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Choucho - When the First Love Ends

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AisamaDX
ひゅーん
Izel_old
骨折しましたね
S o r d a
god
Topic Starter
MeLLoN

[Shalon] wrote:

Done =w=

This song is so sad, especially for me, haha..
oh,yes :(
Thanks taiko diff!!
AnikiG4
ヽ(*´∀`)ノ
Rigeru_old
8-)
AngelHoney
:) :) :)
Topic Starter
MeLLoN
thanks star~ ☆
Mayoi Neko
Moe Collab~
DeadAlready
>< done

Download: Chocho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [5item's Normal].osu

really sorry for late Orz

please call me if there is any problem in my diff, thank you ></

then 3 stars for you~ ganbattene! >w</
Topic Starter
MeLLoN
quinありがとう~~~~(*´∀`*)
subarasikibuta
osokatta..star~
Thite
star :)
Verdisphena
moe
ArzatoRx
nice map! <(_ _)> idol~
add 0.0///// to tag?xD (ヾquin娘ノ゛)
AngelHoney
all suggestions~

All

add tag "quintitem" to all diffs

Collab

00:22:552 - add a note ?
02:02:385 (2) - change rhythm like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/65828
02:11:718 (3) - remove ?
02:37:718 (2,3) - volume up ?
03:02:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/65831
03:16:496 (3) - start at 03:16:384 ? (return +1 ?
03:17:384 (1) - change it to circle ?
03:23:884 (5) - remove ?

\\\0.0/////

00:57:718 (8) - return -2 ?
02:18:051 (9) - ^

fighto~
[Shalon]

AngelHoney wrote:

All

add tag "quintitem" to all diffs
plz add [Shalon], too ;)
Garven
02:39:051 - :<

Set your slider velocity to 0.85

Change all of your custom speeds to double of what they are now.

02:39:051 - Delete this timing section, and add an inherited timing section at 0.5 slider speed.

02:40:385 - And finally, delete this timing section as well, set it as inherited and start the kiai again.

Everything will be the same and you won't have to use the unrankable timing section change. Applies to the Taiko difficulty too, I suppose.
mycyber
like the song
star~~
SPOILER
some spoiler suggestion mod XD
[collab]

02:02:218(x) - add note here?(+ whistle)
03:15:718 (2) - short it until 03:16:051
03:16:218(x) -add note here?(+ clap)
03:16:496 (3) - start at 03:16:551- repeat until 03:17:051
i think this sound btter..
Alace
i got +10ms to offset
hmm i really hope we can have X 0.25 green lines
generally, using red lines to change slider speed is unrankable now
Topic Starter
MeLLoN

AngelHoney wrote:

all suggestions~

All

add tag "quintitem" to all diffs

Collab

00:22:552 - add a note ? fixed
02:02:385 (2) - change rhythm like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/65828 no
02:11:718 (3) - remove ? fixed
02:37:718 (2,3) - volume up ? no
03:02:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/65831 fixed
03:16:496 (3) - start at 03:16:384 ? (return +1 ? hmm..no ><
03:17:384 (1) - change it to circle ? no
03:23:884 (5) - remove ? fixed

\\0.0/////

00:57:718 (8) - return -2 ? fixed
02:18:051 (9) - ^ fixed

fighto~
almost done!
thanks Mod~ :)
Garven

Alace wrote:

i got +10ms to offset
hmm i really hope we can have X 0.25 green lines
generally, using red lines to change slider speed is unrankable now
You know, if you just applied what I proposed, you would have the exact same map, only rankable. :P
ignorethis
the mp3 is 256kbps, that's unrankable T_T

<Collab>
I suggest adding claps for the whole song to keep consistency @.@
01:22:218 (3) - looks bad :o
03:16:496 (3) - i know you're following the drum in the background, but you may lower the volume for this to make it sound better

nice :D
xierbaliti
sorry i'm too late. T_T
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by kanpakyin

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

The current offset sounds too early for me. Maybe try 15060 in all diffs ? Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset ~

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]

I don't suggest changing BPM for the slow slider at 02:39:051. The speed is also too slow imo. I suggset using BPM x 0.5 instead ( Or x 0.25 for effects of BPM 45 )~

Suggested patterns
These are all suggestions only. Change them if you want to ~

00:37:051 ( 54 ) Blue note ?

00:42:885 ( x ) Add a red note ?

00:45:051 ( x ) ^
00:47:718 ( x, 98 ) Change both to blue notes ? ( Change both 00:45:051 and 00:47:718 )

00:57:051 ( 138 ~ 147 ) ooo ooooooo ?

01:00:051 ( 151, 154 ~ 155, 157 ~ 159, 161 ~ 164 ) All blue notes ? ( Pattern of oooo oooo oooo )

01:16:385 ( 222 ) Blue note ?

01:40:218 ( 356 ) ^

01:46:135 ( 382, 388 ) Delete both notes ? ( Divide the stream into 5, 5, 3 plets )

02:16:385 ( 47, 50, 53 ) All blue notes ?

02:19:051 ( 64 ~ 82 ) Add some blue hitsounds. You may use the patterns I mentioned above ( 01:00:051 ) or your own patterns.

02:26:385 ( 88, 89 ) Change both to blue notes ?

02:29:385 ( 105 ) Blue note ?

02:36:385 ( 138 ) ^

03:06:718 ( 155 ) ^

03:19:051 ( 212 ~ 215 ) Use blue note for 212, and delete 213 ~ 215 ?

03:22:718 ( 229 ) Blue note ?

03:24:051 ( 235 ~ 238 ) All blue notes ?

03:27:384 ( 259, 260 ) Use both red notes ?

No errors found. Nice job ~ :)

Next time you can use more different types of patterns and hitsounds ~

btw I like the song ~

Star and good luck ~ ;)
[Shalon]
Fixed ;)

I have no idea with timing, I'll follow MeLLoN's decision.

Download: Chocho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
matthewhln
wow, good map

Star
Sanjenin Nagi
star!!!

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my love!!!!!

MakJang ♡ Noobita
Rucker
:)
[Shalon]
hey, why don't you update my map :(
Topic Starter
MeLLoN

[Shalon] wrote:

hey, why don't you update my map :(
upload~ ><
sorry,I'm so busy everyday :(
Topic Starter
MeLLoN
Thanks many Mod~
almost fixed~ :)
Garven
IRCで話したら、ArtistはChocho->Choucho

[5item's Normal]
00:38:051 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It may be best to map through the spinner.
00:59:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
01:09:718 (1) - Also too soon. And again probably best to map through the spinner. Maybe with something like this?
02:19:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
02:29:718 (1) - Same as the last spinner, along with same suggestion of slider replacement.

[[Shalon]'s Tiako]
Add quintitem and [Shalon] to tags
00:17:052 - Yahoo! Maybe just delete the break?
Apply the same timing suggestion from the other difficulties and apply it to this one as well so you can have the similar slowdown effect though honestly, it doesn't work very well in taiko mode. I'd just get rid of it. :x

[Collab]
The normal-hitwhistles sounded really loud compared to the rest of the parts. x_x Think you can introduce a custom one with a lower dB rate? Otherwise the map looks good to me~
Actually: 03:16:561 (3) - could be more synced to the music by reducing one repeat and starting at 03:16:478 -
Sander-Don
[Shalon]'s taiko: remove the letter box during breaks

great map, star~
DeadAlready

Garven wrote:

[5item's Normal]
00:38:051 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It may be best to map through the spinner.
00:59:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
01:09:718 (1) - Also too soon. And again probably best to map through the spinner. Maybe with something like this?
02:19:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
02:29:718 (1) - Same as the last spinner, along with same suggestion of slider replacement.
oh ok, all nice suggestions >w< so all fixed~ thank you~ :3

then mellon sorry for let you need to upload again for me >_<
I'm already all fixed so just put this to map document then submit is ok, thank you ></

Download: Choucho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [5item's Normal].osu
[Shalon]
Garven
Fixed a couple hitsounds that were missing in Collab.

Bubbled!

:U
Topic Starter
MeLLoN

Garven wrote:

Fixed a couple hitsounds that were missing in Collab.

Bubbled!

:U
thanks Mod~ :)
m i z u k i
go-
[Shalon]
My map seems small weird..

well, 00:26:385 (7,8,9,10) - this part was 1/3, but snapped 1/4 on now.

03:16:395 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - same with here

Well, if my map get mod about that part by BAT, plz change it with this file.

sorry to bother you.

Download: Choucho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
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