Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!
If I didn't make a box for something, that doesn't mean I didn't look at it. It just means I didn't find anything wrong with it.
I can hear the cringingly low quality mp3. ;___;i know
There's a big difference in AR between your Normal and Hard. Consider lowering hard, or raising normal. But raising normal might require you to raise easy's. It's up to you to decide. fixed01:36:214 (4) - Add a finish.
I think this difficulty looks pretty. :300:39:149 (6,7) - Move these two objects else where. Because you've been using doubles ontop of or beneath a slider, and this different pattern might be hard for a hard. It would also match your previous patterns.
00:46:975 (4,5) - ^
01:06:866 (1,2) - ^
01:07:844 (6) - Remove one reverse to have an easier hit window for players.fixed00:13:306 (7) - Remove. Adds more emphasis to the up coming patterns, 00:13:388 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - (But if you really don't want to remove it, remove the NC then, and have the NC at 00:13:551 (2) - Otherwise players will think there is a break between 00:13:306 (7,1) - )
00:15:834 (6) - Add whistle. Sounds messy without it, and follows the guitar more clearly. fixed
01:36:377 - Add a note here. There's the same rhythm here as for 01:34:258 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -