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[quote="- R e b a -"][/quote] 나 너 죽인다
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Main structure had been changed.
I handled it in chat with some days.
And could feel about it better than before.

Metadata :: https://goreshit.bandcamp.com/album/sem ... ts-meaning
BG Size, The Timing section, Some stuff removed.
All confirmed.

Bubbled
Good luck for next!
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~mod in 24h it was meant to be finished today but I had some mods to apply

Dammit, only half-done - and I took three hours too long :/
I'll finish this in another post, sorry (like before D:)

Please give me replies, especially on the ones you reject. I don't want to manually check the changes :P

aaaa


Modding stuff
00:54:195 (54195|0,54195|1) - remove a note. The sound is the same as 00:54:546 (54546|3) -, 00:54:896 (54896|3) -, 00:55:247 (55247|3) -, etc

00:54:721 (54721|1,54721|0) - take it down to one note. Same sound as 00:57:002 (57002|3) -, 00:57:353 (57353|0) -, 01:03:142 (63142|0) -, etc (if not softer)
01:13:844 (73844|1,73844|0) - ^

Can you please check the timings of these notes? I think they're snapped to 1/16, not 1/6. For example, I think 00:55:715 (55715|2) - goes to 00:55:708 - and 00:55:891 (55891|2) - goes to 00:55:883 -. Preferably ask a few other people as well
00:55:715 (55715|2) -
00:55:891 (55891|2) -

00:56:241 (56241|3) -
00:56:417 (56417|3) -
00:58:347 (58347|2) -
00:58:522 (58522|2) -

01:00:101 (60101|1) -
01:00:277 (60277|2) -
01:00:627 (60627|2) -
01:00:803 (60803|2) -

01:01:855 (61855|1) -

01:02:908 (62908|2) -
01:03:259 (63259|1) -
01:03:610 (63610|3) -
01:03:961 (63961|2) -

01:09:926 (69926|1) -
01:10:101 (70101|2) -

01:11:329 (71329|2) -
01:11:505 (71505|1) -
01:12:031 (72031|1) -
01:12:206 (72206|1) -

01:13:084 (73084|3) -

01:20:101 (80101|1) - this is snapped to 01:20:072 -

01:27:616 - missing a note here. Same sound as 01:27:791 (87791|2) -, 01:27:835 (87835|1) -, 01:30:072 (90072|1,90072|0) -, etc

01:30:335 (90335|0) - remove this. The same sound can be found at 00:42:616 -, 01:52:791 -, 03:19:809 -, 03:22:616 - and 04:49:633 -

01:38:230 - add another note. Same as 01:38:624 (98624|2,98624|3) -, 01:41:739 (101739|2,101739|1) -, 01:42:089 (102089|1,102089|2) -, etc
01:38:317 - ^

01:40:423 (100423|3) - ghost

01:44:195 - here maybe try this? You had something similar previous and it was changed (I kept the old version) but I'd still want you to consider this. Mine on the left, your's on the right

01:50:291 - there's a note here, if you want to add it

03:09:809 (189809|0,189809|1) - remove a note. Same as 03:09:282 (189282|3) -, 03:11:563 (191563|3) -, 03:12:089 (192089|3) -
03:10:335 (190335|2,190335|3) - ^
03:11:212 (191212|2,191212|3) - ^
03:12:616 (192616|3,192616|2) - ^. These are the only inconsistencies, with the sound, in the entire section. I don't know why they were all at the start, though :lol:

03:31:059 - I think there is a note missing here, although it might be a bit difficult to play so I'm not sure if you want it

03:51:037 (231037|2) - ghost

04:45:510 (285510|1) - move this to 04:45:598 -
04:46:212 (286212|0) - ghost

05:04:984 (304984|0) - ghost

05:07:528 (307528|1,307528|0) - remove a note. This has the same sound as 05:07:002 (307002|3) -, 05:07:177 (307177|3) -, 05:07:703 (307703|0) -

05:11:388 (311388|0) - making this a LN would reflect on the music better

Miscellaneous
For some reason I don't know the reason behind the triplets between 02:24:019 - and 03:08:844 - then between 03:53:844 - and 04:38:668 - (whenever Kiai is active). I feel kinda stupid so can you explain it to me :?

There's this one sound that you've mapped in different ways - which can be found at 00:54:546 (54546|3) -, 01:10:510 (70510|0) -, 04:48:931 (288931|0,288931|1) - and 05:05:072 (305072|2,305072|1) - (I just picked two random examples from both sections). Between 00:31:739 - and 01:13:844 - you've mapped this sound with one SN but you mapped later mapped this with two SNs (most of the time), between 04:38:756 - and 05:12:353 -. Is this intentional or is the inconsistency an accident?
If you want it changed, I'll include all the timings in the next mod.
If you don't want it changed, 04:54:721 - and 04:56:124 - need a second note for consistency.

This map has improved a lot. Nice work :D
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끼요옵 버블!
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Cipse wrote:

~mod in 24h it was meant to be finished today but I had some mods to apply

Dammit, only half-done - and I took three hours too long :/
I'll finish this in another post, sorry (like before D:)

Please give me replies, especially on the ones you reject. I don't want to manually check the changes :P

aaaa


Modding stuff
00:54:195 (54195|0,54195|1) - remove a note. The sound is the same as 00:54:546 (54546|3) -, 00:54:896 (54896|3) -, 00:55:247 (55247|3) -, etc

00:54:721 (54721|1,54721|0) - take it down to one note. Same sound as 00:57:002 (57002|3) -, 00:57:353 (57353|0) -, 01:03:142 (63142|0) -, etc (if not softer)
01:13:844 (73844|1,73844|0) - ^

Can you please check the timings of these notes? I think they're snapped to 1/16, not 1/6. For example, I think 00:55:715 (55715|2) - goes to 00:55:708 - and 00:55:891 (55891|2) - goes to 00:55:883 -. Preferably ask a few other people as well
00:55:715 (55715|2) -
00:55:891 (55891|2) -

00:56:241 (56241|3) -
00:56:417 (56417|3) -
00:58:347 (58347|2) -
00:58:522 (58522|2) -

01:00:101 (60101|1) -
01:00:277 (60277|2) -
01:00:627 (60627|2) -
01:00:803 (60803|2) -

01:01:855 (61855|1) -

01:02:908 (62908|2) -
01:03:259 (63259|1) -
01:03:610 (63610|3) -
01:03:961 (63961|2) -

01:09:926 (69926|1) -
01:10:101 (70101|2) -

01:11:329 (71329|2) -
01:11:505 (71505|1) -
01:12:031 (72031|1) -
01:12:206 (72206|1) -

01:13:084 (73084|3) -

01:20:101 (80101|1) - this is snapped to 01:20:072 -

01:27:616 - missing a note here. Same sound as 01:27:791 (87791|2) -, 01:27:835 (87835|1) -, 01:30:072 (90072|1,90072|0) -, etc

01:30:335 (90335|0) - remove this. The same sound can be found at 00:42:616 -, 01:52:791 -, 03:19:809 -, 03:22:616 - and 04:49:633 -

01:38:230 - add another note. Same as 01:38:624 (98624|2,98624|3) -, 01:41:739 (101739|2,101739|1) -, 01:42:089 (102089|1,102089|2) -, etc
01:38:317 - ^

01:40:423 (100423|3) - ghost

01:44:195 - here maybe try this? You had something similar previous and it was changed (I kept the old version) but I'd still want you to consider this. Mine on the left, your's on the right

01:50:291 - there's a note here, if you want to add it

03:09:809 (189809|0,189809|1) - remove a note. Same as 03:09:282 (189282|3) -, 03:11:563 (191563|3) -, 03:12:089 (192089|3) -
03:10:335 (190335|2,190335|3) - ^
03:11:212 (191212|2,191212|3) - ^
03:12:616 (192616|3,192616|2) - ^. These are the only inconsistencies, with the sound, in the entire section. I don't know why they were all at the start, though :lol:

03:31:059 - I think there is a note missing here, although it might be a bit difficult to play so I'm not sure if you want it

03:51:037 (231037|2) - ghost

04:45:510 (285510|1) - move this to 04:45:598 -
04:46:212 (286212|0) - ghost

05:04:984 (304984|0) - ghost

05:07:528 (307528|1,307528|0) - remove a note. This has the same sound as 05:07:002 (307002|3) -, 05:07:177 (307177|3) -, 05:07:703 (307703|0) -

05:11:388 (311388|0) - making this a LN would reflect on the music better

Miscellaneous
For some reason I don't know the reason behind the triplets between 02:24:019 - and 03:08:844 - then between 03:53:844 - and 04:38:668 - (whenever Kiai is active). I feel kinda stupid so can you explain it to me :?

There's this one sound that you've mapped in different ways - which can be found at 00:54:546 (54546|3) -, 01:10:510 (70510|0) -, 04:48:931 (288931|0,288931|1) - and 05:05:072 (305072|2,305072|1) - (I just picked two random examples from both sections). Between 00:31:739 - and 01:13:844 - you've mapped this sound with one SN but you mapped later mapped this with two SNs (most of the time), between 04:38:756 - and 05:12:353 -. Is this intentional or is the inconsistency an accident?
If you want it changed, I'll include all the timings in the next mod.
If you don't want it changed, 04:54:721 - and 04:56:124 - need a second note for consistency.

This map has improved a lot. Nice work :D
hmm there is no ghost and snap is right so i cant change sorry, but thanks for mod
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Garalulu wrote:

끼요옵 버블!
끼요옵 하나더받고시프다!
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우리 애기 장하다
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Wonki wrote:

Cipse wrote:

Miscellaneous
For some reason I don't know the reason behind the triplets between 02:24:019 - and 03:08:844 - then between 03:53:844 - and 04:38:668 - (whenever Kiai is active). I feel kinda stupid so can you explain it to me :?

There's this one sound that you've mapped in different ways - which can be found at 00:54:546 (54546|3) -, 01:10:510 (70510|0) -, 04:48:931 (288931|0,288931|1) - and 05:05:072 (305072|2,305072|1) - (I just picked two random examples from both sections). Between 00:31:739 - and 01:13:844 - you've mapped this sound with one SN but you mapped later mapped this with two SNs (most of the time), between 04:38:756 - and 05:12:353 -. Is this intentional or is the inconsistency an accident?
If you want it changed, I'll include all the timings in the next mod.
If you don't want it changed, 04:54:721 - and 04:56:124 - need a second note for consistency.
Those questions were meant to help me mod the other part of your map D:
Never mind about the other part of the mod

Good luck with getting another BN :)
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- R e b a - wrote:

우리 애기 장하다
꺄앙
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Patterns has been updated by creator.
And confirmed. Re-bubbled #1
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Please at the very least change the title to "oblivion" (no caps). This is a very important change that should be made because this is a goreshit song. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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Level 51 wrote:

Please at the very least change the title to "oblivion" (no caps). This is a very important change that should be made because this is a goreshit song. Thank you for your time and consideration.
what do you mean by that?
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The artist name and his songs are normally lower case. So it's slightly more appropriate for the difficulty name to be lower case.
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ok it will be changed when i get 2bubbled
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Hello Wonki, as your request at Osu!Mania Nominators Modding Team. I will handle your map for the ranking process.

[Oblivion]

HP : 8.5 --> this is proper HP for your difficulty, the SR shows that this diff is called as 'Insane'. mostly HP 9 is perfectly match for X diff mostly for really professional players.

I analyzed the pattern of the song itself for the intro, there are 2 pattern of sound, but they are same kind. the pattern consist of 4 LN usage in this song. as for the intro you had mapped 8 LN so it can be pointed that at 00:16:505 - is the start of new same pattern
you may not confuse, it's pretty easy tho.

so according for the first LN of the 2nd pattern 00:16:505 (16505|1)

00:00:364 (364|2) - This LN starts at 00:00:277 - and i did sure, this is the start of the sound. you maybe just mapped at the start of the sound when it's loud enough but for me it should be mapped full from start until the end of sound. because the sound is 'Fade-In'

00:16:505 (16505|1) - end at 00:20:452 and this LN 00:20:423 (20423|2) - starts at 00:20:452 Snapping 1/12

00:57:879 - Add note to 3 as for hat sound

01:05:949 - Add note for kick

01:07:879 - Add note at col 4,

01:12:031 (72031|1) - Move to 1 same as 01:11:329 (71329|2,71388|0)

01:20:101 (80101|1) - this note sure use 1/4 snap at 01:20:072 feels late with the drum sound i show you something same 01:21:475 (81475|3,81563|2)

01:22:177 (82177|3,82177|2) - i think it should be on column 1 and 2

01:23:668 (83668|0,83668|1) - change into one note at column 4, should be match with the snare sound

01:48:054 - Add note for kick sound
01:56:212 - Add note for kick sound

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02:28:142 - Add note to 3 as snare, which is trill 14 isn't feel not enough for play

02:37:089 (157089|1,157089|2) - i think you shouldn't mapped it as jacks when you mapped these 02:36:651 (156651|1,156651|0,156739|3,156739|2) ,
Suggest to 02:37:089 (157089|1,157089|2) - change into 14, and 02:37:177 (157177|3) - Move to 3

02:47:177 (167177|2) - Delete
02:47:089 - Add note to 3

02:47:791 - these pattern I think can be more improved a bit since you mapped wrong minijack here, http://puu.sh/qjxX6/dc6ea6b052.jpg

02:50:072 (170072|2,170160|1,170247|2,170335|1) - You may differ this trill with the drum sound 02:49:984 (169984|1) , try this http://puu.sh/qjyAu/2bf04b9d0a.jpg

02:53:142 (173142|0,173142|3,173230|0,173230|1) - These notes hasn't same sound, but when you match it with the next one, yes it was 02:53:230 (173230|0,173230|1,173317|2,173317|3) so i suggest you to make it jack
02:53:230 (173230|0) - Move to 3
02:53:317 (173317|3) - Move to 2
02:53:317 (173317|3) - Move to 1,

03:01:300 (181300|3,181300|2,181388|0,181475|1,181475|0,181563|2,181563|3) - These notes isn't match with the sound which is better if you mapped the jack for the first double
03:01:388 (181388|0) - Move to 4 and add note on 3

03:45:072 (225072|3,225094|2,225116|1,225138|0) - move to 03:45:116 - and then 03:45:072 - add note to col 1 same sounds at the intro 01:07:879

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04:04:721 - Add note to 2
04:07:265 - Add note to 2,

04:13:142 (253142|3) - end at 04:13:493 - same as you mapped before 04:01:914 (241914|0)

04:14:370 - Improve it ,pls http://puu.sh/qjzA7/d26500d78d.jpg

04:37:089 (277089|1,277177|3) - Move with same column at col 1

04:37:353 - Add note to 2
04:37:528 (277528|1) - Move to 2

04:52:440 (292440|0,292462|1,292484|2,292506|3) - Same suggestion as 03:45:072

05:26:475 (326475|1,329370|0) - Should be start and end at line 05:29:282

If you have any question for my mod, pls reply it in the next post. ill come here to check it

The map is fine at Playable Aspect. and i sure it's good to play. very unique pattern you had there and i hope people will love it. And i did see that you will change the diff name, and im fine with it
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All fixed
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Im feeling right, i did recheck the pattern, it's really improved a lot in my opinion. and all hs is above 100ms

very solid map, what could be wrong


Bubbled #2


Good Luck on your qualify
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2016-07-31 14:55 Wonki: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1019378 goreshit - the nature of dying]
2016-07-31 14:56 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1019378 goreshit - the nature of dying [oblivion]]
2016-07-31 14:57 Fresh Chicken: g힛사
2016-07-31 14:57 Fresh Chicken: 어디감 다?
2016-07-31 14:57 Fresh Chicken: 왜이리 힛사가 없어?
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: 별로
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: 안집어넣었음
2016-07-31 14:58 Fresh Chicken: 분명 지랄할거같은데
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: 01:56:651 (116651|3,117177|3) -
2016-07-31 14:58 Fresh Chicken: 일단 ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: 이런데나
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: 05:54:546 (354546|0) -
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: 마지막만
2016-07-31 14:58 Wonki: ㅇㅇ
2016-07-31 15:01 Fresh Chicken: 01:19:107 -
2016-07-31 15:01 Fresh Chicken: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5734074
2016-07-31 15:02 Fresh Chicken: 01:26:124 (86124|2,86124|3) - 이거 12 로 이동. 솔직히 01:26:300 (86300|1,86300|0,86344|2,86344|3,86388|0,86388|1,86431|2,86431|3,86475|1,86475|0) - 이거 좀 무리수 두는패턴인데 그 바로밑에 저렇게 잭이 있으니 밸런스 붕괴됨
2016-07-31 15:03 Wonki: 그래
2016-07-31 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 01:35:160 - 여기 2개 되야함,
2016-07-31 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 01:35:510 - 01:35:686 - 마찬가지
2016-07-31 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 01:35:598 - 여기는
2016-07-31 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 2개될필요가없음
2016-07-31 15:03 Wonki: 그럼 34 12 34 할게
2016-07-31 15:03 Fresh Chicken: ㅇㅇ
2016-07-31 15:04 Fresh Chicken: 01:40:423 (100423|3) - 삭제, 소리가 있는지도 모르겠고 일관성으로도 따져서 01:39:896 - 여기는 노트가없음
2016-07-31 15:04 Wonki: 01:35:598 -
2016-07-31 15:04 Wonki: 여기 왜2개아니여도댐?
2016-07-31 15:05 Fresh Chicken: 사이에 2개씩 들어가있으니 12-34가 그냥 쭉 나열되잖아 근데 거기는 다른 두개하고 비교해봤을때 소리가 작기때문에 지루함 덜려면 하나 제거하는게 더 나을수도있음
2016-07-31 15:05 Wonki: 위에건삭제
2016-07-31 15:05 Wonki: 그럼멀지우지
2016-07-31 15:06 Wonki: 4지움
2016-07-31 15:06 Fresh Chicken: ㅇㅋ
2016-07-31 15:06 Fresh Chicken: 형은근데
2016-07-31 15:06 Fresh Chicken: 이노래 좋아서
2016-07-31 15:06 Fresh Chicken: 맵핑한거?
2016-07-31 15:06 Wonki: ㅇㅇ
2016-07-31 15:06 Fresh Chicken: 어후
2016-07-31 15:06 Wonki: 원래
2016-07-31 15:06 Wonki: 이런거
2016-07-31 15:06 Wonki: 안좋아하는데
2016-07-31 15:06 Wonki: 이작곡가는맘에듬
2016-07-31 15:06 Fresh Chicken: 02:25:598 - 하나추가, 일관성 유지
2016-07-31 15:07 Fresh Chicken: 나 이거
2016-07-31 15:07 Fresh Chicken: 노래가 너무
2016-07-31 15:07 Fresh Chicken: 좀 그럼
2016-07-31 15:07 Fresh Chicken: 이거 삘이 유저레이팅 테러당할거같음 ㅋㅋ
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 당연히
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 테러당하겠지슙벌
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 1에추가
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 일단
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 고어쉿하면
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 무조건
2016-07-31 15:07 Wonki: 8점이하야
2016-07-31 15:07 Fresh Chicken: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-07-31 15:08 Fresh Chicken: 02:36:124 (156124|3,156212|0,156300|3,156388|1,156388|0,156475|2,156475|3) - Ctrl + H
2016-07-31 15:08 Fresh Chicken: 02:35:247 (155247|3,155423|3,155598|3,155774|3,155949|3,156124|3,156300|3,156475|3) - 좀 길다고생각됨
2016-07-31 15:08 Wonki: 완료
2016-07-31 15:08 Wonki: 02:35:335 (155335|1,155335|0,155423|3,155423|2) -
2016-07-31 15:08 Wonki: 얘네
2016-07-31 15:08 Wonki: ctrl h함
2016-07-31 15:08 Fresh Chicken: ㅇㅋ
2016-07-31 15:08 Fresh Chicken: 02:43:493 (163493|3) - 2로 이동, 밸런스
2016-07-31 15:09 Wonki: ㅇㅋ
2016-07-31 15:10 Fresh Chicken: 03:03:493 (183493|3) - 3으로 이동, 밸런스
2016-07-31 15:10 Fresh Chicken: 03:04:546 (184546|3) - 2 ^
2016-07-31 15:10 Wonki: 완료
2016-07-31 15:11 Fresh Chicken: 03:30:774 (210774|3,210774|2,210861|0,210861|1,210905|2,210905|3,210949|0,210949|1,210993|3,210993|2,211037|0) - Ctrl + H
2016-07-31 15:11 Wonki: 완료
2016-07-31 15:12 Fresh Chicken: 03:56:124 (236124|2,236212|2) - 얘 굳이
2016-07-31 15:12 Fresh Chicken: 잭 필요없다생각됨
2016-07-31 15:12 Fresh Chicken: 다른 파트 같은소리 드럽게많은데 다 잭 안쓰고솔직히 잘 느껴지지도않을듯
2016-07-31 15:12 Wonki: 그런가
2016-07-31 15:12 Wonki: 첫번쨰거
2016-07-31 15:12 Wonki: 4로바꿈
2016-07-31 15:12 Fresh Chicken: ㅇㅇ
2016-07-31 15:13 Fresh Chicken: 04:21:051 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5734124
2016-07-31 15:14 Wonki: 완료
2016-07-31 15:14 Fresh Chicken: 04:53:581 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5734125
2016-07-31 15:14 Fresh Chicken: 05:11:388 - 여기 롱놋쓰는게 나아보임
2016-07-31 15:15 Fresh Chicken: 업뎃 ㄱ
2016-07-31 15:15 Wonki: 05:11:563 -
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