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Radiohead - Burn The Witch

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YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7 августа 2017 г. at 18:04:22

Artist: Radiohead
Title: Burn The Witch
Tags: bakari art rock a moon shaped pool xl recordings
BPM: 148,92
Filesize: 5651kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Normal (1,99 stars, 230 notes)
  2. Hard (3,17 stars, 545 notes)
Download: Radiohead - Burn The Witch
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Normal by Bakari

Hard by me

Hitsounds by wajinshu

Timing by Bonsai
Last edited by YellowManul , edited 31 times in total.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
yo finish this
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Mashley wrote:

yo finish this
ok
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
ok, since Mashley is asking us

http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/zYOTLnh5.txt here's the Normal, manul
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Bakari wrote:

ok, since Mashley is asking us

http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/zYOTLnh5.txt here's the Normal, manul
ty
schoolboy
571 posts
Joined July 2016
schoolboy
as your request

hard
consider lowering the ar by 0.5 or even 1 since the normal has only 4.5
00:00:281 (2) - feels better somewhere on x=158 y=41, dont you think? >;
00:05:720 (4) - i think its really a bad idea... ye, the beat here 00:05:720 - might be a bit stronger than usual but its not a reason to out a jump there zz
00:08:540 (2) - id prefer to see this straight, but as you wish
00:20:224 (3) - maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/sxD2K/fc1c1602ad.png
00:20:828 (5) - you forgot u put a nc here
00:22:238 (8,9) - kinda nazi lol, but spacing here is noticably lesser than usual..
00:25:461 (5) - id prefer to stack its end with this circle 00:24:857 (3) - , so there will be mor emphasis 00:25:864 (1) - here and it will look more neat.. but as you like
00:35:332 (5,2) - maybe u will avoid this overlap? by moving (2) a bit down
00:43:390 (3) - nc here
00:45:203 (1,2) - i think its better to balnket them
00:51:246 (5) - why this beat is more emphasised than 00:51:649 (1) - this one? kinda lame to do such stuff
01:02:728 (3) - again nc
01:22:269 (1) - maybe u wont emphasise this one?.. because flow looks so unnatural lol. x=186 y=362 works much better tbh
01:25:290 (5,1) - swap ncs here
01:28:513 (5,1) - and here too, according to your nc system
01:48:456 (3,4) - i think that just straight sliders will work here much better. like this or something https://puu.sh/sxDJb/f0d4e6473f.png
02:03:564 (4,5,6) - not sure if it is a good idea tbh.. maybe u should ask somebody?
02:06:385 (3) - no clear reason to make a jump there since the music doesnt support it at all zz
02:11:018 (2,3,4) - hmmm... i think, u should better try https://puu.sh/sxDRC/770e70190e.png
02:54:127 - thats a weird idea to stop the kiai there since there are no changes in the music.. but whatever lol
03:07:019 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, https://puu.sh/sxE22/c1a31362be.png
03:09:839 (5) - id prefer to see this one ctrl+Ged
03:10:242 (1,2) - uhh.. no, pls..
03:15:077 (1) - this repeat is hidden, so unreadable. consider moving it somewhere else since this is unrankable
03:25:955 (4,1) - imperfect blanket
03:29:581 (1) - unsnapped lol. and 03:29:581 (1,2) - zzzz

couldnt find anything in bakari's though.. so pro ><

anyway, good luck with this!
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Komore wrote:

as your request

hard
consider lowering the ar by 0.5 or even 1 since the normal has only 4.5
00:00:281 (2) - feels better somewhere on x=158 y=41, dont you think? >;
00:05:720 (4) - i think its really a bad idea... ye, the beat here 00:05:720 - might be a bit stronger than usual but its not a reason to out a jump there zz
00:08:540 (2) - id prefer to see this straight, but as you wish
00:20:224 (3) - maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/sxD2K/fc1c1602ad.png
00:20:828 (5) - you forgot u put a nc here
00:22:238 (8,9) - kinda nazi lol, but spacing here is noticably lesser than usual..
00:25:461 (5) - id prefer to stack its end with this circle 00:24:857 (3) - , so there will be mor emphasis 00:25:864 (1) - here and it will look more neat.. but as you like
00:35:332 (5,2) - maybe u will avoid this overlap? by moving (2) a bit down
00:43:390 (3) - nc here
00:45:203 (1,2) - i think its better to balnket them
00:51:246 (5) - why this beat is more emphasised than 00:51:649 (1) - this one? kinda lame to do such stuff
01:02:728 (3) - again nc
01:22:269 (1) - maybe u wont emphasise this one?.. because flow looks so unnatural lol. x=186 y=362 works much better tbh
01:25:290 (5,1) - swap ncs here
01:28:513 (5,1) - and here too, according to your nc system
01:48:456 (3,4) - i think that just straight sliders will work here much better. like this or something https://puu.sh/sxDJb/f0d4e6473f.png
02:03:564 (4,5,6) - not sure if it is a good idea tbh.. maybe u should ask somebody?
02:06:385 (3) - no clear reason to make a jump there since the music doesnt support it at all zz
02:11:018 (2,3,4) - hmmm... i think, u should better try https://puu.sh/sxDRC/770e70190e.png
02:54:127 - thats a weird idea to stop the kiai there since there are no changes in the music.. but whatever lol
03:07:019 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, https://puu.sh/sxE22/c1a31362be.png
03:09:839 (5) - id prefer to see this one ctrl+Ged
03:10:242 (1,2) - uhh.. no, pls..
03:15:077 (1) - this repeat is hidden, so unreadable. consider moving it somewhere else since this is unrankable
03:25:955 (4,1) - imperfect blanket
03:29:581 (1) - unsnapped lol. and 03:29:581 (1,2) - zzzz

couldnt find anything in bakari's though.. so pro ><

anyway, good luck with this!
thnx applied almost evrth
Remus
452 posts
Joined July 2015
Remus
Мини-мод. (буду должен один еще, потому что это модом будет трудно назвать)

[Bakari's Normal]
01:30:326 - удали лишний гринпоинт.
00:27:274 - будет неплохо, если ты сюда добавишь тап, так как там довольно слышимый звук.
00:29:087 (1) - слайдер не на белом тике, проверь.
02:28:342 (2,1) - почти все время у тебя идет бланкетированные подобные моменты, а этот немного выбивается из общей концепции. Что на счет сделать бланкет тут?
03:24:746 (1,2) - довольно сложный флоу для нормала, имо.
Я просто восхищен красотой слайдеров.

[Hard]
03:29:581 (1) - проверь тик.
00:41:174 (3,1) - некрасивый оверлап.
00:56:887 (3,4,5) - сделай одинаковый спейсинг между концами.
01:16:225 (2,3,4) - тут надо пофиксить флоу. Как вариант или поставить тройку чуть левее, или двинуть 4 чуть правее.
02:09:003 (1) - спейсинг, думаю, можно подравнять.
02:31:767 (2,3,4) - спейсинг. Такие моменты сразу в глаза бросаются, имо.
02:54:933 (4,1) - по идее годно, но все равно думаю можешь сделать лучше.

Вроде как все. Удачи o/
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul
8-)

Remus wrote:

Мини-мод. (буду должен один еще, потому что это модом будет трудно назвать)

[Bakari's Normal]
01:30:326 - удали лишний гринпоинт.
00:27:274 - будет неплохо, если ты сюда добавишь тап, так как там довольно слышимый звук.
00:29:087 (1) - слайдер не на белом тике, проверь.
02:28:342 (2,1) - почти все время у тебя идет бланкетированные подобные моменты, а этот немного выбивается из общей концепции. Что на счет сделать бланкет тут?
03:24:746 (1,2) - довольно сложный флоу для нормала, имо.
Я просто восхищен красотой слайдеров.

[Hard]
03:29:581 (1) - проверь тик.
00:41:174 (3,1) - некрасивый оверлап.
00:56:887 (3,4,5) - сделай одинаковый спейсинг между концами.
01:16:225 (2,3,4) - тут надо пофиксить флоу. Как вариант или поставить тройку чуть левее, или двинуть 4 чуть правее.
02:09:003 (1) - спейсинг, думаю, можно подравнять.
02:31:767 (2,3,4) - спейсинг. Такие моменты сразу в глаза бросаются, имо.
02:54:933 (4,1) - по идее годно, но все равно думаю можешь сделать лучше.

Вроде как все. Удачи o/
спасибо, принял!
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Marmowka
ку

[general]
теги и баку не обидь добавь

[hard]

00:05:720 (4,5,6,1) - вот тут 00:06:123 (5,6) - двинь правее, чтоб было вот так: http://puu.sh/sAuMf.jpg
00:09:749 (1,2) - одеяло
00:15:389 (3,4) - вроде не ровные , скопируй один из них
00:23:447 (3,1) - тут тоже укутать можно
00:31:505 (3,4,5) - выдели тут немного спейсингом музыкальный тембр позволяет
00:41:174 (3,1) - небольшой оверлап, двинь
01:02:728 (1,3) - ^
01:54:298 (1,3) - ^ 01:54:298 (1,4) - и кончики стак
02:04:169 (1,4) - ^
02:06:586 (4,1) - ^
00:45:203 (1,2) - симметрию бы
00:46:412 (4,1) - попробуй стак, просто флоу от 4 к 1 не очень нравится
02:10:011 (4,1) - тут сам видишь , что подогнать надо
02:30:558 (3,4) - неа
02:31:162 (5,2) - надеюсь это такая задумка
02:45:263 (4) - а давай его сюды x255 y220

[Normal]

02:25:119 (3,4,5) - ~ вот такой формой :) http://puu.sh/sAvgI.jpg
02:29:954 (1) - нет, давай красивее ты же БАКАРИ
02:33:177 (1) - не в зоне игры красный поинт
03:29:588 (1) - лол, я так вижу почему то :D http://puu.sh/sAvll.jpg
ar поднял бы и hp а так гуд
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Marmowka wrote:

ку

[general]
теги и баку не обидь добавь

[hard]

00:05:720 (4,5,6,1) - вот тут 00:06:123 (5,6) - двинь правее, чтоб было вот так: http://puu.sh/sAuMf.jpg
00:09:749 (1,2) - одеяло
00:15:389 (3,4) - вроде не ровные , скопируй один из них
00:23:447 (3,1) - тут тоже укутать можно
00:31:505 (3,4,5) - выдели тут немного спейсингом музыкальный тембр позволяет
00:41:174 (3,1) - небольшой оверлап, двинь
01:02:728 (1,3) - ^
01:54:298 (1,3) - ^ 01:54:298 (1,4) - и кончики стак
02:04:169 (1,4) - ^
02:06:586 (4,1) - ^
00:45:203 (1,2) - симметрию бы
00:46:412 (4,1) - попробуй стак, просто флоу от 4 к 1 не очень нравится
02:10:011 (4,1) - тут сам видишь , что подогнать надо
02:30:558 (3,4) - неа
02:31:162 (5,2) - надеюсь это такая задумка
02:45:263 (4) - а давай его сюды x255 y220

[Normal]

02:25:119 (3,4,5) - ~ вот такой формой :) http://puu.sh/sAvgI.jpg
02:29:954 (1) - нет, давай красивее ты же БАКАРИ
02:33:177 (1) - не в зоне игры красный поинт
03:29:588 (1) - лол, я так вижу почему то :D http://puu.sh/sAvll.jpg
ar поднял бы и hp а так гуд
спасибо, принял почти все :3
Nokris
258 posts
Joined February 2015
Nokris
Не знаю, как модить. Слишком симпл, но обещал.
Манул:
00:12:569 (5,1) - начало более интенсивного парта стоило бы начать с большего спейсинга. Отодвинь (1) подальше, ибо ты даже 00:02:900 (5,1) - тут сделал больше спейсинг.
00:19:217 (6,1) - хм, а тут вот тоже сделал. К слову, этот кружок (1) стоило бы немного повыше (а с ним и слайдер в стаке который)
00:20:828 (1,3) - мне не очень нравится оверлап, залезающий на кончик слайдера, может так? (изменить немного 1\1 слайдер и подвинуть 1\2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6703606 а там гляди и (4) можно в бланкет засунуть.
00:25:059 (4,1) - фулл фейд объекты запрещены. (мне 2 дня назад бн мозги пилил, тыкая в правило, которое запрещает так делать)
00:31:505 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - сделай поровнее что ли. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6703630
00:36:541 (4,1) - говорил о таком выше. Это не плохо, просто не очень красиво.
00:41:174 (3,1) - ^
01:02:728 (1,3) - ^ я дальше о таком говорить не буду, если будешь менять, то поищи.
01:04:541 (1,2,3,4) - до этого я такого ритма чего то не слышал? Рандом?
01:22:067 (5,1,2,3) - если ты тут по овальной траектории пытался сделать, то не очень ровно.
01:19:851 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - странно, что ритм в этой части не прерывается как ранее.
02:02:557 - как и с этого момента. Музыка то в принципе не меняется
Да и в общем киаи какие то разные, хотя музыка одинаковая.
В целом то обычно, но блин, имхо - ритм рандом.
(сонг какой то криповый, лол). Уверен, что у бакари всё хорошо.
Всё.
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Reya wrote:

Не знаю, как модить. Слишком симпл, но обещал.
Манул:
00:12:569 (5,1) - начало более интенсивного парта стоило бы начать с большего спейсинга. Отодвинь (1) подальше, ибо ты даже 00:02:900 (5,1) - тут сделал больше спейсинг.
00:19:217 (6,1) - хм, а тут вот тоже сделал. К слову, этот кружок (1) стоило бы немного повыше (а с ним и слайдер в стаке который)
00:20:828 (1,3) - мне не очень нравится оверлап, залезающий на кончик слайдера, может так? (изменить немного 1\1 слайдер и подвинуть 1\2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6703606 а там гляди и (4) можно в бланкет засунуть.
00:25:059 (4,1) - фулл фейд объекты запрещены. (мне 2 дня назад бн мозги пилил, тыкая в правило, которое запрещает так делать)
00:31:505 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - сделай поровнее что ли. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6703630
00:36:541 (4,1) - говорил о таком выше. Это не плохо, просто не очень красиво.
00:41:174 (3,1) - ^
01:02:728 (1,3) - ^ я дальше о таком говорить не буду, если будешь менять, то поищи.
01:04:541 (1,2,3,4) - до этого я такого ритма чего то не слышал? Рандом?
01:22:067 (5,1,2,3) - если ты тут по овальной траектории пытался сделать, то не очень ровно.
01:19:851 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - странно, что ритм в этой части не прерывается как ранее.
02:02:557 - как и с этого момента. Музыка то в принципе не меняется
Да и в общем киаи какие то разные, хотя музыка одинаковая.
В целом то обычно, но блин, имхо - ритм рандом.
(сонг какой то криповый, лол). Уверен, что у бакари всё хорошо.
Всё.
принял, спасибо!
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Fixed most of the stuff I could without pushing te SR aove 2,00. Thanks a lot!
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
as your request

[general]
disable widescreen support since you don't have any sb nor video and letterbox during breaks.

[bakari's normal]
00:08:943(4,5)- spacing issue. the objects are too close as i can see so it needs to be fixed.
00:46:814(3,4)- instead of ending on downbeat, why don't you remove the repeat from (3)- and move (4)- to where the downbeat starts from? the downbeat would get more emphasis by being clickable plus that little strong snare would be emphasized by the repeat of (4)-. http://puu.sh/sDMZD/7e2e8199df.jpg
01:10:585(1)- tbh, there's no any new stanza here so the nc would be on 01:10:988(2)-, not on this note.
01:10:988(2,3)- spacing..
01:17:434(1)- don't you think that this slider covers most of beats present in song? it's like a spinner which covers most of beats let's say. i would do something in order to give emphasis to the covered beats like in this picture for instance http://puu.sh/sDNxd/aec4e5fa82.jpg.
01:29:118(2)- missing clap on repeat?
02:00:140(2)- maybe move (2)- a bit down in order to avoid the overlap with 01:58:528(4)-? i swear it was nearly noticeable when i testplayed it.
02:33:177(1)- that weird slider lol.
02:54:933(2,1)- really weird to see the 6/1 gap empty since there are still some beats present in song. would be better if you will map that 6/1 gap instead of letting it unmapped for no reason.
02:57:350(1)- shouldn't the repeat be on 02:58:961- instead? there's the downbeat and it would fit much better if you'll move the repeat to the downbeat. moreover, that downbeat will get some emphasis tbh. after, you can place an 1/1 slider on 03:00:976- in order to not leave the 3/1 gap empty.
03:19:509(4,1)- that overlap orz.. did you make it on purpose? if not, i think you have to get rid of this overlap.
03:29:588(1)- maybe same issue as i stated at 01:17:434(1)-.
i suggest to check the spacing again because i'm not really sure about your spacing usage tbh :( .

[hard]
00:43:390(1,2)- the rhythm sounds a bit weird here tbh probably because of the stronger violin. you can try this rhythm out http://puu.sh/sDPv4/ec915b4f77.jpg in order to end (1)- on downbeat instead ignoring it and give more emphasis to the stronger violin.
00:50:038(1,2)- maybe unstack these notes for the sake of build-up effect? it is obvious that the vocal starts to get more intensified on (2)-.
01:17:434(1,2,3,4)- tbh, i would fill a bit each 1/1 gap from this part since the vocal is pretty stronger. i would do like this let's say http://puu.sh/sDPL2/288fd3a492.jpg.
01:51:075(1)- i don't think this type of slidershape catches up really well the build-up of the violin. maybe try out a curved slider to catch up better the build-up of the violin.
02:54:933(4,1)- i'm not a fan of these kind of overlaps so better get rid of this overlap.
03:03:796(1,2)- blanket looks somehow off.
03:10:847(1,2,3)- i would better unstack (2)- and (3)- from (1)-'s head since the violin became more stronger there and seeing them all stacked in an one point wouldn't give enough emphasis to the stronger violin. same goes for 03:29:581(1,2,3)- tho.
i saw that at some points where the violin gets stronger and stronger, you're using jump or antijump. tbh, i disagree with antijumps usage on where violin gets stronger and stronger like 00:11:965(3,4,5)-. at 00:31:505 (3,4,5)- you did jumps here but at some of them you didn't. check one more time the spacing to see where should be a jump or not.

that should be all! a neat mapset tbh.
good luck!
baysman
216 posts
Joined October 2015
baysman
Привет M4M с моей очереди

Bakari's Normal
  1. 00:29:087 (1) - может сделаешь так вместо этого слайдера, а то какой-то он длинный, да и это под бит как-то лучше звучит
  2. 00:35:534 (1) - не знаю может ту хард но все же, что если закончить этот слайдер здесь 00:36:339 - и вот здесь 00:36:541 - на красном тике поставить еще один слайдер до белого тика
  3. 00:57:491 (5,6) - а если слайдер вместо этих серклов ?
  4. 02:55:336 - что насчет вместо этой паузы поставить что то типа этого?

Прости но больше я ничем не могу помочь :( . Hard, на мой взгляд, выглядит нормально.
Кудосу не нужно. Если не хочешь можешь не моддить мою карту.

GL ;)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
I'd really rather not go with complicating rhythm stuff, as it seems rather difficult enough. Besides, the way it works is that the long sliders contrast with the overall rhythm creating an interesting difficulty that both represents the song and feels very playable to beginners while still giving a reasonable amount of challenge.

As for the spacing, I am well aware of fluctuating spacing, which seems to be matching with the swinging and tense mood, while also adding a nice touch of variety and keeping things playable and readable enough. So, we are probably safe on that side.

Concerning the long gap this is the thing we should consider and it's almost certain to be changed.

Thanks for checking it out, appreciate it!
Namki
1,281 posts
Joined November 2014
Namki
я вспомнил, что обещал мод, держи о3о

HS
  1. 00:14:382 (1) - пропустила вистл. Либо тут 00:27:274 (1) - стоит убрать. И тут 00:34:123 - ...
    Просто я не совсем понимаю как ты расставляла их. Там есть посильнее 00:18:008 - , стоит вистл и клеп, а есть послабее 00:21:231 - более глухой звук, и на него ты тоже ставишь вистл и клеп! Где вообще смысл. Так ты еще и пропускаешь иногда вистл, мол, глухой звук. Но тогда сделай это последовательно по карте, а не в нескольких местах.
  2. В чем смысл оставлять их 01:00:513 - / 01:10:182 - / 01:22:269 - и другие, оставлять их, значит, с каким-то драм нормалхитом, можно поставить софт вистл.
  3. 01:30:326 (1) - ну а тут. Манул даже НК выделил это место, а ты нет. Странно, очень.
    Всё, это повторяется по всей диффе.
Bakari
  1. Не очень выглядят такие маленькие недооверлапы 00:17:001 (2,3,4) - , спейсинг побольше бы примерно на ~0.02-0.03 единицы, и будет шикарно, прям как тут 00:24:253 (3,4,5) - .
  2. 01:58:528 (4,2) - задумайся...
  3. Ой, второй киай куда-то пропал.
  4. 02:33:177 (1) - как там говорится — "Slider's path should be noticable and visible", а если учесть, что это немного нормал и легчайшая диффа, то такое бы я убрал.
    Да всё круто, только визуально чуть-чуть оверлапы не нравятся.
Hard
  1. 00:45:203 (1,2) - имо, стоит выделить, повысив спейсинг.
    как-то так, что ли
    Потому что раньше ты выделял биты повышением спейсинга, потом начал чередовать, а потом вообще перестал выделять, поэтому это будет логично выделить там бит повышением спейсинга.
  2. 01:17:434 (1) - сильный и вокал и сам бит. Лучше выделить.
    Круто. Нечего добавить.
Удачи, ищи бна уже.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Hey again... I don't really know enough about what the conventions are any more to do a proper mod post (oldfag here) but I can give some general feedback cos I love Radiohead. The map is fun but I think the big problem is it's quite repetitive. This comes naturally with the song because it's build around that constant, menacing build up of the drum line and the strings, but I would suggest to find the bits in the song where it varies from that and try to play with them a bit more.

There's a lot more room for this from after the first chorus where they start to mix things up a bit. There's a really cool sporadic bassline that comes into the second verse which could be interesting to map to a bit more to keep things interesting. Then you get little moments like 02:07:190 (1) - where the drums cut out and it could be fun to mix up the kind of patterns you're using here to go with the change in the music. It's a shame that you're covering the bit before the second chorus with a break because again that's one of the moments where the song changes up a bit and could be interesting to map to. I also think you can do more with the end of the track - you get those really overpowering harsh strings coming in and the map's not really doing anything to go with it.

In summary, I enjoy the map, just find the bits where the track varies from its usual rhythm and use those moments to create something more interesting with your map.
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Mashley wrote:

Hey again... I don't really know enough about what the conventions are any more to do a proper mod post (oldfag here) but I can give some general feedback cos I love Radiohead. The map is fun but I think the big problem is it's quite repetitive. This comes naturally with the song because it's build around that constant, menacing build up of the drum line and the strings, but I would suggest to find the bits in the song where it varies from that and try to play with them a bit more.

There's a lot more room for this from after the first chorus where they start to mix things up a bit. There's a really cool sporadic bassline that comes into the second verse which could be interesting to map to a bit more to keep things interesting. Then you get little moments like 02:07:190 (1) - where the drums cut out and it could be fun to mix up the kind of patterns you're using here to go with the change in the music. It's a shame that you're covering the bit before the second chorus with a break because again that's one of the moments where the song changes up a bit and could be interesting to map to. I also think you can do more with the end of the track - you get those really overpowering harsh strings coming in and the map's not really doing anything to go with it.

In summary, I enjoy the map, just find the bits where the track varies from its usual rhythm and use those moments to create something more interesting with your map.

o hi
ok i'll see what i can do
thanks,
your fan
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
хуй знает как давно мод обещал, а там еще и тест скоро

[hard]
  1. 00:05:116 (2) - по идее нк должно же тут быть? более сильный бит именно тут, а не на предыдущем красном тике
  2. 00:05:116 (2) - а тут нарастает напряжение в песне, мог бы предложить увеличить спейсинг между ними, примерно до 1.4-1.5
  3. 00:12:166 (4,5) - тут также, такой маленький спейсинг выглядит как-то несоответсвующе
  4. Дальше все в этом плане повторяется, хочешь меняй-хочешь нет, просто я считаю что так было бы лучше
  5. 00:43:390 (1,5) - нацистская доебка, стакни концы чтобы было красивее
  6. 01:03:534 - пропускаешь вокал, немного пусто выглядит. Я бы предложил или ноту добавить, или что то такое выдумать http://puu.sh/sN0Xv/ce8a154571.jpg
  7. 01:05:146 - также выглядит довольно пусто, есть ярко выраженный бит, а ты такое делаешь. Можешь заменить (3) на слайдер чтобы избежать этого
  8. 01:22:470 (2,3) - раньше ты подобные биты стакал, стакни и тут для баланса, да и более соответствует песне
  9. 01:28:916 (3,4) - также вроде как, мне стак больше нравится
  10. 01:42:816 (1) - что насчет того, чтобы стакнуть его конец с началом след. слайдера. Хард плееров путать не должно, и выглядит оригинально
  11. 02:33:982 (3,4) - как-то совсем не нравится такой ритм, не очень хорошо соответствует музыке что ли! Тут можно или ctrl+g или так http://puu.sh/sN1nE/47831621f8.jpg , стакнув (4) и (5) т.к. хорошо подходит по смыслу
  12. 02:36:400 (1) - смысл слайдера понятен, но он все равно как-то не списывается в общий концепт мапы. Попробуй заменить слайдер на круг, причем только на красном тике, это куда лучше выглядит
  13. 02:43:652 (3,4) - так же , как и с 02:33:982 (3,4) -
  14. 02:44:659 (2) - ну не, слайдер совсем уж звучит плохо, он падает прямо на два самых сильных бита здесь., я тебе крайне советую использовать ctrl+g ритм на 02:44:659 (2,3) -
  15. 02:52:515 (1) - та же фигня, репит и конец слайдера падают на самые сильные биты
  16. 03:05:005 (4) - тут очень сильный бит на красно тике, советую сделать ctrl+g на 03:05:005 (4,1) -
  17. в конце пиздец какая-то крипота начинается, можно было бы скреативить и немного увеличивать спейсинг , начиная отсюда 03:11:854 (1) -
  18. а еще в следующей бпм секции я бы хсов громкость увеличил до 60-65%, а то они немного неслышимыми становятся
[normal]
  1. 00:46:412 (2,4) - оверлап можно же красиво избежать, например так http://puu.sh/sN20w/adfa550a9e.jpg
  2. 01:05:750 (2) - не нравится такой репит, т.к. нет какого-либо сильно саунда на репите. Я бы предложил что-то такое http://puu.sh/sN262/6d983d700a.jpg
  3. 01:26:297 (3,1) - тут тоже можно было бы не делать оверлап, стакни их как нибудь что ли
  4. 02:06:788 (2) - имо 1/2 слайдер был бы куда лучше, и вокал подчеркивает, и сильные биты охватывает
  5. 02:29:954 (1) - у каждого свои эстетические запросы, но лично я не считаю что такой слайдер выглядит классно, хвост слайдера действительно выглядит не очень аккуратно для меня, может закруглить его получше? http://puu.sh/sN2xw/17c1c8ae47.jpg
  6. 02:33:177 (1) - ну а этот слайдер просто выглядит как-то безыдейно, может тоже что-то другое?
  7. второй киай упущен специально?
  8. 03:10:242 (1,2) - а тут можно какой-нибудь бланкет, выглядело бы красивее
  9. 03:19:509 (4,1) - как-то режет глаза оверлап, сделай лучше 03:19:509 (4) - прямым и параллельным следующему слайдеру
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
hi have decided to give you nm anyways

[bakari]
  1. 00:55:275 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally dont think this pattern looks very nice, perhaps you can consider a rhythm pattern less dense?
    image
  2. 02:15:853 (2) - very very nazi but you can shift this so its more a circle
  3. 02:33:177 (1) - tbh this can look more like the bird xd
    image
    if you actually want it
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  4. 02:42:846 (4,5,1) - would suggest making 4 and 5 a slider instead, since you've always made vocals long sliders, or started 1 from 5 instead since you ignore the vocal slur sometimes (02:46:069 - )
  5. 02:54:127 (1,2,3) - i would say this could be easily misread by newer players since the 1 leads into 3's slider tail instead of 2 more directly

    one overarching issue: shouldn't beats separated by 1/2 on normal be touching? 00:46:412 (2,3) - else this diff is pretty basic and nice
[hard]
  1. you can give this diff a custom name instead if you want
  2. 02:10:011 (4) - this slider curves too much dont look nice, maybe make it more similar to 02:09:205 (2) -
  3. 03:02:990 (3,4,5,6) - i personally think this pattern doesn't look too good but i can't think of a better way to improve it

    overall i'd say your diff could be better structured with more copy and paste sliders so its more pleasing to look at. otherwise the flow and rhythm choices i can basically 100% agree on. gj on this
gl rank
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy

Bakari wrote:

I've applied everything except for the bird slider since this would complicate the shape and confuse beginners and I also kept 02:54:127 (1,2,3) - since I think it shouldn't cause too much trouble due to animated gameplay elements being pretty readable at this AR.

As far as the spacing is concerned, it should be no trouble at all since the BPM is relatively low and it doesn't feel too fast. @[ Emillia ]

FCL wrote:

хуй знает как давно мод обещал, а там еще и тест скоро


[normal]
  1. 00:46:412 (2,4) - оверлап можно же красиво избежать, например так http://puu.sh/sN20w/adfa550a9e.jpg ага
  2. 01:05:750 (2) - не нравится такой репит, т.к. нет какого-либо сильно саунда на репите. Я бы предложил что-то такое но там как раз ударные сильнее на этом моменте
  3. 01:26:297 (3,1) - тут тоже можно было бы не делать оверлап, стакни их как нибудь что ли не видно же в игре
  4. 02:06:788 (2) - имо 1/2 слайдер был бы куда лучше, и вокал подчеркивает, и сильные биты охватывает а мне как-то не очень звучит. пока оставлю, не знаю
  5. 02:29:954 (1) - у каждого свои эстетические запросы, но лично я не считаю что такой слайдер выглядит классно, хвост слайдера действительно выглядит не очень аккуратно для меня, может закруглить его получше?там просто еще флоу учитывается, мне нравится то, что есть сейчас
  6. 02:33:177 (1) - ну а этот слайдер просто выглядит как-то безыдейно, может тоже что-то другое? но птичка же ;c
  7. второй киай упущен специально? не-а, пофиксил.
  8. 03:10:242 (1,2) - а тут можно какой-нибудь бланкет, выглядело бы красивее но там и так бланкет :v
  9. 03:19:509 (4,1) - как-то режет глаза оверлап, сделай лучше 03:19:509 (4) - прямым и параллельным следующему слайдеру ага
thank you, guys, appreciate it!

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Kyubey
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М4М

[Bakari's Normal]
00:01:691 (3,4,1) - спейсинг кривой!
00:08:943 (4,5) - почему тут спейсинг другой?
[Hard]
Почини анснап в аимоде.


Господи, ну и тягомотина. Позовёшь.
riffy
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code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: witch.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 90326,102816,149954,155997,171307,203135,209581,215819
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Burn The Witch
TitleUnicode:Burn The Witch
Artist:Radiohead
ArtistUnicode:Radiohead
Creator:YellowManul
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:bakari art rock a moon shaped pool
BeatmapID:1142596
BeatmapSetID:454774

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,90526,101556
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Починил, спасибо o/
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
YellowManul
Updated, thanks Kyubey owo
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Kyubey
Bubbled.
Nozhomi
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Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Random

[Bakari's Normal :]
  1. There is some spacing inconsistencies, like it goes from 1.10x to 1.36x at some point without any reason. Could you at least explain why ? Because there's nothing who look like a structure on how you used it here.
  2. 00:23:447 (2) - Something like this https://puu.sh/tRtNZ/f9e754e689.png for the slider would be better for flow and fit well the form of the next slider.
  3. 00:27:476 (3,1) - I think you could avoid this little overlap here.
  4. 00:33:519 (3) - Move at 368:208 to have a straight pattern.
  5. 01:01:318 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I feel this rhythm not intuitive at all. It skips so much more important beats than it sounds off. For 01:01:318 - I would suggest more a rhythm like https://puu.sh/tRu82/abbec1f3f6.png and for 01:04:541 - https://puu.sh/tRuh6/5964c62704.png this who fit much more vocal and drums on this section.
  6. 02:00:140 (2) - I would place it at the middle, would make the angle flow a little more confortable and wouldnt touch anymore 01:58:528 (4) - .
  7. 02:29:954 (1) - Would you mind to curve more the end of the slider ? It's flat and looks quite bad.
  8. 02:33:177 (1) - ? Looks quite ugly tbh.
  9. 02:56:544 (4) - Overlap on lifebar.
  10. 03:27:969 (1,2,1) - This giant slider makes elements before quite hard to read because they take too much attention of the player. I highy suggest you to fix that.
[Hard :]
  1. 00:20:828 (1,3) - Is that overlap was really necessairy ? You have the entire screen here.
  2. 00:22:440 (5,1) - Why such a spacing change between this pattern and 00:19:217 (6,1) - / 00:15:389 (3,4,1) - / 00:25:461 (5,1) - ? Intensity is the same, music structure is the same. Nothing indicate a such increased spacing here.
  3. 00:36:541 (4) - Could you at least put it in the middle of 00:36:944 (1) - ?
  4. 01:00:513 - There's not a hitsound missing here smth like a clap ?
  5. 03:10:847 (2,3) - Move that to 288:184 to be perfectly stacked with 03:10:242 (1) - .
  6. 03:30:191 (2,3) - ^ at 236:128.

Tbh Normal have have an unbalanced lvl of quality, and should get some more opinions about to push it forward. Good luck here.
Mukyu~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
just passing by because nozho was talking this map to me

i do agree with his statement with spacing on normal diff it seems changing with no obvious reason why bakari did it (tell us know why they are inconsistency) but personally i prefer to use 1 kind spacing
also 02:28:342 (1,1,2) - are you serious to make jumps in easiest diff?
riffy
osu! Alumni
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riffy
As always, not replied suggestions are applied.

Nozhomi wrote:

Random

[Bakari's Normal :]
  1. There is some spacing inconsistencies, like it goes from 1.10x to 1.36x at some point without any reason. Could you at least explain why ? Because there's nothing who look like a structure on how you used it here. Spacing does float around certain values, yet I don't see it as a problem. First of all, the fluctuations are not exactly significant. Let's say base DS is x1.2, the rest is basic math of ~x0.1 changes here and there, which is more than playable and quite insignificant on this DS. Second of all, you don't really notice them unless you either get a ruler/look at the values or have a very accurate mathematical eyesight, which is very unlikely to be the case since this is a low skill level tier. However, you do feel the fluctuations as you play, but the snapping is very clear, so it does work. Now, when we get that it works let me explain why. The song by nature is kind of asking for minor shifts here and there as the vocals go, the rest goes for consistency and is also supported with background instruments. The song keeps some kind of suspension, or that's the way I see it and there is no more sensible way to show it. The technique itself is not innovative at all and is confirmed to be playable on a good number of ranked maps. Additionally, I have to mention that it does enforce a bit of re-adjusting every now and thenas to maintain tension of the gameplay, therefore it alao helps to balance spread without introducing complicatind or overly dense rhythm.
  2. 00:23:447 (2) - Something like this https://puu.sh/tRtNZ/f9e754e689.png for the slider would be better for flow and fit well the form of the next slider.
  3. 00:27:476 (3,1) - I think you could avoid this little overlap here. But why? I don't really see any issue with it, it doesn't overlap too much and looks pretty neat to me.
  4. 00:33:519 (3) - Move at 368:208 to have a straight pattern.
  5. 01:01:318 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I feel this rhythm not intuitive at all. It skips so much more important beats than it sounds off. For 01:01:318 - I would suggest more a rhythm like https://puu.sh/tRu82/abbec1f3f6.png and for 01:04:541 - https://puu.sh/tRuh6/5964c62704.png this who fit much more vocal and drums on this section.
  6. 02:00:140 (2) - I would place it at the middle, would make the angle flow a little more confortable and wouldnt touch anymore 01:58:528 (4) - .
  7. 02:29:954 (1) - Would you mind to curve more the end of the slider ? It's flat and looks quite bad.
  8. 02:33:177 (1) - ? Looks quite ugly tbh. Anything better you can think of? I'd personally prefer the bird thingy unless you come up with something that'd look better.
  9. 02:56:544 (4) - Overlap on lifebar.
  10. 03:27:969 (1,2,1) - This giant slider makes elements before quite hard to read because they take too much attention of the player. I highy suggest you to fix that.
Tbh Normal have have an unbalanced lvl of quality, and should get some more opinions about to push it forward. Good luck here.
Mukyu~
That was unintentional, though. @Xinely

Thank you for giving it a look and good points brought up. If you have any other questions or disagree with anyting I have mentioned, go ahead and ask either here or via any other means you are comfortable with.

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