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MrKosiej
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tatemae
hi from modreqs

00:41:366 (5) - fine slider, change pls
00:44:452 (5) - ^
01:28:680 (2) - nc?
01:45:137 (7,8) - fine
01:59:709 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - make better pls
02:02:280 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - bad flow
02:09:137 (3,4) - different slider, use ctrl+c ctrl+v
02:11:880 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - overlap
02:13:938 (1,2,3) - ctrl+c ctrl+v
02:15:652 (2,3,4,5,1) - make better
02:15:995 (1) - random nc
02:20:109 (3,4) - ctrl+c ctrl+v
02:24:909 (1) - ugly slider
02:46:166 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - remove spacing?
02:48:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ok, maybe no
03:27:994 (4,5,6) - spacing
03:51:309 (3,4) - ctrl+c ctrl+v
03:56:452 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - miss bits, use 25%
03:58:166 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
05:06:737 (1,2) - ugly
it is a lot of work, good luck!
Vert
nm from q

to be honest i dont like your streams in 1/3 part
it seems like a random jump and distance is changing too
03:26:166 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like this
03:26:709 (7) - and this circle is even snapped wrong
I think you can use ctrl+shift+f to make sliders change into streams

besides the streams i think those unnessesary overlap make the map seems unclear
such as 02:12:566 (1) -

rhythm is ok for me XD

good luck :)
zev
hello MrKosiej
03:38:966 (4) - the slider end does not land on a 1/3 tick make this a 1/2 slider
04:38:109 (2) - this circle transition to stream is brutal as fuck lolol from editor perspective i can't play this
you can extend the maps canvas and flow by mapping a bit more offscreen.

I think you'll need soft-hitnormals for the flute part and some extra timing points to match the volume of the map the dB changes a lot.


hmm maybe match the combo colours with the background? would look pretty :D
HML
Yo
00:17:280 (6,1) - align better please :)
00:19:080 (4,1) - This is hard to read. Maybe something like THIS?
00:24:909 (1,2) - Space more from 00:25:166 (3,4) so it doesn't look like a weird stream.
00:25:594 (1) - This is an ugly slider. I'd recommend changing it.
00:27:652 (4) - Extend to the red tick
00:29:024 (5) - ^ Ditto
01:02:623 (1) - Make more visible?
01:17:709 (6) - NC?
01:20:794 (2) - Make into a 1/2 slider.
01:26:623 (6) - NC
01:28:680 (1) - Another ugly slider my dude :/

01:35:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This might need remapping in the future. I can single tap this part, but I can see why this would be an alternator's nightmare.

02:27:309 (4) - Make more visible
02:27:994 (6) - ^ Ditto
02:32:795 (4) - ^ Ditto
02:33:479 (6) - ^ Ditto
02:57:823 (1) - Slider needs fixn'
03:26:623 (6,7) - These need to be on the 1/3 ticks
03:29:623 (4,5) - ^
03:59:563 (2) - When you do sliders like these ones, the longer ones, I recommend using a slower SV.
04:05:708 (3) - Maybe do something like THIS?
04:11:194 (3) - ^ Ditto
05:16:337 (1) - Maybe replace with a slider that ends at 05:17:365 ?
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