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InternalLight wrote:
ya
try to avoid moments like 02:26:966 (3,4) - Fine, ill fix those overlapses XD
try to move 02:27:309 (4) - like in 200;216
02:29:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to avoid "up-right" jumps too, enable imagination, try to add sliders etc i don't know what do do instead
04:51:652 (1,2,3,4) - ^ etc
add spinner from 05:16:422 - to 05:17:708 - great idea
01:19:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too big jumps D: yeah it could be smaller
04:13:079 (3,5) - avoid that moments too nope
DJ Lucky wrote:
This is like my first mod ever and i'm sh*t at playing extras so here it goes
00:15:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Idk I think 00:16:337 (8) - just feel weird at the end of that slider . you're right actually lol XD, i changed that a bit
00:24:909 (1,2,3,4,1) - I understand what you were trying to do but feels a bit odd to play. i made it more spaced. Feels less odd
01:07:766 (2,3) - The circle is too far from that slider in my opinion so I think it best to make it closer. I moved it closer
02:26:966 (3) - ctrl+G nah
Ugh my brain hurts trying to find problems in this map so i'll stop here
Anyways sorry if this isn't helpful to you but atleast I tried. Thanks
Yahuri wrote:
from queue
-AR too high for me to see well AR is good for me, and not just me
-map does not seem to be structured very well. you need to create more unity throughout the map by adding patterns, blankets, symmetry, etc
-copy whatever sliders you can so that the slider for the same purpose is not different everytime, for the purpose of what i said above good advice
-get rid of unneccesary overlap so it doesnt look as messy, for example here 02:09:994 (2,3,8) Changed, at least the one you mentioned XD
01:38:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why change DS here? cuz it's fun
02:45:366 (6,1,2,3,4) - very bad transition in DS, also because super fast BPM 1. The bpm is not fast 2. The transition might be... not good but it's not terrible and currently it's my only idea which fits somehow
03:11:880 (2,4) - shape of these sliders dont fit music, 03:22:852 (2,4) too Changed
Good luck!
Hobbes2 wrote:
Mod from queue.
[the only difficulty]
00:11:880 (1) - add more slider points to smooth out the curve. Done
00:19:766 (4,5,1,2) - maybe avoid this overlap I didn't change it, cuz i like it, but i moved it
00:55:937 (3,4,8) - overlap moved
00:58:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should keep the 1.00x spacing until note 8, and then switch to 1.3 spacing. So basically, make notes 7 and 8 have 1.00 spacing yep, changed
01:14:109 (5,7) - quick blanket fix Done
01:27:309 (1) - redesign, looks kinda bad. Make it symmetrical maybe? i changed it a bit
01:33:137 (3,5) - stack yep
01:41:709 (3) - split this into two reverse sliders imo imo not
01:42:737 (4,10) - maybe redesign this stream so that 4 and 10 stack good one
01:50:966 (4,3) - ^ except for 3 and 4
02:06:223 (3) - x:116 y:288 for improved blanket k
02:12:566 (1) - blanket this with the stream Done
03:38:966 (4) - redesign, it's too smooshed changed it a bit
03:45:909 (1) - maybe silence this spinner? the hitsound at the end especially feels pretty weird right
03:50:992 (1) - use soft hitsounds for this part and lower the volume. (go to the timing window) Done
05:13:423 (6,3) - stack 6 below 3 Done
05:16:336 (1) - NC k
good luck! nice map. Thanks you