Asonate wrote:

hey pipe

[Purrrrrgatory]

1. 02:05:693 - consider making that synth hittable, you've done so with pretty much all before, + it feels weird to suddenly change the rhythm to the dnb beat again. I'm following the vocal with 02:05:522 (1) - and 02:05:865 (2) - tho !
2. 02:13:750 (7) - same business with this one - if i didnt misshear, these 2 are the only times you place the synth on a sliderend and make it passive therefore These 02:13:065 (5,6,7,8) - follow the same rhythm! Why will I break the consistent idea ? xd
3. 02:37:408 (5,6) - consider readjusting one of these, right now you have a pretty large angle between 4,5,6, which feels a bit too intense to me. if you for example ctrl+j 6 and place it on 02:36:722 (2) - again, the jump should get quite a bit easier, which fits it much better The angle is made on purpose because there's a kick at 02:37:408 (5) - ! Also I'm a newbie 70k but that's very playable!
4. 02:56:950 (1) - maybe rebuild this pattern based on a Hexagon, so it looks a bit neater - if you dont quite get what i mean, because i suck at explaining, pm me and ill show you via IRC :3 I didn't want an Hexagon though! I use that kind of patterns in my map tho!
5. 03:53:865 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - consider shifting these by 1/2 and putting a repeat before or a note so you dont have to repattern anything - like this, almost all of the stronger sounds fall on sliderends, which made me feel like i was not really playing with the music ;w; I tried to be consistent in the whole part by following mainly the hats ! I know that the violin is really important tho but if you take a better listen you'll see that the hats and the violin samples are on the same location in a lot of cases : 03:48:036 (2) - 03:48:379 (3) - 03:48:722 (4) - etc.. (I hope you see what I have in mind!)
6. This repeats on the iteration in the song, and i do realize youre mapping to the 1/1 hats. But the hats are definitely weaker than the violin, as i would interpret the song Precisely! I interpreted them in my way tbh and I think that it's pretty interesting to exploit it! Don't forget that the hitsounds are here also!
7. 05:03:979 (4,5,6) - i feel lower angles fit jumps like these better, for example you could go with this, which also gives the blanket on 05:04:493 (1) - a use :3 Your screen shows us a good idea but to be honest , I wanted to give more space to the jumps because they are really intense and I didn't want to gather them around a slider!
8. 05:48:208 (6) - move that to x276, makes it perfectly sorrounded by 1,2,3 moved by -3 woo

Alright, thats about it!
Map was fun to play!
gl!

1. You used the preview image from deviantart for a background, and as a result, it's ridden with JPEG artifacts (see the triangles). A properly scaled down picture: https://tc.s-ul.eu/Fn0yjXYE.jpg
2. Loads of unused hitsounds in the map's folder:
   
   SPOILER

   1. drum-hitnormal2.wav
   2. normal-hitclap3.wav
   3. soft-hitclap20.wav
   4. soft-hitclap5.wav
   5. soft-hitclap6.wav
   6. soft-hitfinish6.wav
   7. soft-hitfinish99.wav
   8. soft-hitwhistle4.wav
   9. soft-hitwhistle6.wav
   10. soft-slidertick20.wav
   11. soft-slidertick21.wav
   12. soft-slidertick22.wav
   13. soft-slidertick23.wav
3. I think you don't need to use kiai at full at all. The parts where you enabled it sound very.. regular, they aren't outstanding, compared to the rest of the song. And that flash at 03:47:693 should go, too, because I don't see or hear anything that'd be that significant to use a flash there.

1. 01:17:179 (2) - align to 01:16:836 (1)
2. 02:05:522 (1) - I recommend to start it from the red tick where that 3/2 sample that keeps popping in the background takes place; also, do you really need a new combo here?
3. 02:16:836 (1) - in cases like this I'd either put a NC on a later note or add an extra one to the next object (02:17:522 (3) in this case)

TicClick wrote:

[General]

1. You used the preview image from deviantart for a background, and as a result, it's ridden with JPEG artifacts (see the triangles). A properly scaled down picture: https://tc.s-ul.eu/Fn0yjXYE.jpg Thanks!
2. Loads of unused hitsounds in the map's folder:
   
   SPOILER

   1. drum-hitnormal2.wav
   2. normal-hitclap3.wav
   3. soft-hitclap20.wav
   4. soft-hitclap5.wav
   5. soft-hitclap6.wav
   6. soft-hitfinish6.wav
   7. soft-hitfinish99.wav
   8. soft-hitwhistle4.wav
   9. soft-hitwhistle6.wav
   10. soft-slidertick20.wav
   11. soft-slidertick21.wav
   12. soft-slidertick22.wav
   13. soft-slidertick23.wav
   dpne
3. I think you don't need to use kiai at full at all. The parts where you enabled it sound very.. regular, they aren't outstanding, compared to the rest of the song. And that flash at 03:47:693 should go, too, because I don't see or hear anything that'd be that significant to use a flash there. You're right! I removed the current kiai BUT I added a kiai at 03:47:693 - which is pretty similar to Endgame , the epic part !

[Purgatory]

1. 01:17:179 (2) - align to 01:16:836 (1) okay
2. 02:05:522 (1) - I recommend to start it from the red tick where that 3/2 sample that keeps popping in the background takes place; also, do you really need a new combo here? That was originally planned but I wanted to map vocals with 02:05:522 (1,2) -
3. 02:16:836 (1) - in cases like this I'd either put a NC on a later note or add an extra one to the next object (02:17:522 (3) in this case)Just wanted to emphasize the loud kicks!

I see no point in writing anything else down, because the map is simply okay as it, and I don't think you should mod mine in return either.

Monstrata wrote:

17:44 Monstrata: 03:47:693 (1) - The SV here should be faster no? like 03:50:436 (1) -
17:46 Monstrata: 04:31:579 - It makes more sense for Kiai to end here imo...
17:48 Secretpipe: screw this laptop
17:48 Monstrata: DO YOU WANT A BUBBLE OR NOT HOLY
17:48 Monstrata: DITCH ME LIKE THAT HUH!!?!?!@?
17:48 Monstrata: WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE !?!?
17:48 Secretpipe: LOL
17:48 Monstrata: SECRETPIPE?!?!?
17:48 Secretpipe: omg

1. Delete an unused hitsound into the folder.

09:44 Gero:  normal-sliderslide2.wav
09:44 Gero: delete it cause is not being used in your set
09:45 Secretpipe: o:
09:45 Secretpipe: Really?
09:45 Gero: yes
09:45 Gero: I wont pop that, don't worry xD
09:46 Gero: that's all, update it
09:47 Secretpipe: modding in  a friend's place is awesome woo
09:47 Secretpipe: lemme fix it!
09:48 Secretpipe: forgot to fix it
09:48 Gero: alrighty
09:48 Secretpipe: thanks moero \o
09:49 Gero: already updated?
09:49 Secretpipe: imm updating
09:49 Gero: alright =w=
09:51 Secretpipe: done o:

~ Bubbled #2 ~

Fii wrote:

QUALIFIED

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. ... Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

1. drum-hitclap2.wav,normal-hitclap2.wav,soft-hitclap2.wav,hitclap23.wav,soft-hitclap30.wav
   
   SPOILER

   
   soft-hitfinish4.wav
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
2. 05:03:979 (4,5) - jump a little too hard,reduce nor how do you think like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

Secretpipe wrote:

2 months nice speedrank

Zerss wrote:

Secretpipe wrote:

2 months nice speedrank

hehe

1. add back in the normal-sliderslide2.wav

1. http://puu.sh/pOPoA/26fe2bf3e5.zip
   contains:
   
   • soft-hitfinish4
     drum-hitclap2
     soft-hitclap2
     normal-hitclap2
     soft-hitclap23
     soft-hitclap30

1. add soft-sliderslide100.wav to the hitsounds
2. change "soft-slidertick99.wav" to "soft-slidertick100.wav"
3. 04:53:886 - change this greenline from "S:C99, 60%" to "S:C100, 20%". make sure that it is the second greenline, on the 1/16 that you edit

-M4x wrote:

WOOOOOOOOO

Lanturn wrote:

regrats