* changed OD to 7, OD6 was a bit low setting for around 180 bpm.Volta wrote:
selamat pagi.
[TK's Inner Oni]
this is cool!
00:55:674 - seems like this timing point is redundant since there is no notes until next green line - fixed.
00:04:242 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - just a different idea of mine, how about change to dkd-ddk, i think it's fits better to the structure - would like to keep this for the consistency of the kiai pattenr.
00:56:320 - shouldn't this moved to 00:56:404 - to make 4-plet like at 01:06:770 (484,485,486,487) - ? - 5plet fits the beat sound well, and to make a variety.
01:37:528 (729,730) - swap? somehow i think is better to end pattern with d. probably because it is similar to 01:04:747 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472) - fixed.
01:43:062 (790,791,792) - i'd say 1/8 is more correct snapping. but 1/6 is looks better visually so i'm fine with it. just want to make sure this is intended - yes it goes with 1/6.
01:45:028 (814,815,816) - interested to make 1/6? the melody support it. - the pattern should be kept as it is, i dont think 1/6 works perfectly.
hmm. that's it for now. i'll check it again.. needs to find rest spots in futsuu..
* 01:16:376 - removed some copypasta finishers because the melody goes to a bit different flow here.
sorry for the late, thanks for the mod!
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... Oni%5D.rar