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Nofool wrote:

would nerf all diffs a bit from kantan to oni
the spread is like not bad, but difficulties are all harder than they should imo we'll try, do take into account the 1/4 sounds that inflate the star rating

[Futsuu]
* 00:02:303 (2) -/ 00:02:977 (4) -/ 00:04:999 (2) -/ 00:05:758 (4) - i would remove those 4, makes the part awkward to play, if not kinda hard for a futsuu. This way you have more break, so instead you can add d at - 00:06:601 - and move - 00:06:769 (7) - to - 00:06:938 - to properly follow the song. If you do also remove - 00:07:106 (8) - to separate the previous rhythm from the following part. accepted, though I'll have to see what happens to kantan because the start is basically that now. Might have to do something else if it's too similar after a while.
* 00:39:635 (101) - remove ? consistency with - 00:45:028 -. Maybe you did not do it there because there were too many notes coming after but even at the first spot i think so it really is not necessary. sure, I have no idea why I didn't map it at the second place but you're probably right.
* For the whole kiai i heavily suggest to apply what i suggested for the beginning. It makes the rhythm much more clear to read, right now it feels too messy for beginners. Kiai part is done differently now, made it less dense but there is still 1 out of 2 parts which will have the 1/4 sounds. Otherwise it's too easy and I'm not really mapping the song anymore.
* 01:28:343 - ^ same for this part.
* 01:40:140 (93) -/ 01:41:489 (98) - i would remove those 2 again, same purpose ^.
* 01:49:073 (122) - uh why is this not at - 01:49:242 - instead ? changed both, also moved 01:43:427 (93) - 1/4 beat forward.
In case you don't like at all what i suggested for the beginning/kiais, i still suggest you to find another way to map those part with more breaks to properly separate the different type of rhythms.

[Oni]
More Inner than Oni at that point x_x even with the muzu being slightly harder than it should be, this difficulty is like way harder already lol..
* 00:02:640 (5) -/ 00:03:652 (12) - i would remove those ones for example, they are not even needed following the song, and by doing this you are creating some sort of repetitive structure (x x xx) that repeat itself and is easier to understand. Then remove - 00:05:168 (22) - and - 00:05:337 (24) - too for the same reason. Going to try that.
* 00:11:489 (63,64,65,66,67) - i would just use a slider instead of all that and make the following dkddk a d d k 1/2 instead, it fits like much more the song lol. Idk where those kd kd come from at this sounds like some monocolor full 1/4 stream here. had it to fit the sounds but yeah, slider is more simple lol
* 00:34:410 - well from here it's kinda messy again, i really dont get what those patterns are following lol.. example for - 00:34:410 - to - 00:35:758 - :

something like that instead at least fits the melody, right now i honestly have no idea what that ddkdd stands for. And then for the following notes from - 00:35:758 - to - 00:37:107 - i would do something like that :

d d dd _ k k kk _ k D, pretty simple to read and fits the song better imo. Well if you got my point there try to apply it for this whole section, big notes spam are fine. Like basically until - 00:50:590 - this really needs to get more breaks and simpler patterns. Right know honestly it feels like random patterns all the way while playing it. I put the patterns there according to how I felt it fit with the music but if you say it's random then I guess ...
* kiais : refer to my first suggestion as the beginning of the song is like kiais musicaly (you could probably even add a kiai section there btw uh?). Going to be safe and keep these as the same for now.
* 01:33:315 (122) - i would remove that one, really not needed. agree
* 01:40:393 (33) - welp move this to - 01:40:562 - instead ? yeah ok
The issue in this Oni is that i think you tried to follow the piano melody while keeping not too long patterns, espcially noticeable in that last kiai section x_x. The result is just awkward imo, i would rather focus more on the normal rhythm or find some repetitive structure that still fit, and use sliders to cover some long piano note parts instead. true, to be honest I had a hard enough time mapping this in an Oni level already without having it go aboard into Inner Oni territory, so it's good to see suggestions for improvement.
Thanks for your input and star, this mod was indeed very helpful with fixing my Oni diff in particular (now to see what changes Ritsu will make).
Renka

Nofool wrote:

would nerf all diffs a bit from kantan to oni
the spread is like not bad, but difficulties are all harder than they should imo

[chaica's Kantan]
OD3,5
* 00:06:770 (9,10) - remove ? needs break, especially before finishers. - ok.
* 00:21:601 (30) - remove ? => ddk d kkd d kdk=> xxx x xxx x xxx is more consistent. Also - 00:23:624 (33) - add finisher ? like at - 00:12:837 (21) -. - ^
* 00:32:388 (42) - remove ? refer to previous suggestion. - ^
* 00:35:084 (45) - remove ? break before odd rhythm, like at - 00:40:477 -. -^
* 01:00:702 (81,82) - remove ? refer to first suggestion. same for - 01:11:489 (102,103) -. - umm,keep..
* 01:43:174 (9,10,11,12) - maybe slider or spinner instead ? lots of notes in a row ;_; - remove 01:44:185 - .


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good luck
thank you for modding~


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Senritsu
we did irc mod on both Oni and muzu
the chat is too long and it's kinda cut off lols
asdf
21:14 Senritsu: delete everything
21:15 Senritsu: and map
21:15 Senritsu: >:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
21:15 -[ Dumpling ]-: you'll do it with me?
21:15 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok
21:15 Senritsu: no
21:15 Senritsu: >:)
21:15 Senritsu: jk
21:15 -[ Dumpling ]-: instantly dq'd because Dumpling didn't do enough
21:15 Senritsu: why every other diff has finish on the first note but mine and futsuu not >_>
21:16 Senritsu: w/e i added one lol
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: what
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: all diffs have one
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: aside from yours
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: xD
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: I added one before
21:16 Senritsu: oh i havent updated the futsuu then
21:16 Senritsu: lol
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: on Futsuu
21:16 Senritsu: WHY EVERYONE LEAVES ME :(((((((
21:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: idk
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: hey I gave you a chance to catch up to me :v
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: with Futsuu
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: but yeah adding one there is probably the way to go
21:17 Senritsu: yeah
21:17 Senritsu: ....
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: and also the spinners
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: at the end
21:17 Senritsu: what're we doing exactly i dont understand sigh
21:17 -[ Dumpling ]-: I think they need to end at the same place
21:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: add a finisher on the first note of Muzu
21:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: that's what
21:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: w
21:18 Senritsu: mine yours and tks has different ending
21:18 Senritsu: gg
21:18 Senritsu: yeah i added that
21:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
21:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: let's just end spinner same point as TKS
21:18 Senritsu: thats what i want to suggest too
21:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: he's gonna eat me if I question his :v
21:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: okok
21:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: changing mine
21:19 Senritsu: mine too
21:19 Senritsu: shall we start at the same time too
21:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: hmm
21:19 Senritsu: mine is same with tks
21:19 Senritsu: and yours are earlier
21:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok then I'll follow
21:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: w
21:20 Senritsu: i mean later
21:20 Senritsu: lol
21:20 Senritsu: ok
21:20 Senritsu: best irc mod
21:20 Senritsu: all aboard TKS diff as reference
21:20 -[ Dumpling ]-: TKS mapper sekai
21:21 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait
21:21 Senritsu: gg
21:21 -[ Dumpling ]-: do you need me to change your diff for you :<
21:21 Senritsu: no thanks i changed that
21:21 Senritsu: lol
21:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: good :/
21:22 Senritsu: i will give my diff to you later
21:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok my spinner is the same as you two
21:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: for easier diffs I think we'll just leave it
21:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: but since harder ones have it we might as well make them the same
21:22 Senritsu: ok
21:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: hmm
21:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm looking at part after first kiai
21:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: for Oni
21:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: there may be some spread issue with Muzu
21:24 Senritsu: okok
21:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'd probably change the patterns so instead of ooooo I would have ooo_o
21:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: should be better
21:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: since yours is just simple triplets
21:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: with substantial break
21:27 *Senritsu coughs
21:27 *-[ Dumpling ]- pats
21:27 -[ Dumpling ]-: there there
21:28 Senritsu: i forgot to tell you what i change.
21:28 Senritsu: .........
21:28 *-[ Dumpling ]- slappu
21:29 Senritsu: 00:17:725 - this part i change to [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500021 this]
21:29 Senritsu: or do you have any suggestion
21:29 Senritsu: i tell you this bcs Oni is really dense
21:31 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait
21:31 -[ Dumpling ]-: wtf how did I ever map that so densely xd
21:32 Senritsu: xd
21:32 Senritsu: baka
21:32 *Senritsu slaps you
21:32 -[ Dumpling ]-: >:(
21:32 Senritsu: 00:23:202 too
21:32 Senritsu: 00:23:202 -
21:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: think I would make this part less dense lol
21:33 Senritsu: ok lol
21:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: cause even in TKS's diff this part is reasonably simple
21:33 Senritsu: do it :<
21:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: give me time :<
21:33 Senritsu: yeah sure
21:33 Senritsu: nvm the second part
21:33 Senritsu: its my fault lol
21:35 Senritsu: 00:28:427 - this too
21:36 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm wondering if I should make 00:23:624 same as first part
21:36 -[ Dumpling ]-: 00:23:624
21:37 -[ Dumpling ]-: 00:23:624-
21:37 -[ Dumpling ]-: 00:23:624 -
21:37 -[ Dumpling ]-: ffs
21:37 -[ Dumpling ]-: probably enough copy paste mapping from me wwwww
21:37 Senritsu: looooooool
21:37 Senritsu: xD
21:37 Senritsu: well its up to you
21:37 Senritsu: im not though
21:37 Senritsu: because this part has 'heavier' (?????) music than the part before
21:37 Senritsu: more tense
21:37 Senritsu: or whatever
21:40 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
21:40 Senritsu: we're doing the real m4m now lol
21:40 Senritsu: do you think i should remove some notes on my muzu on this part 00:34:410
21:40 Senritsu: ?
21:41 Senritsu: or add some
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: matte
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: I can't catch up
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: now you're leaving me behind :v
21:41 Senritsu: oh
21:41 Senritsu: sorry
21:41 Senritsu: :(((
21:41 Senritsu: okok take your time
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: I still didn't answer your question about beginning lol
21:41 Senritsu: what beginning
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: after kiai sounding beginning thingy
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: wwwwww
21:41 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait
21:42 Senritsu: ok
21:42 -[ Dumpling ]-: you're saying that 00:23:624 - onwards is different to 00:12:837 - in your diff?
21:42 -[ Dumpling ]-: cause if it is then I'll keep what I have for the second bit
21:42 -[ Dumpling ]-: of the repeating melody
21:42 Senritsu: yeah
21:43 Senritsu: hm
21:43 Senritsu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500134 like this]
21:43 Senritsu: well you should consider yours and tks being too similar
21:45 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
21:45 -[ Dumpling ]-: even like that my Oni is still too dense w
21:45 -[ Dumpling ]-: guess I'll do copying regardless
21:45 Senritsu: wwwwwwww
21:45 -[ Dumpling ]-: dumpling for noobest mapper 2k16
21:46 Senritsu: D:
21:47 Senritsu: i want to tell you a story
21:47 Senritsu: but i forgot that this is going to be published
21:47 Senritsu: so later
21:47 Senritsu: wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
21:47 -[ Dumpling ]-: wwwww
21:47 -[ Dumpling ]-: on Line sure
21:47 Senritsu: okok
21:47 -[ Dumpling ]-: I just need to figure out where to copy so I don't paste over what I already have
21:48 Senritsu: ok
21:49 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok done
21:49 Senritsu: wb
21:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: what's the next thing you suggested
21:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: lemme see
21:50 Senritsu: what was it
21:50 Senritsu: WWWW
21:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok after that you mentioned you have a story to tell
21:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: so I assume there's nothing else yet
21:50 Senritsu: youre curious?
21:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: I need to test this
21:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: well
21:51 Senritsu: i stopped because you said you werent done
21:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: uh
21:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
21:51 Senritsu: loooooool
21:51 Senritsu: i havent fully checked thissssss
21:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: well that can wait but we need to fix this before TKS and his kanojo decide that they will be eating me tomorrow
21:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: for my sins towards taiko mapping community
21:52 Senritsu: WWWWWWWW
21:52 Senritsu: we're not yet finished
21:52 Senritsu: 00:31:966 - on your diff
21:52 Senritsu: and the part after it
21:53 -[ Dumpling ]-: what about it?
21:53 -[ Dumpling ]-: it's changed compared to your version now lol
21:53 Senritsu: oh
21:53 Senritsu: ok
21:53 Senritsu: lollll
21:54 -[ Dumpling ]-: http://puu.sh/pKhu0/28ac521cc2.jpg
21:54 -[ Dumpling ]-: that's what it is now
21:54 -[ Dumpling ]-: doesn't look too bad when compared to your diff spread wise
21:55 -[ Dumpling ]-: I think that part should be good
21:56 Senritsu: well w/e lets check it later =w=
21:56 Senritsu: anyway i messed up at one point so
21:56 Senritsu: lol
21:56 Senritsu: i added some breaks but
21:56 Senritsu: the gap with Oni becomes larger
21:56 Senritsu: killmeplease
21:56 -[ Dumpling ]-: where?
21:57 -[ Dumpling ]-: see if I can do something about it
21:57 -[ Dumpling ]-: because I probably can lol
21:57 Senritsu: im confused
21:57 Senritsu: 00:45:028 -
21:57 Senritsu: if i add more breaks, it will be futsuu
21:57 Senritsu: if i remove some breaks, modder will get mad at me
21:57 Senritsu: HELP
21:57 Senritsu: DD:
21:58 -[ Dumpling ]-: same tbh
21:59 -[ Dumpling ]-: though I don't know where to put breaks lol
21:59 -[ Dumpling ]-: hmm
21:59 Senritsu: 00:47:725 (85,95) -
21:59 -[ Dumpling ]-: http://puu.sh/pKhMc/cc280476f8.jpg
21:59 -[ Dumpling ]-: changed mine a bit if you wanna look at it
22:00 Senritsu: holy
22:00 Senritsu: where is that lol
22:00 -[ Dumpling ]-: the first blue line is the point you were talking about
22:00 -[ Dumpling ]-: 00:47:893 (85) - ?
22:00 -[ Dumpling ]-: 00:45:028 (65) -
22:01 Senritsu: thats exactly the same with what i suggest to you lol
22:02 -[ Dumpling ]-: what do you mean
22:02 -[ Dumpling ]-: you lost me now :<
22:02 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah from 00:45:028 (65) - onwards I put in more breaks
22:02 -[ Dumpling ]-: hope it would have been more flexible for you
22:02 Senritsu: hmm yeah
22:02 Senritsu: im still figuring things out
22:02 -[ Dumpling ]-: so modder won't come crying at how there is too many breaks
22:03 Senritsu: im lost
22:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: same
22:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: RIP us
22:04 Senritsu: can you make the futsuu easier, perhaps?
22:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait let me just fix a pattern
22:04 Senritsu: mhm
22:05 -[ Dumpling ]-: also readded a note at 00:47:725 (85) - so no more break there lol
22:05 *Senritsu dies
22:06 *-[ Dumpling ]- use Revive owo
22:06 Senritsu: removing these 00:45:534 (117,122) - on Futsuu helps alot qwq
22:07 *-[ Dumpling ]- watch Senritsu gain half hp
22:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: 1/2 :D
22:07 Senritsu: yay
22:07 Senritsu: let the 3/2 rest in Muzukashii
22:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
22:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: do you mean the notes (117,122) or the time point?
22:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: cause 00:45:534 - is very different to the notes
22:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: on here
22:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: just highlight and show me
22:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: in image
22:08 Senritsu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500322 them]
22:10 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok sure done
22:10 -[ Dumpling ]-: sitll works
22:10 Senritsu: yay
22:11 -[ Dumpling ]-: tell me what you're gonna change in muzu :v
22:12 -[ Dumpling ]-: regarding that part
22:12 Senritsu: hm
22:13 -[ Dumpling ]-: might do something about Oni too depending on what you do
22:13 Senritsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500361
22:13 Senritsu: that part rite?
22:13 -[ Dumpling ]-: lemme see
22:14 Senritsu: if you need more i will add some
22:14 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
22:14 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm comparing now orz
22:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: it looks reasonable enough
22:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: spread wise
22:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: across each diff
22:16 Senritsu: ok
22:16 Senritsu: next
22:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: ya next
22:19 Senritsu: hurr
22:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: kiai parts are fine right?
22:20 -[ Dumpling ]-: and is your 01:06:770 - part different to 00:55:983 - ?
22:21 Senritsu: kinda
22:21 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
22:21 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm really the only lazy one
22:21 *-[ Dumpling ]- slap self
22:21 Senritsu: loooool
22:22 Senritsu: copy pasting couldnt work here "\
22:22 Senritsu: :\
22:22 Senritsu: for me
22:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: why
22:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: guilt?
22:23 -[ Dumpling ]-: or you're actually creative w
22:23 Senritsu: no
22:23 Senritsu: idk
22:23 Senritsu: lol
22:23 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
22:23 Senritsu: but they have similar pattern
22:23 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok for 01:17:556 -
22:23 Senritsu: dw
22:23 Senritsu: ?
22:23 -[ Dumpling ]-: gonna actually do ooooo_ooo_o instead of ooooo_ooooo
22:23 -[ Dumpling ]-: I said ooo_ooo_o before
22:23 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: actually no
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: I said ooo_o_ooo before
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: but I think to fit the melody at an Oni level
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: I need a five note combo at first
22:24 Senritsu: oh and
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: so 5,3,1
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: TK's has 5,5,1
22:24 Senritsu: why dont you delete 01:20:084 (22) -
22:24 -[ Dumpling ]-: ?
22:25 Senritsu: it can give break
22:25 Senritsu: s
22:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: but I wanna lead into next part qwq
22:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: with 01:22:781 (42) - too
22:25 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait
22:26 Senritsu: well ok
22:26 Senritsu: i dont mind with that
22:27 Senritsu: 01:27:500 (56) - Futsuu K pls thankc
22:29 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah I'm still focusing on spread mainly but I'll look into that in a bit
22:29 -[ Dumpling ]-: about Futsuu
22:29 Senritsu: okok
22:29 Senritsu: ?
22:29 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah I changed that to large kat now
22:29 -[ Dumpling ]-: >_>
22:30 -[ Dumpling ]-: 01:20:084 (21) -
22:30 -[ Dumpling ]-: and similar parts
22:30 -[ Dumpling ]-: TK's diff has a large stream for leading in, so I felt I probably need to keep a note there to match it
22:30 -[ Dumpling ]-: at an Oni level
22:30 Senritsu: yup
22:30 Senritsu: people will kill me if i add one on muzu as well
22:31 -[ Dumpling ]-: xD
22:31 Senritsu: oni 01:27:668 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - can you del some o3o
22:31 Senritsu: check tks and mine lol
22:32 -[ Dumpling ]-: maybe I should make that 1/3
22:32 -[ Dumpling ]-: then people will take us both out
22:32 Senritsu: loooooool
22:32 Senritsu: good idea
22:32 -[ Dumpling ]-: I can fool modder into thinking that is 1/3 w
22:32 Senritsu: =w=
22:32 Senritsu: bad dumple
22:32 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah
22:32 -[ Dumpling ]-: nah
22:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: doesn't sound right
22:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: not 1/3 at all
22:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: I was just slow to catch up with melody part
22:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok I'll think of something to do here
22:33 -[ Dumpling ]-: brb
22:33 Senritsu: lol
22:33 Senritsu: ok
22:36 Senritsu: do you want me to help?
22:36 Senritsu: :<
22:38 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait
22:38 -[ Dumpling ]-: back online
22:39 -[ Dumpling ]-: probably wind is being baka w
22:39 Senritsu: w
22:39 Senritsu: welcome back
22:39 Senritsu: have you done thinking
22:40 -[ Dumpling ]-: I thought you were doing thinking o.O
22:40 -[ Dumpling ]-: 01:27:668 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) -
22:40 Senritsu: wat
22:40 -[ Dumpling ]-: I changed that bit
22:40 Senritsu: how
22:40 -[ Dumpling ]-: kdddk_d_d
22:41 Senritsu: 01:28:343 (80) - finish
22:42 -[ Dumpling ]-: qwq
22:42 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm odd one out orz
22:42 -[ Dumpling ]-: added
22:44 Senritsu: wait
22:44 Senritsu: shit
22:44 Senritsu: im confused
22:45 -[ Dumpling ]-: nani?
22:45 -[ Dumpling ]-: I added a finisher at (80) lol
22:46 Senritsu: no im confused with myself
22:47 Senritsu: 01:36:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont you think it's too dense? qwq
22:47 -[ Dumpling ]-: galauritsu
22:47 Senritsu: WWWWW
22:48 Senritsu: im hungry
22:48 Senritsu: ffs ~_~
22:48 -[ Dumpling ]-: hmm
22:48 -[ Dumpling ]-: removed 01:36:685 - 01:37:191 - then
22:49 -[ Dumpling ]-: also
22:49 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
22:49 -[ Dumpling ]-: idk how to say hungry in ID :v
22:49 Senritsu: 01:38:455 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
22:49 Senritsu: lapar
22:49 -[ Dumpling ]-: laparitsu
22:49 Senritsu: hungrytsu
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: bakadumple
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: uses too many kdk
22:50 Senritsu: i read that as idk
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: I agree with you that it's too dense though I need a way to change it
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: idk myself
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: yes
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: idk anything
22:50 -[ Dumpling ]-: idk about game
22:51 -[ Dumpling ]-: idk about idk
22:51 Senritsu: gluck thinking
22:52 -[ Dumpling ]-: trying different things
22:52 -[ Dumpling ]-: from 01:38:455 (13) -
22:52 Senritsu: good
22:52 -[ Dumpling ]-: could have kdk_kkd_(kiai) which is what I prefer
22:52 -[ Dumpling ]-: or kdkkd_d_(kiai)
22:52 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm not too sure anymore lols
22:53 Senritsu: why not kdk_k_d
22:54 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah probably better
22:54 -[ Dumpling ]-: kdk count +1
22:55 -[ Dumpling ]-: Orz
22:55 Senritsu: 01:39:129 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - rip break though
22:56 -[ Dumpling ]-: ok
22:56 -[ Dumpling ]-: when I was mapping this I felt like a little child in a candy store
22:56 *Senritsu dies
22:56 -[ Dumpling ]-: "I want this" "but I want that too"
22:57 Senritsu: looool xD
22:57 -[ Dumpling ]-: fast forward
22:57 -[ Dumpling ]-: replace candy store with "what sounds I should map in the music"
22:57 -[ Dumpling ]-: and you have me now
22:57 Senritsu: wow the second kiai is really messed up
22:57 Senritsu: xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
22:58 -[ Dumpling ]-: :3
22:58 Senritsu: :3
22:58 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm looking through that part now
22:58 -[ Dumpling ]-: 01:41:236 (34) - I change to kat before you ask
22:59 Senritsu: second kiai TKS be like no chill
23:00 -[ Dumpling ]-: 1/6 1/6 1/6 1/6
23:00 -[ Dumpling ]-: and then you will fc anyway because right hand OP
23:00 -[ Dumpling ]-: i'm too used to alternate qwq
23:00 Senritsu: waaht
23:00 Senritsu: i cant
23:00 Senritsu: handel 1/6+1/4
23:00 Senritsu: handle
23:01 -[ Dumpling ]-: ripritsu
23:01 -[ Dumpling ]-: 01:43:090 -
23:01 -[ Dumpling ]-: do you think kddk_kdddk is too hard for Oni w
23:01 -[ Dumpling ]-: there''s 3/4 break before that
23:02 -[ Dumpling ]-: so nothing between that and 01:42:837 (47) -
23:02 Senritsu: kkddk_kdddk?
23:03 -[ Dumpling ]-: sure
23:03 -[ Dumpling ]-: also gonna remove 01:44:101 (59) -
23:03 -[ Dumpling ]-: since last large note spam part actually has some 1/4
23:04 Senritsu: no im asking if it's kkddk_kdddk?
23:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: which I put in
23:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: oh
23:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: no there was only kddk for first stream
23:04 Senritsu: reallly o3o
23:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: but I put kkddk there now
23:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: yes
23:04 -[ Dumpling ]-: really
23:05 Senritsu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500752 idk i suggest this though]
23:06 -[ Dumpling ]-: lemme test it
23:06 -[ Dumpling ]-: goodness it's already 2am
23:06 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
23:06 Senritsu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500758 or this]
23:07 Senritsu: should we end this here? .3.
23:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: no
23:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: we have a bit left
23:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: let's finish
23:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: dw I'll stay awake for your story lol
23:07 Senritsu: okok
23:07 Senritsu: oh lol
23:07 Senritsu: we can do it tomorrow qwq
23:07 Senritsu: you need to sleep
23:07 *Senritsu slaps you
23:07 -[ Dumpling ]-: lol
23:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: meanwhile a bottle of coke is next to my laptop
23:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: staring at me
23:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: "please drink me"
23:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: wwww
23:08 Senritsu: orzorzorz
23:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: back to topic i'm trying both of those
23:08 -[ Dumpling ]-: in test mode
23:10 -[ Dumpling ]-: http://puu.sh/pKly9/74f261adb3.jpg
23:10 -[ Dumpling ]-: I put it like that
23:11 -[ Dumpling ]-: where (48) is the time where we copied it
23:12 Senritsu: okok
23:13 -[ Dumpling ]-: also
23:13 -[ Dumpling ]-: if you wanna ask about the part 01:47:050 (76) - onwards
23:13 Senritsu: ?
23:14 -[ Dumpling ]-: in my version there is a big break from 01:46:544 (75) -
23:14 -[ Dumpling ]-: oh look sausage is online
23:14 Senritsu: and hes gone
23:14 -[ Dumpling ]-: rip sausage
23:14 Senritsu: okok
23:14 -[ Dumpling ]-: so
23:15 -[ Dumpling ]-: it means I don't think 01:47:050 (76) - to 01:49:579 (99) - is too hard for players
23:15 -[ Dumpling ]-: this diff is nerfed enough already *runs*
23:15 Senritsu: altho probably you want to make 01:49:579 (100) - as a k
23:15 Senritsu: and remove the next noe
23:15 Senritsu: te
23:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: remove 01:49:747 ?
23:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: 01:49:747 -
23:16 -[ Dumpling ]-: yeah I did that already xD
23:16 Senritsu: okok
23:16 Senritsu: good
23:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: about 01:49:579 (99) - , think I'll leave as don to contrast high pitch sounds at 01:49:242 (96,97,98) -
23:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: probably shouldnt need a note at 01:49:579 (99) - anyway but I'll keep it
23:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: since I removed the one 1/2 beat later
23:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: aaaand it's still saying this lol
23:18 -[ Dumpling ]-: http://puu.sh/pKm0x/a8d53ac306.png
23:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: wait
23:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: nvm
23:19 Senritsu: lol
23:19 Senritsu: xD
23:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: just realised yours isn't new version yet
23:19 *-[ Dumpling ]- slap self
23:19 Senritsu: :P
23:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: I really have to rest after this
23:19 -[ Dumpling ]-: >w<
23:20 Senritsu: [http://puu.sh/pKm4P.zip tutturu~]
23:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: yayyy
23:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: do savelog too
23:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: and post :3
23:22 -[ Dumpling ]-: then you earn a kudosu
23:22 Senritsu: yay
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
All changed diffs updated~

Also ironed out the spread issues in irc, thanks Senritsu for that :3
snowball112
Heya, mod from pm request, just going to focus on oni for now.


In my opition, this diff plays out a bit strange in parts like beginning until 00:11:320 because it feels like you're mapping the instrument independent from the drums, I think you should try to incorporate these more for better flow. From this, I would suggest:
  1. I think you should change 00:02:556 to d for contrast to the stronger sound of 00:02:725 and also add a d on 00:03:062 for the drums, I think this flows better.
  2. 00:03:736 (11,12) ctrl+g, the first note ist higher and also has a fairly strong clap, would also be nice for kd dk structure within 00:03:736 (11,12,13,14).
  3. I think 00:04:242 (14,15,16) sounds and plays out much better as kdk for strong claps on 00:04:242 (14,16).
The part from 00:06:095 to 00:07:444 feels a bit weird because from what you've mapped so far, I would have expected that you try to capture the strong instrument sound on 00:06:854 with a k. I suggest that you:
  1. Move 00:06:517 to 00:06:433 and change 00:06:264 (26,27,28) to kkd and change 00:06:601 to d as well for comparatively low instrument sound
  2. Move 00:06:938 to 00:06:854 and remove the note on 00:06:770.
  3. 00:07:022 (32,33,34,35) dk d K, the notes on 00:07:022 and 00:07:275 are relatively low compared to 00:06:854 and 00:07:107, why use a k on 00:07:275 when there is nothing to emphasize. Also, it would make more sense to make 00:07:444 K and D because you have a low instrument sound here as well.
  4. Similarly, I think 00:08:792 (43,45,47) should be K K D, the first two are only finishes, but the last has a low piano sound, so I think D on the last one would make more sense.
Most of the above stuff also applies to your kiai time.
  1. I think it would sound much better if you move 00:10:730 to 00:10:225 for following the instrument and change 00:10:646 to d and add a d on 00:11:067 for following the strong beats here. This works better than stacking triples here imo.
  2. I think 00:34:747 (8,9) would sound much better as kd.
  3. If you're going to follow the main instrument, 00:39:972 (37,38,39,40) is snapped wrong. If you listen carefully, you would need to move 00:40:140 to 00:40:056 and 00:40:393 to 00:40:309 and add a note on 00:40:477.
  4. Shouldn't 01:41:573 be a k to keep structure with 01:40:477 (28,29) etc?
  5. I think 01:43:006 (48,49,50) should be ddk for consistency with 01:42:753 (46,47), and 01:43:511 (52,53,54,55,56) could be ddkdk or something for better emphasis of the stronger instrument from 01:43:680.
  6. I think you could well remove 01:44:354 for small break before the part with finishes starting at 01:44:522 for better transition.
Good luck
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

snowball112 wrote:

Heya, mod from pm request, just going to focus on oni for now.

In my opition, this diff plays out a bit strange in parts like beginning until 00:11:320 because it feels like you're mapping the instrument independent from the drums, I think you should try to incorporate these more for better flow. From this, I would suggest:
  1. I think you should change 00:02:556 to d for contrast to the stronger sound of 00:02:725 and also add a d on 00:03:062 for the drums, I think this flows better. ok to the second bit, but after looking at the third suggestion I think this should be different to your highlighted bit for now.
  2. 00:03:736 (11,12) ctrl+g, the first note ist higher and also has a fairly strong clap, would also be nice for kd dk structure within 00:03:736 (11,12,13,14). probably, but I don't want it to play similarly to 00:04:326 (16,17) - , there is some difference in these.
  3. I think 00:04:242 (14,15,16) sounds and plays out much better as kdk for strong claps on 00:04:242 (14,16). I'd rather keep kkd for flow.
The part from 00:06:095 to 00:07:444 feels a bit weird because from what you've mapped so far, I would have expected that you try to capture the strong instrument sound on 00:06:854 with a k. I suggest that you:
  1. Move 00:06:517 to 00:06:433 and change 00:06:264 (26,27,28) to kkd and change 00:06:601 to d as well for comparatively low instrument sound ok
  2. Move 00:06:938 to 00:06:854 and remove the note on 00:06:770. kept, breaks gameplay flow too much imo.
  3. 00:07:022 (32,33,34,35) dk d K, the notes on 00:07:022 and 00:07:275 are relatively low compared to 00:06:854 and 00:07:107, why use a k on 00:07:275 when there is nothing to emphasize. Also, it would make more sense to make 00:07:444 K and D because you have a low instrument sound here as well. kat there was my mistake.
  4. Similarly, I think 00:08:792 (43,45,47) should be K K D, the first two are only finishes, but the last has a low piano sound, so I think D on the last one would make more sense. nope. even here I still think the major sounds which require finishers like that are on the large white lines.
Most of the above stuff also applies to your kiai time.
  1. I think it would sound much better if you move 00:10:730 to 00:10:225 for following the instrument and change 00:10:646 to d and add a d on 00:11:067 for following the strong beats here. This works better than stacking triples here imo. suggestion is not bad but I need to consider the spread with Muzukashii. I didn't change that highlighted note to d either because it's similar sound to 00:10:815 (56) - .
  2. I think 00:34:747 (8,9) would sound much better as kd. will try it
  3. If you're going to follow the main instrument, 00:39:972 (37,38,39,40) is snapped wrong. If you listen carefully, you would need to move 00:40:140 to 00:40:056 and 00:40:393 to 00:40:309 and add a note on 00:40:477. good catch, changed. ]
  4. Shouldn't 01:41:573 be a k to keep structure with 01:40:477 (28,29) etc? sure
  5. I think 01:43:006 (48,49,50) should be ddk for consistency with 01:42:753 (46,47), and 01:43:511 (52,53,54,55,56) could be ddkdk or something for better emphasis of the stronger instrument from 01:43:680. changed the five note combo to a kkddk, ddkdk doesn't sound well for me. Also about 48,49,50 I think this is fine as it is, not sure what you mean by being consistent there.
  6. I think you could well remove 01:44:354 for small break before the part with finishes starting at 01:44:522 for better transition. this part is last kiai, I think players can manage this.
Good luck
thank you for modding ~
Asagi Mutsuki
something will be here pretty fast
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
you had my hopes high for a moment
Asagi Mutsuki
you're just high
also by "pretty fast" i mean "no man sky is gonna be out pretty fast" pretty fast
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
Pls
Asagi Mutsuki
im definitely not late
*wink*
will focus on the below oni stuff since im pretty bad at modding hard maps lol

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  2. the bg is almost the same size as the mp3 :<

Julie's Beginner
  1. 00:39:803 (2,3,4) - I'd change all of these to k since now the k at the back feels kinda...random? Just a minor suggestion but if you have this portion the kat feels more justified lol
  2. 01:00:028 - Hmmmm since this note has a slightly lower pitch than the previous kat maybe change this to a don? (also to have consistency with 00:06:095 i guess)
  3. 01:10:815 - ^

    Well I guess that's all lol. The map feels like the perfect entry map for taiko and is already very good in its current state o.o

chaica's Kantan
  1. 00:37:107 (43,44,45,46) - ...this part feels a bit awkward while playing, you have big notes followed by small notes where the music isn't really accented at the parts that you have big notes ;w; maybe have all of them as big notes/small notes?
  2. 00:42:500 (50,51,52,53) - ^
  3. 00:52:612 - Maybe remove this note? The music here is the same as 00:51:264 and removing it would make the incoming 3/2 easier to read
  4. The first kiai is full 1/2+1/1+3/2 without any rests which are already really hard for a Futsuu map, let alone a Kantan ;w;i know you have a julie's diff for better spread but the jump from beginner to here is just too drastic ;w; also the high bpm does not help lol I'll just suggest some notes which can be deleted to give some rests for players ;w;
    - 01:00:702
    - 01:01:039
    - 01:05:927
    - 01:06:433
    - 01:11:489
    - 01:11:826
  5. 01:37:107 (27,28) - Swap these notes since the pitch goes up? Also in this way the ddkkddkk rhythm can be maintained owo

    tbh the map can be toned down a LOT. The mapper did a pretty good job of following the song,but quite some parts are simply overkill for a Kantan ;w; The map itself is pretty cool but meh it'll fits more as a futsuu Just went through the five basic diffs and everything is harder than normal so it's fine I guess...? Still you might wanna have some more rests

Futsuu
  1. 00:04:410 - Delete this to give emphasis to the previous note which feels really prominent lol
  2. 00:11:657 - mfw overmapping in a futsuu. D:
  3. 00:12:500 - Change this to a k since the pitch is higher here? The whole intro is pretty much pitch-based so it won't hurt so follow the pitch here too
  4. 00:12:837 to 00:32:725 - This part actually feels really good. How to map like dumpling ;w;
  5. 00:35:927 - feels better at 00:36:095 I guess since it has a bouncy feel there. idk.
  6. 00:41:152 (103,104,105,106,107,108) - Why not have the 3/4 rhythm here? Seems pretty weird to stick to 1/2 here while you have 3/4 all over the map
  7. 00:45:196 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - the x xx rhythm feels really wonky :< why not just use x xxx x x xxx here too
  8. 01:32:725 - For a calm part, having your own rhythm here sounds pretty bad :< Experimented on a couple of ways this could be fixed but eh...deleting the note sounds best for me

    Nice map! for a muzu *runs*

Senritsu's Muzukashii
  1. nyaaaaaaaaaaa >w< *me bites senritsu*
  2. 00:12:163 - this note lands on nothing :< maybe shorten a slider to 00:11:826 and move the don to where the slider currently ends?
  3. 00:22:612 - the rhythm here is fine b...but its inconsistent with this part ;w; Add a note here or sprinkle more rhythm like this throughout this part to make it more natural and not just a once-in-a-map thing since it just feels really random to me right now
  4. 00:08:792 (29,30,31) - is kdd but 01:02:725 (235,236,237) - is the opposite? ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
  5. 01:03:062 - tbh is there any reason why this isn't a big note? The music here is as accented as the previous and the next note
  6. 01:49:579 - Have a kat here? Highhhhhhhhhhh pitch here and to emphasize the incoming bass

    tbh I'd like the map more if it was slightly more consistent ;w; Well not saying that everything has to be perfectly consistent but ehhhh the map is a little random imo


Oni
  1. YOU HAVE AN UNSNAPPED NOTE AT 01:02:386 YOU BAKA DUMPLING
  2. 00:40:899 - The music feels more dense here so maybe move 00:40:562 here to reflect it?

I forgot how to mod
:<
Good luck ranking this!
Volta
i definitely late :c
you can reply cdh first..
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
sure when we have time we will wow you actually still remembered this map
Julie

cdhsausageboy wrote:

im definitely not late
*wink*
will focus on the below oni stuff since im pretty bad at modding hard maps lol

General
  1. that title
  2. the bg is almost the same size as the mp3 :<

Julie's Beginner
  1. 00:39:803 (2,3,4) - I'd change all of these to k since now the k at the back feels kinda...random? Just a minor suggestion but if you have this portion the kat feels more justified lol Not sure about your kind of feel here, but changed this 00:37:107 (1) - to k instead xD.
  2. 01:00:028 - Hmmmm since this note has a slightly lower pitch than the previous kat maybe change this to a don? (also to have consistency with 00:06:095 i guess)
  3. 01:10:815 - ^ All fix, thanks for the consistency check x3

    Well I guess that's all lol. The map feels like the perfect entry map for taiko and is already very good in its current state o.o
Thanks for the mods x3

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Senritsu
balme dumpinlg for nor remdning me of ths

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Senritsu's Muzukashii
  1. nyaaaaaaaaaaa >w< *me bites senritsu* *noms you* >v<
  2. 00:12:163 - this note lands on nothing :< maybe shorten a slider to 00:11:826 and move the don to where the slider currently ends? good point. i will only remove the don this time, and do nothing about the slider
  3. 00:22:612 - the rhythm here is fine b...but its inconsistent with this part ;w; Add a note here or sprinkle more rhythm like this throughout this part to make it more natural and not just a once-in-a-map thing since it just feels really random to me right now wont add any notes there, but i changed the rhythm whatsoever, hope it flows better. if i map something randomly usually (just usually) its because im concerned about sth (and this is spread i guess) so yeah. im changing it differently
  4. 00:08:792 (29,30,31) - is kdd but 01:02:725 (235,236,237) - is the opposite? ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hmm and? i didnt see any problem with that ayyyyyyyyyyyy its not like im going to change it even after many people against it >:D yes im evil.
  5. 01:03:062 - tbh is there any reason why this isn't a big note? The music here is as accented as the previous and the next note think the good reason is 'i forgot it'
  6. 01:49:579 - Have a kat here? Highhhhhhhhhhh pitch here and to emphasize the incoming bass guess so

    tbh I'd like the map more if it was slightly more consistent ;w; Well not saying that everything has to be perfectly consistent but ehhhh the map is a little random imo has been said above if i mapped randomly its because something concerns me (or us) (or even everyone) so.. yeah. sorry it doesnt meet your expectation ;v;
thanks as always for the modssss
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edit :
@Volta : how to not ngaret is hard lol so santai aja xdd
Renka

cdhsausageboy wrote:

im definitely not late
*wink*
will focus on the below oni stuff since im pretty bad at modding hard maps lol

General
  1. that title
  2. the bg is almost the same size as the mp3 :<

chaica's Kantan
  1. 00:37:107 (43,44,45,46) - ...this part feels a bit awkward while playing, you have big notes followed by small notes where the music isn't really accented at the parts that you have big notes ;w; maybe have all of them as big notes/small notes? - delete some notes
  2. 00:42:500 (50,51,52,53) - ^ - ^
  3. 00:52:612 - Maybe remove this note? The music here is the same as 00:51:264 and removing it would make the incoming 3/2 easier to read
  4. The first kiai is full 1/2+1/1+3/2 without any rests which are already really hard for a Futsuu map, let alone a Kantan ;w;i know you have a julie's diff for better spread but the jump from beginner to here is just too drastic ;w; also the high bpm does not help lol I'll just suggest some notes which can be deleted to give some rests for players ;w; - delete some notes/
    - 01:00:702
    - 01:01:039
    - 01:05:927
    - 01:06:433
    - 01:11:489
    - 01:11:826
  5. 01:37:107 (27,28) - Swap these notes since the pitch goes up? Also in this way the ddkkddkk rhythm can be maintained owo- ok

    tbh the map can be toned down a LOT. The mapper did a pretty good job of following the song,but quite some parts are simply overkill for a Kantan ;w; The map itself is pretty cool but meh it'll fits more as a futsuu Just went through the five basic diffs and everything is harder than normal so it's fine I guess...? Still you might wanna have some more rests

I forgot how to mod
:<
Good luck ranking this!
thank you for modding.

v2b
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TitleUnicode:超越してしまった彼女と其を生み落した理由
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Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
all GD updated, idk i'll probably do mine tomorrow or Friday

Senritsu wrote:

balme dumpinlg for nor remdning me of ths
blame baka Senritsu for idk
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

cdhsausageboy wrote:

im definitely not late
*wink*
will focus on the below oni stuff since im pretty bad at modding hard maps lol

General
  1. that title
  2. the bg is almost the same size as the mp3 :< better than a 1024x768 bg which is actually upsized from something even smaller

Futsuu
  1. 00:04:410 - Delete this to give emphasis to the previous note which feels really prominent lol ok
  2. 00:11:657 - mfw overmapping in a futsuu. D: I don't think it's a really overmapped part.
  3. 00:12:500 - Change this to a k since the pitch is higher here? The whole intro is pretty much pitch-based so it won't hurt so follow the pitch here too ok
  4. 00:12:837 to 00:32:725 - This part actually feels really good. How to map like dumpling ;w; wow !! a compliment !! wwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwww
  5. 00:35:927 - feels better at 00:36:095 I guess since it has a bouncy feel there. idk. sure whatever floats your boat man
  6. 00:41:152 (103,104,105,106,107,108) - Why not have the 3/4 rhythm here? Seems pretty weird to stick to 1/2 here while you have 3/4 all over the map deleted second note there, otherwise idk it's really a non-issue for me as the 3/4 are heard after your highlight
  7. 00:45:196 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - the x xx rhythm feels really wonky :< why not just use x xxx x x xxx here too yeah ok
  8. 01:32:725 - For a calm part, having your own rhythm here sounds pretty bad :< Experimented on a couple of ways this could be fixed but eh...deleting the note sounds best for me idk I did something there

    Nice map! for a muzu *runs* pls

Oni
  1. YOU HAVE AN UNSNAPPED NOTE AT 01:02:386 YOU BAKA DUMPLING totally didn't see that
  2. 00:40:899 - The music feels more dense here so maybe move 00:40:562 here to reflect it? k

I forgot how to mod
:<
Good luck ranking this!
thanks
thanks
thanks
thanks
yeah
thanks for mod


Volta it's your turn
Volta
selamat pagi.

[General]
can you provide source of the metadata? i'm bad at that.
and i'd like to see more balance of the spread in lower diffs tho.

[Julie's Beginner]
0.62 star? this is easiest diff i've ever seen lol. nice baby diff.
00:55:646 - what is this green line doing here?

[chaica's Kantan]
01:03:062 - i assume you forgot to put finisher since you put one at 00:09:129 - ?
01:13:848 - change to K? ^
01:16:208 - replace spinner with note. player will need the 4/1 break here instead of spin
01:37:781 - ^
01:50:421 - consider to delete this note so it will be more friendly for kantan player

[Futsuu]
since the song rhythm is complex i highly suggest to give some more break that longer that 2/1. currently it lacks rest moments that essential for futsuu player. try to find some spot?

00:12:837 - until 00:34:410 - this section has huge gap with kantan. i'd suggest to kill some notes here, like 00:15:197 - , 00:15:702 - , 00:20:590 - , 00:21:095 - , 00:25:983 - , 00:26:489 - , 00:31:376 -, and 00:31:882 - ,

[Senritsu's Muzukashii]
ok tampaknya gw agak lupa cara ngemod muzu. secara struktur udah bagus.

01:28:006 - lebih baik green linenya digeser ke kiri 1/4 beat biar kalo orang mukulnya timingnya kecepetan volume efeknya tetep dapet
01:28:343 - ^
01:33:736 - ^
01:36:095 - ^
01:36:433 - ^

00:38:371 - spertinya ini bisa dihapus. saat ini di bagian ini agak loncat jauh dari futsuu, malah sama kayak oni.
00:43:764 - ^
00:54:550 - ^
01:29:859 - ^

[Oni]
i don't know if you intentionally make 666 objects, maybe i'll ruin it lol

01:36:433 - try to move the green line 1/4 beat to left, so if player hit the notes too early they still get the volume effect
01:36:095 - ^

00:09:129 - i'm thinking you can add finisher here because the sound is as stronger as 00:08:792 - and 00:09:466 -
01:03:062 - same as ^
01:13:848 - same as ^
01:35:421 - ^

00:41:489 - try to move this to 00:41:320 - and 00:41:657 - move this to 00:41:573 - ? it can follow the melody better
00:36:854 - add d? compare with 00:42:247 - it leads to similar finishers streak

00:46:376 - i felt the pause here is very awkward. 00:46:713 - how about move this to 00:46:376 -
00:45:365 (70,71) - consider delete these notes for better spread with muzukashii
00:48:062 (86,87) - ^
00:49:663 (95,96) - ^

01:20:084 - consider to delete this to make same break pattern with 01:18:736 - ?
01:22:781 - ^
01:25:477 - ^
01:26:826 - ^

01:39:635 (23,24,25,26) - change to d-kdk? it can reflect higher pitch at 01:39:972 - better
01:42:837 - piano is paused here, try to move this to 01:41:994 - ?

[TK's Inner Oni]
this is cool!

00:55:674 - seems like this timing point is redundant since there is no notes until next green line

00:04:242 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - just a different idea of mine, how about change to dkd-ddk, i think it's fits better to the structure
00:56:320 - shouldn't this moved to 00:56:404 - to make 4-plet like at 01:06:770 (484,485,486,487) - ?
01:37:528 (729,730) - swap? somehow i think is better to end pattern with d. probably because it is similar to 01:04:747 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472) -

01:43:062 (790,791,792) - i'd say 1/8 is more correct snapping. but 1/6 is looks better visually so i'm fine with it. just want to make sure this is intended
01:45:028 (814,815,816) - interested to make 1/6? the melody support it.



hmm. that's it for now. i'll check it again.. needs to find rest spots in futsuu..
Julie
Woops some green line unsnap + sv went weird with shortcut keyboard glitch

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Senritsu

Volta wrote:

selamat pagi. hai volta met soreee xddd
[Senritsu's Muzukashii]
ok tampaknya gw agak lupa cara ngemod muzu. secara struktur udah bagus. \o/

01:28:006 - lebih baik green linenya digeser ke kiri 1/4 beat biar kalo orang mukulnya timingnya kecepetan volume efeknya tetep dapet untuk sementara gw keep dulu, sebenernya volume gak seberapa ngaruh cuma buat ngikutin musiknya. liat yang laen dulu deh
01:28:343 - ^
01:33:736 - ^
01:36:095 - ^
01:36:433 - ^

00:38:371 - spertinya ini bisa dihapus. saat ini di bagian ini agak loncat jauh dari futsuu, malah sama kayak oni. oke gw basmi semua
00:43:764 - ^
00:54:550 - ^
01:29:859 - ^
makasihh
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Renka

Volta wrote:

selamat pagi.

[General]
can you provide source of the metadata? i'm bad at that.
and i'd like to see more balance of the spread in lower diffs tho.



[chaica's Kantan]
01:03:062 - i assume you forgot to put finisher since you put one at 00:09:129 - ? - oh,fixed.
01:13:848 - change to K? ^ - ok.
01:16:208 - replace spinner with note. player will need the 4/1 break here instead of spin - Certainly yeah,change D.
01:37:781 - ^ - ^
01:50:421 - consider to delete this note so it will be more friendly for kantan player - yes
thank you for modding!

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Title:Chouetsu Shite Shimatta Kanojo to Sore o Umi Otoshita Riyuu
TitleUnicode:超越してしまった彼女と其を生み落した理由
Artist:Ayatsugu_Otowa
ArtistUnicode:Ayatsugu_Otowa
Creator:-[ Dumpling ]-
Version:chaica's Kantan
Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags:sdvx jubeat prop KAC2013 Original Song Contest TKS Julie chaica Senritsu
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TKS

Volta wrote:

selamat pagi.

[TK's Inner Oni]
this is cool!

00:55:674 - seems like this timing point is redundant since there is no notes until next green line - fixed.

00:04:242 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - just a different idea of mine, how about change to dkd-ddk, i think it's fits better to the structure - would like to keep this for the consistency of the kiai pattenr.
00:56:320 - shouldn't this moved to 00:56:404 - to make 4-plet like at 01:06:770 (484,485,486,487) - ? - 5plet fits the beat sound well, and to make a variety.
01:37:528 (729,730) - swap? somehow i think is better to end pattern with d. probably because it is similar to 01:04:747 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472) - fixed.

01:43:062 (790,791,792) - i'd say 1/8 is more correct snapping. but 1/6 is looks better visually so i'm fine with it. just want to make sure this is intended - yes it goes with 1/6.
01:45:028 (814,815,816) - interested to make 1/6? the melody support it. - the pattern should be kept as it is, i dont think 1/6 works perfectly.

hmm. that's it for now. i'll check it again.. needs to find rest spots in futsuu..
* changed OD to 7, OD6 was a bit low setting for around 180 bpm.
* 01:16:376 - removed some copypasta finishers because the melody goes to a bit different flow here.

sorry for the late, thanks for the mod!
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... Oni%5D.rar
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

Volta wrote:

selamat pagi. selamat datang

[General]
can you provide source of the metadata? i'm bad at that. click this for info
and i'd like to see more balance of the spread in lower diffs tho. what's bad about it? give some suggestion pls. i don't see what's wrong with the spread? did some improvements I guess.

[Futsuu]
since the song rhythm is complex i highly suggest to give some more break that longer that 2/1. currently it lacks rest moments that essential for futsuu player. try to find some spot?

00:12:837 - until 00:34:410 - this section has huge gap with kantan. i'd suggest to kill some notes here, like 00:15:197 - , 00:15:702 - , 00:20:590 - , 00:21:095 - , 00:25:983 - , 00:26:489 - , 00:31:376 -, and 00:31:882 - , deleted some of these except 00:21:096 (42) - since this is a triple to match previous pattern even if it's triple same colour, and I wanna keep the same notes for next part.

- deleted notes of the same pattern starting from 00:13:511 (00:13:511, 00:16:208, 00:18:904), spread is essentially the same as muzukashii.
- cleaned part around 00:45:197 more
- idk what else? feel free to highlight suggestions if you mod again


[Oni]
i don't know if you intentionally make 666 objects, maybe i'll ruin it lol I never noticed this until now lol

01:36:433 - try to move the green line 1/4 beat to left, so if player hit the notes too early they still get the volume effect
01:36:095 - ^ nope, the point of this game in general is to hit the notes on time

00:09:129 - i'm thinking you can add finisher here because the sound is as stronger as 00:08:792 - and 00:09:466 - ok
01:03:062 - same as ^
01:13:848 - same as ^
01:35:421 - ^

00:41:489 - try to move this to 00:41:320 - and 00:41:657 - move this to 00:41:573 - ? it can follow the melody better yeah good catch, moved
00:36:854 - add d? compare with 00:42:247 - it leads to similar finishers streak suggestion is not bad but I wanna avoid overmapping this part.

00:46:376 - i felt the pause here is very awkward. 00:46:713 - how about move this to 00:46:376 - moved but I changed it to kat.
00:45:365 (70,71) - consider delete these notes for better spread with muzukashii ok
00:48:062 (86,87) - ^
00:49:663 (95,96) - ^

01:20:084 - consider to delete this to make same break pattern with 01:18:736 - ? nope, i have a note every second cluster of the same pattern to avoid the repetition.
01:22:781 - ^
01:25:477 - ^
01:26:826 - ^

01:39:635 (23,24,25,26) - change to d-kdk? it can reflect higher pitch at 01:39:972 - better I try it
01:42:837 - piano is paused here, try to move this to 01:41:994 - ? ok

hmm. that's it for now. i'll check it again.. needs to find rest spots in futsuu.. kk
thank you for modding.

All diffs updated until now ~
Volta
no kds.

[Futsuu]
spread looks better but it needs some longer rest moment. need to give it once in a while

00:55:309 (122,123) - these notes can be deleted (or just 122). the previous rhythm might be too complex for futsuu player, can be awkward for them to switch from 3/2 beat to 1/1 beat and there is barely any rest to compensate
01:17:219 - consider to delete this for a longer rest after kiai

00:12:500 - i think this can be deleted too for longer break instead of a bunch of 2/1 break every 2 notes
00:14:522 - and can fill this with note instead.
00:17:219 - ^
00:19:916 - ^
00:22:612 - ^
00:25:309 - , 00:28:006 - , 00:30:702 - ^

other diffs are fine to me.
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

Volta wrote:

no kds.

[Futsuu]
spread looks better but it needs some longer rest moment. need to give it once in a while

00:55:309 (122,123) - these notes can be deleted (or just 122). the previous rhythm might be too complex for futsuu player, can be awkward for them to switch from 3/2 beat to 1/1 beat and there is barely any rest to compensate deleted both
01:17:219 - consider to delete this for a longer rest after kiai ok

00:12:500 - i think this can be deleted too for longer break instead of a bunch of 2/1 break every 2 notes see below
00:14:522 - and can fill this with note instead. changed but I will update this when I have some spare time
00:17:219 - ^ i did this one a bit differently since there is no note here in Muzu.
00:19:916 - ^
00:22:612 - ^ same deal as 00:17:219 -
00:25:309 - , 00:28:006 - mhm , 00:30:702 - ^

other diffs are fine to me.
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
all is updated now~ + Futsuu should be less dense, idk about parts such as after the first kiai because the sounds there seem essential to map even for a basic diff (unless you can suggest something better of course).
Volta
consider to remove beginner diff?
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

Volta wrote:

consider to remove beginner diff?
considering how much time we have spent on this I rather rank it with beginner diff.
Volta
edit: oops, pls fix slider velocity in Muzu to 1.4 in notepad
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
fixed for Senritsu baka qwq
Volta
ok,

Bubbled!
Asagi Mutsuki
HYPE
Senritsu

cdhsausageboy wrote:

HYPE
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

Senritsu wrote:

cdhsausageboy wrote:

HYPE
Nwolf
that beginner diff... *sigh*
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen

Ntiger wrote:

that beginner diff... *sigh*
tell me what's wrong with it? imo it's good for the spread. reply below
Nwolf
discord "log"

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Nwerewolf - Yesterday at 3:38 PM
I don't get the purpose of a map that uses 2/1 and 4/1 only(edited)
when the Kantan is already that

it doesn't help spread as it's the lowest diff as well
otherwise the only complain I have about the set is that the beginning does not have kiai activated
-[ Dumpling ]- - Yesterday at 10:09 PM
I'll enable it when I have time then
Nwerewolf - Yesterday at 10:13 PM
ask GDers too
Topic Starter
kouzuki_karen
sorry to nitpick I guess but there's some things I disagree here.

Ntiger wrote:

I don't get the purpose of a map that uses 2/1 and 4/1 only(edited)
when the Kantan is already that
have a ranked example of that. (i'm not looking at star difficulty at this point really since it means nothing to me in this case, as long as Beginner is represented as being easier than Kantan, i'm good with that.)

Ntiger wrote:

it doesn't help spread as it's the lowest diff as well
actually, I think the Beginner fits the role of a Kantan from other taiko mapsets that have more basic rhythms for a song (example: upbeat anime OP/ED with a singer's voice that is easily mapped to), compared to this song out of an actual rhythm game that has much more of a complex melody and rhythm to it. think of the Kantan as a Kantan+, only in this day and age we're obviously not going to use those diff names here.

Ntiger wrote:

otherwise the only complain I have about the set is that the beginning does not have kiai activated
I'll enable it when I have time then non-issue for me but see what mappers say.
Nwolf
the beginning of the song is exactly the same as 00:55:983 - just that it's shorter.


also I don't get why TKS' diff is OD7 and the Oni is OD5.5, either make Oni OD6 or reduce TKS' OD to OD6.5 since the song is only 178 BPM and you have to suck a lot to get note lock on 1/8 triplets.
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