1. Hard (2,75 stars, 421 notes)
2. Normal (1,82 stars, 219 notes)

Underforest wrote:

Hey, I saw on #modreqs that you need GDs
Can I do Easy or Normal?

1. Fine

1. 00:32:170 (3,1) - I suggest making a good flow, how about using 00:30:517 (1) - slider and ctrl + h to replace here?
   if they are sliders, i don't care like 00:41:265 (2,1) - , but (3) is the circle.
2. 01:11:147 (4) - , 01:17:761 (3) - , 01:28:154 (2) - , 02:29:572 (3) - , 02:31:462 (1) - I'm just wondering about offscreen in normal-screen(or just in editor). I know there are not off-screen, but so close. ask BNs those are unrankables. idw about those patterns. Let me show the pictures.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   
   
3. 01:34:296 (6) - I suggest starting from the blue stick on the head of slider, it will be same with other patterns.
4. 03:39:965 (2,3,4) - there are not symmetry, imo. how about changing these to be better? If you do, don't forget 03:41:855 (5) - this.

1. HP in hard diff is so high, imo. how about decreasing the HP drain about 6?
2. Fine, Good

1. 00:58:863 (3,1) - Estoy siendo algo nazi pero stackealos :p
2. 01:09:257 (2) - Esto esta pelogrosamente abajo, se sale de mi pantalla y hace overlap con el hit-error meter. Quizas muevelo un poco para arriba?
3. 01:23:902 (1,2) - No me parece una buena manera de cambiar el ritmo base, es la primera dificultad del set asi que hay que mantener todo simple y facil de predecir. Que tal algo mas simple como esto? Principalmente para que se parezca al ritmo siguiente que usas: http://puu.sh/qQlze/6c978ee55a.jpg (Si el problema es el ritmo de 1/4 :v)
4. 01:53:666 (1) - Que tal extenderlo hasta el siguiente downbeat? Ahí termina el sonido ese que mappeaste con el slider asi que tendría mas sentido. Además suena mejor ritmicamente :^)
5. 03:36:186 (2,4) - Nazi stack TM

1. 00:28:036 (3,4) - Vi que aquí cambiaste el patrón del ritmo, ahora mappeas la linea azul y blanca en vez de roja y azul; y pues sí esta bien porque el énfazis de la canción cambia, pero debiste de haber hecho el cambio desde aquí 00:24:139 (3,4) - , ya que desde esta parte la linea blanca empieza a tener más énfazis.
2. 02:46:580 (1,2) - Stackea estos de una manera más limpia y perfecta :^) http://puu.sh/qQn4r/fa76b2e7be.jpg

Atsuro wrote:

Hola, me pediste un mod asi que aqui lo tienes:

Normal

1. 00:58:863 (3,1) - Estoy siendo algo nazi pero stackealos :p
2. 01:09:257 (2) - Esto esta pelogrosamente abajo, se sale de mi pantalla y hace overlap con el hit-error meter. Quizas muevelo un poco para arriba?
3. 01:23:902 (1,2) - No me parece una buena manera de cambiar el ritmo base, es la primera dificultad del set asi que hay que mantener todo simple y facil de predecir. Que tal algo mas simple como esto? Principalmente para que se parezca al ritmo siguiente que usas: http://puu.sh/qQlze/6c978ee55a.jpg (Si el problema es el ritmo de 1/4 :v)
4. 01:53:666 (1) - Que tal extenderlo hasta el siguiente downbeat? Ahí termina el sonido ese que mappeaste con el slider asi que tendría mas sentido. Además suena mejor ritmicamente :^)
5. 03:36:186 (2,4) - Nazi stack TM

Hard

1. 00:28:036 (3,4) - Vi que aquí cambiaste el patrón del ritmo, ahora mappeas la linea azul y blanca en vez de roja y azul; y pues sí esta bien porque el énfazis de la canción cambia, pero debiste de haber hecho el cambio desde aquí 00:24:139 (3,4) - , ya que desde esta parte la linea blanca empieza a tener más énfazis.
2. 02:46:580 (1,2) - Stackea estos de una manera más limpia y perfecta :^) http://puu.sh/qQn4r/fa76b2e7be.jpg

Eso es todo lo que pude encontrar, suerte!

1. Use kiai time 01:53:666 - / 02:08:784 - there
2. Add "Come With Us", the album title, to the tags.

1. 00:24:847 (1,2) - it looks like you were going for a blanket here, fix it
2. 00:37:485 (2,1) - lower this, slight hp overlap doesn't look nice
3. 00:46:934 (3,1) - (1) needs to be a little more curvy if you want them to align perfectly
4. 00:49:414 (1,1) - it's recommended to have 2 beats of spinner recovery for Normal, ~400 ms is a little cruel, same with every spinner
5. 02:17:288 (2,3) - fix blanket
6. 02:51:304 (2) - stack with 02:49:414 (5) - that
7. 03:39:965 (2,3,4) - make the flow here less sharp

1. 00:43:273 (4,1) - make (1) more curvy if you want them perfectly parallel
2. 01:24:847 (4,1) - fix blanket, if that's what that is
3. 02:26:501 (2) - hp overlap doesn't look nice
4. 02:10:202 (4,1) - same as 00:43:273 (4,1) - there
5. 02:19:532 (3) - hitsounds are inconsistent, you skipped the clap 01:34:178 (5) - here because there's no clap noise, but you should make it consistent with 02:19:532 (3) - this and 00:48:824 (2) - this, etc.
6. 03:37:603 (1,2) - fix blanket

1. 00:28:627 (1,2) - blanket? (como en 00:30:517 (1,2) - lo hiciste, para que no desentonen)
2. 00:53:666 (1) - viste que me equivoqué acá... quizás está demasiado en el borde?? :/
3. 00:55:556 (2) - yo lo haría un poquito más curvo :3
4. 01:12:091 (1) - yo le cambiaría la concavidad, me parecería mejor
5. 01:33:351 (4,5) - Este lo sentí demasiado extraño... Yo haría un slider en 01:34:060 - para aprovechar el ambiente creciente del "wa wa wa wa...":
   
6. 02:15:871 (3,1) - que raro ese flow xD
7. 02:30:989 (6) - mejora el blanket?
8. 03:24:847 (1) - Como el de antes, demasiado en el borde?
9. 03:38:076 (2) - mejora este blanket pls!
10. 03:40:556 (3,4) - que onda este stack. Está movido un poquitico xD
11. Hay muchos otros blankets pero, mehh, hacer una lista exahustiva no vale la pena.

1. 00:43:745 (1,3) - acá esto podría llevar a confuciones, procura que el camino hacia (2) sea más llamativo que hacia (3) {como hiciste en 00:17:288 (1,2) - }
   Como no tienes un easy hay que procurar que esta diff sea amigable para lo noobs :3
2. 00:46:934 (3,1) - el blanket
3. 00:49:414 (1,1) - hum!, no estoy seguro de si esto es muy rápido para un normal... yo creería que sí. Pero pregunta más sobre eso.
4. 01:53:666 (1,1,1,1) - Me da la impresión que... ¿no acaban en 1/6? o.o?
5. 02:17:288 (2,3) - b-b-blanket!
6. En general, sí tienes muchos blankets que se pueden mejorar (MUCHOS)

1. The combo colors you are using appear to be somewhat acidic. Not a bad thing, but feels way too intense for such a song. Try to add a bit of gray and dim the colours?
   

1. The difficulty settings and the whole difficulty set up feel somewhat harsh for the easiest diff of the set. Try something like OD3, HP 4 and AR 4,5. Let's make the thing more beginner-friendly.
   Note: the low OD thing is coming from vast amount of tricky rhythms that could be pretty confusing.
2. 00:43:509 (3,1) - as there are a lot of 3/4 and 1/2 beats reading stacks can get somewhat confusing. Try to avoid them in the easiest difficulty?
   Note: 03:18:115 (3,4) - same here.
3. 00:49:414 (1,1) - I would recommend to shorten the spinner or remove the first note after it, so that we could double the after-spinner recovery time. Again, for the sole purpose of making the difficulty work better as the easiest one.
   Note: 01:19:651 (1,1) - 02:20:123 (1,1) - 03:05:477 (1,1) - 03:20:595 (1,1) - same.
4. 01:08:312 (1) - here and in si,milar cases a slider-whistle hitsound would fit in a pretty interesting way. Give it a try and let me know what you think of it!
5. 01:34:178 (6) - I am not eaxctly sure, but it sounds a lot better to me when you snap the head of this slider to 01:34:296 - it just seems to emphasize the instruments better.
6. 03:50:832 (1) - in comparison with the rest of the difficulty it feels way too simple, The 2/1 slider really does stand out. Why not split it into something else?
   
   Feels a bit over the top for the easiet difficulty, as I've already mentioned. Looks cool otherwise.

1. 00:26:265 (5,1) - minor - try to make the connection between these two smoother? Example
2. 01:09:257 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:11:147 (2,3,4,5,6) - these might come as a bit of a shock after relatively simple rhythm in the Normal. Try to use short kick sliders or 1/4 sliders with multiple repeats to introduce players to 1/4s, and then you can use these compressed streams later in the map.
   Note: basically, I want to reduce the difficulty of this part to make the spread work better.
3. 01:32:879 (1,2,3) - use an 1/4 kick slider with a repeat? Haven't seen any stacked triplets in this part before, feels a bit inconsistent.
4. 03:12:800 (5,1) - having a stacked 1/2 pattern right after a stacked 1/4 pattern can feel preetty uneasy to play. Test it to see if it works and consider unstacking?
   Note: if you change the previous one, this 03:14:690 (5,1) - can stay as it is as to give some difficulty progression or can also be unstackde. Either way should be fine.
   
   Looks fairly decent.

Boruma wrote:

[Normal]

00:45:044 (3) - I recommend unstacking the hitcircle and slider as the timing of the previous stack is different from the timing of this stack. Fixed
03:02:525 - The instruments are still making rather clear rhythms. I advise mapping this part. Nah, is fine as it

[Hard]

00:24:257 (4) - There's nothing in the music that indicates this hitcircle. I recommend moving the hitcircle to the previous red tick in the timeline. I'd would be inconsistent with the previous rhythms, if you can listen, there is indication of the music
00:26:147 (4) - There's the same issue here. There's no indication in the music that justifies this hitcircle being there. I again recommend moving the hitcircle to the previous red tick in the timeline. same
00:43:154 (3,4) - Here it's fine though because of the pattern, but setting up the pattern earlier than when it's indicated in the instrumental offsets the rhythm imo. Fixed
02:46:107 (4,5,6) - Make the triple go in a straight line to match the pattern seen twice later. Fixed

1. Suggestion:
2. I recommend that you fix this:
3. Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
4. Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
5. I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:

1. You could remove "electronic" from the tags since it will probably be set as genre later.
2. The music volume gradually increases and decreases in some parts of the song so the hitsounds should too. The 50% at the start also seems a bit loud for the beginning of the song.

• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:17:288 (1,2) - Flow is breaking a bit here due to the straight slider directing to the right and not leading to the next circle. Maybe you can adjust this a bit. Same here 01:02:643 (3,4) -
2. 00:22:958 (1,2) - 00:24:847 (1,2) - 01:26:265 (3,1) - 02:11:973 (2,3) - 02:12:564 (3,4) - 02:17:288 (2,3) - blanket that could be better. Super duper pro tip nobody ever uses: Use the approach circle as guide line http://puu.sh/rjk1Z/7848bb348d.jpg
   
   Combo:
3. 00:53:194 (1,1) - 2 NC? mistake?
   
   Spacing:
4. 02:47:525 (2,3,4) - Small visible spacing inconsistency due to the grid snap http://puu.sh/rjk6Z/eb5bd91a97.jpg Err, may i suggest to polish that up overall? for visual appearance too so it looks cleaner
   
   Other Issues:
5. 03:28:154 (1,3) - They are really high placed and overlap with the HP bar. Don't recommend overlapping objects with the interface.
6. 03:36:186 (2,4) - They are not stacked properly

• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:17:052 (6,1) - 00:12:091 (2,3) - Would look better if they were at the same position when stacked http://puu.sh/rjedo/69a4a2933e.jpg Same for 00:15:871 (3,4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/rjeiu/6b78c71951.jpg
2. 00:21:540 (2,3) - Flow could be slightly enhanced here by angling the slider ending point a bit more to the left. Same but on the right 00:22:958 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rjhBv/001b828763.jpg
3. 00:57:918 (3,4,1) - Don't like how this flows here between them. Spacing also is an issue to me. Why not create something paralell like you did here? 00:59:808 (3,4,1) - or something similar to this http://puu.sh/rjiFy/c2ed57e1cd.jpg
4. ^ Same here 01:06:895 (2,3,4) - jump from 2 to 3 could be less harsh and more natural http://puu.sh/rjiMV/1da7666359.jpg Would make a good transition between 01:07:840 (4,1) - too
5. 01:27:210 (1,2) - Transition could be a bit better between those, its a bit unnatural due to the linear slider. Better here for example 01:29:099 (1,2,3) -
   
   Spacing:
6. 01:11:855 (3,1) - Jump. 01:13:745 (3,1) - 01:15:635 (4,1) - 01:17:525 (4,1) - No jumps
7. Apart from these jumps 01:03:115 (5) - 03:26:737 (4) - the map is pretty fluent and the rest of your jumpy patterns are fitting. I don't quite understand the jumps here. They seem sort of out of place.

1. Modding Time: 1.5-2h
2. Relaxing song. Overall fluent gameplay. Hitsounds are good too. Just a few changes here and there in regards to flow other than that , can't complain. Definitely a keeper Have a star for support

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BounceBabe wrote:

Request from my NON-Japanese Theme Queue

What I checked in your mapset

Each point from the list below will have a check mark next to it (✓/ ✕/ ✫). This will tell you whether I checked that point or not.
✓= I checked this point and everything is okay.
✕= I didn't check this point because I think it doesn't need checking.
✫= I checked this point but something needs fixing (explained in the mod)
osu!wiki Modding page
osu!wiki Ranking Criteria page
NEW: BNG Rules & Information

📖 General 📖
✓ Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
> SR and gameplay gap between difficulties
> Difficulty settings if noticeably wrong chosen
> Difficulty level naming

✕ Map design
> Background (Does the image relate to the song?)
> Combo colours (Do they match the BG?)
> Skin (missing elements and resolution checks)
> SB (if available - osb. files, SB load, coding, epilepsy warning if flashy) or video (NSFW?)

✫ Metadata & Beatmap folder
> Resolution of images (1024x768 / 800x600 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 / 852x480 pixels for 16:9)
> Preview point
> mp3 (length must be min 30 sec drain time, bit rate, quality)
> Hitsounds (wav. format, length min. 100ms, quality,...)
> Multiple files (osb., hitsounds, images,...)
> Source of the song (unless it's a song I can't find anything about)
> Tags

🕗 Timing 🕗
✓ KIAI time and breaks
✕ Timing changes
✕ BPM & Offset

🎧 Sound 🎧
✓ Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
✓ Hitsound patterns
✫ Hitsound volume (Timing points)
✓ Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)

🖰 Object Gameplay 🖰
✓ Reasonable spacing and patterns, spacing inconsistencies, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special patterns
✫ Flow and transition
✕ Overmapping, SV changes
✫ Other Issues
> Interface overlaps
> Hidden objects that are hard to read due to coverage (overlaps)
> Stacking
> Unsnapped objects
> Spinner (4 beats - Easy, 2 beats - Normal)

👀 Visual Gameplay 👀
✫ Combo patterns, new combos for special cases (SV change, jumps that are hard to read)
✓ Readability of objects
✫ Blankets, symmetry
✓ Variety of patterns

Icon Legend
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1. Suggestion:
2. I recommend that you fix this:
3. Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
4. Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
5. I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:

General
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1. You could remove "electronic" from the tags since it will probably be set as genre later.
2. The music volume gradually increases and decreases in some parts of the song so the hitsounds should too. The 50% at the start also seems a bit loud for the beginning of the song. Added to 40% volume

Normal
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What I noticed immediately when looking at this difficulty is this http://puu.sh/rjjHT/0b857f7045.jpg Looks really awful on sliders with this length. Maybe use STR 1? I keep this, I have many sliders with this length xD

• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:17:288 (1,2) - Flow is breaking a bit here due to the straight slider directing to the right and not leading to the next circle. Maybe you can adjust this a bit. Same here 01:02:643 (3,4) -
2. 00:22:958 (1,2) - 00:24:847 (1,2) - 01:26:265 (3,1) - 02:11:973 (2,3) - 02:12:564 (3,4) - 02:17:288 (2,3) - blanket that could be better. Super duper pro tip nobody ever uses: Use the approach circle as guide line http://puu.sh/rjk1Z/7848bb348d.jpg
   
   Combo:
3. 00:53:194 (1,1) - 2 NC? mistake?
   
   Spacing:
4. 02:47:525 (2,3,4) - Small visible spacing inconsistency due to the grid snap http://puu.sh/rjk6Z/eb5bd91a97.jpg Err, may i suggest to polish that up overall? for visual appearance too so it looks cleaner
   
   Other Issues:
5. 03:28:154 (1,3) - They are really high placed and overlap with the HP bar. Don't recommend overlapping objects with the interface.
6. 03:36:186 (2,4) - They are not stacked properly

Hard
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• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:17:052 (6,1) - 00:12:091 (2,3) - Would look better if they were at the same position when stacked http://puu.sh/rjedo/69a4a2933e.jpg Same for 00:15:871 (3,4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/rjeiu/6b78c71951.jpg
2. 00:21:540 (2,3) - Flow could be slightly enhanced here by angling the slider ending point a bit more to the left. Same but on the right 00:22:958 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rjhBv/001b828763.jpg
3. 00:57:918 (3,4,1) - Don't like how this flows here between them. Spacing also is an issue to me. Why not create something paralell like you did here? 00:59:808 (3,4,1) - or something similar to this http://puu.sh/rjiFy/c2ed57e1cd.jpg
4. ^ Same here 01:06:895 (2,3,4) - jump from 2 to 3 could be less harsh and more natural http://puu.sh/rjiMV/1da7666359.jpg Would make a good transition between 01:07:840 (4,1) - too
5. 01:27:210 (1,2) - Transition could be a bit better between those, its a bit unnatural due to the linear slider. Better here for example 01:29:099 (1,2,3) -
   
   Spacing:
6. 01:11:855 (3,1) - Jump. 01:13:745 (3,1) - 01:15:635 (4,1) - 01:17:525 (4,1) - No jumps
7. Apart from these jumps 01:03:115 (5) - 03:26:737 (4) - the map is pretty fluent and the rest of your jumpy patterns are fitting. I don't quite understand the jumps here. They seem sort of out of place.

Overall
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1. Modding Time: 1.5-2h
2. Relaxing song. Overall fluent gameplay. Hitsounds are good too. Just a few changes here and there in regards to flow other than that , can't complain. Definitely a keeper Have a star for support

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[img]https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/images/icons/misc/thinking.gif[/img] What you could improve:Nothing, you have a very good eye in sliders and flow

MrSergio wrote:

yo, as we talked about... over 1 week ago lol. Sorry for delay

Hard:
- 00:15:399 (1,2) - I'd rather stack 2 under 1, instead of stacking it on the slider, since you move the cursor towards a red tick (aka weak beat)
- 00:19:178 (1,2) - same
- 01:09:965 (3) - why not moving this to around x120 y188? The current overlap is hinting at some sort of 1/4 snap while it actually isn't Well that's a good idea, fixed
- 01:11:147 (2,3) - heh... this is the same but I don't really have a solution actually, nvm. It is consistent and I guess it becomes easier once you get used to it. Keep them all as they are. Fixed the next patterns
- 01:13:981 (1,2) - usually, this sort of rhythm is represented as slider + circle tho... (notice the strong beat on the slider end right now)
- 02:19:532 (3,4) - I wanted to point out that this part is identical to 01:34:060 (3) - , yet pattern is clearly different. Whether you choose a pattern or the other, make sure they are consistent

All fixed

Normal:
- 00:49:414 (1,1) - as of recently, there is a guideline regarding recovery time after a spinner. In this case, on Normal diffs you need at least 2 beats (2 white ticks) of break after each spinner, so do you mind shortening this spinner?
- 01:34:296 (6) - I'd move this one 1/4 earlier and make it a 3/4 slider, to make it easier to play (considering the map's style)
- 03:05:477 (1,1) - same concept for spinner recovery, but this time I'd rather change the slider after it in a single circle at 03:10:202 - , since this spinner needs to end on that white tick

Fixed all

General:
- is it possible to reduce file size of the video? I'll try to reduce but I can't down more the file size
- I also need confirmation for official metadata, so do you have an official site or a scan of a CS cover for this song? This is an official band, and the song is very known but here is the metadata Wikipedia Discogs


Call me back :3~

MrSergio wrote:

Pattern changes feel nice and metadata is good to go (wikipedia is not a good source btw, but the second one is perfect :p)
Also, I just wanted to see if it was possible to reduce file size even more. The current one is fine since it's within the 30MB limit.

Bul bul bul bul~

1. What about moving preview time to 00:53:076 - ? catches the beat better imo~

1. 03:41:855 (5,6) - Blanket looks off (the circle is closer to the left part of the slider)

1. 01:34:178 - Feels awkward how this strong beat gets trapped in the slider repeat, what about starting with a circle on 01:34:060 - then another circle on 01:34:178 - and a slider that starts on 01:34:296 - and ends on 01:34:532 - ? (yee, deleting that circle before the spinner) picture

ezek wrote:

[General]

1. What about moving preview time to 00:53:076 - ? catches the beat better imo~ Fixed

[Normal]

1. 03:41:855 (5,6) - Blanket looks off (the circle is closer to the left part of the slider) Uhm well, I don't like this blanket D:, I move the (6) more to the left

[Hard]

1. 01:34:178 - Feels awkward how this strong beat gets trapped in the slider repeat, what about starting with a circle on 01:34:060 - then another circle on 01:34:178 - and a slider that starts on 01:34:296 - and ends on 01:34:532 - ? (yee, deleting that circle before the spinner) picture Fixed

lanzame una piedra cuando estés listo~

ezek wrote:

Good~