late nm from amino
you didn't fully apply Ayyri's suggestions about 1/3 rhythms, so I will have to explain that to you
[general]
use actual custom combo colors instead of repeating the default blue
add some more tags: ghost fallen child genocide pacifist pc steam blah blah
[easy]
plz refer to my comments on the other hard
thanks
[hard]
you didn't fully apply Ayyri's suggestions about 1/3 rhythms, so I will have to explain that to you
[general]
use actual custom combo colors instead of repeating the default blue
add some more tags: ghost fallen child genocide pacifist pc steam blah blah
[easy]
- fix the ds errors in AiMod
- 00:00:109 (1,2,3) - your blankets are off, fix them if you care about them
- 00:05:442 (1) - just stack it with 00:03:308 (4) - this, and fix the DS in that area too
- 00:18:242 (2,3) - I can't agree with this rhythm, it leaves strong beats such as 00:19:308 - this and 00:20:908 - this unclickable
Try a rhythm where they are more clickable, eg. - 00:27:842 - strong beat is unclickable, make it clickable
- 00:29:975 - ^
- fix blankets as you see fit if you care
- 00:01:175 (3,4) - I can't agree with this rhythm, you're missing out on the note 00:01:575 - here, maybe trying to map it 00:01:708 - here. I recommend a reverse slider starting 00:01:175 - here going to 00:01:975 - here, eg.
- 00:03:308 (3,4,5) - ^
- 00:05:442 (3,4) - ^ ...fix the rhythm in these places
- 00:06:508 (1,2) - the flow here is bad, you shouldn't use straight sliders to make sharp curves like that
- 00:08:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ you keep doing it...
- 00:15:042 (1,2,3) - ^ ...either make the turns more liner or curve the sliders, you can kinda tell it feels uncomfy when playing
- 00:20:775 - you missed a pretty strong 1/4 here, you know what to do
- 00:24:642 (8) - right angles are usually awful flow, especially in this case with the straight sliders,
- 00:32:108 (1) - remove the spinner and just map it, you need 2 measures of spinner recovery in normal and you're not getting it with the spinner here
- 00:40:642 (1) - ^ same case
plz refer to my comments on the other hard
thanks
[hard]
- Switch to BSD 1/6 to apply these.
- 00:09:975 (5,6) - you're missing 1/3 patterns here, 00:09:975 (5) - this slider should end 00:09:975 (5) - here, and this 00:10:508 (6) - should be 2 notes placed 00:10:420 - here and 00:10:597 - here. To illustrate, this should be your rhythm:
- 00:12:108 (5,6) - ^ use a similar rhythm here
- 00:14:242 (5,6) - ^ etc. you missed a lot of 1/3
- 00:18:331 -
- 00:19:486 -
- 00:19:753 -
- 00:20:020 -
- 00:20:286 -
- 00:20:553 - etc.