Responding to Aloda (no boxes within boxes, sorry)
I'll be sure to touch up on a few things that I put in orange/red.
Thanks for the mod.Aloda wrote:
Hey.KANTAN00:04:987 (5) - Move this to 00:03:781 it fits way better Damn son. I wasn't really following the violin; guess I will be now.
00:14:635 (15) - ^ ^
00:15:238 (16,17,18,20,22) - k -> d? I think it makes a lot more sense to have these as dons to match the drum sounds. I suppose it does remove the kat spam; I changed (16,17,18) but will leave the other two for variety.
The section from 00:20:062 to 00:39:359 feels quite empty, even for a Kantan, because of all the 4/1 gaps. You've mapped it to have the same intensity as the previous section, despite the actual song being a lot more intense. Consider adding some more 2/1 into this section. Fair enough.
00:29:258 (32) - Avoid using the red ticks in a Kantan whenever possible ( which is always ). A Kantan should be teaching a beginner how to follow the beat, so off-beat notes like this can be really awkward to play. Consider moving this to 00:29:107 Omg it sounds horrible, then again Kantan barely even follows the song so I'll do it. I'm expecting another mod to make me change this later though.
I think you could add a few more notes into the 4/1 gaps in the second Kiai, it feels a little empty as is. Try 01:39:057 - 01:42:675 and 01:47:499 And that sir, is what I have done.ONi00:22:927 (110,111) - ctrl+g Sounds good.
00:25:640 (132,133,134,135) - This sounds better to me Indeed it does.
00:30:464 (169,170,171,172) - Hope you've got a substitute for the next ddk.
00:31:519 (177,178,179,180) - ^Looks like you do.
00:42:525 (257,258,259) - d k d -> k d k This plays a lot better Sounds better.
00:55:188 (363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - Did a small alteration of this to make a 5-plet.
00:57:223 (380) - Move to 00:57:072 Sounds good.iNNER ONi00:36:947 (244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260) - This is a little awkward to play as is. Try something like this Strange, I swear I planned for the pattern to be like that; I probably did an edit somewhere but yeah it feels much better like that.
Your x xxx x x xxxxx structure in the first kiai plays a little strangely to me. Consider changing to x xxx x xxxxx x eg. I considered it but listening on 50% the pattern sounds fine ( also you just wanna be able to full alt it with ease c: ).
The second Kiai section needs to have more structure. For example, 01:37:248 - 01:41:469 sounds almost identical to 01:46:896 - 01:51:118 yet you've mapped them completely differently. You need to have more consistency in your mapping. Whilst different, both sections sound fine to me. Consistency is nice for the earlier diffs Imo so a bit of variety is nice. I will touch up on it a little though.GRiM's URA ONi00:36:947 (151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - Listening closely to the song, I think something like this fits a little better than what you have
01:35:967 - Add d? I hear a drum beat here.
01:36:645 (300,301,302,303,304) - ddkkk plays a lot better here in my opinion.
For now I'll let Grim worry about his map ( if he ever comes online ).
Cool map. gl getting it ranked :^)
I'll be sure to touch up on a few things that I put in orange/red.