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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 14, 2016 at 11:05:42 PM

Artist: kradness x Camellia
Title: Dualive
Tags: Chippy osu!
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4278kb
Play Time: 01:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. DUAL MOUSE (5.32 stars, 199 notes)


Download: kradness x Camellia - Dualive
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR I GIVE WHAT YOU WANT (WIP)
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please note that im not an experienced mapper, i just pointed out things that were obvious and, to my knowledge, were flawed.

00:09:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - work on the blanket

00:14:139 (4) - id make some jump-ish kinda thing here, kick slider seems unnecessary to me

00:17:771 (1,2) - here you did a slider then a circle, then a long slider for 00:19:034 (1) - idk seems kinda odd to me

00:20:297 (1) - same as 00:14:139 (4)

00:22:034 (2) - ^

00:22:823 (1,2) - id say work on the first slider but thats probably just me being a fucktard

00:24:244 (4) - slider angle is kinda bad, wanna put it a lil bit higher

00:26:613 (1,2,3,4) - you might wanna space these a little bit more

00:28:823 (9) - blanket

00:42:402 (3) - now thats just me but id make that slider slightly faster

00:45:560 (4) - starting here i THINK you put a little bit too much sliders when circles could do the job better

00:58:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - objects are good but its kinda awkward to play and to read imo

dont have much to say about the chorus, it looks pretty good and it's fun to play, ill leave that part to someone else :D
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Cellia - wrote:

please note that im not an experienced mapper, i just pointed out things that were obvious and, to my knowledge, were flawed.

00:09:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - work on the blanket

00:14:139 (4) - id make some jump-ish kinda thing here, kick slider seems unnecessary to me

00:17:771 (1,2) - here you did a slider then a circle, then a long slider for 00:19:034 (1) - idk seems kinda odd to me

00:20:297 (1) - same as 00:14:139 (4)

00:22:034 (2) - ^

00:22:823 (1,2) - id say work on the first slider but thats probably just me being a fucktard

00:24:244 (4) - slider angle is kinda bad, wanna put it a lil bit higher

00:26:613 (1,2,3,4) - you might wanna space these a little bit more

00:28:823 (9) - blanket

00:42:402 (3) - now thats just me but id make that slider slightly faster

00:45:560 (4) - starting here i THINK you put a little bit too much sliders when circles could do the job better

00:58:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - objects are good but its kinda awkward to play and to read imo

dont have much to say about the chorus, it looks pretty good and it's fun to play, ill leave that part to someone else :D
Thanks a bunch man, I'll look into things and change em accordingly later :D
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