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AOP - Hanamaru Pippi wa Yoiko dake (TV Version)

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Topic Starter
Yasora
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 14 June, 2016 at 00:20:01

Artist: AOP
Title: Hanamaru Pippi wa Yoiko dake (TV Version)
Source: おそ松さん
Tags: osomatsu san opening Armin A_r_M_i_N
BPM: 172
Filesize: 11121kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. A r M i N's Easy (1.46 stars, 95 notes)
  2. Hard (3.11 stars, 242 notes)
  3. Insane (4.33 stars, 330 notes)
  4. Normal (1.94 stars, 136 notes)
  5. YAAAYYYY!! (4.88 stars, 356 notes)
Download: AOP - Hanamaru Pippi wa Yoiko dake (TV Version)
Download: AOP - Hanamaru Pippi wa Yoiko dake (TV Version) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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born to be karamatsu girl

thanks to A r M i N for Easy diff!
Kyouren
weh, legend mapper is back :3
Topic Starter
Yasora

KittyAdventure wrote:

weh, retarded mapper is back :3
fixed for you :v
[ -username- ]
i wanna guest diff it! o3o
i already did




Take my Star! ♥
[ -username- ]
General
Offset: 910
(it's not a big change, but the old offset was a little bit to late in Kiai-time)


user's Insane
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 03. (TV Version).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38414
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6495,17658,49747
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Hanamaru Pippi wa Yoiko dake (TV Version)
TitleUnicode:はなまるぴっぴはよいこだけ (TV Version)
Artist:AOP
ArtistUnicode:A応P
Creator:Yasora
Version:user's Insane
Source:おそ松さん
Tags:osomatsu san opening
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"should i rename this.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Yasora
okay added~
also pls update for:
-offset (using Regraz's timing for now [it's -20 from my offset], but ty for suggestions. also I already changed it for you :3)
-tag (I copy-pasted your name)
-added video in your diff

thank you for diff and star! let's try to throw this to ranked row XD
Vanillas
Hi~ From my queue~

[General]
  1. 00:38:568 Add kiai time here?
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:138 (2) - move it to X:285 Y:150 ? (As well as 00:11:359 (4) - if you do, and blank with 00:10:487 (3) -
  2. 00:16:940 Add clap here ?
  3. 00:35:778 (3) - what about a repeater here? As you follow bgm at 00:36:475 (4,5) - .
  4. 00:44:150 (1) - Ctrl + J here ? And move it to X:290 Y:100
  5. 00:58:103 (1,3) - they stack here, not looking good.
  6. 01:12:057 (1) - move it to X:95 Y:195 ?
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:510 (4) - move it to X:60 Y:95 ?
  2. 00:16:243 (1,2) - blanket
  3. 00:24:964 (2) - replace it with a circle and a slidder? repeater here seems not fit the song. I think Ctrl + G with 00:24:964 (2,3) - is better
  4. 00:27:929 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:36:126 (2) - stack with 00:35:778 (1) - ?
  6. 00:58:801 (4) - move it to X:255 Y:248 ? (Also make it not stack with 00:58:801 (4,1) - )
  7. 01:00:196 (4,1) - stack here not looking good.
  8. 01:04:382 (2) - Ctrl + J here?
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:992 (2) - move it to X: 229 Y:135 ?
  2. 00:18:859 (1,2,3) - move them a little closer? And 00:20:254 (1,2,3) -
  3. 00:51:126 (1) - move it to X:174 Y:166 ?
  4. 01:05:167 (4,5) - add hitsound here ?
  5. 01:17:550 (2) - move it to X: 461 Y:127
[Yay]
  1. 00:35:778 (1,2) - What about using a circle+ a slidder + a circle ? which seems fit the rhythm here.
  2. 01:05:167 (4,5) - add hetsound here?
  3. 01:05:603 (1) - missing note at 01:05:778
  4. 01:26:359 (1) - add a note here and move spinner to 01:26:446 ?
Not much to say, Nice map and song~~
GL for rank~ :)
A r M i N
While mapping i noticed this Is that intended ?

btw. my Easy is half way done

***EDIT***

Done No hitsounds I am bad at doing them

Please add the Tags: Armin and A_r_M_i_N

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Topic Starter
Yasora

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ From my queue~

[General]
  1. 00:38:568 Add kiai time here? I don't feel it gonna be awesome in there...
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:138 (2) - move it to X:285 Y:150 ? (As well as 00:11:359 (4) - if you do, and blank with 00:10:487 (3) - for me it's not looks different from currently placement..
  2. 00:16:940 Add clap here ? sure
  3. 00:35:778 (3) - what about a repeater here? As you follow bgm at 00:36:475 (4,5) - . if there is a repeater, sounds its not gonna feel "paused".. i mean like "te-te te-te tererete", if repeater: "te-te----te te tererete" just trying to be more matching with music's rhythm //my bad explanation ;-;
  4. 00:44:150 (1) - Ctrl + J here ? And move it to X:290 Y:100 sure
  5. 00:58:103 (1,3) - they stack here, not looking good. indeed it looks a bit overlaped but.. u know i dun have idea for now lol
  6. 01:12:057 (1) - move it to X:95 Y:195 ? sure
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:510 (4) - move it to X:60 Y:95 ? sure o.o
  2. 00:16:243 (1,2) - blanket forgive me
  3. 00:24:964 (2) - replace it with a circle and a slidder? repeater here seems not fit the song. I think Ctrl + G with 00:24:964 (2,3) - is better ok..
  4. 00:27:929 (2,3) - ^ I think no for this one >.<
  5. 00:36:126 (2) - stack with 00:35:778 (1) - ? feels weird when clicking it lol
  6. 00:58:801 (4) - move it to X:255 Y:248 ? (Also make it not stack with 00:58:801 (4,1) - ) kk
  7. 01:00:196 (4,1) - stack here not looking good. ^
  8. 01:04:382 (2) - Ctrl + J here? nuu
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:992 (2) - move it to X: 229 Y:135 ? kk
  2. 00:18:859 (1,2,3) - move them a little closer? And 00:20:254 (1,2,3) - alrait
  3. 00:51:126 (1) - move it to X:174 Y:166 ? I wanna the spacing similar with (2) to (3) too in here
  4. 01:05:167 (4,5) - add hitsound here ? changed it on (5)
  5. 01:17:550 (2) - move it to X: 461 Y:127 kk
[Yay]
  1. 00:35:778 (1,2) - What about using a circle+ a slidder + a circle ? which seems fit the rhythm here. seems weird for me ;-;
  2. 01:05:167 (4,5) - add hetsound here? same as in insane
  3. 01:05:603 (1) - missing note at 01:05:778 it's like in insane o.o
  4. 01:26:359 (1) - add a note here and move spinner to 01:26:446 ? sure
Not much to say, Nice map and song~~
GL for rank~ :)
thank you so much!!

alraittt everything has been updated
DeRandom Otaku


General

  1. Disable countdown in A r M i N's Easy (Also there is an unsnapped note in easy)
  2. 00:41:359 - why is there no kiai ;w;

Yay \o/

  1. Reduce HP to 6.5 ?
  2. 00:07:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add nc after 2 notes like these 00:06:475 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
  3. 01:00:545 (5) - move up to y:253 for better blanket with 01:00:719 (1) - ?
  4. 01:03:336 (4) - umm , maybe nc?
  5. 01:03:685 (1,2) - stack (2) properly with end of (1)
  6. 01:05:167 (4) - overmapped , there is no sound here in the background -w- or maybe my headphones are really bad

Insane

  1. 00:06:475 (1,3) - i hate this overlap ;w; maybe stack both ends? or remove overlap?
  2. 00:17:289 (3) - move down to y:97
  3. 01:20:080 (7) - move to x:112? like this one 01:19:905 (6) -
Thats all from me ~ i love this song so much >w< . Take a star

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Yasora

DeRandom Otaku wrote:



General

  1. Disable countdown in A r M i N's Easy (Also there is an unsnapped note in easy) done
  2. 00:41:359 - why is there no kiai ;w; nnooottt too strong enough to add kiai ;w;

Yay \o/

  1. Reduce HP to 6.5 ? HP 7 isn't really killing in here imo..
  2. 00:07:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add nc after 2 notes like these 00:06:475 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - seems good
  3. 01:00:545 (5) - move up to y:253 for better blanket with 01:00:719 (1) - ? kk
  4. 01:03:336 (4) - umm , maybe nc? ohh
  5. 01:03:685 (1,2) - stack (2) properly with end of (1) it already looks stacked but..
  6. 01:05:167 (4) - overmapped , there is no sound here in the background -w- or maybe my headphones are really bad I'm sure in there is drum sound can be heard ;w;

Insane

  1. 00:06:475 (1,3) - i hate this overlap ;w; maybe stack both ends? or remove overlap? I like this kind of overlap so for now not changing it lol also trying to make it similar with too 00:07:870 (1,3) - ;w;
  2. 00:17:289 (3) - move down to y:97 kk
  3. 01:20:080 (7) - move to x:112? like this one 01:19:905 (6) - I don't want the direction is same cuz it feels "too straight" when try to reach (7) from (6)
Thats all from me ~ i love this song so much >w< . Take a star

Good Luck!
thanks a lot for mod and star!!
Lefia
From my queue

MOD
Normal
00:46:068 Try smth like this



Hard

Change the HP into 5 or 5,5. 6 is for Insane diff

00:07:871 It will be nice if you move it into x:312 y:144
00:19:731 (3) ctrl + h then use distance snap (alt) for the good flow
00:37:173 (1) bisa dipindahin ga posisinya. soalnya nada nya tinggi waktu bagian ini. Jadi agak aneh rasanya kalau di dempet gitu. Atau pakai cara lain juga bisa

Insane

00:07:347 (4) move it into x: 192 y: 120 and (5) move it into x:308 y: 268, it will better (Biar simetris lah)

YAY

00:31:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Buat bagian ini lebih simetris

That's all! Good Luck!
Deppyforce


[Easy]
00:03:684 (3,4) - are u sure about this flow? its a bit rough imo
00:21:824 (2) - the pause feels random to me since u could fill it by making 2 a 4/1 slider and it'll feel better while playing
00:24:614 (1,2) - ^
00:32:987 (1) - uh the upbeat is obviously stronger so why u ignore it ?
01:14:498 - why ignore this? :x

[Normal]
00:12:057 (1,2,3) - the gap between these are so long, consider nc all 3 sliders would look nicer
00:24:092 - the vocal kinda ends here, would be better if u try end slider here too
01:17:289 (4,2) - i suggest u try avoid overlap here, since its kinda bad aesthetics wise

[Insane]
00:08:394 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - theres really high chance ppl would misread here, try change pattern? maybe slightly overlap 1 instead of stacking it
00:36:475 (3) - should be circles cuz its prety strong imooo
00:53:917 (1,2) - pls blanket
01:23:045 (6,1) - same as before

[Yay]
00:04:993 (7) - 00:20:342 (6) - ds ?
00:34:382 (1,2,3) - maybe ctrl+g rythm for vocals
00:35:952 - this is obviously strong and should be clickable ;c
01:01:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - um make hexagon for aesthetics?
01:08:917 (3,1) - this is a bit confusing (may looks like 1/2) maybe stack them for better readability

the set is fine except the aesthetics butchering imo
gl
A r M i N

Deppyforce wrote:



[Easy]
00:03:684 (3,4) - are u sure about this flow? its a bit rough imo If somebody else points this out again i am going to fix it
00:21:824 (2) - the pause feels random to me since u could fill it by making 2 a 4/1 slider and it'll feel better while playing Filled with 2 sliders
00:24:614 (1,2) - ^ I cant see whats wrong here
00:32:987 (1) - uh the upbeat is obviously stronger so why u ignore it ? Added 2 Sliders instead of that reverse slider
01:14:498 - why ignore this? :x Added circle
green=fix
purple=meh
red=not fixed

Hi
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370,292,30196,6,0,P|316:322|225:272,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,31242,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,108,31591,6,0,P|174:45|96:45,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,125,32638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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123,166,36475,2,0,L|128:98,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,127,36998,2,0,L|39:87,2,40,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,215,37696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
247,193,38568,5,4,0:0:0:0:
401,276,39266,1,4,0:0:0:0:
366,103,39963,2,0,P|322:57|250:46,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,274,42056,2,0,L|275:185,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,171,43452,2,0,P|150:189|210:173,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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410,282,46940,2,0,P|371:300|319:289,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,234,47638,2,0,L|254:120,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,140,48335,2,0,L|189:254,2,79.9999999999999,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,63,49731,6,0,L|351:200,2,120,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,42,51126,2,0,P|181:39|150:61,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,127,51824,2,0,P|191:133|227:108,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,114,52521,6,0,P|371:118|411:177,2,120,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,195,53917,2,0,P|253:191|213:132,2,120,2|8|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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482,358,56010,2,0,L|464:264,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,196,56707,2,0,P|390:174|344:185,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,147,58103,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,135,58452,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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192,135,60196,6,0,P|233:99|239:22,2,120,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,152,61591,1,2,2:0:0:0:
105,240,61940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,252,62289,2,0,P|264:236|217:336,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,323,63684,5,2,0:0:0:0:
158,148,64382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
315,226,65080,2,0,P|335:168|327:109,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,220,69963,2,0,P|188:222|152:206,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,123,70661,2,0,P|71:167|69:237,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,121,72056,5,4,0:0:0:0:
181,295,72754,1,4,0:0:0:0:
332,204,73452,2,0,L|422:131,2,79.9999999999999,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,157,74498,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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257,157,76940,2,0,P|296:159|331:140,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,56,77638,6,0,P|405:90|413:174,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,140,79033,2,0,P|285:106|277:22,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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309,94,83219,5,0,0:0:0:0:
331,180,83568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Yasora

MadaoX wrote:

From my queue

MOD
Normal
00:46:068 Try smth like this I feel it too sudden change rhythm lol



Hard

Change the HP into 5 or 5,5. 6 is for Insane diff nah insane is 7

00:07:871 It will be nice if you move it into x:312 y:144 move it into another place
00:19:731 (3) ctrl + h then use distance snap (alt) for the good flow trying to make it feels mirroring w/ 00:17:638 (1,2,3) -
00:37:173 (1) bisa dipindahin ga posisinya. soalnya nada nya tinggi waktu bagian ini. Jadi agak aneh rasanya kalau di dempet gitu. Atau pakai cara lain juga bisa oke di un-stack aja ya

Insane

00:07:347 (4) move it into x: 192 y: 120 and (5) move it into x:308 y: 268, it will better (Biar simetris lah) oke..

YAY

00:31:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Buat bagian ini lebih simetris baru nyadar (3) nya meleset XD

That's all! Good Luck!

Deppyforce wrote:



[Normal]
00:12:057 (1,2,3) - the gap between these are so long, consider nc all 3 sliders would look nicer kk
00:24:092 - the vocal kinda ends here, would be better if u try end slider here too but the gap to the next note is kinda bothering me ;;
01:17:289 (4,2) - i suggest u try avoid overlap here, since its kinda bad aesthetics wise ok

[Insane]
00:08:394 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - theres really high chance ppl would misread here, try change pattern? maybe slightly overlap 1 instead of stacking it um will consider again later
00:36:475 (3) - should be circles cuz its prety strong imooo already circle? ;w;
00:53:917 (1,2) - pls blanket orz XD
01:23:045 (6,1) - same as before same too

[Yay]
00:04:993 (7) - 00:20:342 (6) - ds ? sorry
00:34:382 (1,2,3) - maybe ctrl+g rythm for vocals but the currenty is same imo
00:35:952 - this is obviously strong and should be clickable ;c following the prev diff.. but I changed something in next note lol
01:01:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - um make hexagon for aesthetics? kk
01:08:917 (3,1) - this is a bit confusing (may looks like 1/2) maybe stack them for better readability ok

the set is fine except the aesthetics butchering imo
gl
thanks a lot all!
Sotarks
Hi! M4M from my queue~.

Yay

  1. 00:07:871 (1,2) - Ctrl + G those 2, you'll see magic flow appears !
  2. 00:38:045 (1,2) - Pretty lame flow here, like what about space (2) a bit more, this plays a bit meh.

Insane

  1. 00:02:289 (3) - What about Ctrl + G this slider and add the 2 notes on the head of it, makes a nice V flow and a build up for the next patern.
  2. 00:16:068 (7,1) - That spacing is a bit too low here
  3. 00:17:463 (4) - Moove this one a bit more at the bottom, like this overlap doesn't play too good.
  4. 00:16:766 (2,1) - Try to avoid those kind of overlaps, feels akward in the editor.
  5. 00:18:859 (1,2,3) - What about making just a simple linear flow here?
  6. 00:35:080 (1) - Tbh you don't need that NC here.
  7. 00:36:475 (3) - But you need the NC here, for the readability of the anti-jump
  8. 00:53:917 (1) - Same here for those kind of overlaps, and also the flow between this note and the previous one is a bit meh, if you like ctrl J this slider it would flow better tbh.
  9. 01:02:289 (1) - The fact that there's no note clicable on that big white tic, makes me sad.
  10. 01:13:277 (3) - Fail stack here, make it consitent with the previous patern please.

GL~
Topic Starter
Yasora

Sotarks wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue~.

Yay

  1. 00:07:871 (1,2) - Ctrl + G those 2, you'll see magic flow appears ! i don't feel the magic appear 8'(
  2. 00:38:045 (1,2) - Pretty lame flow here, like what about space (2) a bit more, this plays a bit meh. i don't see any prob in here.. but still consider to change it if the other annoyed too lol

Insane

  1. 00:02:289 (3) - What about Ctrl + G this slider and add the 2 notes on the head of it, makes a nice V flow and a build up for the next patern. ok
  2. 00:16:068 (7,1) - That spacing is a bit too low here moved a little
  3. 00:17:463 (4) - Moove this one a bit more at the bottom, like this overlap doesn't play too good. ;w;
  4. 00:16:766 (2,1) - Try to avoid those kind of overlaps, feels akward in the editor. kkkk
  5. 00:18:859 (1,2,3) - What about making just a simple linear flow here? too straight make me feel not good..
  6. 00:35:080 (1) - Tbh you don't need that NC here. kk
  7. 00:36:475 (3) - But you need the NC here, for the readability of the anti-jump ok
  8. 00:53:917 (1) - Same here for those kind of overlaps, and also the flow between this note and the previous one is a bit meh, if you like ctrl J this slider it would flow better tbh. yes
  9. 01:02:289 (1) - The fact that there's no note clicable on that big white tic, makes me sad. sorry lol
  10. 01:13:277 (3) - Fail stack here, make it consitent with the previous patern please. adjusted a bit but still can't stack it properly :'(

GL~
thanks a lot!
Mafumafu
As requested in game last month.

[Yay]
00:10:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays quite overmapped.
00:44:847 (3,4,1) - Spacing should be the same
01:24:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too crazy, combo break.

[Normal]
00:58:103 (1,3) - Do not overlap
01:05:603 (4) - Not recommend following vocal with reverse slider here. A long slider is enough.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Yasora

Regraz wrote:

As requested in game last month.

[Yay]
00:10:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays quite overmapped. but it fits with music imo
00:44:847 (3,4,1) - Spacing should be the same kk
01:24:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too crazy, combo break. will consider fix it if 2~3 ppl mention this again lol

[Normal]
00:58:103 (1,3) - Do not overlap alrait
01:05:603 (4) - Not recommend following vocal with reverse slider here. A long slider is enough. fixed

Good luck!
thanks a lot~!
Shira
from queueueueueue

[ A r M i N's Easy]
00:12:056 - in this section, i dont think all the NC's are necessary but hey what do i know
00:34:382 (3,1) - might be hard to read for easy
00:38:568 (1,3) - you can blanket better >:)
01:14:847 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:06:475 (1,2) - maybe blanket?
00:16:243 (1,2,1) - ^
00:20:429 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:24:615 (1,2) - but fix this blanket
00:27:406 (1,2) - not parallel D:
00:39:266 (2,3) - blanket
01:14:150 (4,1) - fix ze blanket

[Hard]
00:00:894 (1,2) - similar?
00:03:685 (1,2) - ^
00:05:080 (1,2) - ^ god bless
00:06:126 (3,3) - this overlap looks bad imo but you can keep it!
00:07:871 (1) - shouldnt this start 00:07:696 - ?
00:26:708 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:09:964 (3) - maybe move so it looks like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5332491 ?

[Insane]
00:02:289 (3,4) - bad flow imo
00:05:080 (3,5) - fix blanket
00:05:603 (5,1) - overlap sliderends?
00:06:998 (3) - ^
00:07:870 (1,4) - ^
00:27:754 (2,4) - why not overlap like 00:27:405 (1,2,3,4) - ?
00:52:870 (3,4) - dont see the need for big jump xd
01:10:312 (4) - make this more tilted clockwise?

[Yay]
niceeee difffff

ahh cant wait for rank
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