overall but its good :ppp GL, hope this little mod helps

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi!

also, reduce the volumen, the sound its too loud for the music already changed
I'd recommend to use the sliders first (01:47:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ) and then the circles so you get used to the new rythm better fixed
02:09:956 (1,1) - no need NC on these fixed
03:30:166 (3) - this stack here killed me every time xD changed the position for better visibility


map is fun to play, I just noticed some inconsistency overall but its good :ppp GL, hope this little mod helps

Late response, but thanks a lot for the mod!

Hi

Thats a really nice map you made there but I just wanted to point out a few things.
Remember these are just suggestions. Im not a mapping pro or anything.

..and thats pretty much it. Good Luck!

Rammler wrote:

00:45:592 (2,3,1) - increase the spacing here The difference in spacing between this and the others was pretty big so I increased it :^)
00:46:855 (2,3,1) - ^ Spacing here is in line with the rest so I didn't change it a lot, sorry. Thanks for the suggestion though.
01:13:381 (2,3) - increase the spacing between these notes I moved the two sliders a bit further away from each other if that seems right.
01:17:170 (3,4) - ^ Did the same as ^

Thanks a lot for the mod <3.

Rammler wrote:

02:08:850 (3,4) - ^ fixed
02:40:429 (9,10,11,12) - maybe do a NC on all of these? thx for suggestion
03:10:114 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - these parts feel kind of weird because e.g. 03:10:114 (1,2) - these two are overlapped but there is quite some spacing between these two 03:10:823 (4,5) - both is overlapped, so I dont really get what you mean; it plays fine imo and it is supposed to be a bit different because of change in music

03:13:903 (1) - move to x:52 y:248 fixed
03:14:219 (2) - move to x:212 y:224 fixed
03:17:614 (2) - NC fixed?
03:20:693 (1) - NC im not really sure what this is referring to as its mid stream

thanks a lot for the mod!

Rammler wrote:

Hi

Thats a really nice map you made there but I just wanted to point out a few things.
Remember these are just suggestions. Im not a mapping pro or anything.

03:57:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing between 4 and 5 please - Ty for telling me. I totally overlooked that ;-;
04:00:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same here with 8 and 9 - ^
04:05:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - idek - Fixed it, no idea what went wrong here
04:12:008 (5) - 04:13:271 (1) - please add something between this (music is still going ham but you just stopped the flow) - Changed it up a bit to keep it fast
05:01:271 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - spacing between 10 and 11 - Fixed <3
05:03:482 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing between 4 and 1 (srsly dont do this, this just looks and plays in a really awkward way imo) - Spacing fixed, Also what do u mean by feels awkward?
05:10:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase spacing between 6 and 7
..and thats pretty much it. Good Luck!

Thank you very much for this mod <3

Heyo, thanks for requesting a m4m in the sea of NMs. As a reminder, the maps you can choose from are in my profile (pick either goosebumps or any of two GD maps at the bottom)

On to the mod..

00:00:592 (1,1) - I could see people mistaking this for a failed blanket. Maybe make blue slider slightly less curved so it doesn't bend into the red one?

00:20:802 (1,3) - Use more slider points on 1 to get this blanket better.

00:41:802 (2,1) - You can avoid this overlap by chaning 1 a bit.

01:08:328 (2) - Move 2 so its not touching 1

01:34:855 (3,6) - maybe stack these?

02:31:035 (1) - Move this to 02:31:035 and then extend it so it ends in the same spot

02:38:377 (3,1) - maybe stack?

02:40:587 (1) - ctrl G

02:40:903 (1) - ctrl G

02:45:403 (5) - prev: .95x, next: 1.09x? is this intentional

02:56:219 (1,3) - maybe blanket these

03:12:956 (2,3,4,5) - fluctuations in spacing here, make it consistent

03:24:481 (2,4) - move 2 so it stacks under 4

03:27:640 (2,2) - blanket

This area around here the comboing is all over the place. I suggest NCs at the downbeat

04:04:429 (7) - move this down to keep flow

04:23:377 (1,2) - blanket

04:25:587 (2,1) - blanket

Overall comments -

The sliders were cool! Some could use some work in terms of how they look, but I didn't comment on any because then I'd be commenting on a LOT of sliders lol.

This map needs heavy work in the new combo department. Like I said earlier, I suggest combos on the downbeat, and then from there you can NC for emphasis, like you did in many parts where you had individual NCs on sliders, which was cool.

Good luck ~

Hobbes2 wrote:

00:00:592 (1,1) - I could see people mistaking this for a failed blanket. Maybe make blue slider slightly less curved so it doesn't bend into the red one?
My friend changed it . Fixed it
00:20:802 (1,3) - Use more slider points on 1 to get this blanket better.
Same happened as above... Fixed again.
00:41:802 (2,1) - You can avoid this overlap by chaning 1 a bit.
Alright, small change applied. Thanks
01:08:328 (2) - Move 2 so its not touching 1
I placed it one square to the right on the grid. Thanks for pointing this out.
01:34:855 (3,6) - maybe stack these?
Definitely makes it look better. I put the 6 under 3 here.

Thanks for the mod <3
I blame bird for ruining the beginning >~<

Hobbes2 wrote:

Heyo, thanks for requesting a m4m in the sea of NMs. As a reminder, the maps you can choose from are in my profile (pick either goosebumps or any of two GD maps at the bottom) Boy, I had almost forgotten about this request, will do the mod asap

On to the mod..

02:31:035 (1) - Move this to 02:31:035 and then extend it so it ends in the same spot fixed

02:38:377 (3,1) - maybe stack? I feel like it wont fit, so I moved them a bit closer instead

02:40:587 (1) - ctrl G i liked how they looked before, but alright fixed

02:40:903 (1) - ctrl G ^

02:45:403 (5) - prev: .95x, next: 1.09x? is this intentional good catch, fixed - i probably missed it when I fixed the streams a while ago

02:56:219 (1,3) - maybe blanket these Fixed - but I pushed it a bit further down for some variety

03:12:956 (2,3,4,5) - fluctuations in spacing here, make it consistent fixed

03:24:481 (2,4) - move 2 so it stacks under 4 fixed

03:27:640 (2,2) - blanket fixed?

This area around here the comboing is all over the place. I suggest NCs at the downbeat Will recheck the map for NCs later, thanks for letting me know!

Overall comments -

The sliders were cool! Some could use some work in terms of how they look, but I didn't comment on any because then I'd be commenting on a LOT of sliders lol. I agree that some sliders look at little odd, but they were intentionally made like it! But again you are right, I will fix some of the weirder shapes

This map needs heavy work in the new combo department. Like I said earlier, I suggest combos on the downbeat, and then from there you can NC for emphasis, like you did in many parts where you had individual NCs on sliders, which was cool. As I also mentioned above

Good luck ~

Thanks a lot for the mod, will mod your map asap~

Accidental M4M, yay! IDK XD Newbie modder, i'll do my best ^_^
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00:31:697 (2) - For beauty's sake - stack note on end of 00:32:013 (1)
01:02:013 (2,3) - These feel terrible to play, along with the rest of the iterations, though I'm not sure how to improve it. If you're dead set on keeping them it's fine, though I suggest change.
01:50:377 (3,1) - Put these closer
02:03:798 (2,3) - ^ Wiggly sliders make rhythm hard to follow here
02:39:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lumpy stream is lumpy, add another curve maybe and pull the stream head right.
02:47:929 (5) - Bring this left
02:55:350 (3,4,5) - Adjust these to flow better onto 1
03:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - C'mon, you can align better than this
03:20:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Pretty lumpy, flow it!
03:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well done with this one
03:36:640 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Inconsistent spacing with slider 1, unless intended
03:41:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel like an arc stream could do better, map it on a slider for accuracy. Crappy attempt: http://puu.sh/pu96h/5fbc52d9b1.jpg
03:42:324 (1,2,1) - Center the hitcircle between sliders? Why not? Might look nice.
03:42:640 (2) - Actually... now that I'm looking at this, this would look nice aligned with the 03:41:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) stream. Maybe adjust the 2 sliders to do that when/if you fix your stream and then center the hitcircle.
03:54:324 (1) - Align this with the follow line of 03:53:929 (5,6)
03:55:350 (1,2,3,4) - Increasing spacing on just 4 notes is awkward, I'd just space normally.
03:53:456 (3,4,5) - Hard rhythm, consider a reverse slider if you please.
04:04:350 (6) - Align between 5, 7
04:05:535 (5,6,7) - Incline this rightwards, does that make sense ish? Pic: http://puu.sh/pu9uc/da59990310.jpg
04:06:008 (1,2,3) - With back and forth jumps like this, it's a bit hard to keep track of when to stop unless it's every 4. I guess it's fine considering star difficulty, but I'd suggest starting the stream underneath 04:06:166 (2) then reducing spacing between each note of 04:06:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
04:08:219 (10) - Pull up slightly to fix arch shape
04:32:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is quite a stack, way too hard to read. Please space it out a bit and add a sort of flow to it, it feels very random as it is, then I'd add a hitcircle at 04:33:166, with 6 pointing to the hitcircle and being overlapped with it.
04:34:429 (5,1) - Blanket, why not?
04:35:061 (2) - For beauty's sake, maybe angle it with 04:34:745 (1) a bit better so that if they were together they would sort of blanket.
04:37:429 (2,3,4) - Make this more square-y
04:38:535 (1,2,3) - This is a bit cruel, sets up for triple on sliderbutt. Not necessarily wrong but consider change.
04:49:903 (7) - NC
04:58:745 (1,2) - Move closer, too hard to tell difference between timing of this and the next hitcircle (3).
04:59:377 (4,5) - ^ Doesn't have to be too much closer, just indicate there's a difference between this and 5,6
05:00:008 (7,8) - ^

Love the slider mapping though, reminds me of bookmark memories - grimoire gl ranking!

Plaudible wrote:

Accidental M4M, yay! IDK XD Newbie modder, i'll do my best ^_^
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01:50:377 (3,1) - Put these closer fixed
02:03:798 (2,3) - ^ Wiggly sliders make rhythm hard to follow here straightened them out a bit and fixed spacing
02:39:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lumpy stream is lumpy, add another curve maybe and pull the stream head right. im not really sure what you meant, but I improved the curve
02:47:929 (5) - Bring this left fixed
02:55:350 (3,4,5) - Adjust these to flow better onto 1 fixed
03:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - C'mon, you can align better than this fixed
03:20:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Pretty lumpy, flow it! improved
03:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well done with this one thx
03:36:640 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Inconsistent spacing with slider 1, unless intended was originally made to flow into the next combo but I improved the positioning a bit
03:41:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel like an arc stream could do better, map it on a slider for accuracy. Crappy attempt: http://puu.sh/pu96h/5fbc52d9b1.jpg i liked the old stream ;-;, but I made it as a one curve instead of two
03:42:324 (1,2,1) - Center the hitcircle between sliders? Why not? Might look nice. done
03:42:640 (2) - Actually... now that I'm looking at this, this would look nice aligned with the 03:41:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) stream. Maybe adjust the 2 sliders to do that when/if you fix your stream and then center the hitcircle. done!

Love the slider mapping though, reminds me of bookmark memories - grimoire gl ranking!

Thanks a lot for the mod! Will map your map asap~

Plaudible wrote:

00:31:697 (2) - For beauty's sake - stack note on end of 00:32:013 (1)
Agreed on this part. I also put 1 above 2 like this: http://puu.sh/pv0uy/9ca6df12f0.jpg
01:02:013 (2,3) - These feel terrible to play, along with the rest of the iterations, though I'm not sure how to improve it. If you're dead set on keeping them it's fine, though I suggest change.
I really wanted to use kicksliders in the kiai part so I'm keeping them

Thanks for the mod ;')

Hi! Sorry for the delay. For M4M

Collab
I think you should rework sliders at the beginning. They looks kinda messy imo. Maybe try to check long sliders on another maps.
00:20:802 (1) - this should end on white tick
00:30:434 (4) - maybe end this on next blue tick
01:31:065 (4) - ^
00:41:013 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - don't ignore big white ticks in this part. You can map slider-3 notes-repeat. and put a clap on every 2nd white tick
01:42:166 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I know that it may be boring but try spinner there. I think you can put him from this 1:41:693 - to 1:44:535 -
01:52:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3) - follow vocal maybe?
03:32:535 (2) - http://puu.sh/pEgQe/668341a873.jpg
03:53:219 (2,3,4,5,6) - watch this
04:47:377 (1,2,3) - ^
03:57:719 - clickable
04:01:271 (9) - I think dividing this to 4 slider would be better
04:38:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't stack it like triples
04:52:219 - I think it's should be clickable too

About sliders. Read this 2 topics (1, 2) if you didn't already. It should help you alot. And then try to improve your sliders. Right now they looks kinda messy
Good Luck!

collector7 wrote:

Hi! Sorry for the delay. For M4M

Collab
I think you should rework sliders at the beginning. They looks kinda messy imo. Maybe try to check long sliders on another maps.
Was planning on removing them, since they feel boring to me :^)
00:20:802 (1) - this should end on white tick
I think I messed this one up after the last mod. Fixed now <3
00:30:434 (4) - maybe end this on next blue tick
Done and made it closer to the next slider.
01:31:065 (4) - ^
Done the same
00:41:013 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - don't ignore big white ticks in this part. You can map slider-3 notes-repeat. and put a clap on every 2nd white tick
Wasn't too sure how to map this part. Feels a lot better now


About sliders. Read this 2 topics (1, 2) if you didn't already. It should help you alot. And then try to improve your sliders. Right now they looks kinda messy
Good Luck!

Thanks a lot for this mod! It really made me see the mistakes in my map.

collector7 wrote:

Hi! Sorry for the delay. For M4M

Collab

01:42:166 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I know that it may be boring but try spinner there. I think you can put him from this 1:41:693 - to 1:44:535 - added a spinner
01:52:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3) - follow vocal maybe?ill take a look at it later
03:32:535 (2) - http://puu.sh/pEgQe/668341a873.jpg done

Good Luck!

thx for mod, will be modding yours asap

yo

Gl~

SherryCherry wrote:

yo

00:24:166 (3,4,5,6) - These could be paralleled better
Not sure how, but I stacked them now.
00:57:955 (4,1) - stack
Done~
00:56:692 (4,3) - overlapping can be avoided
No more overlap now.
01:09:955 (4) - improve wave-slider
I think it should look better now, ty for pointing that out.
01:41:218 (9) - too ugly :/
Made it a wave slider now :>

Thanks for the mod <3

Add tags: Glitch hop
00:24:797 (5,6) - move to up
00:59:297 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - change shape, that shape is to eggy xd
02:42:372 (1) - its better position to set preview point ;p
02:59:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad spacing changes, make that stream again

nice map ;d

SherryCherry wrote:

yo

02:00:688 (3) - ^ improved, was a bit buggy from a red anchor point
02:08:267 (1,2,3,4) - This looks too uneven too improved
04:37:951 (4) - funny keeping that as it fits to the wubby part
05:16:477 (1) - change pls keeping the same shape, but I moved an anchor point so it looks a bit better now
05:36:560 - there aren't enough notes theres many musical elements you can follow in this part, and if you try to follow them all it just gets messy. That is why I tried to stick to one and eventually changing to another for a smooth ending. If you are talking about not enough drain, it has currently 5:05 drain so its fine

Gl~

Thanks a lot for the mod!