Harada Hitomi - Kyoumei no True Force

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Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Mei wrote:

hihi

[Easy]
  1. 03:08:745 (1,2) - this 2 sliders sounds weird, just break here is fine
[Ex]
  1. 00:38:505 (1) - missed the vocal in the middle of slider. you might want to change it to a slider starts from 00:38:665 intentional to follow drum.
  2. 00:48:745 (3,4) - the clap here is kind annoying for me
  3. 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern like this?
  4. 01:41:225 (1) - missed a vocal follow instrument sound.
  5. 01:44:745 (2) - ctrl+g gives better flow for me i want to be consistent with previous patterns.
  6. 03:48:585 (1,1) - imo this two NC are not necessary, you can remove them

almost are fine. good luck! :)
no comment is fix thanks :)
Rizia
http://puu.sh/pyzQs/89bee5b1f1.rar
im too lazzy to map last part lol
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Rizia wrote:

http://puu.sh/pyzQs/89bee5b1f1.rar
im too lazzy to map last part lol
thanks c:
Miriko

Mei wrote:

[Normal]
  1. too many NCs, i think you can two long white tick per NC Okay~
  2. 00:51:465 (1) - remove the whistle? it sounds weird for me It feels empty though... :s Still, I'll try it.
  3. 01:11:945 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 01:45:065 (3,1) - remove this note? it is too hard for a normal But there's other similar patterns in the difficulty. o.o I'll keep it for now.
  5. 02:42:825 (1,2,3,4,1) - change spacving to 1.00x? Fixed! (I think. x3)
  6. 03:09:705 move break to here? Done!
Thank you for the mod and Kibboo for updating the combo colors~ >///<
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48105
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Kyoumei no True Force
TitleUnicode:Kyoumei no True Force
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:Harada Hitomi
Creator:Kibbleru
Version:Vicky's Normal
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:994065
BeatmapSetID:454893

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5.5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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ponpokorin
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Spaghetti
[ex]
  1. 00:07:785 (5) - moving this to the end of 1 plays p nic and would fit well with 00:09:225 (1,3) - id co nsider it
  2. 00:07:945 (1) - fix ur blanket -_ -
  3. 00:09:065 (2,1) - this movement is just so awkward and it breaks the flow of the pattern id stack it on 00:09:385 (2) - but the stack is kinda d too so idk pls fix
  4. 00:26:985 (4,2) - maybe move these towards eachother so they stack and make a pretty pattern? the overlap is p ugly and itll also help with the spacing of this 00:26:825 (3,4) - since i think its too small for the buildup
  5. 00:43:945 (2) - be careful with sv's here cuz this looks exactly like a kickslider and i misread it lol
  6. 01:20:905 (1) - maybe point 01:21:065 (2) - towards this so it looks nicer? same with 01:21:385 (3,4) -
  7. 01:37:065 (4) - ctrl g plays RLLY good and flows perfectly with the zigzag pattern 01:36:105 (1,2) - gives pls consider this
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Spaghetti wrote:

[ex]
  1. 00:07:785 (5) - moving this to the end of 1 plays p nic and would fit well with 00:09:225 (1,3) - id co nsider it nah this is more consistetn with what ive been doing
  2. 00:07:945 (1) - fix ur blanket -_ -
  3. 00:09:065 (2,1) - this movement is just so awkward and it breaks the flow of the pattern id stack it on 00:09:385 (2) - but the stack is kinda d too so idk pls fix idunno how fix
  4. 00:26:985 (4,2) - maybe move these towards eachother so they stack and make a pretty pattern? the overlap is p ugly and itll also help with the spacing of this 00:26:825 (3,4) - since i think its too small for the buildup
  5. 00:43:945 (2) - be careful with sv's here cuz this looks exactly like a kickslider and i misread it lol lol i dont think thats realy much of a deal.
  6. 01:20:905 (1) - maybe point 01:21:065 (2) - towards this so it looks nicer? same with 01:21:385 (3,4) - i wana keep the stacking and blanket, not too necessary imo.
  7. 01:37:065 (4) - ctrl g plays RLLY good and flows perfectly with the zigzag pattern 01:36:105 (1,2) - gives pls consider this
no comment = fix ty
Doormat
zzzz shitty map coming through

http://puu.sh/pNoXt/762e237f67.zip

you might want to add source and tags. pretty sure you can figure that out on your own lol
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
whers me mums insane xd
Doormat

Kibbleru wrote:

whers me mums insane xd
TheMefisto
Hello~
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:265 - missing whistle?
  2. 03:05:865 (1) - I think, it sounds better, if you add repeat here instead of this circle 03:06:825 (2) -
  3. 04:12:745 (3,4) - 2/1 slider here would be better (or 1/1 repeat maybe), because now this slider 04:13:065 (4) - starts on really weak beat, so i think, you shouldn't do this clickable


[Vicky's Normal]
  1. 01:18:025 (4) - Make here 1/1 repeat slider to emphasize vocal
  2. 01:48:425 (2,3) -, 01:38:185 (2,3) - , 01:43:305 (2,3) - , 01:48:425 (2,3) - Don't know about 1/1 stacks on normal diff. Before this stacks, you stacked mostly 1/2 circles, so some new player would be missread this. I think, you should unstack 1/1 circles :C
  3. 02:54:985 (4,1,2) - This sounds a bit weird, maybe something like this would be better?
  4. 03:50:825 (1) - Isn't this recovery time for spinner is too low for normal diff?



[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 00:15:625 (1,2,3,4) - How about move this a bit higher (~ x:180, y:164) to increase spacing for first circle?
  2. 02:38:345 (3,4) - , 02:40:905 (3,4) - I think, 1/2 repeat slider here sounds better for vocal
  3. 03:34:185 (2,3) - This sounds not really good. How about this?


[Ex]
  1. 00:08:905 (1,2,1,2) - That's not what i expected, because movement here 00:09:065 (2,1) - fits not really good. Why not
  2. 01:18:345 (3,1,2,3) - Why spacing here so low? It's quite strange. Think it would be plays better, if you increase spacing a bit
  3. 02:15:625 (1,2,3) - Why you didn't increase spacing here like in previous kiai? .-.
  4. 03:07:625 (4) - You can increase SV here to emphasize guitar better (x1.25-1.5)
  5. 03:50:025 (2,3,4,5) - That's no reason to decrease spacing between 03:50:345 (4,5) - these sliders. You can try this

That's all i can find ( ._.)
Hope it helps you~
Doormat
@Mefisto only applied first suggestion; i think there's enough emphasis on the vocals at 02:38:345 (3,4) - and 02:40:905 (3,4) - to use circle + 1/2 slider, and i think the rhythm at 03:34:185 (2,3) - is fine since it sort of follows the synth in the background.

thanks for mod~ http://puu.sh/pVQ6P/666e52e384.zip
ProfessionalBox
Heyy! M4M as discussed

Easy

  1. OD2 is a bit low since it's a 1,8 easy. Maybe 2,5?
  2. 00:13:385 (3) - Ehh you can make this slider look better if the curves are more symmetrical
  3. 01:19:625 - I'd really like for this to be clickable
  4. 01:22:505 (2,4) - You could improve the blanket on this
  5. 01:24:745 - NC
  6. 01:26:025 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:56:585 (2) - This would feel much more natural if you were following the vocals instead of the beat. I suggest you move this to 01:56:745 - instead
  8. 01:59:145 (2) - ^
  9. 02:31:625 (3) - Lessen the curve on this to make the blanket with 02:32:585 (1) - look better!
  10. 03:00:745 (1,2) - blanket xd
  11. 03:32:745 (5) - NC
  12. 03:34:025 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 03:35:305 (4) - NC
  14. 03:37:225 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 03:37:865 (4) - NC
  16. 03:51:305 (2,3) - that blanket doe

Vicky's Normal

  1. 00:34:505 (5,1) - This overlap looks bad because they are just barely touching. You should try to make it so that they overlap more or won't overlap at all
  2. 00:38:505 (3) - I'd make this a circle and start the slider from 00:38:665 - ending it at 00:38:985 -
  3. 00:41:065 (3) - ^
  4. 00:45:225 (6,1) - Swap the NCs around
  5. 01:09:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - You ignore the vocals entirely here even though you have mapped to vocals so far and you continue to do so right afterwards. I suggest you change this part to follow the vocals aswell to be consistent
  6. 02:05:545 (1) - You can remove this NC since it serves no purpose
  7. 02:43:785 (4,5,6) - DS?
  8. 03:30:505 (2) - Consider NC here
  9. 03:53:545 (1) - There isn't enough recovery time after the spinner for this to be here

Doormat's Hard

  1. 00:43:145 (3,4) - This would look much better if the (4) was just a ctrl + h j
  2. 00:51:945 (2,1) - This isn't perfectly round and it's quite noticeable (this is what you want it to look like 02:10:025 (2,1) - )
  3. 01:42:025 (2,3) - 01:42:665 (1,2) - The spacing on these will fool most players here when sightreading, I suggest you reduce the spacing of 01:42:665 (1,2,3) - to make it easier to read
  4. 02:43:785 (4,1) - These aren't lined up properly and it looks a bit messy. I suggest you line these up properly so that they have the same angle
  5. 02:47:945 - 02:58:185 - This isn't a break in the easy or normal diffs so it seems a bit lazy having this break here especially since you have one right after this. Just my opinion though.

Rizia's Extra

  1. 00:27:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's weird that this part has bigger spacing than 00:26:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Which should be more heavily emphasized with spacing. I suggest you flip the spacings of these around
  2. 01:04:265 (1,2) - I'd make the blanket better by adding more distance between these 2 and then making sure 01:04:745 (2,4) - is blanketed aswell
  3. 02:53:865 (1) - Unnecessary NC
  4. 02:54:665 (1) - ^
  5. 02:57:065 (1) - ^
  6. 02:59:785 (1) - ^
  7. I really liked the idea of those sv changes in the solo, nice job
  8. 03:36:425 (1,2) - This overlap looks really poor. You can easily fix this with spacing the (2) a bit above the slider
  9. 04:11:145 - Consider mapping the rest of it aswell since everyone else mapped it too, to be consistent

Kibbae's sEX

  1. 00:11:945 (2,3) - Blanket pls
  2. 00:15:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the sliderends have 20% volume , sounds much cooler
  3. 00:26:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:31:465 (3,5) - This is a so called nazi blanket, fix if you like
  5. 00:41:865 (3,4) - Blanket ;)
  6. 00:43:625 (5,1) - Not properly stacked
  7. 01:44:105 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you adjusted the volume of sliderends earlier then here too
  8. 01:46:825 (2,3) - Could blanket better
  9. 01:46:985 (3,5) - same tbh xd
  10. 01:46:985 (3,2) - such a well polished pattern eyy
  11. 01:56:265 (3,1) - Maybe stack (3)'s tail on the tail of (1)? Would look a bit better imo
  12. 02:53:065 (1) - Consider ctrl + g. It flows much better from 02:52:745 (1,2) - with it. Maybe readjust 02:53:385 (2) - if you do this but imo it works even without moving it
  13. 03:17:225 (7,1) - Stack on the tail?
  14. 03:53:225 (1,2,3,4) - I've let most of the blankets slip past since I feel like they aren't a part of your style in this map but this one hurts
  15. 04:29:065 (1,2,3) - This rhythm feels 10x better here

    This Ex was really fun to play well done :D!

That's it for the mod! Hope it helped and good luck :)
Doormat

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Heyy! M4M as discussed

Doormat's Hard

  1. 00:43:145 (3,4) - This would look much better if the (4) was just a ctrl + h j mm i prefer the slight angle deviation for the (4), but i'm open to changing this if more people think otherwise
  2. 00:51:945 (2,1) - This isn't perfectly round and it's quite noticeable (this is what you want it to look like 02:10:025 (2,1) - ) i think i got it now
  3. 01:42:025 (2,3) - 01:42:665 (1,2) - The spacing on these will fool most players here when sightreading, I suggest you reduce the spacing of 01:42:665 (1,2,3) - to make it easier to read decreased spacing by a bit
  4. 02:43:785 (4,1) - These aren't lined up properly and it looks a bit messy. I suggest you line these up properly so that they have the same angle made them parallel
  5. 02:47:945 - 02:58:185 - This isn't a break in the easy or normal diffs so it seems a bit lazy having this break here especially since you have one right after this. Just my opinion though. mm i was following rizia's lead in this case. i'll probably end up mapping the this section if more people bring this up though

I'll do the extras tomorrow when I wake up since I'm starting to lose my focus and some things might slip past my eyes.
thanks (i have too much time on my hands lol)~ @Kibb download this update instead zzz http://puu.sh/pW9ak/a6f9ab7663.zip
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

TheMefisto wrote:

Hello~
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:265 - missing whistle?
  2. 03:05:865 (1) - I think, it sounds better, if you add repeat here instead of this circle 03:06:825 (2) - circle for drums
  3. 04:12:745 (3,4) - 2/1 slider here would be better (or 1/1 repeat maybe), because now this slider 04:13:065 (4) - starts on really weak beat, so i think, you shouldn't do this clickable


[Ex]
  1. 00:08:905 (1,2,1,2) - That's not what i expected, because movement here 00:09:065 (2,1) - fits not really good. dont quite understand but i kinda want the paralell slidersWhy not
  2. 01:18:345 (3,1,2,3) - Why spacing here so low? It's quite strange. Think it would be plays better, if you increase spacing a bit
  3. 02:15:625 (1,2,3) - Why you didn't increase spacing here like in previous kiai? .-.
  4. 03:07:625 (4) - You can increase SV here to emphasize guitar better (x1.25-1.5) i want slow sv for the decreasing music kinda thing
  5. 03:50:025 (2,3,4,5) - That's no reason to decrease spacing between 03:50:345 (4,5) - these sliders. You can try this actually its to transfer from the high intensity of the kiai to the non kiai part.

That's all i can find ( ._.)
Hope it helps you~

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Heyy! M4M as discussed

Easy

  1. OD2 is a bit low since it's a 1,8 easy. Maybe 2,5?
  2. 00:13:385 (3) - Ehh you can make this slider look better if the curves are more symmetrical
  3. 01:19:625 - I'd really like for this to be clickable cant really do that without having to use 1/2 or some weird rhythm :( id rather sacrafice clickability then having to use some wonky rhythms
  4. 01:22:505 (2,4) - You could improve the blanket on this
  5. 01:24:745 - NC
  6. 01:26:025 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:56:585 (2) - This would feel much more natural if you were following the vocals instead of the beat. I suggest you move this to 01:56:745 - instead sorry following drums is just kinda my thing. it sounds more natural to me ><
  8. 01:59:145 (2) - ^
  9. 02:31:625 (3) - Lessen the curve on this to make the blanket with 02:32:585 (1) - look better!
  10. 03:00:745 (1,2) - blanket xd
  11. 03:32:745 (5) - NC
  12. 03:34:025 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 03:35:305 (4) - NC
  14. 03:37:225 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 03:37:865 (4) - NC
  16. 03:51:305 (2,3) - that blanket doe

Kibbae's sEX

  1. 00:11:945 (2,3) - Blanket pls
  2. 00:15:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the sliderends have 20% volume , sounds much cooler kill me xD making me add 90 green lines ;w;
  3. 00:26:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:31:465 (3,5) - This is a so called nazi blanket, fix if you like
  5. 00:41:865 (3,4) - Blanket ;)
  6. 00:43:625 (5,1) - Not properly stacked
  7. 01:44:105 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you adjusted the volume of sliderends earlier then here too
  8. 01:46:825 (2,3) - Could blanket better
  9. 01:46:985 (3,5) - same tbh xd
  10. 01:46:985 (3,2) - such a well polished pattern eyy
  11. 01:56:265 (3,1) - Maybe stack (3)'s tail on the tail of (1)? Would look a bit better imo
  12. 02:53:065 (1) - Consider ctrl + g. It flows much better from 02:52:745 (1,2) - with it. Maybe readjust 02:53:385 (2) - if you do this but imo it works even without moving it i dont really want the jump to be that large here
  13. 03:17:225 (7,1) - Stack on the tail? nic
  14. 03:53:225 (1,2,3,4) - I've let most of the blankets slip past since I feel like they aren't a part of your style in this map but this one hurts
  15. 04:29:065 (1,2,3) - This rhythm feels 10x better here i like the gap between it feels nice as a finale kind of thing imo.

    This Ex was really fun to play well done :D!



I'll do the extras tomorrow when I wake up since I'm starting to lose my focus and some things might slip past my eyes.
no comment = fixed or did something else
TicClick
p/5298262

You may want to disable countdown and letterbox during breaks for the whole mapset.
[Ex]
haha HP 6
  1. 00:01:545 - inherited and uninherited timing points with different volume levels (same goes for Insane)
  2. 01:21:065 (2,4) and 01:23:625 (2,4) - I'd appreciate if you mapped vocals with these, would be more intuitive; see also 02:39:145 (2,4) / 02:41:705 (2,4) -
  3. 01:47:625 (5,6,1) - not sure if a triplet is a good idea, perhaps change to a short slider and a note?
  4. 01:50:185 (5,6,1) - ↑
  5. 01:56:585 (1) - could use a note and a slider here for vocals
  6. 04:10:825 (1) - I'd shorten it by 1/4th of a beat and add a note afterwards


Despite the fact I can hear all these sounds you mapped with triplets, I still think they're unnecessary to map due to dominant vocals and strong half beat rhythm; couldn't really enjoy the whole difficulty because I had to mash the triplets during kiai sections too often without a significant reason.

[Rizia's Extra]
Are you sure you don't want to add normal hits during 00:06:665 ~ 00:16:905?
  1. 00:03:785 (3) - changing it to a half beat slider and a note would improve the rhythm
  2. 00:05:865 (3) - feels better if started from the white tick 00:06:025 -
  3. 01:29:225 (2,3), and 02:47:305 (2,3), and 02:53:065 (1), and 02:57:545 (1), and 02:58:185 (1), and 04:10:505 (2,3) - please silence their tails so that they produce no sound
  4. 02:16:105 (2) - I'd reverse it for a better movement between 02:15:945 (1,2) -
  5. 02:39:945 (3) - again, I'd replace it with a short slider + note and something else to fill the gap just because it covers 02:40:265 - and 02:40:585 -


I like it!

Well, that';s probably all that's worth noting, and sorry for the delay.
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
sorry i misclicked deny kds
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

TicClick wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5298262

You may want to disable countdown and letterbox during breaks for the whole mapset.
[Ex]
haha HP 6 lol somebody complained about it :( maybe ill raise it to 6.5
  1. 00:01:545 - inherited and uninherited timing points with different volume levels (same goes for Insane) k
  2. 01:21:065 (2,4) and 01:23:625 (2,4) - I'd appreciate if you mapped vocals with these, would be more intuitive; see also 02:39:145 (2,4) / 02:41:705 (2,4) - the thought process behind it was- dominant note with circle and filler sounds with the slider.
  3. 01:47:625 (5,6,1) - not sure if a triplet is a good idea, perhaps change to a short slider and a note? it was intended to be a more weaker version of 00:11:465 (3,4) - hence the triple
  4. 01:50:185 (5,6,1) - ↑
  5. 01:56:585 (1) - could use a note and a slider here for vocals i was more intended on mapping the instruments at that part
  6. 04:10:825 (1) - I'd shorten it by 1/4th of a beat and add a note afterwards good point. yeah


Despite the fact I can hear all these sounds you mapped with triplets, I still think they're unnecessary to map due to dominant vocals and strong half beat rhythm; couldn't really enjoy the whole difficulty because I had to mash the triplets during kiai sections too often without a significant reason. i was kinda experimenting with mapping to the feel of the song instead of to clearly audible beats. the triplets are there to increase the intensity of the song with the kiais.

[Rizia's Extra]
Are you sure you don't want to add normal hits during 00:06:665 ~ 00:16:905?
  1. 00:03:785 (3) - changing it to a half beat slider and a note would improve the rhythm
  2. 00:05:865 (3) - feels better if started from the white tick 00:06:025 -
  3. 01:29:225 (2,3), and 02:47:305 (2,3), and 02:53:065 (1), and 02:57:545 (1), and 02:58:185 (1), and 04:10:505 (2,3) - please silence their tails so that they produce no sound
  4. 02:16:105 (2) - I'd reverse it for a better movement between 02:15:945 (1,2) -
  5. 02:39:945 (3) - again, I'd replace it with a short slider + note and something else to fill the gap just because it covers 02:40:265 - and 02:40:585 -


I like it!

Well, that';s probably all that's worth noting, and sorry for the delay.
thanks for the mod! ill get back to ur map soon
Heanday
I love this on Ex : 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - :D

Well done !
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Heanday wrote:

I love this on Ex : 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - :D

Well done !
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