nao - Pastel Chime (Short Ver.) · forum

Sure

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Sure 2011-01-28T04:54:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 2월 19일 토요일 at 오후 7:27:32

Artist: nao
Title: Pastel Chime (Short Ver.)
Source: Pastel Chime Continue
Tags: gowww PSP Demetori
BPM: 180
Filesize: 14095kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.52 stars, 127 notes)
gow's Hard (5 stars, 330 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 389 notes)
Normal (4.19 stars, 183 notes)

Download: nao - Pastel Chime (Short Ver.)
Download: nao - Pastel Chime (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 28th Ranked Beatmap.
The opening theme of the PSP game 'Pastel Chime Continue'.

Thanks for your cooperation!

Last edited by Sure 2014-02-10T09:18:03+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2011-01-28T10:53:24+00:00

star~!!

Sure

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Sure 2011-01-29T16:12:28+00:00

Thanks, Hinacle11

Thite

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Thite 2011-01-30T01:52:03+00:00

gooood

gowww

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gowww 2011-01-30T09:21:43+00:00

yeah!

Download: nao - Pastel Chime (Short Ver.) (ykcarrot) [gow's Hard].osu

L i a

L i a 2011-01-31T01:02:50+00:00

에 윗님이 이미 만드셧네

Sure

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Sure 2011-01-31T01:59:23+00:00

gowww wrote:
8-)

yeah!

Thanks for nice diff. Added.

swish

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swish 2011-01-31T14:24:18+00:00

nao <3
good map

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2011-02-04T16:45:37+00:00

Cyril Scarlet

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DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2011-02-05T15:55:41+00:00

>w</

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-05T16:10:17+00:00

Thanks for starring!

Xellop, swish, Tanmak, S i R i R u and moe quintitem ^^

taNa

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taNa 2011-02-06T10:40:38+00:00

senaya

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senaya 2011-02-07T19:57:19+00:00

Hello, fellow carrot

Your mapping is great, I have only 2 suggestions.

[Easy]
01:22:757 (2) - try moving this to 01:22:590 and finishing it at 01:23:257

[Normal]
00:47:423 (2) - this slider is okay, but there are no other sliders throughout the map that follow lyrics the same way. Maybe you can change it into something else?

And your Insane is simply wonderful! Well done

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-08T01:56:15+00:00

senaya wrote:
[Easy]
01:22:757 (2) - try moving this to 01:22:590 and finishing it at 01:23:257 // I use 1/2 beats rarely, so appropriately fixed.

[Normal]
00:47:423 (2) - this slider is okay, but there are no other sliders throughout the map that follow lyrics the same way. Maybe you can change it into something else? // You're right. o.o Changed.

Thanks for mod.

And thanks taNa ^^

twistedice

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twistedice 2011-02-09T02:17:10+00:00

Fun map~ ★

KanaRin

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KanaRin 2011-02-09T07:32:42+00:00

Ok>w< Here is some mod
It's all suggestion *w*

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
No problem>w<

[gow's Hard]
01:55:923 (4) - Finish ?

[Insane]
00:22:423 (3,4) - I think it can use low spacing
Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55861
XD If you don't want to change, it's fine too ww Just my opinion
00:23:923 (4) - New combo here? XD
00:54:757 (5) - ^
01:13:257 (6) - ^
01:22:590 (1) - ^ (Change spacing)

Just suggestion.Other is fine *3*

Star>w<+

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-09T13:23:07+00:00

KanaRin wrote:
Ok>w< Here is some mod
It's all suggestion *w*

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
No problem>w<

[gow's Hard]
01:55:923 (4) - Finish ? // added

[Insane]
00:22:423 (3,4) - I think it can use low spacing // I won't fix them
Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55861
XD If you don't want to change, it's fine too ww Just my opinion
00:23:923 (4) - New combo here? XD // Changed spacing instead
00:54:757 (5) - ^ // no
01:13:257 (6) - ^ // ^
01:22:590 (1) - ^ (Change spacing) // ^ bcuz note position looks fine

Just suggestion.Other is fine *3*

Star>w<+

Thanks for mod.

And thank you twistedice. ^^

Kuzino

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Kuzino 2011-02-13T04:54:58+00:00

Star

Berncastell

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Berncastell 2011-02-13T04:57:22+00:00

별별

Leorda

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Leorda 2011-02-14T16:45:10+00:00

Ohai, moecarrot

General
1) Can you make all combo colors are little bit lighter, because my eyes are feels odd for them
2) Shouldn't the artist capitalize to "NAO" since one of your map are capitalized? Example http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22273, this map was capitalized to NAO, or maybe you are mistake?

Easy
00:18:257 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:923 (1) - ^
00:30:257 (1) - ^
01:17:423 (2,3) - I don't think this is beginner friendly for this diff. Combine this into one slider?
01:24:923 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:35:590 (1) - ^
01:36:923 (1) - ^
01:53:423 (1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer, remove the new combo please

Normal
00:18:257 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:923 (1) - ^
00:30:257 (1) - ^
01:24:923 (1) - ^
01:35:590 (1) - ^
01:36:923 (1) - ^

gow's Hard
01:17:590 (1) - Remove new combo?

Insane
Fine as hell

Sorry for combo mod

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-14T17:40:33+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Ohai, moecarrot

General
1) Can you make all combo colors are little bit lighter, because my eyes are feels odd for them // I already tried it. But It was little bit hard to see. Bcuz the colors blended with background video.
2) Shouldn't the artist capitalize to "NAO" since one of your map are capitalized? Example http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22273, this map was capitalized to NAO, or maybe you are mistake? // Actually, 'nao' is in more use than 'NAO'. I didn't know it when I made 'phantasia ballad'. In that map, I took 'NAO' because of background video said so and also official website of the game said so.
Anyway sorry for my carelessness in last map. I take 'nao' from now on.

Easy
00:18:257 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:923 (1) - ^
00:30:257 (1) - ^
01:17:423 (2,3) - I don't think this is beginner friendly for this diff. Combine this into one slider? // ok
01:24:923 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:35:590 (1) - ^
01:36:923 (1) - ^
01:53:423 (1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer, remove the new combo please // removed except last note.

Normal
00:18:257 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:923 (1) - ^
00:30:257 (1) - ^
01:24:923 (1) - ^
01:35:590 (1) - ^
01:36:923 (1) - ^ // I won't fix them.

Insane
Fine as hell

Sorry for combo mod

Thanks for mod.

큐지님, 베른님 별 고마워요~ ^^

nimi

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nimi 2011-02-15T17:05:19+00:00

Hi ^-^

gow's Hard
Increase HP Drain Rate, it's too low for a Hard >_<" (2 or 3 ticks imo).. And I'd use -1 in Approach Rate, but it's up to you XD
01:17:590 (1) - remove new combo?

Insane
00:54:757 (5) - new combo

Nice map, as always

Tenshi-nyan

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Tenshi-nyan 2011-02-15T19:37:31+00:00

Insane
00:53:257 (6) - remove new combo
00:54:090 (8) - add new combo
01:13:257 (1) - ^

Hard
geh, I don't like the circles overlapping with the sliders.

Normal
01:53:423 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - O_o what a sudden increase of difficulty. at least try this:
01:55:090 (2) - stack under (1), so that 01:55:423 (1) - isn't too big of a jump.

Easy
01:22:090 (2) - end at 01:23:090

star'd~

Muya

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Muya 2011-02-16T02:42:06+00:00

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-16T02:55:41+00:00

Wiinter wrote:
gow's Hard
Increase HP Drain Rate, it's too low for a Hard >_<" (2 or 3 ticks imo).. And I'd use -1 in Approach Rate, but it's up to you XD
01:17:590 (1) - remove new combo? // It was already removed.

Insane
00:54:757 (5) - new combo // ok

Thanks for mod.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:
Insane
00:53:257 (6) - remove new combo // nope
00:54:090 (8) - add new combo
01:13:257 (1) - ^

Normal
01:53:423 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - O_o what a sudden increase of difficulty. at least try this: // 1.3x isn't very hard. I keep it as it is.
01:55:090 (2) - stack under (1), so that 01:55:423 (1) - isn't too big of a jump.

Easy
01:22:090 (2) - end at 01:23:090 // no, its end fit in guitar.

Thanks for mod anyway. I didn't anything.

And thanks Muya ^^

Shana

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Shana 2011-02-16T03:46:24+00:00

벼어어얼

James2250

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James2250 2011-02-19T07:01:51+00:00

Easy:
Looks good

Normal:
Looks good

gow's Hard:
Fairly low HP for a Hard (especially compared to Insane) but should be fine
00:21:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - odd spacing changes, they seem out of place
01:28:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Insane:
Looks Good

Maps are nice and clean and should be fine for a bubble after fixes
Deserves a star~ (don't need to kudosu)

gowww

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gowww 2011-02-19T09:34:07+00:00

fixed!!

Download: nao - Pastel Chime (Short Ver.) (ykcarrot) [gow's Hard].osu

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-19T10:28:41+00:00

Updated.
Thank you, James2250

샤나님 별 고마워요~