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Akasha-

Nomination Assessment Team

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Akasha- 2016-06-04T16:05:02+00:00

OMG, video spoiler D:
remove it please
actually, this video quality is really bad

but this map is great, keep going

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557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-06-04T17:47:32+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
OMG, video spoiler D:
remove it please
actually, this video quality is really bad

but this map is great, keep going

I know the video quality is bad I really want to make it better.but 24MB is maximum.but I won't remove the video even it was spoilers XD

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-06-10T15:49:02+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
i think so,so changed
05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well yes
05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well
remapped some of them,and ds is increased

wojciooo wrote:
combo
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
pls no,the bpm change is really small (<10),so no need to spam NC

thx

I also change some NC in the last part, cuz bpm change is so neglectable.

the code is from 05:20:573 - to the end of the song

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Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-06-11T20:15:46+00:00

sahuang wrote:

ProEzreal wrote:
05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
i think so,so changed
05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well yes
05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well
remapped some of them,and ds is increased

wojciooo wrote:
combo
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
pls no,the bpm change is really small (<10),so no need to spam NC

thx

I also change some NC in the last part, cuz bpm change is so neglectable.

the code is from 05:20:573 - to the end of the song

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499,343,335073,6,0,B|431:343|431:343|367:311|367:311|299:311,1,203.999993774414
253,311,335490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,26,335906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,192,336073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,336240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,90,336406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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455,123,336906,2,0,B|464:175|438:221,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,36,337240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,89,337406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,326,337573,2,0,B|293:267|293:267|289:224,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,63,337906,5,0,0:0:0:0:
289,228,338073,2,0,L|394:220,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,37,338406,2,0,B|395:56|350:32|350:32|319:77|267:88,1,203.999993774414
223,61,338823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,61,338906,2,0,L|197:166,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,319,339240,5,0,0:0:0:0:
327,153,339406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,302,339573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
178,206,339740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,318,339906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,113,340073,2,0,B|374:108|374:108|406:123,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,321,340406,6,0,B|294:371|224:318|224:318|181:324,1,203.999993774414
141,340,340823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,340,340906,2,0,P|90:316|37:327,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,208,341240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,32,341406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,207,341573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
117,102,341740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,71,341906,5,4,0:0:0:0:
398,230,342073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
431,132,342240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,229,342406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
169,119,342573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
222,298,342740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
279,211,342907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,264,343073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
198,103,343240,6,0,L|160:13,1,93.5000028533936,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,240,343573,2,0,L|345:326,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,79,343906,2,0,L|320:116,1,93.5000028533936,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,263,344239,2,0,L|187:227,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,93,344573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
163,212,344740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
230,38,344906,2,0,B|273:22|273:22|327:30,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,112,345240,5,4,0:0:0:0:
259,264,345407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
369,113,345573,2,0,B|414:109|414:109|464:130,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,314,345906,5,4,0:0:0:0:
331,195,346073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,369,346239,2,0,B|220:384|220:384|167:377,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,295,346573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
235,143,346740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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168,155,347240,5,4,0:0:0:0:
367,249,347406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
299,99,347573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,300,347739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
139,184,347906,2,0,L|35:136,1,93.5000028533936,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,89,348573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
247,309,348739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
342,176,348906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
121,195,349072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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88,158,349572,2,0,P|38:184|1:225,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,322,349905,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,121,350072,1,10,0:0:0:0:
190,296,350239,5,10,0:0:0:0:
231,99,350406,1,10,0:0:0:0:
285,294,350572,5,4,0:0:0:0:
374,113,350739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
378,314,350906,5,2,0:0:0:0:
511,167,351071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,37,351238,6,0,L|215:112,1,93.5000028533936,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,354,351572,2,0,L|289:289,1,93.5000028533936,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,162,351905,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,355322,12,0,357739,0:0:0:0:
395,64,357906,5,6,0:0:0:0:
420,296,358068,1,6,0:0:0:0:
117,64,358392,5,6,0:0:0:0:
93,296,358554,1,6,0:0:0:0:
377,281,358878,5,6,0:0:0:0:
372,48,359041,1,6,0:0:0:0:
51,253,359365,5,6,0:0:0:0:
95,24,359527,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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140,186,360176,2,0,P|98:189|64:212,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,360500,6,0,L|264:104,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,59,360993,2,0,P|224:63|175:144,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,201,361480,2,0,P|216:197|265:116,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,361964,2,0,B|176:175|176:175|192:276,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,303,362453,6,0,L|339:296,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,338,362786,2,0,P|419:289|395:238,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,172,363119,6,0,P|357:195|432:108,1,170
224,0,364126,6,0,L|232:148,1,127.5
300,172,364708,2,0,L|294:272,1,85
236,328,365326,6,0,P|292:350|379:283,1,170
288,224,366317,6,0,P|315:173|427:190,1,170
224,296,368355,6,0,P|128:287|216:144,1,340
180,224,371512,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,224,372500,6,0,P|252:116|316:228,1,297.5
112,348,375625,6,0,B|72:216|72:216|120:64,1,297.5
316,157,379283,6,0,P|255:180|188:143,1,127.5
260,104,382558,6,0,L|248:288,1,170

update!!

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-07-22T13:01:17+00:00

Hi NM（Forum req）

Finale

00:06:887 (1) - put it to x：312 y：136 to blanket with 00:06:372 (4) - and 00:07:402 (3) - put it to x：432 y:212
00:20:087 (4,2) - stack
00:30:201 (1,2,3) - ↑
00:38:430 (5) - NC and del NC 00:39:115 (1) -
00:42:715 (6) - 00:42:887 (1) - ↑
00:44:087 (5) - NC
00:46:658 (1,3) - stack
00:50:087 (3,3) - ↑
00:56:258 (1) - take it to x：408 y：292 blanket
00:59:001 (1,6) - stack at 00:59:001 (1) -
01:01:744 - 01:02:430 - suggest do not pass this rhythm tick like 01:05:858 (1,3,4) - ，and this part 01:00:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC need fixed
01:09:115 (2) - take it to x：192 y：384 blanket？
01:12:545 (1,3) - same
01:15:458 (1,3) - stack
01:48:066 (1) - ↑
02:07:374 (5,1) - stack
04:14:907 - add a red line because here is strong sound's begin（big white tick）,so 04:41:573 (2) - NC，check this part NC
04:16:073 (4,5) - this flow suggest change
04:18:240 (4,2) - stack
05:29:739 - i think here should be have click， so you can change rhythm place 05:29:406 (6,7) - ctrl+g,05:29:406 - don't forget hitsound

Nice map,star,good luck！

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[ Drop ] 2016-07-23T18:51:40+00:00

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
Hi NM（Forum req）

Finale
00:06:887 (1) - put it to x：312 y：136 to blanket with 00:06:372 (4) - and 00:07:402 (3) - put it to x：432 y:212
00:20:087 (4,2) - stack
00:30:201 (1,2,3) - ↑
00:38:430 (5) - NC and del NC 00:39:115 (1) -
00:42:715 (6) - 00:42:887 (1) - ↑
00:44:087 (5) - NC
00:46:658 (1,3) - stack
00:50:087 (3,3) - ↑
00:56:258 (1) - take it to x：408 y：292 blanket
00:59:001 (1,6) - stack at 00:59:001 (1) -
01:01:744 - 01:02:430 - suggest do not pass this rhythm tick like 01:05:858 (1,3,4) - ，and this part 01:00:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC need fixed
01:09:115 (2) - take it to x：192 y：384 blanket？
01:12:545 (1,3) - same
01:15:458 (1,3) - stack
01:48:066 (1) - ↑
02:07:374 (5,1) - stack
04:14:907 - add a red line because here is strong sound's begin（big white tick）,so 04:41:573 (2) - NC，check this part NC
04:16:073 (4,5) - this flow suggest change
04:18:240 (4,2) - stack
05:29:739 - i think here should be have click， so you can change rhythm place 05:29:406 (6,7) - ctrl+g,05:29:406 - don't forget hitsound

Nice map,star,good luck！

all fixed Thanks for your mod!!

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-07-27T08:39:59+00:00

Hey from modding queue for NM!

00:55:401 (2,3) - blanket
00:59:858 (5,6,3) - banket
01:06:887 (4) - missing clap
01:30:514 (1) - damn that melody's so good
02:17:891 (5,1) - these two overlap a bit much but eh this is a 5* diff it's fine
02:21:528 (1) - I don't like this feels undermapped here ;p
02:24:437 (1) - ^
and same for 02:27:346 (1) -
03:04:800 (1,1) - maybe reduce stacking value to avoid this?
03:15:710 (2,4,5,6) - stacks weirdly
04:35:907 (5) - missing hitsound maybe on purpose doe ^^

SICK mapset. Take my stars

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557 posts

Joined February 2013

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[ Drop ] 2016-07-27T19:31:57+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
Hey from modding queue for NM!

00:55:401 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:59:858 (5,6,3) - banket can't banket anymore ;w;
01:06:887 (4) - missing clap fixed
01:30:514 (1) - damn that melody's so good Thanks lol
02:17:891 (5,1) - these two overlap a bit much but eh this is a 5* diff it's fine fixed
02:21:528 (1) - I don't like this feels undermapped here ;p I don't know what to map here
02:24:437 (1) - ^
and same for 02:27:346 (1) -
03:04:800 (1,1) - maybe reduce stacking value to avoid this? fixed
03:15:710 (2,4,5,6) - stacks weirdly fixed
04:35:907 (5) - missing hitsound maybe on purpose doe ^^ ?

SICK mapset. Take my stars

HOLY SHIT thanks for your 5 stars

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,069 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2016-08-01T03:23:13+00:00

Hello from your game chat (NM)

:W: OWO OAO OUO ;w; Oxo OLO odo oHo

[Finale]
00:04:316 (2,3,4,5) - 距離太遠了，而且我覺得這不是個好擺放，follow如下圖，建議00:04:658 (5) - 把這個弄成直的

SPOILER

00:11:515 (1,2,3) - blanket沒弄好
00:26:601 (4) - 建議弄成直的
00:31:058 (4) - 滑條頭少了clap
00:49:744 (2,3) - blanket沒弄好
00:56:258 (1) - 這滑條沒有對稱也導致00:56:086 (4,1) - 這兩個blanket也沒弄好
01:08:601 (1) - 1滑條尾跟01:09:115 (2) - 這個距離跟01:09:458 (3,4) - 這兩個距離不一樣，弄成一樣的會比較好
01:05:172 (3,4,1) - ^
01:11:172 (6,1,2) - blanket沒弄好
01:11:344 (1) - 這裡的SV建議用0.8x這裡屬於比較慢的地方
01:30:514 (1) - 這邊開始如果是我我會把像這種的01:30:514 (1,2,3) - 每一段的第一個滑條弄得很快，第二個比較慢第三個就適當
02:45:891 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡造型沒做好，哪沒沒做好不用我說吧，你應該看得出來
02:48:800 (1,2) - 為何這邊有特別的NC?
03:15:346 (1,2,3) - 這裡造型也沒做好
03:28:989 (3) - 弄個藝術吧，直滑條這樣好乾
03:35:986 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好
03:47:824 (1,2,3) - 這邊犯了兩個我說的錯誤，可以往回看
03:53:041 (3) - 這波浪滑條也沒對稱
04:22:240 (7,1) - blanket沒弄好
04:28:907 (4,1) - ^
04:39:573 (3,4) - ^
04:42:240 (3,4,1) - 我想這邊是波浪讓兩個滑條blanket吧，但很明顯是失敗了
04:47:406 (3,4) - blanket沒弄好
04:56:240 (1,2) - ^
05:24:406 (1) - 這滑條為什麼這樣灣?我沒有看到任何這樣灣的用意
06:00:500 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好
06:01:480 (3,4) - ^
06:08:355 (1,1) - ^

總體來講滑條用得不錯，但很多造型沒弄好，還有小小的SV錯誤

~~這張圖很神奇的NC問題非常少~~

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557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-08-01T13:17:01+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
Hello from your game chat (NM)

:W: OWO OAO OUO ;w; Oxo OLO odo oHo

[Finale]
00:04:316 (2,3,4,5) - 距離太遠了，而且我覺得這不是個好擺放，follow如下圖，建議00:04:658 (5) - 把這個弄成直的 no
SPOILER
00:11:515 (1,2,3) - blanket沒弄好 K
00:26:601 (4) - 建議弄成直的no
00:31:058 (4) - 滑條頭少了clap K
00:49:744 (2,3) - blanket沒弄好 K
00:56:258 (1) - 這滑條沒有對稱也導致00:56:086 (4,1) - 這兩個blanket也沒弄好?
01:08:601 (1) - 1滑條尾跟01:09:115 (2) - 這個距離跟01:09:458 (3,4) - 這兩個距離不一樣，弄成一樣的會比較好 ?
01:05:172 (3,4,1) - ^ ?
01:11:172 (6,1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
01:11:344 (1) - 這裡的SV建議用0.8x這裡屬於比較慢的地方 no
01:30:514 (1) - 這邊開始如果是我我會把像這種的01:30:514 (1,2,3) - 每一段的第一個滑條弄得很快，第二個比較慢第三個就適當 no,
02:45:891 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡造型沒做好，哪沒沒做好不用我說吧，你應該看得出來 K
02:48:800 (1,2) - 為何這邊有特別的NC? K
03:15:346 (1,2,3) - 這裡造型也沒做好?
03:28:989 (3) - 弄個藝術吧，直滑條這樣好乾 K
03:35:986 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
03:47:824 (1,2,3) - 這邊犯了兩個我說的錯誤，可以往回看 no
03:53:041 (3) - 這波浪滑條也沒對稱 no
04:22:240 (7,1) - blanket沒弄好 K
04:28:907 (4,1) - ^ K
04:39:573 (3,4) - ^ K
04:42:240 (3,4,1) - 我想這邊是波浪讓兩個滑條blanket吧，但很明顯是失敗了 K
04:47:406 (3,4) - blanket沒弄好 K
04:56:240 (1,2) - ^ K
05:24:406 (1) - 這滑條為什麼這樣灣?我沒有看到任何這樣灣的用意
06:00:500 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
06:01:480 (3,4) - ^ K
06:08:355 (1,1) - ^ K

總體來講滑條用得不錯，但很多造型沒弄好，還有小小的SV錯誤

~~這張圖很神奇的NC問題非常少~~

want to sleep zzz

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-08-12T14:46:44+00:00

As requested

Add "choikapo" to your tags since you ranked a map with old name
00:17:858 (1,2) - nazi, the blacket is slightly off
00:20:087 (4) - Turn into Circle+ 1/2 slider so follow the drum at the white tick
01:19:572 (1) - Maybe turn into 2 4/1 slider? having a long slider to have so many return arrows feels meh for me
01:25:058 (1) - ^
01:50:796 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - The 1/3 stream is easy to get missed because it can be misread as 1/4 as 01:49:821 (2,3,4) - , same goes to 01:54:502 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - and later patterns
03:04:800 (1) - Remove NC?
05:47:906 (5) - 05:49:239 (5) - NC? to make consistency

Sorry for short mod

GL~

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557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-08-12T15:23:11+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
As requested

Add "choikapo" to your tags since you ranked a map with old name fixed !
00:17:858 (1,2) - nazi, the blacket is slightly off fixed !
00:20:087 (4) - Turn into Circle+ 1/2 slider so follow the drum at the white tick fixed !
01:19:572 (1) - Maybe turn into 2 4/1 slider? having a long slider to have so many return arrows feels meh for me that's alright
01:25:058 (1) - ^
01:50:796 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - The 1/3 stream is easy to get missed because it can be misread as 1/4 as 01:49:821 (2,3,4) - , same goes to 01:54:502 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - and later patterns fixed !
03:04:800 (1) - Remove NC? fixed !
05:47:906 (5) - 05:49:239 (5) - NC? to make consistency fixed !

Sorry for short mod

GL~

Thanks for your mod XD

ppgamer

85 posts

Joined October 2015

ppgamer 2016-08-26T14:56:49+00:00

About your video. You should use vlc media player and follow these step: http://www.howtogeek.com/65505/how-to-s ... -with-vlc/ this should make your video use less memory without making your video render too bad!

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[ Drop ] 2016-08-29T07:02:42+00:00

ppgamer wrote:
About your video. You should use vlc media player and follow these step: http://www.howtogeek.com/65505/how-to-s ... -with-vlc/ this should make your video use less memory without making your video render too bad!

Thanks!!!
i will do it before it rank

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2016-09-04T12:31:53+00:00

mark first

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-09-04T13:01:18+00:00

remap
05:20:573 - ~05:52:572 -

320573 to 352572

111,340,320573,6,0,B|92:229,1,101.999996887207
246,128,320906,2,0,B|227:239,1,101.999996887207
140,76,321239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,88,321406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,228,321573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,50,321739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,173,321906,6,0,L|401:290,2,101.999996887207
293,317,322406,2,0,B|193:353|206:275|89:318,1,203.999993774414
54,338,322823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
9,329,322906,2,0,L|23:211,1,101.999996887207
229,142,323239,6,0,L|243:260,1,101.999996887207
155,79,323573,2,0,P|209:45|245:46,1,101.999996887207
151,185,323906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,140,324073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,46,324239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,243,324406,6,0,B|220:298|220:298|296:257|366:293,1,203.999993774414
402,308,324823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,298,324906,2,0,P|460:241|446:195,1,101.999996887207
225,109,325239,2,0,P|267:149|314:160,1,101.999996887207
505,17,325573,2,0,P|448:33|415:68,1,101.999996887207
225,109,325906,6,0,B|174:95|174:95|117:109,1,101.999996887207
41,234,326239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,46,326406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,246,326573,2,0,B|215:260|215:260|272:246,1,101.999996887207
456,142,326906,2,0,B|405:128|405:128|348:142,1,101.999996887207
459,253,327239,5,0,0:0:0:0:
283,88,327406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,284,327573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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283,88,328156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,121,328239,2,0,P|203:140|139:119,1,101.999996887207
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58,361,329239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,277,329406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,361,329573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,170,329740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,277,329906,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,277,329989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,277,330073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,112,330239,2,0,L|339:-5,1,101.999996887207
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188,23,330906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,213,331073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,74,331239,6,0,B|411:55,1,101.999996887207
512,209,331572,2,0,B|401:190,1,101.999996887207
250,156,331906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,308,332073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,191,332239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,308,332406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,207,332572,6,0,B|114:157|114:157|122:92,2,101.999996887207
202,39,333072,2,0,B|252:6|302:26|302:26|339:66|406:38,1,203.999993774414
435,23,333489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,34,333572,2,0,B|485:69|485:69|478:101|478:101|485:144,1,101.999996887207
282,200,333906,6,0,P|233:191|178:201,1,101.999996887207
320,341,334239,2,0,P|369:350|424:340,1,101.999996887207
282,200,334573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,321,334739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,334906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,260,335073,6,0,B|123:158|53:163|93:56,1,203.999993774414
121,26,335489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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437,4,335906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,133,336073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,124,336239,2,0,L|470:234,1,101.999996887207
286,286,336572,6,0,B|337:300|337:300|394:286,1,101.999996887207
470,124,336905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,312,337072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,138,337239,2,0,B|296:113|249:134,1,101.999996887207
56,242,337573,2,0,B|108:267|154:245,1,101.999996887207
249,134,337905,5,0,0:0:0:0:
229,296,338072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,113,338239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
10,334,338405,2,0,P|107:360|205:336,1,203.999993774414
229,296,338822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,263,338905,2,0,P|309:244|373:265,1,101.999996887207
505,360,339239,6,0,L|498:259,1,101.999996887207
272,165,339572,2,0,L|265:267,1,101.999996887207
374,89,339905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,180,340072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,47,340239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,266,340406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,91,340572,5,0,0:0:0:0:
289,91,340655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,91,340739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,180,340905,2,0,P|140:231|153:297,1,101.999996887207
320,241,341239,2,0,P|383:232|432:248,1,101.999996887207
277,350,341572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,113,341739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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150,74,342239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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362,74,342906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,256,343073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,256,343573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,256,344239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,236,344405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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113,295,344906,2,0,P|162:302|206:290,1,93.5000028533936
303,161,345239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,329,345406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,345573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,376,345740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,45,346239,2,0,B|214:53|214:53|169:43,1,93.5000028533936
23,109,346573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,139,346739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,245,346906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,43,347072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,338,347573,2,0,L|122:245,1,93.5000028533936
225,181,347906,2,0,L|228:291,1,93.5000028533936
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100,322,349905,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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190,296,350239,5,10,0:0:0:0:
231,99,350406,1,10,0:0:0:0:
285,294,350572,5,4,0:0:0:0:
374,113,350739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
378,314,350906,5,2,0:0:0:0:
511,167,351071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,99,351238,6,0,L|217:0,1,93.5000028533936,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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399,155,351906,5,6,0:0:0:0:
113,229,352072,1,6,0:0:0:0:
295,378,352239,5,6,0:0:0:0:
217,6,352407,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,352572,5,0,0:0:0:0:

MisterDinner

107 posts

Joined November 2014

MisterDinner 2016-09-05T15:33:37+00:00

nm

rfef

this should be named something other than what it is, because death by glamour and that other thing are in here.
00:52:144 (1) - move this over so the end is overlapping the start of the previous slider
im really paying attention, i cant see anything, but this does have like 3 pages of mods.
02:09:129 (2) - place the start inside of the previous slider's bend
02:10:299 (1) - take this one , tilt in 90 degrees clockwise and then place it around the and of the previous
02:21:528 (1) - the sliders starting here shouldnt be here, since the part before follows the background, theres no reason to switch instrument if its still there.
06:04:708 (2) - snap the end to the next blue tick
you need to turn the tick rate up to be able to have that outro.

good map.

[ Drop ]

557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-09-05T16:25:14+00:00

MisterDinner wrote:
nm

rfef
this should be named something other than what it is, because death by glamour and that other thing are in here.
00:52:144 (1) - move this over so the end is overlapping the start of the previous slider Fixed
im really paying attention, i cant see anything, but this does have like 3 pages of mods.
02:09:129 (2) - place the start inside of the previous slider's bend ? Why
02:10:299 (1) - take this one , tilt in 90 degrees clockwise and then place it around the and of the previous Fixed
02:21:528 (1) - the sliders starting here shouldnt be here, since the part before follows the background, theres no reason to switch instrument if its still there. I Think that's just the PV problem
06:04:708 (2) - snap the end to the next blue tickFixed
you need to turn the tick rate up to be able to have that outro.Fixed

good map.

About the title

-N a n a k o-

503 posts

Joined February 2012

-N a n a k o- 2016-09-09T15:28:47+00:00

log

2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: hi
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: OAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOLLAOAOAO
2016-09-09 23:08 -N a n a k o-: hi
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: can you mod now ;w;
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: ?
2016-09-09 23:09 -N a n a k o-: mod what
2016-09-09 23:09 [ Drop ]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/976159 toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye]
2016-09-09 23:10 -N a n a k o-:

2016-09-09 23:10 [ Drop ]: plz ;w;
2016-09-09 23:14 -N a n a k o-: 00:23:344 (1) - 我覺得呢到個DS太近, 因為前面個pattern起碼都明顯知道個Note個音係邊, 但係呢到就唔太明顯, 有機會令人早撳
2016-09-09 23:14 [ Drop ]: okay Fixed :3
2016-09-09 23:16 -N a n a k o-: how to mod your map
2016-09-09 23:17 -N a n a k o-: 01:55:477 (5,6,1) - 個人認為呢到整大個Distance比較靚仔
2016-09-09 23:18 [ Drop ]: okay

2016-09-09 23:18 -N a n a k o-: 01:56:257 (1) - sorry for 強迫症 QAQ, check out 01:55:672 (1) - this slider
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: don't sorry
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: it's my bad lol
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: ficed !
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: x
2016-09-09 23:19 -N a n a k o-: 02:00:158 (5) - 唔對住個6?
2016-09-09 23:20 -N a n a k o-: 02:17:346 (3,4) - bad flow
2016-09-09 23:20 [ Drop ]: yes XD
2016-09-09 23:21 [ Drop ]: okay
2016-09-09 23:22 -N a n a k o-: 03:08:437 (2) - stack with 7 will be better look
2016-09-09 23:23 -N a n a k o-: 03:17:437 (3) - stack?
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: jmmm
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: hmm
2016-09-09 23:24 [ Drop ]: i don't want to stack them XP
2016-09-09 23:24 -N a n a k o-: ok
2016-09-09 23:25 -N a n a k o-: 05:31:572 (2) - 點解無啦啦有Whistle
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: a
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: Sorry XD
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: deleted Xp
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: can't mod too much
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: that's all
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: okay\
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: post that in thread :3
2016-09-09 23:27 -N a n a k o-: god mapper kapo
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: D:

唔識mod

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Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-09-09T15:30:16+00:00

-N a n a k o- wrote:
log
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: hi
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: OAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOLLAOAOAO
2016-09-09 23:08 -N a n a k o-: hi
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: can you mod now ;w;
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: ?
2016-09-09 23:09 -N a n a k o-: mod what
2016-09-09 23:09 [ Drop ]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/976159 toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye]
2016-09-09 23:10 -N a n a k o-:
2016-09-09 23:10 [ Drop ]: plz ;w;
2016-09-09 23:14 -N a n a k o-: 00:23:344 (1) - 我覺得呢到個DS太近, 因為前面個pattern起碼都明顯知道個Note個音係邊, 但係呢到就唔太明顯, 有機會令人早撳
2016-09-09 23:14 [ Drop ]: okay Fixed :3
2016-09-09 23:16 -N a n a k o-: how to mod your map
2016-09-09 23:17 -N a n a k o-: 01:55:477 (5,6,1) - 個人認為呢到整大個Distance比較靚仔
2016-09-09 23:18 [ Drop ]: okay
2016-09-09 23:18 -N a n a k o-: 01:56:257 (1) - sorry for 強迫症 QAQ, check out 01:55:672 (1) - this slider
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: don't sorry
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: it's my bad lol
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: ficed !
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: x
2016-09-09 23:19 -N a n a k o-: 02:00:158 (5) - 唔對住個6?
2016-09-09 23:20 -N a n a k o-: 02:17:346 (3,4) - bad flow
2016-09-09 23:20 [ Drop ]: yes XD
2016-09-09 23:21 [ Drop ]: okay
2016-09-09 23:22 -N a n a k o-: 03:08:437 (2) - stack with 7 will be better look
2016-09-09 23:23 -N a n a k o-: 03:17:437 (3) - stack?
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: jmmm
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: hmm
2016-09-09 23:24 [ Drop ]: i don't want to stack them XP
2016-09-09 23:24 -N a n a k o-: ok
2016-09-09 23:25 -N a n a k o-: 05:31:572 (2) - 點解無啦啦有Whistle
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: a
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: Sorry XD
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: deleted Xp
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: can't mod too much
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: that's all
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: okay\
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: post that in thread :3
2016-09-09 23:27 -N a n a k o-: god mapper kapo
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: D:

唔識mod

Thanks for our pro nnk mod

Nerthar

67 posts

Joined May 2014

Nerthar 2016-09-11T13:05:04+00:00

First of all, I'd like to say that you did a very good job on this map, here's my mod, might be little, this is a fast check and those are mostly suggestion (especially about overlap fixing that don't look good), so take what you want

Finale

00:05:172 (7,3) - Blanket could be better if you move 00:04:658 (5,6,7) - a bit more on the right
00:18:372 (3,4,5) - More like this ? http://puu.sh/r7sCH/f57adc0e1a.jpg
00:18:887 (4) - NC
00:19:230 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:058 (2) - Ctrl+Shift+R, Selection Centre, 20°
00:27:458 (1,2,3,4) - Move this a bit on the right so 1 doesn't overlap with 00:27:115 (5) -
00:56:086 (4,1) - Blanket could be a little bit better
01:12:545 (1,3,4) - A bit moved to the right, so 1 is in the middle of 01:12:030 (3,4) -
From 01:16:830 (1) - to 01:27:801 (1) - , it feels really empty for a 5*, you should consider reworking it and maybe following a bit of 1/2 beat
01:30:514 (1,2,3) - Spacing those a bit ? Maybe 1.0x or 1.1x
01:31:684 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:854 (1,2,3) - ^, won't point this anymore
01:39:875 - 02:07:764 - Increasing a little bit SV ? Maybe 1.1x ? (I'd understand if you don't tbh)
Didn't find anything between 2 and 4:30 mins, this part was pretty cool
04:44:906 (3,4) - Space a bit from 04:45:573 (1) -
04:45:573 (1,2) - Isn't it confusing ?
06:06:317 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This part looks cool, but what about placing circles instead of long sliders that don't always make sense ? (Or maybe reducing sliders length

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-09-11T13:19:11+00:00

Long sliders in the end are really cool, so no need to change

Nerthar

67 posts

Joined May 2014

Nerthar 2016-09-11T13:28:24+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Long sliders in the end are really cool, so no need to change

Yup I agree, was jusht wondering if anything could be mapped instead, and didn't find anything tbh

[ Drop ]

557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-09-11T13:37:52+00:00

Nerthar wrote:
First of all, I'd like to say that you did a very good job on this map, here's my mod, might be little, this is a fast check and those are mostly suggestion (especially about overlap fixing that don't look good), so take what you want

Finale
00:05:172 (7,3) - Blanket could be better if you move 00:04:658 (5,6,7) - a bit more on the right Fixed
00:18:372 (3,4,5) - More like this ? http://puu.sh/r7sCH/f57adc0e1a.jpgFixed
00:18:887 (4) - NC Why
00:19:230 (1) - Remove NC Why
00:25:058 (2) - Ctrl+Shift+R, Selection Centre, 20°Fixed,another way
00:27:458 (1,2,3,4) - Move this a bit on the right so 1 doesn't overlap with 00:27:115 (5) - Fixed
00:56:086 (4,1) - Blanket could be a little bit betterFixed
01:12:545 (1,3,4) - A bit moved to the right, so 1 is in the middle of 01:12:030 (3,4) - Fixed
From 01:16:830 (1) - to 01:27:801 (1) - , it feels really empty for a 5*, you should consider reworking it and maybe following a bit of 1/2 beat Just giving people a rest XD
01:30:514 (1,2,3) - Spacing those a bit ? Maybe 1.0x or 1.1x ummm probably no
01:31:684 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:32:854 (1,2,3) - ^, won't point this anymore ^
01:39:875 - 02:07:764 - Increasing a little bit SV ? Maybe 1.1x ? (I'd understand if you don't tbh) ^
Didn't find anything between 2 and 4:30 mins, this part was pretty cool
04:44:906 (3,4) - Space a bit from 04:45:573 (1) - Fixed
04:45:573 (1,2) - Isn't it confusing ? Fixed
06:06:317 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This part looks cool, but what about placing circles instead of long sliders that don't always make sense ? (Or maybe reducing sliders length Same as sahuang said

Thanks for your mod

- Angelia

118 posts

Joined August 2013

- Angelia 2016-10-20T06:53:59+00:00

辣鸡摸

00:11:344 (3) - 可以加一个clap 不过感觉这里整体声音很小也没啥用
00:33:630 (1) - 这根绿线的声音调成30%吧个人感觉。
00:44:258 (2) - 可能是幻听感觉调成65%左右比较好感觉有点声音大了
03:49:563 (3,1) - 打的时候感觉这两个靠在一起了有点损美观的感觉
04:07:148 (1) - 推荐最后静音
05:36:239 (6) - ctrl+G
05:49:905 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉这个跳不好单纯的打不顺（是我太弱了吗）
06:22:551 (1) - 如果有精力的话改改这个滑条应该会更好(maybe-w-)

强

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Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-10-21T07:07:47+00:00

- Angelia wrote:

辣鸡摸
00:11:344 (3) - 可以加一个clap 不过感觉这里整体声音很小也没啥用 yeah
00:33:630 (1) - 这根绿线的声音调成30%吧个人感觉。
00:44:258 (2) - 可能是幻听感觉调成65%左右比较好感觉有点声音大了
03:49:563 (3,1) - 打的时候感觉这两个靠在一起了有点损美观的感觉
04:07:148 (1) - 推荐最后静音
05:36:239 (6) - ctrl+G
05:49:905 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉这个跳不好单纯的打不顺（是我太弱了吗）
06:22:551 (1) - 如果有精力的话改改这个滑条应该会更好(maybe-w-)
强

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Thanks for your mod!

LittleFox

69 posts

Joined May 2012

LittleFox 2016-10-30T05:28:09+00:00

02:10:299 (1) - I guess this slider is way too out of the mapping area (Ingame is noticeable)

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557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-10-30T08:52:54+00:00

LittleFox wrote:
02:10:299 (1) - I guess this slider is way too out of the mapping area (Ingame is noticeable)

it's not a problem if you can play it

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-10-31T11:55:38+00:00

05:20:573 - till the end

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Kaitjuh

856 posts

Joined December 2012

Kaitjuh 2016-10-31T13:35:17+00:00

LittleFox wrote:
02:10:299 (1) - I guess this slider is way too out of the mapping area (Ingame is noticeable)

As long as it's not offscreen it's not a problem iirc

On a standard sized window

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2016-11-20T19:37:40+00:00

Hi

01:50:991 (1) - Remove NC, I misread and thought they were separate or smth
01:55:477 (5,6,7) - U sure u want to overlap these?
01:55:672 (1) - ^ and add NC at 01:56:257 (4) -
02:21:528 (1) - I think this slider is much better without overlapping
02:24:437 (1) - ^
02:30:255 (1) - Why suddenly no more shape here? :<
02:36:437 (2,3) - Why not stack on slider heads? The overlap looks bad imo.
02:44:527 (6,7,8) - I think u could curve this down a bit more cuz 02:44:346 (4,5,6) - are rly curved
03:07:890 (7,2) - why no stack ;-;
03:49:563 (3,1) - uhhh lol this overlap xd I could see it during gameplay
04:19:573 (3,4,5,6) - This plays poorly in a slow song imo, maybe ctrl G 04:19:739 (4,5) - ?
04:21:573 (5,6) - Why are these spaced further than 04:20:240 (1,2) - in the same combo?
04:24:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow's a bit off here when playing imo, why not 04:24:907 (3,6) - ctrl G and 04:25:073 (4,5) - ctrl G?
04:27:240 (6,8) - I think these will flow better if curved
04:30:240 (3,4,5,6) - This doesnt flow well imo cuz 04:29:573 (1,2) - has linear flow, therefore I think the jumps should stick to linear flow as well. Maybe try http://puu.sh/soNw5/d129ec3fc8.jpg ?
04:34:240 (3,4) - Why suddenly large spacing here? Snare sound is at 04:34:573 - lol. Reduce spacing?
04:42:907 (1) - Missing whistle
05:41:906 (1) - Move this closer to 05:41:572 (6) - a bit? Looks better imo
05:46:239 (2) - Theres whistle on slider body lol
06:15:625 (1) - Remove the curl? :< Just to have a clearer slider path

GL~

ppgamer

85 posts

Joined October 2015

ppgamer 2016-11-21T12:38:57+00:00

Oh man. I've got some stars. Soooo...... *shoot*

[ Drop ]

557 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

[ Drop ] 2016-11-21T13:13:27+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
Hi
01:50:991 (1) - Remove NC, I misread and thought they were separate or smth
01:55:477 (5,6,7) - U sure u want to overlap these?
01:55:672 (1) - ^ and add NC at 01:56:257 (4) -
02:21:528 (1) - I think this slider is much better without overlapping
02:24:437 (1) - ^
02:30:255 (1) - Why suddenly no more shape here? :<
02:36:437 (2,3) - Why not stack on slider heads? The overlap looks bad imo.
02:44:527 (6,7,8) - I think u could curve this down a bit more cuz 02:44:346 (4,5,6) - are rly curved
03:07:890 (7,2) - why no stack ;-; 03:08:073 (1,2) - blanket /me run
03:49:563 (3,1) - uhhh lol this overlap xd I could see it during gameplay shiiiiii
04:19:573 (3,4,5,6) - This plays poorly in a slow song imo, maybe ctrl G 04:19:739 (4,5) - ?nope.i think i'll keep that
04:21:573 (5,6) - Why are these spaced further than 04:20:240 (1,2) - in the same combo?
04:24:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow's a bit off here when playing imo, why not 04:24:907 (3,6) - ctrl G and 04:25:073 (4,5) - ctrl G?
04:27:240 (6,8) - I think these will flow better if curvedis beautiful <3
04:30:240 (3,4,5,6) - This doesnt flow well imo cuz 04:29:573 (1,2) - has linear flow, therefore I think the jumps should stick to linear flow as well. Maybe try http://puu.sh/soNw5/d129ec3fc8.jpg ?
04:34:240 (3,4) - Why suddenly large spacing here? Snare sound is at 04:34:573 - lol. Reduce spacing?
04:42:907 (1) - Missing whistle
05:41:906 (1) - Move this closer to 05:41:572 (6) - a bit? Looks better imo
05:46:239 (2) - Theres whistle on slider body lol
06:15:625 (1) - Remove the curl? :< Just to have a clearer slider path

GL~

others fixed,thx for your mod :3

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ppgamer wrote:
Oh man. I've got some stars. Soooo...... *shoot*

thanks you qwq

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yf_bmp 2016-11-22T14:21:53+00:00

star

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yf_bmp wrote:

star

OAO,Thanks you very much

Kencho

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Kencho 2016-11-27T08:42:51+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:

star

[General]

normal-hitnormal2.wav is too short.(16.98ms) Hitsounds should be at least 100 ms length.
Unsnapped files :
toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye (choikapo).osb

[Finale]

02:15:710 - Timing lines with different setting.(volume level)
06:22:558 - ^
Unsnapped timing lines :
05:20:573
05:41:906
05:51:239
05:52:656
05:55:072
05:55:156
05:57:739
Unsnapped objects :
05:20:573 to 05:55:322
02:00:158 (5) - Why not use circles here?
02:21:528 (1) - The slider body a bit overlap itself.(see my screenshots)
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/svUsg/35a67ec33b.jpg
02:24:437 (1) - ^
02:33:164 to 03:21:164 - The hitsounds on this section a bit too loud, so you should think about decrease the volume.
03:58:258 (1,1) - Make a better blanket?
04:30:740 (4,1) - The spacing may be too close, so you may try to move 04:30:907 (1) - downward or change the slider shape.
05:43:573 (2,3,5,6) - Stack? I think they should be move to x:256.

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[ Drop ] 2016-11-27T09:27:49+00:00

Kencho wrote:
yf_bmp wrote:

star
[General]
normal-hitnormal2.wav is too short.(16.98ms) Hitsounds should be at least 100 ms length.

Unsnapped files :
toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye (choikapo).osb

[Finale]
02:15:710 - Timing lines with different setting.(volume level)
06:22:558 - ^

Unsnapped timing lines :
05:20:573
05:41:906
05:51:239
05:52:656
05:55:072
05:55:156
05:57:739

Unsnapped objects :
05:20:573 to 05:55:322

02:00:158 (5) - Why not use circles here?
02:21:528 (1) - The slider body a bit overlap itself.(see my screenshots)
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/svUsg/35a67ec33b.jpg
02:24:437 (1) - ^
02:33:164 to 03:21:164 - The hitsounds on this section a bit too loud, so you should think about decrease the volume.
03:58:258 (1,1) - Make a better blanket?
04:30:740 (4,1) - The spacing may be too close, so you may try to move 04:30:907 (1) - downward or change the slider shape.
05:43:573 (2,3,5,6) - Stack? I think they should be move to x:256.
Call me back.

all fixed wait sahung

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-11-27T09:42:53+00:00

asked drop to fix for me.
thx

Kencho

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Kencho 2016-11-27T11:30:43+00:00

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Kencho wrote:
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應該是Unused lol

Looks good #1

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