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r300k - Energy Flower 3007 [OsuMania]

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Soul Evans
Elite Mapper
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Soul Evans
IRC w/ custom drive
2016-12-17 15:55 Soul Evans: but hey, least this one can be played by newbie's and end up ranked
2016-12-17 15:55 Soul Evans: also the hardest diff is different in terms of mapping if you tried it
2016-12-23 15:41 Soul Evans: walao
2016-12-23 15:46 Soul Evans: ok everything looks fine from a bn standpoint
2016-12-23 15:46 Soul Evans: so lets mod 
2016-12-23 15:47 Soul Evans: 00:08:683 (8683|1) - this note here feels like it could be a double
2016-12-23 15:47 Soul Evans: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992443 r300k - Energy Flower 3007 [3516]]
2016-12-23 15:49 _underjoy: 00:51:879 (51879|0) - deleting this instead
2016-12-23 15:49 _underjoy: 00:53:570 - and these
2016-12-23 15:49 _underjoy: 00:59:097 - and this
2016-12-23 15:49 _underjoy: etc
2016-12-23 15:49 Soul Evans: wow u dic
2016-12-23 15:49 Soul Evans: jk
2016-12-23 15:50 _underjoy: it's a normal
2016-12-23 15:50 _underjoy: i overlooked that
2016-12-23 15:50 _underjoy: anyway, deleted all those offbeat chords, they're here musically but it's meant to be easy
2016-12-23 15:50 _underjoy: (easier, it's a Normal)
2016-12-23 15:51 Soul Evans: in anycase though
2016-12-23 15:51 Soul Evans: 00:24:585 (24585|2) - 
2016-12-23 15:51 Soul Evans: maybe move this note to 4th col
2016-12-23 15:51 Soul Evans: just to give it more balance
2016-12-23 15:52 Soul Evans: 00:31:916 (31916|3) - same for this
2016-12-23 15:52 _underjoy: this would destroy balance tbh
2016-12-23 15:52 _underjoy: it's repeated sound on middle colums
2016-12-23 15:52 _underjoy: easy to read
2016-12-23 15:53 Soul Evans: it's pretty lame the pattern for it
2016-12-23 15:53 Soul Evans: 00:52:442 - i don't like how you used 1 type of pattering for this part
2016-12-23 15:53 _underjoy: I don't think so, there is literally no musical reason for the note to be on the other column
2016-12-23 15:53 Soul Evans: too repetative
2016-12-23 15:54 _underjoy: 00:52:894 (52894|1) - moving to 3
2016-12-23 15:55 Soul Evans: anyway next map
2016-12-23 15:57 Soul Evans: 00:31:014 - 
2016-12-23 15:57 Soul Evans: i think this could be changed to something that would play out funner
2016-12-23 15:58 _underjoy: also, imo taps like this are pleasant to hit
2016-12-23 16:00 Soul Evans: time to mod nxt map then
2016-12-23 16:01 Soul Evans: why not add a chord for the sound here 00:30:788 - 
2016-12-23 16:01 _underjoy: LOL
2016-12-23 16:01 _underjoy: it got deleted lmao
2016-12-23 16:01 Soul Evans: 00:37:668 - 
2016-12-23 16:01 Soul Evans: 00:37:781 - 
2016-12-23 16:02 Soul Evans: here too
2016-12-23 16:02 _underjoy: added [14]
2016-12-23 16:03 _underjoy: added
2016-12-23 16:04 Soul Evans: for eze's gd i'll just leave a post next to the chatlog
2016-12-23 16:05 _underjoy: sure
2016-12-23 16:05 Soul Evans: ok so
2016-12-23 16:05 Soul Evans: there isn't any distinction musically
2016-12-23 16:06 Soul Evans: which is annoying considered you followed it so far
2016-12-23 16:06 Soul Evans: why are the beats a chord along side weaker ones?
2016-12-23 16:06 _underjoy: where
2016-12-23 16:06 Soul Evans: shouldn't it make sense if the beat becomes 3 note chorrd
2016-12-23 16:07 _underjoy: rip internet
2016-12-23 16:07 _underjoy: but, show me where
2016-12-23 16:07 Soul Evans: 00:03:721 - 00:04:623 - 00:05:525 - 00:06:427 -  etc
2016-12-23 16:08 Soul Evans: these should have 3 note chords to distinc between the other chords
2016-12-23 16:08 Soul Evans: since it's the main beat and a louder one
2016-12-23 16:08 Soul Evans: so i recommend you make it 3 not chords instead
2016-12-23 21:17 Soul Evans: ok my internet just died down last time sorry
2016-12-23 21:18 _underjoy: o ok
2016-12-23 21:20 Soul Evans: i'll post chatlog
2016-12-23 21:21 _underjoy: okay
Maxus
Nomination Assessment Team
1,238 posts
Joined May 2014
Maxus
Hi U_J and Shoe!

  • [General]
  1. Since you decided not to use SB again, turn off all widescreen support on all diff.
  2. Please tell me where you use "G6".
  3. Is soft-hitwhistle still be used here?
  • [3516]
  1. 00:23:570 (23570|0,23570|1,24021|1,24021|0) - I personally don't see these double being on the same col being fit with the fact that these double wield a completely different sound here.
  2. 00:26:954 (26954|1,27179|3) - Try Ctrl+G this? the pattern structure that you try to make between 00:26:503 (26503|1,26728|0,26728|2) - and 00:27:405 (27405|2,27630|3,27630|1) - will be more similar in terms of aesthetic there.
  3. 00:43:871 (43871|3,44097|2) - not make this jack? since it seems you do it consistently at 00:41:841 (41841|3,42066|3) - 00:40:036 (40036|0,40262|0) -
  4. 00:55:375 (55375|0,55600|3) - pretty sure this should be jack.
  5. 01:05:074 - aww that col.2 rip so soon. the structure seems to be really differ from the rest of other similar sections too..
  6. 01:12:066 (72066|3) - not sure what this note doing here. feels really weak compared to the other sound mapped.
  7. 01:13:645 (73645|1,73871|2) - Well, subjective thing, but since there's a change of music pace with the burst sound here, i will switch column to make the differences with 01:12:969 (72969|1,73194|2) -
  8. 01:14:999 (74999|0,74999|3,75450|3,75450|0) - not really fond of them being in the same column remembering that the second double actually finish sound that's the gate towards kiai, i hope it can be made different somehow.
  9. 01:36:427 (96427|1) - i will probably make this col.1 to have consistent structure with 01:21:766 -
  10. 01:42:518 - well, i was thinking of suggesting this section to be OH-trill instead of 2 hand trill ... since the PR feels really high here, signifies with harder pattern feels okay and more coherent imo.
  11. 01:51:991 - you can use the similar structure as 00:09:134 - instead..
  • [4424]
  1. 00:14:999 (14999|1) - i personally will move this to col 1 and make this consistent stack instead.
  2. 00:28:307 (28307|1,28420|0) - not sure, the flow of broken stream feels awkward.. i will switch column of 00:27:969 (27969|2,28194|3) - , OR you can make more broken stream instead if you want some variation within that section.
  3. 00:42:066 - i expect this to at least have consistent jack with 00:40:262 -
  4. 01:32:029 (92029|1,92142|0) - personally will make this 3-4 to mirroring 01:31:691 (91691|0,91803|1) - and rebalance left hand pattern.
  5. 01:43:871 - since the burst sound really stand out here, you can make the pattern also a bit more stand out? maybe like http://puu.sh/ty5XV/f786aa1d63.jpg ..
  6. 01:48:269 (108269|2,108382|0) - ehh for this kind of pattern, i expect it to be more straining and variative since its reaching the end .. try 1-2?
  7. 01:55:375 (115375|2,115488|1) - move to the right 1x to mirror 01:57:179 - seems good too to mirror jack at 01:57:179 - since it's close to the ending anyway. and 01:51:766 (111766|2,111879|1,111991|0,111991|3,113570|2,113683|1,113796|0,113796|3,115375|2,115488|1,115600|3,115600|0) - this same pattern feels odd to use here..

  • [5332]
  1. 00:09:585 - wild triple appears. since you apparently make triple only for some finish sound in this diff
  2. 00:26:954 - not sure if missing note/not, seems apparently you make continuous stream around this section, if you want to make break at red line, make it consistently at 00:28:758 - ,etc.
  3. 00:37:668 (37668|2,37894|2) - from protas mod, do you indeed not want to accept it? xd
  4. 00:38:909 (38909|0,39021|1) - try Switch column here so the snare at 00:39:134 (39134|2,39247|1) - which have harder sound will be more emphasized this way.
  5. 00:52:442 (52442|3,52442|0,52668|2,52668|1,52894|3,52894|0,53119|2,53119|1,53345|0,53345|3,53570|0,53570|3,53683|0,53683|3,53796|1,53796|2) - personally i'm more fond if you try something like 4-2 3-1 pattern instead since you already use similar one at 01:06:879 -
  6. 01:07:330 - wild triple appears suddenly.
  7. 01:14:773 - instead of linear burst, make it resembling the escalation of the song intensity will be better even if this is 3rd diff, try Switch column between 01:14:886 (74886|1,74942|0) -
  8. 01:17:706 (77706|0,77818|0,92142|2,92254|2) - This jack is quite misleading tbh.. it doesn't have particulary any heavy repeated sound to complement it. if you want the jack it should be at 01:17:254 (77254|1,77367|2) - and 01:31:691 (91691|0,91803|1) -
  9. 01:27:969 - missing note.
  10. 01:28:307 (88307|3,88420|1) - not make this jack? quite strong synth to support it.
  11. 01:29:209 (89209|1,89322|2) - ^same.
  12. 01:34:285 (94285|1,94397|0) - Try switch column between these notes? this way you would get 3-note jack on col 1 to mirror 3-note jack on col.4 and you get to also mirror the double at 01:34:848 (94848|2,94848|0) - which also aesthetically good.
  • [6236]
    Hi shoe xD
  1. 00:10:826 (10826|3,10939|2) - Try Switch column to get different feel pattern with 00:10:488 (10488|3,10563|2) - ? actually just feel the 1/6 before flows a bit awkward compared with other 1/6 being mapped, but that's subjective anyway.
  2. 00:11:315 (11315|0) - not sure bout this snap, yeah there's extra synth sound occurs here, but i don't think this is the correct snap.. idk.. feels like 1/4..
  3. 00:15:224 (15224|2) - i will move this to col 1 to complete the jack that occurs at col.1, mainly because the jack you made at 00:14:097 (14097|2,14322|2,14548|2,14773|2,14999|2) - (to signify that jack melody perhaps) already have noticeable differences with 00:15:224 - that have deeper melody that you signify with col.1 jack at 00:15:450 (15450|0,15676|0,15901|0) - .
  4. 00:24:642 (24642|2,31860|1) - not sure about these 1/8, i thought the burst sound comes out at 00:31:916 - ?
  5. 00:24:247 - personally will make this single to be consistent with other note amount which this synth usually only have single. it also signifies more differences with second part at 00:30:337 - which have more C/W sound.
  6. 00:31:014 - add another note for similar reason as above.
  7. 00:39:548 - feels a bit odd the 1/12 doesn't get mapped here, but i guess it's for the playability here.
  8. 00:48:269 (48269|3) - try move to col.2 to make jack here? the synth has the same power like the jack that you did at 00:49:961 (49961|2,50074|2) - .
  9. 00:51:766 - Add another note for consistency with 00:58:984 - ?
  10. 01:04:679 (64679|3) - not that sure bout this grace, feels like the same as 01:08:288 - , probably want to add another grace at 01:08:288 - .
  11. 01:11:728 - Missing 1/4 i presume?
  12. 01:12:518 - not sure, the single intentional? i thought you still consistent with double for C until 01:13:194 - where you jump to signifies the melody by double and single-ing the W and C.
  13. 01:22:104 - this should be double , and 01:22:217 - should be single instead?
  14. 01:24:698 - well from my perspective here, the left hand pattern feels really really hard with all that OH trill 1-2-1 /OH jack motion that happening.. the alternating movements is too long to be maintained consistency even if the diff indeed revolves arounds the technicality. i know you have 01:25:826 - to rebalance that. but the dominant right hand pattern generally doesn't have long 3-4-3 shenanigans pattern that makes them way a bit overboard imo.. perhaps you can smoothen it up a bit?
  15. 01:28:871 (88871|3) - move to col 3? 01:28:645 (88645|2,88758|2,88871|3) - is definitely triple jack sound that you usually made before. similar with 01:25:036 (85036|1,85149|1,85262|1) -
  16. 01:43:927 (103927|1,103984|3) - Switch column between these 2 notes? constant movement towards left direction flows better when i testplay it.
  17. 01:50:412 - not really sure bout that left hand pattern again.. since even until 01:52:217 - you keep continuously make the left hand dominant pattern there.
  18. 01:59:999 - not single note?
  • [7140]
  1. 00:15:224 (15224|0,15337|2) - try switch column between these notes here, you will get OH left hand trill, but it basically will flow towards 00:15:676 (15676|1,15676|0,15788|1,15901|0) - bcoz of how the music wub-wub-wub works
  2. 00:24:247 (24247|2,24360|3,24585|0) - i would go with 2-3-4 becoz of how i got problem with that col.1 AAAAAAAA , and it still works in terms of pr too..
  3. 00:31:014 (31014|0,31239|1) - i guess you can try switch this column because the first double is actually lower PR than the second.. basically mimicking how 00:30:337 (30337|0,30337|3,30563|1,30563|3) - would works in term of PR.
  4. 00:36:427 (36427|3,36540|0) - not jack? for the consistency with the one you did at 00:34:623 (34623|3,34736|3) - and 00:33:721 (33721|1,33833|1) - , and while we're at it, 00:36:427 - should be single too bcoz it's not kick/crash.
  5. 00:38:006 (38006|3,38119|2) - try 1-4 will give you 1-4-1 trill here, which complement the trill at 00:37:668 (37668|2,37781|1,37894|2) -
  6. 00:40:939 - pretty sure this should be double.
  7. 00:44:548 (44548|0,44660|2) - should be jack too according to 00:43:645 (43645|3,43758|3) -
  8. 00:44:999 (44999|1,45112|2) - 00:45:450 (45450|2,45563|1) - 00:45:901 (45901|1,46014|2) - personally preference, but i would go with jack with these 3 double notes here, since the music are quite down at the moment here, and synth has quite stand out at this part, make these jack will accent the moment better.
  9. 01:01:465 - for melody section you can capture it better with 1/2 jack like http://puu.sh/tzjrc/1238e1949e.png
  10. 01:13:645 (73645|1) - well, my suggestion , you can move this to col.1 , and Ctrl+H 01:13:702 (73702|2,73758|1,73815|2,73871|1) - , that will make the burst "connect" to the one at 01:13:984 (73984|3) - which supposed to flow better since the echo burst sound still there.

    LMAO that kiai buttseck me so hard everytime...

  11. 01:18:157 - eww this is nasty since the jack move towards left direction and it went to 5 jack on col.1 like that when there's already 4 consecutive jack on col 1 before :/ i personally would make col 3 at 01:18:608 - get the jack more since it's the column that hasn't been "used" for the long jack, maybe something like: http://puu.sh/tzkHc/efd03498db.jpg , it should alleviate it better.
  12. 01:19:059 (79059|1,79172|1,79285|1) - anddd.. this one also connect from jack at col.1 with one hand.. no wonder it's somehow so hard to transitioned between each pattern here :/ , my suggestion to switch column between 01:19:172 (79172|1,79285|1,79397|3) -
  13. 01:29:322 (89322|1,89435|3) - switch column here? unless if you intentionally make the jack like that which makes thing really hard to execute orz..

    I just realize you rarely have one hand jack and proceed to do 2 hand jack continuously omg

  14. 01:31:916 (91916|1) - col 3 i think? one hand press > 2 hand press
  15. 01:43:082 - 01:43:307 - just think that you can make double for synth since this is quite underwhelming after that onslaught jack.

    idk whether memoria SHD / this is harder tbh.. but i never get S in this while i did in memoria SHD ..
Cool and unique map here dude, as expected from you..
Call me back.
Shoegazer
osu!mania Paragon
528 posts
Joined April 2013
Shoegazer

Maxus wrote:

  • [6236]
    Hi shoe xD
  1. 00:10:826 (10826|3,10939|2) - Try Switch column to get different feel pattern with 00:10:488 (10488|3,10563|2) - ? actually just feel the 1/6 before flows a bit awkward compared with other 1/6 being mapped, but that's subjective anyway. Deliberate choice because of PR.
  2. 00:11:315 (11315|0) - not sure bout this snap, yeah there's extra synth sound occurs here, but i don't think this is the correct snap.. idk.. feels like 1/4.. Might've been a snapping error there, fixed.
  3. 00:15:224 (15224|2) - i will move this to col 1 to complete the jack that occurs at col.1, mainly because the jack you made at 00:14:097 (14097|2,14322|2,14548|2,14773|2,14999|2) - (to signify that jack melody perhaps) already have noticeable differences with 00:15:224 - that have deeper melody that you signify with col.1 jack at 00:15:450 (15450|0,15676|0,15901|0) - . Interesting catch, the long jack wasn't intentional. Fixed regardless.
  4. 00:24:642 (24642|2,31860|1) - not sure about these 1/8, i thought the burst sound comes out at 00:31:916 - ? I think this was meant to capture the synth, but I can see that it's a ghost note so I removed it.
  5. 00:24:247 - personally will make this single to be consistent with other note amount which this synth usually only have single. it also signifies more differences with second part at 00:30:337 - which have more C/W sound. Whoops, that one was an error. Added doubles to louder sounds like 00:24:360 - and 00:24:698 - instead.
  6. 00:31:014 - add another note for similar reason as above. Kept it as a single, but I chained it with a double after it to create a minijack.
  7. 00:39:548 - feels a bit odd the 1/12 doesn't get mapped here, but i guess it's for the playability here. Yup.
  8. 00:48:269 (48269|3) - try move to col.2 to make jack here? the synth has the same power like the jack that you did at 00:49:961 (49961|2,50074|2) - . Someone might've modified my layering scheme here, I don't recall my layering scheme being like this. Reverted back to the old layering scheme, this wouldn't apply since the jacks are only to the crashes.
  9. 00:51:766 - Add another note for consistency with 00:58:984 - ? Removed the double in 58.984.
  10. 01:04:679 (64679|3) - not that sure bout this grace, feels like the same as 01:08:288 - , probably want to add another grace at 01:08:288 - . Very slightly different chord, so no changes there.
  11. 01:11:728 - Missing 1/4 i presume? Technically a missing note, but it's so inaudible that I felt that omitting it would be fine.
  12. 01:12:518 - not sure, the single intentional? i thought you still consistent with double for C until 01:13:194 - where you jump to signifies the melody by double and single-ing the W and C. Fixed this a little bit, this section was supposed to focus on the synth melody. I fixed it a little to accommodate for that. 01:12:405 - would not be a double in this scheme because last snare layered (before the synth melody) is right before it.
  13. 01:22:104 - this should be double , and 01:22:217 - should be single instead? 01:21:540 - has a stronger synth phrase than this, which is why I didn't include doubles in 82.104. I'm aware that it's a bit too heavy to be a single, but I feel that having a double there would be too overpowering. More willing to undershoot in this case.
  14. 01:24:698 - well from my perspective here, the left hand pattern feels really really hard with all that OH trill 1-2-1 /OH jack motion that happening.. the alternating movements is too long to be maintained consistency even if the diff indeed revolves arounds the technicality. i know you have 01:25:826 - to rebalance that. but the dominant right hand pattern generally doesn't have long 3-4-3 shenanigans pattern that makes them way a bit overboard imo.. perhaps you can smoothen it up a bit? PR again unfortunately, not much I can do about that unless I break the PR in that section.
  15. 01:28:871 (88871|3) - move to col 3? 01:28:645 (88645|2,88758|2,88871|3) - is definitely triple jack sound that you usually made before. similar with 01:25:036 (85036|1,85149|1,85262|1) - No clue why I didn't do this. Fixed.
  16. 01:43:927 (103927|1,103984|3) - Switch column between these 2 notes? constant movement towards left direction flows better when i testplay it. More trills more better.
  17. 01:50:412 - not really sure bout that left hand pattern again.. since even until 01:52:217 - you keep continuously make the left hand dominant pattern there. Can't place a right hand minijack there because combining that with the beeping sounds will create too much right hand bias. I don't think there's too much left hand bias from there, it's a bit balanced out with some right hand minijacks.
  18. 01:59:999 - not single note? Fixed.
Thank you for the mod, I'm not particularly good when it comes to finding technical errors so your mod was a great help.
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

Maxus wrote:

Hi U_J and Shoe!

  • [General]
  1. Since you decided not to use SB again, turn off all widescreen support on all diff. oke
  2. Please tell me where you use "G6". oops xD
  3. Is soft-hitwhistle still be used here? i think no
  • [3516]
  1. 00:23:570 (23570|0,23570|1,24021|1,24021|0) - I personally don't see these double being on the same col being fit with the fact that these double wield a completely different sound here. fixed
  2. 00:26:954 (26954|1,27179|3) - Try Ctrl+G this? the pattern structure that you try to make between 00:26:503 (26503|1,26728|0,26728|2) - and 00:27:405 (27405|2,27630|3,27630|1) - will be more similar in terms of aesthetic there. ok
  3. 00:43:871 (43871|3,44097|2) - not make this jack? since it seems you do it consistently at 00:41:841 (41841|3,42066|3) - 00:40:036 (40036|0,40262|0) - the melody fades out here so I wanted to emphasize that it's a little different
  4. 00:55:375 (55375|0,55600|3) - pretty sure this should be jack. it was meant for the pitch that the second note is in 4, but since other people also pointed it out I just moved both of these notes to 3 so everyone's kinda happy
  5. 01:05:074 - aww that col.2 rip so soon. the structure seems to be really differ from the rest of other similar sections too.. imo there was nothing wrong with it but repatterned into something more fitting
  6. 01:12:066 (72066|3) - not sure what this note doing here. feels really weak compared to the other sound mapped. seems legit
  7. 01:13:645 (73645|1,73871|2) - Well, subjective thing, but since there's a change of music pace with the burst sound here, i will switch column to make the differences with 01:12:969 (72969|1,73194|2) - good idea
  8. 01:14:999 (74999|0,74999|3,75450|3,75450|0) - not really fond of them being in the same column remembering that the second double actually finish sound that's the gate towards kiai, i hope it can be made different somehow. no change there
  9. 01:36:427 (96427|1) - i will probably make this col.1 to have consistent structure with 01:21:766 - ok
  10. 01:42:518 - well, i was thinking of suggesting this section to be OH-trill instead of 2 hand trill ... since the PR feels really high here, signifies with harder pattern feels okay and more coherent imo. can't really fit this, also this mapset in general is more focused towards double trills.
  11. 01:51:991 - you can use the similar structure as 00:09:134 - instead.. good idea
  • [4424]
  1. 00:14:999 (14999|1) - i personally will move this to col 1 and make this consistent stack instead. i like it
  2. 00:28:307 (28307|1,28420|0) - not sure, the flow of broken stream feels awkward.. i will switch column of 00:27:969 (27969|2,28194|3) - , OR you can make more broken stream instead if you want some variation within that section. sure
  3. 00:42:066 - i expect this to at least have consistent jack with 00:40:262 - oki
  4. 01:32:029 (92029|1,92142|0) - personally will make this 3-4 to mirroring 01:31:691 (91691|0,91803|1) - and rebalance left hand pattern. PR, also I really like that pattern
  5. 01:43:871 - since the burst sound really stand out here, you can make the pattern also a bit more stand out? maybe like http://puu.sh/ty5XV/f786aa1d63.jpg .. will keep to current one
  6. 01:48:269 (108269|2,108382|0) - ehh for this kind of pattern, i expect it to be more straining and variative since its reaching the end .. try 1-2? changed this and next one
  7. 01:55:375 (115375|2,115488|1) - move to the right 1x to mirror 01:57:179 - seems good too to mirror jack at 01:57:179 - since it's close to the ending anyway. and 01:51:766 (111766|2,111879|1,111991|0,111991|3,113570|2,113683|1,113796|0,113796|3,115375|2,115488|1,115600|3,115600|0) - this same pattern feels odd to use here.. hard to repattern this one

  • [5332]
  1. 00:09:585 - wild triple appears. since you apparently make triple only for some finish sound in this diff this triple is combined kick and snare, that's why it's a triple
  2. 00:26:954 - not sure if missing note/not, seems apparently you make continuous stream around this section, if you want to make break at red line, make it consistently at 00:28:758 - ,etc. oops
  3. 00:37:668 (37668|2,37894|2) - from protas mod, do you indeed not want to accept it? xd i switched two notes
  4. 00:38:909 (38909|0,39021|1) - try Switch column here so the snare at 00:39:134 (39134|2,39247|1) - which have harder sound will be more emphasized this way. seems good
  5. 00:52:442 (52442|3,52442|0,52668|2,52668|1,52894|3,52894|0,53119|2,53119|1,53345|0,53345|3,53570|0,53570|3,53683|0,53683|3,53796|1,53796|2) - personally i'm more fond if you try something like 4-2 3-1 pattern instead since you already use similar one at 01:06:879 - repatterned my way
  6. 01:07:330 - wild triple appears suddenly. like before
  7. 01:14:773 - instead of linear burst, make it resembling the escalation of the song intensity will be better even if this is 3rd diff, try Switch column between 01:14:886 (74886|1,74942|0) - did a spinstream
  8. 01:17:706 (77706|0,77818|0,92142|2,92254|2) - This jack is quite misleading tbh.. it doesn't have particulary any heavy repeated sound to complement it. if you want the jack it should be at 01:17:254 (77254|1,77367|2) - and 01:31:691 (91691|0,91803|1) - I think it's justified, moved to 3 anyway
  9. 01:27:969 - missing note. woooooooooooops
  10. 01:28:307 (88307|3,88420|1) - not make this jack? quite strong synth to support it. the pitch isn't exactly the same I think, I wanted to make some room for 3-jacks
  11. 01:29:209 (89209|1,89322|2) - ^same.
  12. 01:34:285 (94285|1,94397|0) - Try switch column between these notes? this way you would get 3-note jack on col 1 to mirror 3-note jack on col.4 and you get to also mirror the double at 01:34:848 (94848|2,94848|0) - which also aesthetically good. it makes the chord doubled
  • [6236]
    Hi shoe xD
  1. 00:10:826 (10826|3,10939|2) - Try Switch column to get different feel pattern with 00:10:488 (10488|3,10563|2) - ? actually just feel the 1/6 before flows a bit awkward compared with other 1/6 being mapped, but that's subjective anyway.
  2. 00:11:315 (11315|0) - not sure bout this snap, yeah there's extra synth sound occurs here, but i don't think this is the correct snap.. idk.. feels like 1/4..
  3. 00:15:224 (15224|2) - i will move this to col 1 to complete the jack that occurs at col.1, mainly because the jack you made at 00:14:097 (14097|2,14322|2,14548|2,14773|2,14999|2) - (to signify that jack melody perhaps) already have noticeable differences with 00:15:224 - that have deeper melody that you signify with col.1 jack at 00:15:450 (15450|0,15676|0,15901|0) - .
  4. 00:24:642 (24642|2,31860|1) - not sure about these 1/8, i thought the burst sound comes out at 00:31:916 - ?
  5. 00:24:247 - personally will make this single to be consistent with other note amount which this synth usually only have single. it also signifies more differences with second part at 00:30:337 - which have more C/W sound.
  6. 00:31:014 - add another note for similar reason as above.
  7. 00:39:548 - feels a bit odd the 1/12 doesn't get mapped here, but i guess it's for the playability here.
  8. 00:48:269 (48269|3) - try move to col.2 to make jack here? the synth has the same power like the jack that you did at 00:49:961 (49961|2,50074|2) - .
  9. 00:51:766 - Add another note for consistency with 00:58:984 - ?
  10. 01:04:679 (64679|3) - not that sure bout this grace, feels like the same as 01:08:288 - , probably want to add another grace at 01:08:288 - .
  11. 01:11:728 - Missing 1/4 i presume?
  12. 01:12:518 - not sure, the single intentional? i thought you still consistent with double for C until 01:13:194 - where you jump to signifies the melody by double and single-ing the W and C.
  13. 01:22:104 - this should be double , and 01:22:217 - should be single instead?
  14. 01:24:698 - well from my perspective here, the left hand pattern feels really really hard with all that OH trill 1-2-1 /OH jack motion that happening.. the alternating movements is too long to be maintained consistency even if the diff indeed revolves arounds the technicality. i know you have 01:25:826 - to rebalance that. but the dominant right hand pattern generally doesn't have long 3-4-3 shenanigans pattern that makes them way a bit overboard imo.. perhaps you can smoothen it up a bit?
  15. 01:28:871 (88871|3) - move to col 3? 01:28:645 (88645|2,88758|2,88871|3) - is definitely triple jack sound that you usually made before. similar with 01:25:036 (85036|1,85149|1,85262|1) -
  16. 01:43:927 (103927|1,103984|3) - Switch column between these 2 notes? constant movement towards left direction flows better when i testplay it.
  17. 01:50:412 - not really sure bout that left hand pattern again.. since even until 01:52:217 - you keep continuously make the left hand dominant pattern there.
  18. 01:59:999 - not single note?
  • [7140]
  1. 00:15:224 (15224|0,15337|2) - try switch column between these notes here, you will get OH left hand trill, but it basically will flow towards 00:15:676 (15676|1,15676|0,15788|1,15901|0) - bcoz of how the music wub-wub-wub works works
  2. 00:24:247 (24247|2,24360|3,24585|0) - i would go with 2-3-4 becoz of how i got problem with that col.1 AAAAAAAA , and it still works in terms of pr too.. okay let it be
  3. 00:31:014 (31014|0,31239|1) - i guess you can try switch this column because the first double is actually lower PR than the second.. basically mimicking how 00:30:337 (30337|0,30337|3,30563|1,30563|3) - would works in term of PR. nice idea
  4. 00:36:427 (36427|3,36540|0) - not jack? for the consistency with the one you did at 00:34:623 (34623|3,34736|3) - and 00:33:721 (33721|1,33833|1) - , and while we're at it, 00:36:427 - should be single too bcoz it's not kick/crash. the synth plays different here, with a different sounddeleted one note though
  5. 00:38:006 (38006|3,38119|2) - try 1-4 will give you 1-4-1 trill here, which complement the trill at 00:37:668 (37668|2,37781|1,37894|2) - works
  6. 00:40:939 - pretty sure this should be double. ye
  7. 00:44:548 (44548|0,44660|2) - should be jack too according to 00:43:645 (43645|3,43758|3) - isn't really that strong to put a jack imo
  8. 00:44:999 (44999|1,45112|2) - 00:45:450 (45450|2,45563|1) - 00:45:901 (45901|1,46014|2) - personally preference, but i would go with jack with these 3 double notes here, since the music are quite down at the moment here, and synth has quite stand out at this part, make these jack will accent the moment better.
  9. 01:01:465 - for melody section you can capture it better with 1/2 jack like http://puu.sh/tzjrc/1238e1949e.png i like my pattern better
  10. 01:13:645 (73645|1) - well, my suggestion , you can move this to col.1 , and Ctrl+H 01:13:702 (73702|2,73758|1,73815|2,73871|1) - , that will make the burst "connect" to the one at 01:13:984 (73984|3) - which supposed to flow better since the echo burst sound still there. done

    LMAO that kiai buttseck me so hard everytime... 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)

  11. 01:18:157 - eww this is nasty since the jack move towards left direction and it went to 5 jack on col.1 like that when there's already 4 consecutive jack on col 1 before :/ i personally would make col 3 at 01:18:608 - get the jack more since it's the column that hasn't been "used" for the long jack, maybe something like: http://puu.sh/tzkHc/efd03498db.jpg , it should alleviate it better. ok
  12. 01:19:059 (79059|1,79172|1,79285|1) - anddd.. this one also connect from jack at col.1 with one hand.. no wonder it's somehow so hard to transitioned between each pattern here :/ , my suggestion to switch column between 01:19:172 (79172|1,79285|1,79397|3) - okay ._.
  13. 01:29:322 (89322|1,89435|3) - switch column here? unless if you intentionally make the jack like that which makes thing really hard to execute orz.. repatterned instead

    I just realize you rarely have one hand jack and proceed to do 2 hand jack continuously omg huehueuehuehueuuuheuehue

  14. 01:31:916 (91916|1) - col 3 i think? one hand press > 2 hand press good point
  15. 01:43:082 - 01:43:307 - just think that you can make double for synth since this is quite underwhelming after that onslaught jack. k

    idk whether memoria SHD / this is harder tbh.. but i never get S in this while i did in memoria SHD ..
Cool and unique map here dude, as expected from you.. thanks :D
Call me back.
Great mod!
Maxus
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recheck a bit

[General]
your offset seems a bit too early.. quite sure 3283 (+13) is more correct here, make sure to resnap the notes, kiais, and preview point, and apply the rest of my mod first.
Dude what have you done on 5332 http://puu.sh/tFjtx/05754d00ab.jpg
your hitnormal is unrankable.. http://puu.sh/tFjKD/fbbec4ae13.png only 53ms... use this instead. http://puu.sh/tFjWR/22258c4e45.wav (i make it 105 ms just in case :p)
your normal hitwhistle.. i suggest to also change it just to be safe xd.. http://puu.sh/tFkcb/60547f7c3e.wav

[5332]
01:07:781 (67781|3) - move this to col.3? slight different kick with the 1-4 jack after this.
01:13:702 (73702|1,73758|2) - Ctrl+H this so it will be follow a distort 1/8 roll sound better.
02:00:394 (120394|3,120450|2,120506|1,120563|3,120563|2) - prefer this to be 2-3-4 (23) D:

[6236]
00:55:375 - you might want to make this single, although it's kick, i believe the double only for crash here. similar with 00:57:179 -
01:00:112 (60112|0) - move to col 3 to be consistent with 00:52:894 -
01:42:743 - 01:43:645 - these double follow synth? but it kinda mixed up with double note layering that you did at 01:42:969 - 01:43:194 - while it ignores similar synth for double at 01:43:082 - . maybe want to make them single and add note at 01:42:800 - 01:43:589 - at 1/8 instead for burst sound.
01:54:172 (114172|0) - make this 1/4.

[7140]
01:14:999 - you might want to add another note for kick here.
00:45:224 - 00:46:127 - make these triple? following the same one as 00:23:119 - and 00:24:021 -
01:29:660 - if you want to nerf this a little maybe you can bring burst instead, your choice though.

the rest is fine.. btw, please move this beatmap to pending beatmap section pls :o
_underjoy
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Maxus wrote:

recheck a bit

[General]
your offset seems a bit too early.. quite sure 3283 (+13) is more correct here, make sure to resnap the notes, kiais, and preview point, and apply the rest of my mod first.
Dude what have you done on 5332 http://puu.sh/tFjtx/05754d00ab.jpg
your hitnormal is unrankable.. http://puu.sh/tFjKD/fbbec4ae13.png only 53ms... use this instead. http://puu.sh/tFjWR/22258c4e45.wav (i make it 105 ms just in case :p)
your normal hitwhistle.. i suggest to also change it just to be safe xd.. http://puu.sh/tFkcb/60547f7c3e.wav embarassing changes xD fixed al

[5332]
01:07:781 (67781|3) - move this to col.3? slight different kick with the 1-4 jack after this. it plays better on [14] plus the sounds seem very similar (a slight difference in kick is not enough)
01:13:702 (73702|1,73758|2) - Ctrl+H this so it will be follow a distort 1/8 roll sound better. makes a trill and plays worse
02:00:394 (120394|3,120450|2,120506|1,120563|3,120563|2) - prefer this to be 2-3-4 (23) D: i find my pattern better ;)

[6236]
00:55:375 - you might want to make this single, although it's kick, i believe the double only for crash here. similar with 00:57:179 -
01:00:112 (60112|0) - move to col 3 to be consistent with 00:52:894 -
01:42:743 - 01:43:645 - these double follow synth? but it kinda mixed up with double note layering that you did at 01:42:969 - 01:43:194 - while it ignores similar synth for double at 01:43:082 - . maybe want to make them single and add note at 01:42:800 - 01:43:589 - at 1/8 instead for burst sound.
01:54:172 (114172|0) - make this 1/4.

[7140]
01:14:999 - you might want to add another note for kick here. added + slight repattern
00:45:224 - 00:46:127 - make these triple? following the same one as 00:23:119 - and 00:24:021 - the triple note in this segment is both for kick and snare unlike two other notes. Also note that the notes you're comparing to are just kicks (I made them all 3-noters in said fragment)
01:29:660 - if you want to nerf this a little maybe you can bring burst instead, your choice though. i'll keep current pattern

the rest is fine.. btw, please move this beatmap to pending beatmap section pls :o
waiting for Shoe to apply his diff then will update
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Maxus wrote:

[6236]
00:55:375 - you might want to make this single, although it's kick, i believe the double only for crash here. similar with 00:57:179 -
01:00:112 (60112|0) - move to col 3 to be consistent with 00:52:894 -
01:42:743 - 01:43:645 - these double follow synth? but it kinda mixed up with double note layering that you did at 01:42:969 - 01:43:194 - while it ignores similar synth for double at 01:43:082 - . maybe want to make them single and add note at 01:42:800 - 01:43:589 - at 1/8 instead for burst sound.
01:54:172 (114172|0) - make this 1/4.
Fixed everything to various degrees except for a 1/8 in 103.589. I couldn't hear any 1/8s in that section, though I can see why you'd add it there. For the second last point, I just added doubles to synths in a way that is satisfactory and removed the double to the snare because it makes that section too convoluted (but made a 1/4 minitrill anyway so it'd fit); should be more consistent now.
_underjoy
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all updated
Maxus
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~o~)/
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Maxus wrote:

~o~)/
<3
Kawawa
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[General]
Some wav file were delayed(F6.wav was delayed 5ms over)
Change with this http://puu.sh/tN9mj/0cb64c6544.zip

Also, I already checked 4diffs with creator.
metadata too. 8-)

[6236]
※ Disable the Widescreen Support
http://puu.sh/tN8Sg/7507f41d13.png

00:06:610 (6610|1) - The snap is kinda fast than beep sound.
so I recommend you to consider it once again. my suggestion is here 00:06:638 - 1/16

00:10:557 (10557|2) - Same with above. 00:10:585 -
especially, It feels too fast than sound.

00:39:429 (39429|0) - If It is a intention for beep, It should be snapped here 00:39:457 - as above
The beep is here 00:39:457 - 00:39:542 -
but If you're not expressed them, then I think I recommend you to snap it as 1/4 stream.

01:49:467 (109467|1) - Same with above. 01:49:495 -
01:53:414 (113414|2) - Same with above 01:53:442 -

okay when done. call me.
Shoegazer
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Fixed everything. Had to modify the layering in 39.429 for a little bit, but it's not significant in the grand scheme of things.
_underjoy
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Updated all diffs plus changed hitnormal into something better (imo).
Be sure to check it before you qualify.
Kawawa
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everything. confirmed,
Congratz! :)
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oiii ^^
Arzenvald
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00:52:004 (52004|0) - i swear this should be D#6.wav and you should resnap all storyboard sample sound (boop your tab button)

another interesting jack map yay
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Disqualified as requested.

Call me back!
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Blocko wrote:

Disqualified as requested.

Call me back!
Fixed!
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Here's your heart back!

:heart:
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Blocko wrote:

Here's your heart back!

:heart:
my kokoro goes doki doki for you Blocko-senpai! ><
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