okay timing is so wrong i dont know where to start
first of all, i need to prove myself right i guess. open the timing tab and listen to 03:00:188 - it sounds so off. come on, you cant bloody deny that. if you still dont believe me, listen to the hitsounds in that section. its just so off and makes it so fucking ladfldkfjdslfjsdlfj. please please listen this timing cannot go ahead. honestly. look, the first timing point isnt even right, it should be at 00:00:156 -i take that all back, the offset should be 00:00:156 - fixes everything
okay. timing concerns out the way. now chart, god.
Challengingthese timestamps are the current timing points. and, some might carry over to tideks diff as well
00:57:541 (57541|3,57762|1) - why do these overlap? there is no new sound for the extra LN to be there and considering this is literally an extremely simple piano melody its a bit much
01:00:299 (60299|1,60630|2,61512|1) - not really much of a problem but i hate repeating patterns and this is an easy fix. not for PR either
01:04:600 (64600|3,64821|1) - again, really think this shouldnt overlap
01:15:188 (75188|0,75188|3) - if this is a double, 01:16:953 (76953|0,76953|2,76953|1) - why is this a triple? inconsistent
01:17:836 (77836|0,77836|1) - double, but 01:18:056 (78056|0) - isnt? alot of this doesnt add up
01:20:483 (80483|3,80483|1,80483|0) - again this sound has inconsistent charting
01:25:777 (85777|2,85777|3,85777|1) - compared to 01:27:541 (87541|1,87541|3) - this is a major problem that is everywhere so far. probably the same in the rest of the diff as well
01:31:071 (91071|2,91071|3,91071|1,91291|2,91291|1) - seriously? the chart is so goddamn inconsistent. you need to make them all the same other wise everything contradicts itself and you get false emphasis n shit and its just not allowed
01:39:012 (99012|0,99012|1,99012|3,99012|2) - christ, even the quads are inconsistent
01:46:512 (106512|3,106733|1,106953|3,107174|1,107394|3,107615|1,108056|3,108277|1,108497|3,108718|1) - these columns are overused. even if it was intended i dont see any point in this and just make it balance better makes more sense
02:48:718 (168718|2,169159|3) - more overlaps i dont understand
02:49:600 - here, you didnt chart the piano for a little bit to emphasise the drums right? if so, 02:53:130 - same needs to be done here
02:54:894 - and here i guess
03:35:400 (215400|3) - what are you on this is ksdjflsdkjflksdjflskdjf. may be a bit hard to tell since the offset is wrong but yknow 1/16th no way, maybe
04:39:012 (279012|0,279067|2) - should end at 04:42:541 - tbh since there is no sound at all for that last part
basically, what im trying to get across is that your chart is massively inconsistent and the offset being wrong doesnt help. nearly all of my mentions are found throughout the map. and kiai is such a mess.
your first step is to fix the offset ofc because thats pretty major. next, please fix your charting. there are so many places with sounds that are represented from singles to doubles to triples and none of it makes sense. an example of this is 01:17:836 (77836|0,77836|1,78056|0) - or 01:20:483 (80483|0,80483|1,80483|3) - compared to 01:22:247 (82247|2,82247|0) - its just all so dlakfjldkfjsdlfkjsdlfsdkl;jfhhc.
look, i dont want to discourage you but i was just so surprised that this slipped through the hands of so many people and got qualified. this map does have potential and people can see that but its just not polished at all.
please open this map up for discussion.