04:53:865 (1,3) - should be on different combos because huge speed change. I recommend NCing the (2) Also please don't put SV changes inside sliders! This affects mania converts by having the start start on a slow hold, but end on a fast hold! So even though you intended this to be a slow slider, it won't have the same effect on that side.
While it's also been pointed out on the DQ thread, you can't have silent sliderslide/ticks at the same time! (Sliderslide/tick 99)
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also add F Minor Factory to the tags because album name