Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

General

1. Nothing to say

Yuriest

1. 03:21:638 (1,3) - That overlap could be avoided and it would be better for reading (like you avoided it here 05:44:238 (1,2,3,4) - ) It's fine cuz the slider dosen't hide note perfectly.
2. 03:46:504 (2,4) - Too close imo no problem in playscreen imo
3. 03:54:088 (3) - Why not move it to the right so it makes a blanket with 03:53:414 (2,3,4,5,1) - ? I avoided it intentionally for current flow
4. 04:05:647 (3) - Maybe stack it with 04:05:160 (3) - or 04:04:836 (2) - 's head because the overlaps are a bit weird to read I think That overlap shows only in editor. It's almost clear in playscreen.
5. 04:20:079 (1,2) - It's the only pattern like that in the map where the sliders touch each other, try to make it like that 08:27:032 (1,2) - , 08:29:626 (1,2) - etc This also is one of my favorite patterns.
6. 08:59:152 Rip the singing grill you didn't map her but it would be cool to map her even if it's just stacks like here 08:49:046 (1,2,3) - I wanted to emphasize stopped-music by breaking rhythm in middle of KIAI.
7. 09:03:099 (6,2) - Collides This overlap also can be seen in editor.

Nice map, a bit nazi on the overlaps but since it's a really long map it should be really easy to read imo to avoid random misses in the middle of the map :^)
Good luck! please make it more than 10 min drain next time so I don't have to mod it ;_; I'll consider it lol

XiMerx wrote:

hello Karia. For some reasons I feel like modding this. For the past few mods it seems like you are rejecting everything >.>
Some comments first...I know this is your mapping style so I won't really mod the spacing. Aesthetics are good but from a mapper standpoint it may look a little distorted in terms of spacing.
*nazi comment (but please reply)

Yuriest

1. *00:22:720 (8,2) - Fix blanket maybe? enough imo
2. 00:46:447 (5) - Why did you use a slider not 2 circles? If you are supporting the vocal might as well copy and paste the previous slider. This slider is just for the note-spread. And about the shape, I just map it following my taste orz
3. 00:48:708 (2,3,4,1) - Weird. They are not parallel, or is this intentionally random? I didn't mind it cuz here's long term.
4. From 00:50:557 to 01:13:571 , at the end of a measure, sometimes there's a triplet 00:51:790 (8,9,1) - sometimes there isn't a triplet 00:53:434 (9,1) - Consistency please? I added triplets when the next object is circle. Of course there are some exception things following the music, but this part is almost consistency imo
5. *02:29:903 (1,2,1,2) - I would make them similar in pattern "zettai zettai" (for example 02:30:074 (2,2) - they are stacked) Maybe you are supporting the instruments instead? Already they are similar pattern cuz I copy-pasted the pattern.
6. *02:53:389 (4,6) - Why did you stack? @3@
7. *03:22:936 (1) - Maybe you can try this for better flow (Can't find much for shiawase gift) I prefer current pattern :p
8. 03:45:661 (1,2) - Wait... why is there a stack here? For vocal
9. 03:51:897 (5,6,7) - This triplet doesn't support anything You can hear triplet with 25% speed.
10. *04:11:971 (4) - I would copy and paste from slider (3) since it supports the instrument like you did in 04:22:025 (3,4) - B-but I make slider shape for aesthetic things usually.. ;w;
11. 04:15:539 (1) - Stack properly with 04:15:214 (1) - please They are same in playscreen cuz of auto-stack system.
12. *04:32:728 (7,2) - Did you copy and paste slider (7)? I moved slider (2) back and it doesn't match They are not same slider
13. 04:57:589 (1,2) - If these are sliders why are these 04:58:853 (1,2,3,4) - jumps? Lyrics are the same and I'm very sure you are mapping the vocals I put sliders in this song properly to avoid 1/2 note jumps spam.
14. 100% Chu~Gakusei is so consistent it's unreal \:D/
15. 05:54:444 (2,3,4) - Weird. I thought you like to stack triplet after a slider I wanted a perfect straight flow with (2).
16. *06:04:944 (4) - Am I deaf or this is overmapped? There's drum stream w
17. 06:30:309 (1) - This feel underwhelming as compared to 06:27:783 (1) - Consider making the distance larger thb, I don't mind DS between sliders if they haven't biggggg DS.
18. 07:05:691 (2) - ^ ^
19. *07:23:529 (1,2,3) - I personally would change the jump to back-and-forth to support the vocal, something like 07:24:989 (1,2,3) . Stacking isn't wrong but feels a little weird to me This stack feels cool with vocal to me.
20. The remap is awesome compared to the one you ranked. wwww
21. *09:15:731 (4,5) - 09:25:836 (4,5) - Why did you stack? Cuz those circles substituted for slider.
22. 09:19:441 - 09:29:546 - I would place a note here to support the sound I heard that streams when I mapped this song, but I wanted follow only 1/2 beats..
23. 09:27:731 (2,3,4) - It is cool that you placed a triangle pattern there but is 09:27:415 (1) - not relevant anymore to be in the pattern? Because (1,2) and (3,4) are pair patterns originally.

Good luck

- Frontier - wrote:

:D

[Yuriest]

1. 00:09:011 (4,5) - It's kinda bit weird. You could put it lower for aesthetic. it's pretty to me xP
2. 00:46:447 (5) - I think you should ctrl+g for a better flow. I know it'll make it easier. B-but I prefer current flow.. ;w;
3. 06:52:888 - 06:54:309 - IMO you should have some notes here. D: Empty rhythm is best for emphasizing prev notes and music imo xD

That's all. This map is great! I can't wait to seeing it rank soon.
Good luck!

zeroallies wrote:

Karia, the Marathon Mapper <3

i still like your k-on marathon <3

Nice! i've been waiting for this song <333

a star~

1. i talked with kwan and romanized tittle should be Yuruyuri Songs Compilation, because of prefered romanisation
2. about the storyboard... i find it weird that the bpm and song title appears later on when you're already playing, i think it would be much better if these stuff were visible during breaks, right before the sliders/circles appear
3. according to this maximum dimensions for tall scrolling images are 640x1440, so you'll have to resize i7.jpg
4. 05:11:810 - there's a conflict between red/green lines, they have different samplesets, make sure to fix this

1. 07:57:845 - spacing for 1/3 objects is kinda out of place if we consider that this isn't a tricky map, it causes a pointless diff spike which could be avoided imo, using some stacks would play a lot better and would also fit the overall design better, though this is completely my personal opinion
2. 08:16:491 (5,1) - stacking didn't feel good to me, it completely outshines the strong beat on 08:16:653 - which is way more important to me, i would even convert 08:16:329 (4,5) - into a 1/2 slider to emphasize the click-ability on 08:16:653 - (same happens later on 08:21:681 (5,1) - 08:26:870 (5,1) - etc)
3. 08:59:152 - the pause feels odd... i think you could apply the same concept of 08:49:046 (1,2,3) - here as those vocal notes are really prominent, keeping them unmapped doesn't represent the music imo
4. 10:02:870 (1,2,3) - this is wrongly snapped, it should be 1/3
5. 10:29:270 (2,1) - the buzz slider will most likely cause a sliderbreak, try to reduce the distance between these two objects (same goes for 10:14:184 (2,1) - )

Kagetsu wrote:

yuruyuri

[General]

1. about the storyboard... i find it weird that the bpm and song title appears later on when you're already playing, i think it would be much better if these stuff were visible during breaks, right before the sliders/circles appear Changed appearance speed instead. I really want to keep current timing.

yes

Kagetsu wrote:

there's an unused osb file, probably because of the metadata change

• 
  hp 5 or 5.5 would be ideal imo. Because it's such a long map

1. 01:33:185 (4,5) - 01:46:426 (4,5) - how about an offstack https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435719 ? Might prevent confusion for 1/2 stacks
2. 01:42:288 (1) - Add Hitsound addition on head
3. 05:45:952 (1) - What do you think about this NC pattern? it might help with reading https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435674
4. 06:13:865 (6,7,8) - This triplet is a soft sound so I think lower spacing would be better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435688 ?
5. 06:19:414 (3) - removing one tick would make it easier to acc. Same with 06:20:046 (3) - and 06:20:677 (3) - and 10:14:184 (2) - and 10:29:270 (2) -
6. 10:24:127 (9) - NC this like you did for 10:21:384 (1) - and 10:28:242 (1) -

Sonnyc wrote:

태그에 "YuruYuri" 두 개 있는데 하나 빼시는게 어때요? 태그를 중복체크 없이 넣은거라 이거 뺄려면 다른것들도 다 체크해야 할 것 같아서.. 일단 이대로 두겠습니다
Yuriest가 무슨 뜻이에요? Yuri(백합) + est(최상급)으로 장난식으로 지은 난이도명입니다
04:20:079 (1,2) - 이거 오버랩은 충분히 피할수 있을거 같고 굳이 오버랩 쓰는 의미가 없어보이네요. 그냥 개인적으로 좋아하는 모양이라 일부로 오버랩 시켰습니다.
06:09:602 (3,2) - 이거도 오버랩 피해보세요
08:29:626 (1,2) - 여기는 왜 3/4 슬라이더를 쓰셨나요? 다른 부분은 08:32:221 (1,2) - 1/2 슬라이더 구성이던데...

음악은 계속 달라지고 있는데 계속 동일 스타일의 유사한 매핑이 이어지다보니까 아예 다른 음악들이 매핑되었다기 보다는 한 음악의 다른 구간이 매핑되어있는듯한 그런 느낌이네요,, 이게 다른 맵셋들에 들어있는 난이도였으면 몰라도 하나의 맵셋에 이렇게 다 모여있으니까 조금 효과가 약해보였어요. 다음에 이런 음악 모음 매핑하실 때 참고해보시면 어떨까 싶습니다. 저도 찍고 나서 마음에 걸렸던 부분이라.. orz

Kisses wrote:

Yuru Yuri

• 
  hp 5 or 5.5 would be ideal imo. Because it's such a long map

1. 01:33:185 (4,5) - 01:46:426 (4,5) - how about an offstack https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435719 ? Might prevent confusion for 1/2 stacks
2. 01:42:288 (1) - Add Hitsound addition on head
3. 05:45:952 (1) - What do you think about this NC pattern? it might help with reading https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435674
4. 06:13:865 (6,7,8) - This triplet is a soft sound so I think lower spacing would be better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435688 ?
5. 06:19:414 (3) - removing one tick would make it easier to acc. Same with 06:20:046 (3) - and 06:20:677 (3) - and 10:14:184 (2) - and 10:29:270 (2) -
6. 10:24:127 (9) - NC this like you did for 10:21:384 (1) - and 10:28:242 (1) -

[]w ~