1. Easy (1.54 stars, 94 notes)
2. Extra (5.55 stars, 541 notes)
3. Hard (2.83 stars, 238 notes)
4. Insane (4.72 stars, 431 notes)
5. Normal (2.19 stars, 170 notes)

Morgar wrote:

Hi there! First of all, I really like your map!

Here's a mod for Hard difficulty:

From the start of the song - 00:16:231 Use Soft for audio, fits the song way better.fixed
00:18:064 (1) Is soooo fast, no one will expect that, use just this one slider to let the player ease into the faster slider pace. I recommend you make this one slider go 0.80 or 0.85.fixed
00:38:398 - 00:39:064 (8,9) I feel like these don't fit the beat, personally I would make something like made itthis. But anything with suck a beat pattern will suffice.
00:55:731 - 00:56:064 (4,5,6) There is too much distance between these notes. Make them either almost tough each other or just and easier triple tap.fixed the distance
00:58:398 - 01:00:731 (2,3,4,5,6,7) It feels very weird that between 3 and 4 is almost no distance but the same time difference as 2 and 3. I say switch 4 entirely, the start becomes end, end becomes start of the slider, you can do this easily with the ctrl+g command if you didn't already know. (same story for (7) in this thread).I put 3 on the slider 4 and 6 on the slider 7
01:05:731 - 01:06:398 (1,2) Are too close to each other on the play field.fixed the distance
01:06:398 - 01:07:064 (2,3,4,5) should all be as far from each other, the distance between 3 and 4 feels right here.fixed the distance
01:07:731 - 01:07:898 (6,7) 6 should be way further from the end of the slider before. Now the space suggests that 7 comes with the same time difference as there is between 5 and 6. I suggest you move the 6 to the place of 7 and make it a double tap. Also, start a new combo at 6 here please.fixed 6 7 to double tap
01:34:398 Kinda weird that this is a new combo.fixed
01:40:398 - 01:40:898 (1,2) make the sliders end on the same spot. Makes it look betterfixed slider 1234 end on the same spot
01:41:064 (3) This should be guiding the player towards the next slider party. I think with distance on 1.0X this should head towards the start of the next slider, not hidden in the chaos of the sliders before that.fixed
01:47:398 (6) this slider sounds of.made to a triple tap
01:51:398 - 01:53:064 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) I need a new combo somewhere in between here. I suggest new combo start at 8.fixed
01:58:731 - 01:59:398 (2,3,4,5,6) Straight lines are actually very hard. Try this, it gives a more playful look and is actually easier on the player.fixed
02:15:398 - end of the song. Use Soft for audio again I would say.fixed
02:19:731 (1) This slider actually goes out of the map for a bit and it's sooooo long. I would make a spinner here.fixed

Last but not least: Look at what AiMod says.

I hope you find this useful. If so, feel free to reward me with 1 or even 2 kudosu's!

Thank you for modding

CookieBite wrote:

oh hi
i accidentally saw your map yay
just do a short modThank you for modding

the source should be BMS not bms fixed

the timing is not right
it should be 3/4fixed

add combo colur plzI think the combo colour is enough to use or maybe I misunderstood what you mean

the ez difficulty's sv is too high Decreased the sv of ez

kk dun have time to do a decent mod
cya

Thank you for your suggestion , i will make the map even better

propasy wrote:

Since this is more than 2min of drain time and I did say in my queue no more than 2min, I’ll just mod one difficulty.
The way you made this map is very experimental, however there’s a lot of places where it didn’t quite work out. Also it is clear that you either got lazy in creating this beatmap a lot of the way or you simply lack a foundation of what creates a good map. (forgive me if I am incorrect) I have found a lot of problems throughout the entire map and hence i will only map up to 50 seconds. I suggest you try out some maps for more inspiration. I suggest you play:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/145669 and see how this map utilises sliders mixed with the circles to better accompany the music
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/896430 and see how these sliders fit the music

Extra

00:10:398 (1) – I suggest you find an alternative to this, I understand what your trying to do but I’m not too sure if this can get rankedfixed
00:13:231 (3) - doesn’t make sense. Instead just make this: 00:12:731 (1,2) - the same as this: 00:11:731 (1,2,3) – as the style feels rather fittingfixed
00:14:064 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – try have variety here instead of a line of sliders. Perhaps have this: 00:15:064 (5) – be a repeating slider with 00:15:398 (6,7) – being circles. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5320428fixed
00:16:731 (1,2,3,4) – I think a slider would work more appropriately. (also I only hear 2 piano notes being played so 4 notes isn’t necessary) fixed
00:21:731 (5) – have the curve of the slider align with the stream before itfixed
00:22:398 (5) – make this the same as 00:21:731 (5) – or else it’ll just feel out of place^
00:23:398 (3,4) – Make this a slider like the previous two for more consistency in stylechange to a slider
00:18:564 (1) – again your creating new rhythm. I think these streams will work well without itdeleted
00:19:231 (1) - ^ ^
00:19:898 (1) - ^^
00:20:564 (1) - ^ especially this one, just straight out doesn’t fit^
00:20:314 (4) – shorten the slider so it’s the same as the previous one (i.e. 00:19:648 (4) -) fixed
00:26:314 (2,4,6,8) – these circles are unnecessary deleted these circles
00:28:064 (1,2,3,4) – reconsider how you shape the directions of these sliderschange the direction
00:29:398 (1,2) – just have these sliders the same as the previous since slider 2 just doesn’t work well with the musicdeleted the circle 2
00:30:342 (1,2,3,4,5) – reposition the sliders so that 5 can be more distinct, perhaps an upwards motion of clicks with the sliders pointing to the left?fixed
00:31:231 (1,1,2,3,4) – this is completely off, I suggest you delete the first slider and move the rest of the sliders back by two ticks[color=#BFF0000]fixed[/color]
00:32:898 (1,2,3,4,5) – you’ve transisted between two instruments too quickly, not to mention this new instrument is really quiet, I suggest you think of an alternative for this. However, if you do wish to keep this, then remove circle 1 and 2 as they are unnecessaryremake that
00:34:398 (2,3,4) – don’t use triple jumps here, it ruins the timing and flow of the sliders after it. Just remove circle 3 and have this slider: 00:34:898 (1) – start at 00:35:064 and the change these: 00:35:231 (2,3,4,1,2) – to more appropriate mimic the instructions. fixed
00:36:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8) – the sudden change in difficulty doesn’t make sense sine the pacing of the music hasn’t changed (in fact, the music went down an octave)remake that
00:37:231 (1) - the beginning of this slider doesn’t follow with anything, move it two ticks forward along with the circle and slider after it after it (00:37:731 (2,3) -)fixed
00:38:648 (2,4,5) – these circles don’t work, instead, just remove circle 2 and 4 and have circle 5 appear between the end of 00:38:398 (1,3) –
00:39:481 (2) – unnecessary circlefixed
00:39:898 (1) – this slider should start at 00:40:064 ^
00:42:564 (3) – remove this circle as it doesn’t follow any instrumentsremake that
00:43:231 (2,4) – and these ^ I understand what your trying to do, but you can’t keep creating your own rhythms like that if you wish to get this ranked. ^
00:44:231 (3) – this too ^^
00:44:564 (1,2) – move these ticks 2 ticks forwardfixed
00:45:148 (3,4) – these sliders just don’t work, do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5320713fixed
00:46:231 (2,3) - move these circles 2 ticks forward and remove these circles: 00:46:898 (1,1) – (and obviously remap the circles after it to create a more appropriate mapping for the changes I suggested)remake that
00:47:564 (4,1) - also on a side note, you should make all your sliders time similar to these -_-fixed
00:52:898 (1,2,3,1,2) – these don’t work, change the timing of the sliders and suchfixed

Anyway, i'm sorry i didn't mod the entire map, mentioning all of the mistakes will be very time consuming on my part and i hope you can get a better idea of what to do in mapping after reading this. Keep in mind, that you can keep this style if you wish to make experimental graveyard maps, however the way you place sliders and triplets as well as unnecessary circles inappropriate use of streams and such just won't make this map rankable. If you have more questions, feel free to PM me.

Thanks for modding

jacky2001114 wrote:

Morgar wrote:

Hi there! First of all, I really like your map!

Here's a mod for Hard difficulty:

From the start of the song - 00:16:231 Use Soft for audio, fits the song way better. fixed I meant from 00:00:00 to 00:18:064. The first 2 of your timing sections should be Soft and the third should be Normal
00:18:064 (1) Is soooo fast, no one will expect that, use just this one slider to let the player ease into the faster slider pace. I recommend you make this one slider go 0.80 or 0.85.fixed
00:38:398 - 00:39:064 (8,9) I feel like these don't fit the beat, personally I would make something like made itthis. But anything with suck a beat pattern will suffice.
00:55:731 - 00:56:064 (4,5,6) There is too much distance between these notes. Make them either almost tough each other or just and easier triple tap.fixed the distance NOT FIXED should look like this IMO (same goes for 01:04:731 - 01:05:064 (6,7,8), didn't notice it in previous mod)
00:58:398 - 01:00:731 (2,3,4,5,6,7) It feels very weird that between 3 and 4 is almost no distance but the same time difference as 2 and 3. I say switch 4 entirely, the start becomes end, end becomes start of the slider, you can do this easily with the ctrl+g command if you didn't already know. (same story for (7) in this thread).I put 3 on the slider 4 and 6 on the slider 7
01:05:731 - 01:06:398 (1,2) Are too close to each other on the play field. fixed the distance No you didn't, (2) should be further away from (1) still.
01:06:398 - 01:07:064 (2,3,4,5) should all be as far from each other, the distance between 3 and 4 feels right here.fixed the distance
01:07:731 - 01:07:898 (6,7) 6 should be way further from the end of the slider before. Now the space suggests that 7 comes with the same time difference as there is between 5 and 6. I suggest you move the 6 to the place of 7 and make it a double tap. Also, start a new combo at 6 here please. fixed 6 7 to double tap Still the 6 should be a new combo
01:34:398 Kinda weird that this is a new combo.fixed
01:40:398 - 01:40:898 (1,2) make the sliders end on the same spot. Makes it look betterfixed slider 1234 end on the same spot
01:41:064 (3) This should be guiding the player towards the next slider party. I think with distance on 1.0X this should head towards the start of the next slider, not hidden in the chaos of the sliders before that. fixed You put 3 too far away from the end of the slider before. Set Distance Spacing to 1.0X and let distance snap do the work here.
01:47:398 (6) this slider sounds of.made to a triple tap It is still a slider but that's okay, just look at where the slider ends
01:51:398 - 01:53:064 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) I need a new combo somewhere in between here. I suggest new combo start at 8.fixed
01:58:731 - 01:59:398 (2,3,4,5,6) Straight lines are actually very hard. Try this, it gives a more playful look and is actually easier on the player.fixed
02:15:398 - end of the song. Use Soft for audio again I would say.fixed
02:19:731 (1) This slider actually goes out of the map for a bit and it's sooooo long. I would make a spinner here.fixed

Last but not least: Look at what AiMod says.

I hope you find this useful. If so, feel free to reward me with 1 or even 2 kudosu's!

Thank you for modding

Frozen Child wrote:

Hello

Blue words are for things that you don't need to change


Red words are for things that i think you need to.

This will be magical

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Slider_Techniques
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Making_Good_Sliders
t/37194



Easy

00:02:064 (1) - soft hitsounds would make it sound betterI forgot to set it,thanks for remind me
00:11:731 (1) - you can make it better \:D/fixed
00:14:064 (3) - Easy diffs can't have overlaps ( it's difficult to new players to know how to play with this ) fixed
00:16:731 (4) - ^^
00:18:064 (5) - New Combofixed
00:20:731 (1) - Overlapfixed
00:24:398 (5) - New Combofixed
00:26:064 - you could put a note here ( and remove the slider ) it is a good suggestion
00:36:064 (1) - Overlapfixed
00:39:731 (1) - the timing space is short for new players ( this works for the first spinner too ) fixed
00:46:064 (1,1) - you can make it better ( and remove the new combo for the last one )
00:50:064 (1,2) - you could make something like that

SPOILER

fixed
01:08:064 (3,4,5,6) - you could make some square combo!change it to a slider,that can make new player more easy to play
01:10:064 (1) - you can do better made the slider more easy
01:42:731 (3) - overlap for the next new combofixe
01:47:731 (4) - i'm sure you can find another place for that little guy change to other place
01:49:064 (1) - you can do better!made the slider more easy
01:53:398 (5,6,7) - another place <3i made it to one circle
01:57:064 (3) - spacingokay
02:02:064 - note?okay
02:15:398 - i think the bpm is offwhat is [the bpm is off], is it the position of the start is wrong

Normal
If you change your snapping distance to 1,4 you could have a better experience okay
00:02:064 (1) - soft hitsounds would make it sound better fixed
00:16:064 (4) - you can put in a better placefixed
00:34:398 (2) - you can make it betterfixed
00:51:398 (3) - please don'treverse selection
00:57:398 (2,3) - you can make it betterfixed
01:06:064 - add note ~ fixed
01:08:064 (3,4,5) - you know you are better than this <3fixed
01:10:064 (1,3) - ^^
01:37:398 (3) - put it on the same place as the 1st notefixed
01:46:064 (1,2,3) - its off rhythmfixed
01:48:731 (1,2,3) - it's confuse fixed
01:56:064 (4,5,6) - you can make it work if you try not to touch the notes with each other fixed
01:58:398 (1) - you can put it a little down gridfixed
02:00:398 (4,5,6) - off rhythmfixed
02:15:398 - bpm fixed

Hard

00:02:064 (1) - soft hitsounds would make it sound better fixed
00:13:731 (4) - put in x116 y 184fixed
00:27:064 (2) - overlapfixed
00:56:731 (1,2) - you can do betterfixed
01:01:398 (1) - overlapfixed
01:10:064 (1,3) - you can make it work betterfixed
01:37:731 - you need a note herefixed
01:42:731 (1) - overlapfixed
01:46:064 (4,5,6) - off rhythmfixed
02:15:398 - bpm?

Insane

00:05:898 (2) - you can put it here 00:05:953 - this is 1/6 fixed
00:06:731 (4) - ends here ( 1/6 ) 00:06:953 - fixed
00:15:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's off rhythm ( try to 1/6 in some parts) i think that here is not off rhythm
00:24:398 (1,5) - you can do betterfixed
01:37:731 (3,5) - ^^
01:47:898 (7) - off rhythm]i think that here is not off rhythm
01:51:231 (1) - remove ncfixed
01:52:064 (3) - add ncfixed
02:06:064 - bpm?

Extra

you can make it work with the 1/6 that i told you, everything that i told you on another diffs will make you create an awesome extra for it. Wish you luck with that