[Torrent]
01:15:060 (75060|5,75215|4) - prefer if you switch the column here so that it would mirror structure at 01:14:906 - , it also avoid 1/2 shield at 01:15:215 (75215|4,75370|4) - which is kinda out of place seeing how you pattern 01:14:829 (74829|2,75060|2,75292|2,75524|2,75756|2) - without 1/2 jack.
I wanted this part to have some tension building up on the drums here. I do agree with that being out of place though, but I rearranged the pattern so both chords have a 2-note stack there.01:16:530 (76530|3) - Felt like a ghost note for me. if you really want to map all very soft sound, i worried there's couple spot you miss it (if you really want it) like 01:18:694 - 01:24:262 - 01:24:725 - etc.
Don't really want to map everything on here.
I didn't map in a 1/4 note after every single measure here because it'd be very similar to the structure I have on 02:55:112 - , also it's to keep things a little bit easier so the player eases into the patterns before getting into the hard parts.
The segment around 01:24:262 - 01:24:725 - doesn't have any 1/4 notes on it, which is completely intentional because I want that particular measure to act as a short break from the technical side of the map. This builds up to the bursts which are pretty hard to transition into.01:18:231 (78231|2,78308|5) - Try switch column here so it will form stair similar with 01:17:844 - ? think it will make structure more intact.
Sounds good.01:28:127 - Well yeah you make the trill here, but i still thought you can make the trill more intact to enhance the snare more, How about trying make 01:28:282 (88282|2,88359|6) - col 7 and col 4?
I wouldn't want the hi-hats to stand out more as a trill, and I want the snare to be emphasized.01:30:911 (90911|3,90988|4) - Switch column coz
i want a warm comfort pattern i just felt the bracket come out of nowhere there, seeing your pattern before at 01:30:215 - and after at 01:31:143 - you didn't use bracket so it felt odd.
Alright. Rearranged that part as well with 01:50:627 - to avoid that bracketing early on.01:36:323 (96323|3) - Ghost here? i think it should be consistent with 01:34:777 -
There's a hi-hat there. Refer to my points on 01:16:530 - .01:39:880 (99880|6) - move to col 6 to mirror 01:40:035 (100035|5,100112|4) - is more intuitive
It'd cause a slight amount of unnecessary stress on here. I'd try to avoid that as much as I can.01:47:689 - you can connect the pattern with stairs for better flow with something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9084979 Remade this to something different, but this should have much better flow than before.01:55:112 (115112|0,115189|2) - Switch column notes here will give much outstanding flow with
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9084973 Inward chords would lessen the impact with the snare, which would contradict the general structure I have with the snares.01:59:597 (119597|1,119674|2) - Also switch column to make a flip version of 01:59:906 (119906|1,119983|2,120060|3) - ?
Gonna keep this as it is for now to keep some repetition going on, which is why 01:59:597 (119597|6,119597|4,119597|1) - is the same as 01:59:906 (119906|1,119906|4,119906|6) - .02:05:937 (125937|1) - very Minor, but move to col 1 to mirror 02:06:246 (126246|6,126401|6) - ?
Uhh I changed this pattern to something more comfortable than before.02:20:627 (140627|4) - make this at col 1 will make col 1 and col 7 have same amount of notes ( 4 notes 02:20:627 (140627|0,140782|0,141091|0,141246|0) - and 4 notes 02:20:705 (140705|6,140859|6,141091|6,141246|6) -
Alrighty.02:58:514 (178514|0) - kinda personal preference , but think you can make this at col 2 instead
Done that because I realized that makes this harder than it should. Done that with 03:08:411 - as well.02:59:983 - Kinda awkward you use double in the middle of burst and soft hat here also at other place.
It's for the soft bass roll and the soft hat. I think the awkwardness matches the hectic nature in this section, though.03:04:700 (184700|4,184777|3) - tbh switch column to form trill is more structured imo, The space jack doesn't make it hard imo because the overall pattern is more balanced instead of have left hand trill at the current one.
The reason I didn't wanna do that is because I thought that pattern would be a bit too easy to pull off even at a high density, but even then the current pattern is a bit needlessly cruel.
Anyway, I changed that to your envisioned pattern and rearranged patterns around it to accommodate the change, as well with 03:24:493 - .03:16:684 (196684|4,196762|5,196839|4,196916|5) - I'm not convinced with this trill, Think you can switch column between 03:16:839 (196839|4,196916|6) - instead to connect the pattern.
Did something different instead to avoid that trill.03:27:741 - Try having something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9085041 ? mirror pattern made it more structured.
That causes an anchor on column 5 and some bracketing, so I ended up changing that a bit to make it easier.04:14:287 - Just wanna make it sure, but it's intentional to not add note for piano?
Yeah, completely intentional. My difficulties generally end before the first piano note comes in because to me the map feels complete by that point.