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Motoi Sakuraba - Theme of Rena (Music Box)
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Your image size is not correct! it must be 800x600 or 1024x768
Normal:
00:07:339 - put a circle here
Hard:
I can't say anything about it. Just one thing - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders :/ For example this slider on 'Hard' difficulty - 00:14:192. Maybe you should change such sliders? It will A LOT better then
Anyway,nice song! Star!
Normal:
00:07:339 - put a circle here
Hard:
I can't say anything about it. Just one thing - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders :/ For example this slider on 'Hard' difficulty - 00:14:192. Maybe you should change such sliders? It will A LOT better then
Anyway,nice song! Star!
Hi there
General
Use Offset -1.621 because it have a heavybeat on there, I use negative offset because when I set the offset to 1.541, it could be bad if red timing is place after the object and set the time signature to 3/4, since it fit on the beat, time signature of 4/4 doesn't seems fit to the beat
Normal
00:05:758 (2) - It's kinda pretty odd for me, the wave slider is not what I am imagine, try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54106
00:09:448 (4) - Remove 1 redpoint inside this slider by right-clicking the redpoint 2 times, so it makes pretty slider (redpoint = red square wwww)
00:23:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a pattern like this XD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54107
00:48:980 (9) - Again, try remove 1 redpoint inside this slider
Hard
00:09:448 (4) - Remove 1 redpoint inside this slider by right-clicking the redpoint 2 times, so it makes pretty slider
00:48:980 (9) - Ugly slider, try something else orz
00:53:197 (4,5) - These slider a put in the same ticks on 00:54:251, please remove 00:54:251 (5) or change it something else
=w=b
General
Use Offset -1.621 because it have a heavybeat on there, I use negative offset because when I set the offset to 1.541, it could be bad if red timing is place after the object and set the time signature to 3/4, since it fit on the beat, time signature of 4/4 doesn't seems fit to the beat
Normal
00:05:758 (2) - It's kinda pretty odd for me, the wave slider is not what I am imagine, try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54106
00:09:448 (4) - Remove 1 redpoint inside this slider by right-clicking the redpoint 2 times, so it makes pretty slider (redpoint = red square wwww)
00:23:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a pattern like this XD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54107
00:48:980 (9) - Again, try remove 1 redpoint inside this slider
Hard
00:09:448 (4) - Remove 1 redpoint inside this slider by right-clicking the redpoint 2 times, so it makes pretty slider
00:48:980 (9) - Ugly slider, try something else orz
00:53:197 (4,5) - These slider a put in the same ticks on 00:54:251, please remove 00:54:251 (5) or change it something else
=w=b
Wow, great job!!
And this is your first submitted beatmap... Very impressive...
By Mod Request:
General
You are going to add a another difficulty right? Because you really should.
It should be in 3/4 time signature. If you don't know what that is, pm me.
[Normal]
00:00:487 (1) - make all of the sliders like this more rounder by putting another red sliderpoint on the other side of the slider
00:48:980 (9) - ^
00:55:305 (4) - extend the red sliderpoint and the other point more and move the sliderpoint in the end back
Like this:
[Hard]
00:12:347 (8) - 1 grid down
00:17:354 (2) - just make it more rounder
Well, good luck!!
And this is your first submitted beatmap... Very impressive...
By Mod Request:
General
You are going to add a another difficulty right? Because you really should.
It should be in 3/4 time signature. If you don't know what that is, pm me.
[Normal]
00:00:487 (1) - make all of the sliders like this more rounder by putting another red sliderpoint on the other side of the slider
00:48:980 (9) - ^
00:55:305 (4) - extend the red sliderpoint and the other point more and move the sliderpoint in the end back
Like this:
[Hard]
00:12:347 (8) - 1 grid down
00:17:354 (2) - just make it more rounder
Well, good luck!!
Hi hi >o<
Normal
00:47:926 (8) - (nazi sorry) place this slider like this http://puu.sh/QXe, looks better imo.
Hard
00:11:556 (6) - new combo
00:54:251 (5) - ^
That's all I could find. I see you wanted some opinions about the diff names, they're good the way they are now imo. And it was a pretty nice job for your first beatmap, specially some sliders that you've got here. Well, that's it. Good luck on ranking ^-^
Normal
00:47:926 (8) - (nazi sorry) place this slider like this http://puu.sh/QXe, looks better imo.
Hard
00:11:556 (6) - new combo
00:54:251 (5) - ^
That's all I could find. I see you wanted some opinions about the diff names, they're good the way they are now imo. And it was a pretty nice job for your first beatmap, specially some sliders that you've got here. Well, that's it. Good luck on ranking ^-^
General
Just suggestion. May be, can you try make sliderslide noiseless (custom hitsound of sliderslide) ?
If you don't know how make it, send pm to me.
Normal
00:05:758 (2) - make end of this slider at the white tick (00:06:812)
00:15:773 (4) - remove whistle?
That's all. Nice song.
Just suggestion. May be, can you try make sliderslide noiseless (custom hitsound of sliderslide) ?
If you don't know how make it, send pm to me.
Normal
00:05:758 (2) - make end of this slider at the white tick (00:06:812)
00:15:773 (4) - remove whistle?
That's all. Nice song.
Hi^^
Easy:
00:11:029 new combo?
00:11:556 remove combo?
00:28:950 add whistle to this spinner?
Normal:
00:28:950 add whistle?
00:32:113 add whistle?
Hard:
Nothing found:))
Very, very nice job on hitsounds))
Star!!
Easy:
00:11:029 new combo?
00:11:556 remove combo?
00:28:950 add whistle to this spinner?
Normal:
00:28:950 add whistle?
00:32:113 add whistle?
Hard:
Nothing found:))
Very, very nice job on hitsounds
))Star!!
Sorry for a late reply 
[Easy]
00:54:251 (3) - whistle at start?
00:58:995 (2) - whistle at start or at end?
[Normal]
00:18:935 (5) - remove whistle and add whistle at start of 00:19:463 (6) ?
00:54:251 (3) - whistle here or at 00:55:305 (4) ?
[Hard]
Make sliders silent just like in Normal.
00:09:448 (4) - whistle at start? if yes, then remove whistle here 00:11:029 (5)
00:13:137 (4) - whistle at start?
00:22:098 (5) - whistle at 00:22:625 ?
00:25:788 (4) - whistle at start?
00:30:005 (1) - include this this as a part of the gradually increasing sound combo too?
Great hitsounds in the second half. I like it.
I think that's all.
[Easy]
00:54:251 (3) - whistle at start?
00:58:995 (2) - whistle at start or at end?
[Normal]
00:18:935 (5) - remove whistle and add whistle at start of 00:19:463 (6) ?
00:54:251 (3) - whistle here or at 00:55:305 (4) ?
[Hard]
Make sliders silent just like in Normal.
00:09:448 (4) - whistle at start? if yes, then remove whistle here 00:11:029 (5)
00:13:137 (4) - whistle at start?
00:22:098 (5) - whistle at 00:22:625 ?
00:25:788 (4) - whistle at start?
00:30:005 (1) - include this this as a part of the gradually increasing sound combo too?
Great hitsounds in the second half. I like it.
I think that's all.
Hi! Here's my mod;
General;
- Use these colors
Easy;
- Bigger circle size
- Nice, just that ^
Normal;
- 00:48:980 >> Make it look nice and symmetrical ~
Hard;
- 00:19:463 >> Umm, all your other sliders are nice and curved this one ... is not
- 00:55:305 (1,2) >> Spacing ~~
* Star ~
General;
- Use these colors
Combo1 : 156,141,182- You could probably cut the song, just a little but is not a big issue so yeah
Combo2 : 226,46,46
Combo3 : 247,217,128
Combo4 : 64,102,204
Combo5 : 53,68,117
Easy;
- Bigger circle size
- Nice, just that ^
Normal;
- 00:48:980 >> Make it look nice and symmetrical ~
Hard;
- 00:19:463 >> Umm, all your other sliders are nice and curved this one ... is not
- 00:55:305 (1,2) >> Spacing ~~
* Star ~
General:
-I think the .mp3 fades out too early. o_o Perhaps you could find one that fades out later? Also, as a result, the beatmap ends at an odd place.
Easy:
00:36:330 (1,1,1,1) - Move the third one and the fourth one out from under the first and second one.
Normal:
-I love the volume effects you did in that one part. <3
00:11:556 (1) - Too far
00:21:044 (1) - ^
00:36:593 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be nice if you went through these streams, turned grid snap off, and move the notes to make them all the same distance (though keep the general path of the notes). As it is grid snap makes them unevenly spaced, so I think it would look a lot nicer.
00:39:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (though it's hardly noticeable here)
00:42:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:42:919 (1) - Too far
Hard:
00:27:105 - 00:51:089: Like in [Normal], it would be nice if you turned grid snap off and rearranged the notes so they're spaced exactly the same (they're pretty close to each other, so small differences are more noticaeble)
00:33:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd be nice if you made the first note quiet and made the later ones louder like you did with the other streams
00:50:034 (2,3,4,5) - Make these notes part of the fade-in too
00:56:360 (2) - Too close
Nice map so far! *stars*
-I think the .mp3 fades out too early. o_o Perhaps you could find one that fades out later? Also, as a result, the beatmap ends at an odd place.
Easy:
00:36:330 (1,1,1,1) - Move the third one and the fourth one out from under the first and second one.
Normal:
-I love the volume effects you did in that one part. <3
00:11:556 (1) - Too far
00:21:044 (1) - ^
00:36:593 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be nice if you went through these streams, turned grid snap off, and move the notes to make them all the same distance (though keep the general path of the notes). As it is grid snap makes them unevenly spaced, so I think it would look a lot nicer.
00:39:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (though it's hardly noticeable here)
00:42:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:42:919 (1) - Too far
Hard:
00:27:105 - 00:51:089: Like in [Normal], it would be nice if you turned grid snap off and rearranged the notes so they're spaced exactly the same (they're pretty close to each other, so small differences are more noticaeble)
00:33:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd be nice if you made the first note quiet and made the later ones louder like you did with the other streams
00:50:034 (2,3,4,5) - Make these notes part of the fade-in too
00:56:360 (2) - Too close
Nice map so far! *stars*
General
--Offset -1,646 seems to work better
--Song ends somewhat abruptly in my opinion, but i guess it's ok.
Hard
I would consider making this level harder (i.e larger spacing or more notes)
At this current moment, it's almost like a normal+ and it's barely harder than normal in my opinion
00:26:817(8) - make silent or close to silent
00:33:142(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is the sound pattern different here?
Easy
00:36:305(1) - make silent or close to silent
00:39:467(1) - ^
00:42:630(1) - ^
00:45:793(1) - ^
nice map.
Star~
--Offset -1,646 seems to work better
--Song ends somewhat abruptly in my opinion, but i guess it's ok.
Hard
I would consider making this level harder (i.e larger spacing or more notes)
At this current moment, it's almost like a normal+ and it's barely harder than normal in my opinion
00:26:817(8) - make silent or close to silent
00:33:142(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is the sound pattern different here?
Easy
00:36:305(1) - make silent or close to silent
00:39:467(1) - ^
00:42:630(1) - ^
00:45:793(1) - ^
nice map.
Star~
Mm.. The music is so simple that i think all the beats are okay where they are,... The only thing is the sliders shape which have been poked out to you erlier. The song can be easily having sliders going with it... A triangular shape where ticks are would be nice - See an example here
This is not really a mod but,... I don't like the image you used for the background, so I just simply have a few more propositions for you...
Overall, beautifully done~ Star~
This is not really a mod but,... I don't like the image you used for the background, so I just simply have a few more propositions for you...
Overall, beautifully done~ Star~
General
I don't find any major problems with this map at all.
Oh those BGs above my post look pretty nice, I'd consider using them.
- 00:58:468 - I totally suggest to finish the map here, those last notes do not sound good because the mp3 starts fading out and you only mapped the beginning of the fade out, so it's kinda odd . Just delete those notes and finish it here (00:57:414 )
- SliderTickRate: 2 sounds pretty nice, If you don't want to add it to the whole map, at least add it to Easy where it fits perfectly.
- Tags: "PS" is too short, remove it. "PS1" & "RPG" seem too generic , I'd remove it but it's ok if you keep them.
- 00:29:214 - The song is short enough, the patterns are east enough. In my opinion this break is unnecessary, I highly suggest to remove it and map something here.
- Ok, I don't find any problems here, just some suggestions for your next maps:
- The slider-speed you used here is too slow so it gets boring after a while, try using something faster but reasonable for easy.
- The map looks so linear (It goes around the border of the playground over and over again) , Try moving notes around and create some creative and nice shapes.
- I would increase Ar +1 since the song is slow and the patterns are easy enough.
- 00:46:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is a bit long, use New Combo on (9)
- 00:26:842 (1,1) - You could add a whistle at the end of the 1st spinner like you did with the 2nd one.
- The map is 1/1 ... and suddenly a 20secs~ 1/2 stream appears, I guess it's ok this time. but try to make your next maps more balanced.
- Only one thing caught my attention.
- 00:48:980 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The New Combo starts on (9) remove it from (1).
I don't find any major problems with this map at all.
Oh those BGs above my post look pretty nice, I'd consider using them.
[General]
For a 58 second map, I'm guessing 3 difficulty is too little.
even TV-size (1min 30sec) maps have like 4~5 difficulties. not a big deal, but still.
umm.. there aren't major errors or somthing like that,
since you said your gonna make easy map, it's okay about Easy and Normal.
but even hard, feels kinda sleepy and boring. at least I would suggest you to increase slider Velosity.
hard difficulty has too monotonous pattern from about 00:36:330 (slider + lots of circle)
maybe incresing SV and using reapeat slider can make this less boring though.
or how about making insane?
tha..that doesn't mean I didn't like your map and music. good relaxing map tho!
good circle and slider placing as a first submission. star!
For a 58 second map, I'm guessing 3 difficulty is too little.
even TV-size (1min 30sec) maps have like 4~5 difficulties. not a big deal, but still.
umm.. there aren't major errors or somthing like that,
since you said your gonna make easy map, it's okay about Easy and Normal.
but even hard, feels kinda sleepy and boring. at least I would suggest you to increase slider Velosity.
hard difficulty has too monotonous pattern from about 00:36:330 (slider + lots of circle)
maybe incresing SV and using reapeat slider can make this less boring though.
or how about making insane?
tha..that doesn't mean I didn't like your map and music. good relaxing map tho!
good circle and slider placing as a first submission. star!
Hmmm,why when i downloaded the beatmap i found in it only easy diff? 
Try to reupload,then i'll do a mod of this map
Try to reupload,then i'll do a mod of this map
Topic Starter
Did a full reload, should be working now
Here, have an Insane guest diff.
If you decide to include it, add my name to the tags of all difficulties.
Download: Motoi Sakuraba - Theme of Rena (Music Box) (AzureDraco) [SapphireGhost's Music Box].osu
If you decide to include it, add my name to the tags of all difficulties.
Download: Motoi Sakuraba - Theme of Rena (Music Box) (AzureDraco) [SapphireGhost's Music Box].osu
Topic Starter
Checked the insane, and Ive got kind of mixed feelings atm
These are my opinions so no need to start flame wars just because i said something
Pros:
The difficulty on insane leans more towards to accuracy rather then clicking a ton of circles, goodie.
Some parts sound good (I know what you are thinking of the other parts now :p).
Not really any mapping failures in gameplay (unless you count on the ones I didnt like).
Cons:
Yep...I didnt like some parts of the song, or lets say they left kind of neutral feeling since the beats didnt
sound off but they didnt really go with the music either.
The HP drain, yes I know its insane and i agree with it otherwise but the last slider (star) really had your
HP going down which would make you fail if you landed bad in there (anyone remember "cant defeat airman"?).
Overall:
I'd say that I would include it but I would like it to be more flowing with the music (or something).
Also if I would add it then would you be editing it or do I have to do it?
These are my opinions so no need to start flame wars just because i said something
Pros:
The difficulty on insane leans more towards to accuracy rather then clicking a ton of circles, goodie.
Some parts sound good (I know what you are thinking of the other parts now :p).
Not really any mapping failures in gameplay (unless you count on the ones I didnt like).
Cons:
Yep...I didnt like some parts of the song, or lets say they left kind of neutral feeling since the beats didnt
sound off but they didnt really go with the music either.
The HP drain, yes I know its insane and i agree with it otherwise but the last slider (star) really had your
HP going down which would make you fail if you landed bad in there (anyone remember "cant defeat airman"?).
Overall:
I'd say that I would include it but I would like it to be more flowing with the music (or something).
Also if I would add it then would you be editing it or do I have to do it?
AzureDraco wrote:
Checked the insane, and Ive got kind of mixed feelings atm
These are my opinions so no need to start flame wars just because i said something
Pros:
The difficulty on insane leans more towards to accuracy rather then clicking a ton of circles, goodie. Yum.
Some parts sound good (I know what you are thinking of the other parts now :p).
Not really any mapping failures in gameplay (unless you count on the ones I didnt like).
Cons:
Yep...I didnt like some parts of the song, or lets say they left kind of neutral feeling since the beats didnt
sound off but they didnt really go with the music either. Let me know which parts?
The HP drain, yes I know its insane and i agree with it otherwise but the last slider (star) really had your
HP going down which would make you fail if you landed bad in there (anyone remember "cant defeat airman"?). You're right about that. Not sure how to fix at the moment.
Overall:
I'd say that I would include it but I would like it to be more flowing with the music (or something). Very good.
Also if I would add it then would you be editing it or do I have to do it? Nah, I'd be editing. P.S. I also meant to use the seocnd picture from that one post (guy fishing for stars) as the BG
Topic Starter
For example the first seconds of the insane feels like just clicking in rather monotonous way, rather then feeling like that youd be playing along with the music. Try to compare it to 00:33:142 (1) - 00:40:258 (5), that part feels more like that you are playing with the music instead of "just clicking". I dont know if what im trying to say is getting across, but basically you would need to feel like you are playing music instead of playing game
[General] offset -1638
[Hard]
00:06:268 -add whistle?
00:11:539 (1,2,3) - plz add some hitsound?
00:14:702 (2,3,4) - ^
and i can't here your gradually raise volume at start.
[normal]and[easy] looks fine
cute map,star+1
;3
[Hard]
00:06:268 -add whistle?
00:11:539 (1,2,3) - plz add some hitsound?
00:14:702 (2,3,4) - ^
and i can't here your gradually raise volume at start.
[normal]and[easy] looks fine
cute map,star+1
;3
Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod~
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
00:15:229(4):put it under the notes
00:52:126(1):put it undet the slider
Very good map!Star
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
00:15:229(4):put it under the notes
00:52:126(1):put it undet the slider
Very good map!Star
[Hard]
00:17:337 (2,3,4,5,6) - Tämä mutka ei käänny kovin nätisti, voisi ehkä tehdä tämmöisen;
_00:17:337 (2) - Kaksi viimeistä neliötä molemmat yksi grid vasemmalle
_00:18:128 (3) - Yksi grid vasemmalle
_00:18:655 (5) - yksi grid alas
00:48:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Taas hieman jäykästi ja rumasti kääntyvä mutka.
[Normal]
Miksi ainoastaan tämä diff loppuu spinneriin?
00:00:470 (1) - Ei ole kovin kivan näköinen tuon punaisen neliön kanssa...
00:09:431 (4) - Punaista ja toiseksiviimeistä neliötä molempia kaksi gridiä vasemmalle, viimeistä yksi
00:24:717 (3) - Kaksi gridiä ylöspäin
00:36:576 (2--->) Tuntuu minusta melko vaikealta näin nopeat napit normaalissa vaikeustasossa, mutta.. No en tiedä, ehkä se on ihan ok. : D Tämä koko vaaleansininen combo muuten taipuu taas vähän ikävästi.
[Easy]
00:17:337 (2) - Grid level 4 ja kahta ylimmäistä harmaata (ei punaista) yksi grid alas molempia
00:29:988 (1,2) - Voisivat olla nätimpiä jos olisivat keskitettynä ja 2 kokonaan symmetrisenä... :3
Plaa, tämä koko modi oli pelkkää pientä ulkonäköhiomista, mitään oikeasti pahasti häiritsevää ei näkyny ollenkaan. Hienoa<3
(SULLA ON IHANA AVATAR<3)
00:17:337 (2,3,4,5,6) - Tämä mutka ei käänny kovin nätisti, voisi ehkä tehdä tämmöisen;
_00:17:337 (2) - Kaksi viimeistä neliötä molemmat yksi grid vasemmalle
_00:18:128 (3) - Yksi grid vasemmalle
_00:18:655 (5) - yksi grid alas
00:48:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Taas hieman jäykästi ja rumasti kääntyvä mutka.
[Normal]
Miksi ainoastaan tämä diff loppuu spinneriin?
00:00:470 (1) - Ei ole kovin kivan näköinen tuon punaisen neliön kanssa...
00:09:431 (4) - Punaista ja toiseksiviimeistä neliötä molempia kaksi gridiä vasemmalle, viimeistä yksi
00:24:717 (3) - Kaksi gridiä ylöspäin
00:36:576 (2--->) Tuntuu minusta melko vaikealta näin nopeat napit normaalissa vaikeustasossa, mutta.. No en tiedä, ehkä se on ihan ok. : D Tämä koko vaaleansininen combo muuten taipuu taas vähän ikävästi.
[Easy]
00:17:337 (2) - Grid level 4 ja kahta ylimmäistä harmaata (ei punaista) yksi grid alas molempia
00:29:988 (1,2) - Voisivat olla nätimpiä jos olisivat keskitettynä ja 2 kokonaan symmetrisenä... :3
Plaa, tämä koko modi oli pelkkää pientä ulkonäköhiomista, mitään oikeasti pahasti häiritsevää ei näkyny ollenkaan. Hienoa<3
no audio in the osz (it's 6.1 kB), do a full submit.
Well that was easy...
Well that was easy...
Topic Starter
Did a full upload again (guess ill start checking everytime im updating my map from now on that it actually has all the files...)
edit: and appereantly it still didnt fix...wonder whats wrong with it
edit: and appereantly it still didnt fix...wonder whats wrong with it
If you're still wondering - it's already fixed. I've reveived full file.
btw.
Your map has really improved since my 1st check^^
btw.
Your map has really improved since my 1st check^^
sometimes your browser's cache will kick in, and you'll download from that instead. You gotta save target as or clear the cache.
In any case this is a very cool song, and pretty well modded so I can't help you fix errors that don't exist. Map seems rankable to me, so my suggestions don't even matter.
[general]
that background is just terrible quality.
00:52:126 - I would have quit mapping here. The song repeats itself from here on, then fades out. It also works better in insane because you can end the slider on the beat and not have to make it a new combo.
[normal]
00:26:825 - Even though this is easy enough, I would have liked to have seen a difference between hard and normal here. Sliders thrown into the stream every once in a while, or the entire thing being sliders.
[hard]
00:24:717 (3) - would sounds better as slider circle, but you lose the symmetry of the combo
00:26:825 - I think the long sliders could be repeating sliders, but might be too much work this late in the game. Using a red timing section to make the slider tick rate 2 would also work, but afaik that's unrankable.
In any case this is a very cool song, and pretty well modded so I can't help you fix errors that don't exist. Map seems rankable to me, so my suggestions don't even matter.
[general]
that background is just terrible quality.
00:52:126 - I would have quit mapping here. The song repeats itself from here on, then fades out. It also works better in insane because you can end the slider on the beat and not have to make it a new combo.
[normal]
00:26:825 - Even though this is easy enough, I would have liked to have seen a difference between hard and normal here. Sliders thrown into the stream every once in a while, or the entire thing being sliders.
[hard]
00:24:717 (3) - would sounds better as slider circle, but you lose the symmetry of the combo
00:26:825 - I think the long sliders could be repeating sliders, but might be too much work this late in the game. Using a red timing section to make the slider tick rate 2 would also work, but afaik that's unrankable.
Are you sure about title?
[Normal]
Tick rate 0.5
I'm not sure, but audio volume is a bit noise.
00:58:451 (6) - add note
00:36:576 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't suggest to use such 1/2 streams on normal
[Easy]
Tick Rate 0.5
00:58:978(4) - add note
00:59:505 - ^
Well nothing much, music is awesome
[Normal]
Tick rate 0.5
I'm not sure, but audio volume is a bit noise.
00:58:451 (6) - add note
00:36:576 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't suggest to use such 1/2 streams on normal
[Easy]
Tick Rate 0.5
00:58:978(4) - add note
00:59:505 - ^
Well nothing much, music is awesome
It's just awesome now, too bad I'd don't have enough kudos to star your map again (blame on lazy me)
Topic Starter
Thanks for your support, it actually makes me feel happy when people pretty much say: "nice map, good job, etc.". Wish it was easier to contact those MAT/BAT people tho...
[General]
00:29:988 (1) - Ctrl+J ? (Flip vertically) because the (2) under the (1) looks bad, do something about it please.
[Normal]
00:36:576 (1) - New combo here? Or you can do this:
[Hard]
00:36:501 - This timing point change nothing at all, audio is the same. Delete it or change the audio. Maybe you should lower the sound at 00:36:238?
I think that's all I can find, here is a star for you :>
- Tags are different on [Hard]
- Maybe you should lower the sound of the spinner a little and mute the spinner bonus sound like for the sliders, or you can find custom sounds for the spinner.
- 00:29:988 (1) Here it's a slider on the easy and a spinner on the normal, why?
00:29:988 (1) - Ctrl+J ? (Flip vertically) because the (2) under the (1) looks bad, do something about it please.
[Normal]
00:36:576 (1) - New combo here? Or you can do this:
New combos
00:38:421 (9) - New combo
00:39:739 (1) - Remove
00:41:584 (8) - New combo
00:42:902 (1) - Remove
00:44:746 (8) - New combo
00:46:064 (1) - Remove
00:47:909 (8) - New combo
00:48:963 (1) - Remove
00:39:739 (1) - Remove
00:41:584 (8) - New combo
00:42:902 (1) - Remove
00:44:746 (8) - New combo
00:46:064 (1) - Remove
00:47:909 (8) - New combo
00:48:963 (1) - Remove
[Hard]
00:36:501 - This timing point change nothing at all, audio is the same. Delete it or change the audio. Maybe you should lower the sound at 00:36:238?
I think that's all I can find, here is a star for you :>
ONLy suggestions
Hard
00:52:126 : try this
and no more D':
star , good luck
Hard
00:52:126 : try this
and no more D':
star , good luck
[Hard]
00:05:741 (3) - whistle
00:08:640 (2) - whistle?
00:13:120 (4) - mute the ending
00:14:175 (1) - right 1 grid lv4
00:21:027 (1,2) - spacing
00:24:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
Other diffs look all fine
*when you use grid lv4, just make sure you use distance spacing to ensure each spacing is precise enough... quite unacceptable when there's a 0.91x whilw the whole map is 1.0x :3
NICE MUSIC, 3 stars
00:05:741 (3) - whistle
00:08:640 (2) - whistle?
00:13:120 (4) - mute the ending
00:14:175 (1) - right 1 grid lv4
00:21:027 (1,2) - spacing
00:24:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^
Other diffs look all fine
*when you use grid lv4, just make sure you use distance spacing to ensure each spacing is precise enough... quite unacceptable when there's a 0.91x whilw the whole map is 1.0x :3
NICE MUSIC, 3 stars
Wow this is really nice.
saw nothing wrong.
saw nothing wrong.
hi there.
[Easy]
Consider ending in the same time with the other difficulty(00:58:451).
[Normal]
fine...
[Hard]
00:47:909(8,1) - move 1 or 2 grids above?
00:57:397(5) - spacing...? oh it's okay maybe.
sorry for being a bit nazi.
+star.
[Easy]
Consider ending in the same time with the other difficulty(00:58:451).
[Normal]
fine...
[Hard]
00:47:909(8,1) - move 1 or 2 grids above?
00:57:397(5) - spacing...? oh it's okay maybe.
sorry for being a bit nazi.
+star.
Easy
nice
00:01:524(1) - add whistle
00:04:687(4) - ^
00:05:214(1) - remove whistle
00:14:175(1) - add whsitle at the beginning
00:20:500(1) - ^
Normal
00:17:337(2) - whistle
00:17:864(3) - remove whistle
00:58:451(6) - NC or not...
Hard
00:15:756(4) - remove whistle
00:17:337(2) - add whistle at the beginning
you did quite well
starrrr
nice
00:01:524(1) - add whistle
00:04:687(4) - ^
00:05:214(1) - remove whistle
00:14:175(1) - add whsitle at the beginning
00:20:500(1) - ^
Normal
00:17:337(2) - whistle
00:17:864(3) - remove whistle
00:58:451(6) - NC or not...
Hard
00:15:756(4) - remove whistle
00:17:337(2) - add whistle at the beginning
you did quite well
starrrr
[Easy]
00:36:313 (1) - spacing
00:58:451 (1) - Remove new combo ~
[Normal]
00:29:460 (N) - add a note
00:32:623 (N) - add a note
00:58:451 (1) - remove new combo
[Hard]
Nice one :3
[Overall]
Go find BAT or MAT XD
haha
starred ~ *
00:36:313 (1) - spacing
00:58:451 (1) - Remove new combo ~
[Normal]
00:29:460 (N) - add a note
00:32:623 (N) - add a note
00:58:451 (1) - remove new combo
[Hard]
Nice one :3
[Overall]
Go find BAT or MAT XD
haha
starred ~ *
Couldn't find anything 
Hard was a bit easy, maybe you can increase AR and OD by 1 each
Good Job
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Hard was a bit easy, maybe you can increase AR and OD by 1 each
Good Job
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
I'm so sorry, too late.
just take my star, and good luck for this map.
just take my star, and good luck for this map.