ryo (supercell) feat.chelly - Great Distance · forum

Down

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Down 2016-05-12T08:05:50+00:00

PlasticMemor wrote:
hey from modding queue

[Insane]
00:16:781 (2,3,4,5,6) - i would spread this pattern out a little Spread very slightly.
00:36:121 (1,2) - instead of stack make a straight line But, The rhythm is different.
01:08:253 - add a circle here It's very small sound. don't have to express that.
01:29:573 (1,1,1,1,1) - i recommend hit sounding this Already in here.
01:50:817 (1) - i would decrease spinner to the last white tick to look like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Rt7Fei9.png A good idea, but I want to match the end with other diff.

here's a star

Thanks for the mod and star!

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-05-12T09:56:53+00:00

Uhhh I modded 2 maps with Dailycare's guest diff in a row lol

[Easy]

maybe cs3.2 or sth cuz the distance is too small..

00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - imo the rhythm you choose here is kinda awkward
consider sth like http://puu.sh/oP2zn/2f27ffa786.jpg
00:20:284 (1) - make it a reverse slider as 00:17:847 (1) - ,00:20:741 - is too loud to ignore
01:25:918 (1) - move up a bit for better flow
01:34:598 (3,4) - will be better if u move 4 to the left of 3
01:46:781 (2,3) - 01:44:345 (2,3,4) - inconsistent
I think in easy there are many places where the rhythm catch is not good enough,not unrankable but when gameplay it can be confusing

[Normal]

00:43:431 (2) - delete and put a break between 00:42:213 (1,1) -
01:25:309 (4,1) - blanket

[Hard]

00:30:334 (2,1) - blanket?
01:19:218 (3,5) - NC?
01:23:025 (3,4) - why stack?
01:42:669 (5,6,7) -
http://puu.sh/oP3oA/a4a25d9e5e.jpg
01:50:436 (1) - eh,why NC?

[Insane]

00:22:720 (1) - delete this and NC will feel better
00:47:543 (2,3) - blanket
00:48:152 (1,3) - ^
01:02:923 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:07:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent
01:16:629 (2,4) - ctrl+G them?
01:25:614 (5,1) - blanket

[Extra]

00:12:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - i will make triangle jump here for less confusion,maybe move 5 to 197|130
00:16:020 (4) - make it 2 circles
00:16:324 (5,1) - dont stack,make a jump
00:27:898 (1,3) - 00:32:771 (1,3) - maybe not stack?sth like http://puu.sh/oP2VT/fb45c79fb1.jpg
00:36:121 (1,2,3) - still recommend not in a line
01:00:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - overmap
Nice kiai

Tired now

GL

Down

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Down 2016-05-12T10:50:58+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Uhhh I modded 2 maps with Dailycare's guest diff in a row lol

[Easy]

maybe cs3.2 or sth cuz the distance is too small..
00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - imo the rhythm you choose here is kinda awkward
consider sth like http://puu.sh/oP2zn/2f27ffa786.jpg 1/2 sliders are dangerous rhythm for beginner..
00:20:284 (1) - make it a reverse slider as 00:17:847 (1) - ,00:20:741 - is too loud to ignore I don't want to break this slider.
01:25:918 (1) - move up a bit for better flow Because of spacing, I can't do.
01:34:598 (3,4) - will be better if u move 4 to the left of 3 ?
01:46:781 (2,3) - 01:44:345 (2,3,4) - inconsistent Another mood here.
I think in easy there are many places where the rhythm catch is not good enough,not unrankable but when gameplay it can be confusing

[Normal]
00:43:431 (2) - delete and put a break between 00:42:213 (1,1) - Fixed
01:25:309 (4,1) - blanket Fixed

[Hard]
00:30:334 (2,1) - blanket? Not intended blanket.
01:19:218 (3,5) - NC? Cool.
01:23:025 (3,4) - why stack? Why not?
01:42:669 (5,6,7) -
http://puu.sh/oP3oA/a4a25d9e5e.jpg If so.. It occurs a jump.
01:50:436 (1) - eh,why NC? Because this is downbeat.

[Insane]
00:22:720 (1) - delete this and NC will feel better Once I'll consider..
00:47:543 (2,3) - blanket Not intended blanket.
00:48:152 (1,3) - ^ Fixed.
01:02:923 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:07:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent The mood is different.
01:16:629 (2,4) - ctrl+G them? That's not my intention. ;w;
01:25:614 (5,1) - blanket 01:25:614 (5) - I did here a blanket.

Tired now GL

Thanks for the mod!!

Last edited by Down 2016-05-13T16:43:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-NanoRIPE-

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Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-05-13T06:12:32+00:00

HI ~

[Easy]
00:16:172 (2) - Move the circle to 00:16:020
00:19:065 (2) - Remove whistle and add clap
00:22:796 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3g8ra
00:36:121 (3) - Remove clap and add whistle
01:19:218 (1) - add whistle
01:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3gaer

[Normal]
None

[Hard]
00:19:979 (4) - add whistle
00:51:807 (4) - Remove finish
01:33:228 (1) - add finish

[Insane]
01:23:482 (1) - add finish
01:33:228 (1) - ^

[Dailycare's Extra]
Increase CS to 4
Increase AR to 9,5

Nice Storyboard btw

Down

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Topic Starter

Down 2016-05-14T04:22:42+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
HI ~

[Easy]
00:16:172 (2) - Move the circle to 00:16:020 More awkward, if so. This is the best.
00:19:065 (2) - Remove whistle and add clap Whistle is correct.
00:22:796 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3g8ra Fixed this rhythm another way.
00:36:121 (3) - Remove clap and add whistle Clap is correct.
01:19:218 (1) - add whistle Fixed.
01:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3gaer Fixed this rhythm another way.

[Normal]
None

[Hard]
00:19:979 (4) - add whistle Whistle is not necessary.
00:51:807 (4) - Remove finish Fixed.
01:33:228 (1) - add finish Fixed.

[Insane]
01:23:482 (1) - add finish Fixed.
01:33:228 (1) - ^ Fixed.

Nice Storyboard btw

Thanks for the mod!!

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-05-15T07:57:54+00:00

__Ag wrote:
Dailycare's Extra
00:15:487 - add a 5% volume green line，then00:15:563 - reduction // set to 20%

00:16:020 (4) - I think this is change to 2circles more good

00:16:477 (1) - I suggest this slider end at 00:16:629 - ,then 00:16:781 - use circle // not my type ;w;

00:18:989 - 5% volume // 20%!

00:24:700 (4,1) - I think flow is not good,maybe you can move 00:24:700 (4) - to x104 y136 // hmm.. better than mine lol but it seems little awkward for me too. So i'll consider better flow

00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think there is more suitable with circle，if you change，00:44:649 (1) - change it to slider // Noooooooo it's intended TwT

01:11:223 - miss note？// No~

01:19:065 (3,3) - I suggest remove them // I turned the volume down to 30% instead of removing those. Also it might be a good choice imo!

sahuang wrote:
Uhhh I modded 2 maps with Dailycare's guest diff in a row lol xD

[Extra]
00:12:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - i will make triangle jump here for less confusion,maybe move 5 to 197|130 // moved it to 196, 128
00:16:020 (4) - make it 2 circles
00:16:324 (5,1) - dont stack,make a jump
00:27:898 (1,3) - 00:32:771 (1,3) - maybe not stack?sth like http://puu.sh/oP2VT/fb45c79fb1.jpg // oops
00:36:121 (1,2,3) - still recommend not in a line // but it seems fine for me TwT..
01:00:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - overmap // I agree it's overmapped.. but i think it is acceptable to use such streams following very weak sounds because it's just the highest diff
Nice kiai // Thanks owo

@-NanoRIPE-
adjusted CS, but don't wanna make AR to 9.5. So only CS was changed

Thank you guys~ there were only nice mods :3

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Down 2016-05-15T09:08:44+00:00

Update!

Cellina

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Cellina 2016-05-16T11:52:57+00:00

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Affirmation 2016-05-18T06:55:05+00:00

m4m

[이지]
00:15:258 (1,2) - 초보자들한테 2/3박 리딩은 어려울거라 예상됩니다, 00:12:822 (1) - 이거랑 똑같이 리버스슬라 쓰시는게 어떤가요
00:39:776 (1,2) - ^
01:35:664 (1,2) - 이런것도 살짝 어려울거라 예상하는데.... 일단 잘 모르겟네요 이런거는
01:44:649 (3,1) - 블랭킷

[노말]
00:21:807 (4,5) - 이렇게 있는 흐름은 조금 어려울 거라 예상됩니다. 이렇게 해보시는건 어떤가요
00:31:857 (5,1) - ^
00:54:395 (1,2) - 두개 평행을 노리신거 같은데 정확하지 않습니다/.
01:21:045 (1) - 이거를 01:19:675 (2) - 얘 꼬리에 스택하는게 나을것 같은데요
01:23:482 (1,4) - 머리끼리 스택

[하드]
00:22:873 (2) - 뉴콤보
01:48:152 (2) - ^

[인세인]
01:21:045 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요
01:22:720 (2,3,4) - 스택 에러
01:24:091 (3,4,5,6,7) - 정삼각형
01:25:461 (4,1) - 블랭킷
01:30:791 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요
01:47:999 (1,2) - 컨트롤지 하시고 2번에 뉴콤보
01:50:436 (1) - 연타로 해주세요

엑스트라 볼줄몰라요
Good luck

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Neoskylove wrote:
m4m

[이지]
00:15:258 (1,2) - 초보자들한테 2/3박 리딩은 어려울거라 예상됩니다, 00:12:822 (1) - 이거랑 똑같이 리버스슬라 쓰시는게 어떤가요 이지에서 2/3박이 언랭요소가 아닌이상 두고싶어요. 이부분만 이렇게 둔 이유는 분위기상 다른부분이라고 생각해서 입니다.
00:39:776 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:35:664 (1,2) - 이런것도 살짝 어려울거라 예상하는데.... 일단 잘 모르겟네요 이런거는 ^
01:44:649 (3,1) - 블랭킷 전혀 블랭킷의도가 아닙니다.

[노말]
00:21:807 (4,5) - 이렇게 있는 흐름은 조금 어려울 거라 예상됩니다. 이렇게 해보시는건 어떤가요 Fixed.
00:31:857 (5,1) - ^ Fixed.
00:54:395 (1,2) - 두개 평행을 노리신거 같은데 정확하지 않습니다/. 최대한 노력 해봤습니다.
01:21:045 (1) - 이거를 01:19:675 (2) - 얘 꼬리에 스택하는게 나을것 같은데요 괜찮다고 생각해요.
01:23:482 (1,4) - 머리끼리 스택 스택의도가 아닙니다.

[하드]
00:22:873 (2) - 뉴콤보 Fixed.
01:48:152 (2) - ^ Fixed.

[인세인]
01:21:045 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요 의도된 오버랩 패턴입니다.
01:22:720 (2,3,4) - 스택 에러 Fixed.
01:24:091 (3,4,5,6,7) - 정삼각형 흐름상 이렇게두는게 낫습니다.
01:25:461 (4,1) - 블랭킷 그 노트에 담요를 씌운게 아닙니다.
01:30:791 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요 의도된 오버랩 패턴입니다.
01:47:999 (1,2) - 컨트롤지 하시고 2번에 뉴콤보 앞부분에서 사용한 같은패턴이라 두겠습니다.
01:50:436 (1) - 연타로 해주세요 곡 전체적으로 5연타이상을 사용한 부분이 있다면 이곳을 연타로 두겠는데 그런게 아닙니다. 마지막 부분만 연타로 두면 이상해질듯 해서 두겠습니다.

엑스트라 볼줄몰라요
Good luck

감사합니다!!

Dino99

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Joined May 2011

Dino99 2016-05-21T06:12:30+00:00

Hello~~ o/

<Easy>

00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - Weird rhythm to me lol... try this:
00:22:873 (1,2) - Hmm follow the cymbal??
00:25:005 (1) - Add finish
01:48:152 (1,2) - Same as what I suggested at 00:22:873 (1,2) -

<Normal>

OD should be 4, 3 is too easy as a Normal~
00:17:695 - Maybe delete it?? The note is not necessary and consider the high BPM, too many 1/2 here IMO :3
00:21:502 - Delete clap add whistle?? Becasue you add whistle at 00:19:065 - o.o
00:22:873 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate them a bit? (maybe 10 degrees) ....Looks too straight to me lol
00:27:746 - Add a note here
01:47:238 - Maybe delete it??
01:49:827 (5) - I think this slider isn't necessary... maybe you can just delete it... sounds weird to me~ o.o

<Hard>

00:21:502 (1,2,3,4) - You can make it better! Like this: http://puu.sh/oZzLc/32eb0db16a.jpg

436,82,21502,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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301,130,22416,2,0,L|364:148,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:213 - Add a 20% Green Line here fits the music better~ (Add 55% back at 00:44:649 - )
01:02:923 (1) - Put on the middle of 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks better??
01:05:360 (1) - ehhh same as ^
01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like the pattern.. maybe try to change it?? ;w;
01:49:065 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe Make the DS a bit larger?? Players may misread here o.o

<Insane>

00:20:741 (3,4) - Blanket better??
00:22:720 (1,2) - Ctrl + G??
00:36:730 (4) - Should be a slider to follow the music better :3
00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff.
00:52:416 (2,3) - Blanket improve plz~
01:13:888 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ehh bad flow here... try another pattern?
01:47:999 (1,2) - Ctrl + G??
01:49:827 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too close, plz seperate them~~

<Dailycare's Extra>

00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I have a idea here, first reverse 00:45:258 (2) - then reverse 00:45:563 (3) -
then reverse 00:45:867 (1) - and finally you will see the flow is amazing!!~ xD
00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff o.o
Nice Diff.

OK that's all~~

Good Luck Down! ^^/

Down

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Topic Starter

Down 2016-05-21T06:58:55+00:00

Dino99 wrote:
Hello~~ o/

<Easy>

00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - Weird rhythm to me lol... try this: Fixed.
00:22:873 (1,2) - Hmm follow the cymbal?? I think that this rhythm is better :3
00:25:005 (1) - Add finish Fixed.
01:48:152 (1,2) - Same as what I suggested at 00:22:873 (1,2) - Same as above~
<Normal>

OD should be 4, 3 is too easy as a Normal~ Fixed.
00:17:695 - Maybe delete it?? The note is not necessary and consider the high BPM, too many 1/2 here IMO :3 If I delete that, these rhythm sounds awkward.
00:21:502 - Delete clap add whistle?? Becasue you add whistle at 00:19:065 - o.o Background music has a sound of bass drum here. Otherwise, The front part has sound of snare. So now hitsounding is not wrong
00:22:873 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate them a bit? (maybe 10 degrees) ....Looks too straight to me lol I'll consider it. Is hard to fix now ;w;
00:27:746 - Add a note here I think that three layer notes are hard to 'Normal' player.
01:47:238 - Maybe delete it?? Now is better. IMO
01:49:827 (5) - I think this slider isn't necessary... maybe you can just delete it... sounds weird to me~ o.o It feel empty if delete.
<Hard>
00:21:502 (1,2,3,4) - You can make it better! Like this: http://puu.sh/oZzLc/32eb0db16a.jpg
436,82,21502,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,82,21654,2,0,L|454:154,2,65,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,10,22111,2,0,L|340:56,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,130,22416,2,0,L|364:148,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Thanks! I pasted the code!
00:42:213 - Add a 20% Green Line here fits the music better~ (Add 55% back at 00:44:649 - ) Fixed.
01:02:923 (1) - Put on the middle of 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks better?? Fixed.
01:05:360 (1) - ehhh same as ^ Fixed.
01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like the pattern.. maybe try to change it?? ;w; Stacked two each notes.
01:49:065 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe Make the DS a bit larger?? Players may misread here o.o Fixed.
<Insane>

00:20:741 (3,4) - Blanket better?? Fixed.
00:22:720 (1,2) - Ctrl + G?? I want to keep this pattern.
00:36:730 (4) - Should be a slider to follow the music better :3 I think now is better :3
00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff. Fixed.
00:52:416 (2,3) - Blanket improve plz~ This is enough. lol
01:13:888 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ehh bad flow here... try another pattern? Slightly fixed!
01:47:999 (1,2) - Ctrl + G?? I want to keep this pattern.
01:49:827 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too close, plz seperate them~~ Fixed.
OK that's all~~

Good Luck Down! ^^/

Thank you for the helpful mod!

Dailycare

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Dailycare 2016-05-21T08:27:35+00:00

Dino99 wrote:
<Dailycare's Extra>

00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I have a idea here, first reverse 00:45:258 (2) - then reverse 00:45:563 (3) -
then reverse 00:45:867 (1) - and finally you will see the flow is amazing!!~ xD // wow it's pretty nice.. thanks a lot!
00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff o.o
Nice Diff. // ^^b

thanks for mod~!

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Down

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Down 2016-05-21T10:52:01+00:00

Update!

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-05-25T10:10:00+00:00

Dailycare's Extra

00:44:649 (1) - replace with 1/2 slider or add circle at 00:44:801 -
00:56:528 (1) - remove nc?
00:57:136 (2) - move left to x:61
00:58:507 (4,1) - make proper blanket?
01:23:482 (1) - move it down . its touches my progress bar
01:42:517 (1,2,1,2) - u could increase DS between these

Insane

00:21:197 (4) - move down to y:313
00:31:857 (3) - move to 329,235
00:39:167 (2,4) - nazi blanket
00:52:416 (2) - move to 274,247
01:09:319 (3) - move right to x:424
01:32:923 (6) - move up to y:177
01:37:644 (5) - move right to x:302

Thats all from me , GL!~

Dailycare

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1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-05-25T12:34:01+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Dailycare's Extra
00:44:649 (1) - replace with 1/2 slider or add circle at 00:44:801 - // don't want to make 00:44:801 - clickable ;w;
00:56:528 (1) - remove nc? // needs for separate jumps
00:57:136 (2) - move left to x:61
00:58:507 (4,1) - make proper blanket? // 00:58:507 (4,5,1) - Each slider's head makes triangle..
01:23:482 (1) - move it down . its touches my progress bar
01:42:517 (1,2,1,2) - u could increase DS between these // I'll consider fixing it xd

thanks!

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Tags:chelly bravely second end layer opening theme square enix 吉田明彦 akihiko yoshida egoist nintendo Dailycare
BeatmapID:970508
BeatmapSetID:452409

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:1.84
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics/38.png",320,340
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Down 2016-05-25T13:35:38+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Insane
00:21:197 (4) - move down to y:313
00:31:857 (3) - move to 329,235
00:39:167 (2,4) - nazi blanket
00:52:416 (2) - move to 274,247
01:09:319 (3) - move right to x:424
01:32:923 (6) - move up to y:177
01:37:644 (5) - move right to x:302
Fixed all of nazi issue~
Thats all from me , GL!~

Thanks for the mod!

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2016-06-01T13:54:13+00:00

M4M from my queue

General
hitsound suggestions can work for other diffs as well
the volume of your soft-hitfinish99.wav is really low which makes it hardly noticeable in the map. better raise its volume up!

Easy
00:12:822 (1) - having a finish on head to emphasize the downbeat would be great!
00:16:781 (3,4) - why not whistle on all these 3 beats to follow the drum?
00:17:847 (1) - why no finish on head? you have a finish at 00:20:284 (1) - and they should be the same as I suppose
00:49:522 (1,2,3) - this doesn't flow really good imo, try to get rid of the blanket and make it like this?
01:06:578 (1) - a whistle at end should fit the music nicely
01:09:015 (1) - ^
01:24:700 (3) - missing whistle at the reversing point

Normal
00:38:101 (2,3) - it's not recommended to stack 1/2 beats like this when you already had many 1/1 stacks like 00:27:593 (1,2) - 00:30:639 (2,3) - , new players can easily get confused by the stacking notes. better just unstack 00:38:101 (2,3) - and keep the 1.0x ds instead like 00:16:477 (3,4,5) -
01:33:076 (5,1) - ^
01:01:096 (4) - I believe it should have the same hitsounds as 01:00:487 (3) - , they are really similar to each other
01:50:436 (6) - maybe add a circle here

Hard
00:19:979 (4) - whistle on head instead should match with the music better
00:22:720 (1) - no, I don't think this NC is anything necessary, please remove it to avoid misleading
01:47:999 (1) - ^
00:24:548 (1) - same here, it's obvious that in the former pattern 00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you have a 1/1 beat gap between every NC, so the NC on 00:24:548 (1) - can be really confusing, people may think there's 1/1 beat gap between 00:24:395 (2,1) - but in fact there's not
01:49:827 (1) - ^
00:49:827 (2) - where's the whistle on head?
01:01:705 (1,1,1,1) - this NC usage is very good
01:41:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this pattern is kinda too hard for this diff, consider make it easier.

Insane
00:32:771 (3) - this 3/4 slider feels really weird, it'd be better to stick to the 1/2 guitar beats instead
00:36:730 (4,5) - the spacing is kinda small here imo, maybe move 4 down a bit (or move 3 and 4 together)
01:03:989 (5) - I think adding a circle here can make the rhythm really interesting (just keep even distance between 01:03:837 (4,1) - ) . also at 01:06:426 (5) -
01:50:741 (2) - flows better at around (176,128) imo

Dailycare's Extra
00:19:675 (3,4) - I don't think the big jumps follow the music well, the keyboard melody in the music is getting weaker and weaker from 00:19:218 - to 00:20:131 - , so it could be much better if you larger spacing for 00:19:065 (1,2) - and smaller spacing for 00:19:675 (3,4) -
00:21:654 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is much better
00:44:649 (1) - I think this NC is not necessary and could be removed
00:58:964 (5,1) - I think the spacing is a bit small here, I'm expecting a larger jump at 1 to emphasize the downbeat
01:12:365 (1) - this NC is really redundant, better remove it to keep consistency
01:17:238 (1) - ^

generally your hitsounding is really inconsistent between diffs and betweendifferent parts of the music, try to the compare the hitsounds you used in the similar parts such as the part from 00:17:847 - with the part from 01:43:126 - . recheck if you're using the same thing for the same music. consistency is really important! and I think you could add a lot more finish sounds at heavy beats like 00:15:258 (1) -

that's all for me
good luck

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Down 2016-06-02T07:33:36+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
M4M from my queue

General
hitsound suggestions can work for other diffs as well
the volume of your soft-hitfinish99.wav is really low which makes it hardly noticeable in the map. better raise its volume up! I raise the volume to 90%.

Easy
00:12:822 (1) - having a finish on head to emphasize the downbeat would be great! Fixed.
00:16:781 (3,4) - why not whistle on all these 3 beats to follow the drum? I forgot it.. Fixed.
00:17:847 (1) - why no finish on head? you have a finish at 00:20:284 (1) - and they should be the same as I suppose Fixed.
00:49:522 (1,2,3) - this doesn't flow really good imo, try to get rid of the blanket and make it like this? Nice suggestion! I followed it.
01:06:578 (1) - a whistle at end should fit the music nicely Fixed.
01:09:015 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:24:700 (3) - missing whistle at the reversing point Fixed.

Normal
00:38:101 (2,3) - it's not recommended to stack 1/2 beats like this when you already had many 1/1 stacks like 00:27:593 (1,2) - 00:30:639 (2,3) - , new players can easily get confused by the stacking notes. better just unstack 00:38:101 (2,3) - and keep the 1.0x ds instead like 00:16:477 (3,4,5) - Fixed.
01:33:076 (5,1) - ^ Fixed.
01:01:096 (4) - I believe it should have the same hitsounds as 01:00:487 (3) - , they are really similar to each other but I can't listen the snare sound in here.
01:50:436 (6) - maybe add a circle here I want to keep it in Normal diff.

Hard
00:19:979 (4) - whistle on head instead should match with the music better Fixed.
00:22:720 (1) - no, I don't think this NC is anything necessary, please remove it to avoid misleading Fixed.
01:47:999 (1) - ^ Fixed.
00:24:548 (1) - same here, it's obvious that in the former pattern 00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you have a 1/1 beat gap between every NC, so the NC on Fixed.
00:24:548 (1) - can be really confusing, people may think there's 1/1 beat gap between 00:24:395 (2,1) - but in fact there's not Fixed.
01:49:827 (1) - ^ Fixed.
00:49:827 (2) - where's the whistle on head? idk..
01:01:705 (1,1,1,1) - this NC usage is very good
01:41:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this pattern is kinda too hard for this diff, consider make it easier. Fixed.

Insane
00:32:771 (3) - this 3/4 slider feels really weird, it'd be better to stick to the 1/2 guitar beats instead Fixed.
00:36:730 (4,5) - the spacing is kinda small here imo, maybe move 4 down a bit (or move 3 and 4 together) Just move (4) down.
01:03:989 (5) - I think adding a circle here can make the rhythm really interesting (just keep even distance between 01:03:837 (4,1) - ) . also at 01:06:426 (5) - Good rhythm, but I want to keep this pattern.
01:50:741 (2) - flows better at around (176,128) imo Fixed.

generally your hitsounding is really inconsistent between diffs and betweendifferent parts of the music, try to the compare the hitsounds you used in the similar parts such as the part from 00:17:847 - with the part from 01:43:126 - . recheck if you're using the same thing for the same music. consistency is really important! and I think you could add a lot more finish sounds at heavy beats like 00:15:258 (1) - Thank you for the hit sounding suggestion. I just followed the real drum sound in BGM. I put the whistle when I heard the snare sound, and the rest hitsound is the same way. So I want to keep it although there is inconsistence.

that's all for me
good luck

Thanks for the mod!!

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Joined October 2014

Left 2016-06-02T13:30:23+00:00

[Easy]
00:49:218 (4,1) - 살짝 아쉬운 블랭킷
00:55:614 (3,1) - ^
01:16:324 (1,2,3,4) - 꼬리서 서클로의 흐름이 좋도록 수정하면 좋지 않을까 생각합니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5296118

[Normal]
00:27:593 (1,2) - 노래상으로 보면, 스택이 그리 적절해보이지 않습니다.
00:30:639 (2,3,4) - 블랭킷을 여기부터 이어가면 어떨까요? 그냥 제안!
00:49:522 (1) - 꼬리에 클랩 빠진거 맞나요?
01:24:243 (2,3) - 방향이 달라서 그런지, 뭔가 모양이 별로인거 같아요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5296152 는 이것도 허접하네
01:41:603 (2,3) - 담요 좀만 더
01:41:908 (3) - 이 슬라가 노래에도 전혀 안맞고 모양도 별로라고 생각해요. 물론 의도는 노래에 있는게 아니라 위쪽 블랭킷에 있는 거같지만, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5296166 이런식으로 좀더 안정적인 슬라모양으로 블랭킷 가져가보는 건 어떨까 싶습니다. 01:40:690 (1) - 얘와 부분대칭 노려볼수도 있겠네요
01:44:040 (3,4) - 스택 별로 좋아보이지 않습니다.
01:45:563 (1) - 앞에서는 이 노래파트에 슬라를 3/2 끄셨던데, 여기는 갑자기 1/1이네요. 일관성이 절실합니다.

[Hard]
00:22:873 (1,2) - ctrl G 가 동선이 좋지 않나요? 그보다 이렇게 전 뉴콤이랑 둘다 가깝게 붙여놓으면 리딩 별로 안좋을거 같아요.. 는 별 상관 없을듯
-> 01:47:695 (4,5,1,2) - 여기 동선이 훨씬 낫네요
00:54:091 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]
00:34:598 (4,1,2,3) - 흐름이 별로인거 같아요.. 우선 동선도 너무 완만한데, 중간에 2단타로 무빙도 멈췄다가니..00:35:208 (3) - 를 ctrl G 시켜보는 건 어떨까여
00:45:563 (4,1,2,3,4) - 분위기가 고조된거에 비해 슬라끼리 너무 가깝습니다. 00:45:867 (1,2,3,4) - 특히 이건 거의 훑고 지나가는 느낌..?
01:01:705 (1,3,5) - 어느파트를 매핑하고 있어도 명백한 2단타음을 놓치는 건 좀 아쉬울 거 같아요. 뒤도 마찬가지!
01:18:609 (6,1,2) - 노래는 각 음에 강조가 필요한데 동선이 너무 완만해요..
01:43:583 (3,4,5) - 앞쪽이랑 노래는 같은데 리듬이 달라요! 수미상관 추천

[Dailycare's Extra]
커스텀 난이도명 안쓰셔서 비추 드립니다

엑라는 못봐요.. 근데 봐도 맵이 너무 좋아서 할말없을듯

굳럭!

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2016-06-03T16:12:08+00:00

came from my queue❤

Easy

00:21:502 (2,3,1,2,1) - 쉬는 부분들이 정말 어쩔 수 없는 케이스 외에는 음들 잔뜩 들리니 1/1 쉬는박자 그대로 이어오셔도되요. 키아이부분처럼 새롭게 쉬는박자를 세운게 아닌 이상은 다른 부분들은 맞춰주는게 이지채보에서는 제일 이상적이에요. 예시 드리구 갈게요.
00:39:776 (1,2,3) - 이지는 단조로워두 되요 그니까 잘 이어오셨던 1/1 쉬는 틈 깨는거 보단 00:39:776 (1) - 을 리핏처리 하시는게 좋아요. 더군다나 플레이할때, 이어오던 리듬이 저렇게 깨져버리면 00:40:690 (2) - 여기서 혼동될 확률이 높아요.
01:46:781 (2,3) - 맨 처음 말씀드렸던 부분이랑 같아요. 똑같이 진행해주세요.

Normal

00:27:593 (1,2) - 이지/노멀 오브젝트 스택중에요, 특정 끝이나 첫부분만 아닌 슬라랑 같이 진행 도중에 1/2도 스택쓰시고 1/1도 스택쓰시면 헷갈린다고 지적 많이 받아요. 매핑하실때 정해두고 하시는게 좋아요. 제 생각엔 떨어트려 배치하는게 좋을거 같아요.
01:10:233 (1) - 큰흰틱 두개씩 콤보 넣어오셨으니 여긴 뉴콤 필요 없어보여요.
01:44:040 (3,4) - 처음말씀드렸던 부분(00:27:593 (1,2) 과 같아요. 떼어 배치 해주시는게 좋을거같습니다.

Hard

00:17:847 (1,2,3) - 1자 배치하시면 간격 이쁘게 조금만 더 신경써주세요 3번꼬리 쫌만 더 왼쪽으로 빼면 잘 맞을거같아요.
01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 스택도 잘 되어있고 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 여기랑 비교했을때 hp충분한 하드난이도에 뉴콤 이렇게 많이 넣을 필요가 없어요.00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 얘네 같이 떨어져있어 구분상명목이라면 괜찮지만요.

Insane

00:12:365 (1) - 이거 피아노 짖누르는 소리랑 스냅이 안맞아요. 25%로 들어보심 뒤는 맞는데 앞은 안맞는거 들으실 수 있을거에요. 차라리 데일리님꺼 처럼 앞에 00:12:213 (1) - 여기부터 3타 제대로 들리는부분에 리핏슬라 넣으시던지 아님 그냥 저부분 슬라 처리해버리세요.
00:37:492 (2) - 별차이 안나는데 그냥 보기 이쁘게 00:36:121 (1) - 얘랑 스택하시는게 어때요
01:12:060 (3) - 제 맵 3/4에 대해 모딩해주셨는데 버젓이 음이 들리는데 굳이 3/4로 늘렸다가 디퀄당한적이 있어서 저도 그 이후로 불필요한부분은 안넣구있어요. 여기도 보심 01:12:213 들을 수 있잖아요. 근데 01:16:324 (1,2) - 이런부분은 재밌게 처리 잘하셨어요 여기는 쿵 하는 리듬이 안들리니까 괜찮네요.
01:17:999 (3) - 여기두요위와같은이유로 1/2처리가 더 맞는 부분이겠죠
01:34:598 (1) - ^같은이유에요. 물론 선택은 다운님이..

Dailycare's Extra

00:24:700 (4,1,2) - 저도 오버랩 걱정안하고 매핑하는데요. 단조롭게 이루어진 첫 파트중에 얘네만 유독 복작복작하게 배치된 느낌예요. 다르게 고치시던 안고치시는건 자유지만 두가지만 예시드리고갈게요.
SPOILER
00:42:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - 이 부분 전 콤보에서는 보컬로 맞추다가 베이스음으로 바뀌는 데니까 적어도 00:43:431 (1) - 이 슬라 머리에 무슨 소리라도 들어가줘야한다고 생각해요.
00:44:649 (1) - 00:44:954 (1) - 두군데나 굳이 뉴콤이 필요할까요. 1/1박 혼동안가게 하고싶으셨다면 00:44:649 (1) - 여기 뉴콤 해제하는형식으로 구색맞추시면될거같아요. 데일리님 00:53:786 (1,2) - 여기도 평처리하셨으니 동일감 주게 잘 맞춰주세요~
00:49:218 (1) - 여기도 굳이 필요하지 않을거같아요 01:41:908 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이 부분처럼 1,2 1,2 점프 반복되는게 많은것도 아니구 저한텐 없애도 무방해보이네요.
00:56:528 (1) - ^
01:03:989 (4,5,1,2) - 요런 배치 플레이할때 불편하게 느껴질 수 있다구 저는 생각하거든요. 근데 데일리님이 이전부분(01:01:705 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - )과 같이 01:04:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -여기도 살리고싶은 음이 있다면 그냥 01:04:065 (5) - 요걸 빼버리세요 지금 원래 01:01:629 (5) - 여기두 음이 들어가야되는데 데일리님이 강조하시고픈곳이 있으니 스트림처리 안하구 그냥 싱글노트 처리 하신것처럼요.
01:12:365 (1) - 여기도 뉴콤스팸은 빼는게 더 좋을거같아용
01:17:238 (1) - ^이거까지!

맵들이 너무 좋네요 랭크 화이띵!

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643 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Down 2016-06-04T02:04:40+00:00

Left wrote:
[Easy]
00:49:218 (4,1) - 살짝 아쉬운 블랭킷 Fixed.
00:55:614 (3,1) - ^ Fixed.
01:16:324 (1,2,3,4) - 꼬리서 서클로의 흐름이 좋도록 수정하면 좋지 않을까 생각합니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5296118 굿

[Normal]
00:27:593 (1,2) - 노래상으로 보면, 스택이 그리 적절해보이지 않습니다. 스택 풀겠습니다.
00:30:639 (2,3,4) - 블랭킷을 여기부터 이어가면 어떨까요? 그냥 제안! 엌 이곳은 그대로 두고싶군요.
00:49:522 (1) - 꼬리에 클랩 빠진거 맞나요? 휘슬이 빠졌군용
01:24:243 (2,3) - 방향이 달라서 그런지, 뭔가 모양이 별로인거 같아요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5296152 는 이것도 허접하네 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ 어쨋든 리버스 슬라 꼬리 방향을 고쳤습니다.
01:41:603 (2,3) - 담요 좀만 더 는 다음모딩을 보고 (3)번 슬라가 바뀜
01:41:908 (3) - 이 슬라가 노래에도 전혀 안맞고 모양도 별로라고 생각해요. 물론 의도는 노래에 있는게 아니라 위쪽 블랭킷에 있는 거같지만, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5296166 이런식으로 좀더 안정적인 슬라모양으로 블랭킷 가져가보는 건 어떨까 싶습니다. 01:40:690 (1) - 얘와 부분대칭 노려볼수도 있겠네요 굿굿
01:44:040 (3,4) - 스택 별로 좋아보이지 않습니다. Fixed.
01:45:563 (1) - 앞에서는 이 노래파트에 슬라를 3/2 끄셨던데, 여기는 갑자기 1/1이네요. 일관성이 절실합니다. 물론 일관성도 중요하지만 이부분은 키아이 후에 끝나는 부분이라 조금 다르게 주고싶었어요. 랭크에 지장없는한 이대로 두고싶습니다!

[Hard]
00:22:873 (1,2) - ctrl G 가 동선이 좋지 않나요? 그보다 이렇게 전 뉴콤이랑 둘다 가깝게 붙여놓으면 리딩 별로 안좋을거 같아요.. 는 별 상관 없을듯 이부분 후에 노트까지의 거리때문에 이대로 둬야겠네요.. 그리고 그렇게 나쁘지도 않다고 생각합니당
-> 01:47:695 (4,5,1,2) - 여기 동선이 훨씬 낫네요
00:54:091 (4,5) - ^ 이건 확실히 좋은듯 ㅋ

[Insane]
00:34:598 (4,1,2,3) - 흐름이 별로인거 같아요.. 우선 동선도 너무 완만한데, 중간에 2단타로 무빙도 멈췄다가니..00:35:208 (3) - 를 ctrl G 시켜보는 건 어떨까여 헉 혹시 컨G마스터?
00:45:563 (4,1,2,3,4) - 분위기가 고조된거에 비해 슬라끼리 너무 가깝습니다. 00:45:867 (1,2,3,4) - 특히 이건 거의 훑고 지나가는 느낌..? 힛사 박을때 느꼇지만 그렇게 고조되는 부분은 아니라고 생각해요. 그냥 1/2슬라로 음악과 패턴만 채워줘도 무방하다고 봅니다.
01:01:705 (1,3,5) - 어느파트를 매핑하고 있어도 명백한 2단타음을 놓치는 건 좀 아쉬울 거 같아요. 뒤도 마찬가지! 헉 근데 2단타를 넣게되면 난이도가 급상승 해버려서 포기해야 될 것 같아요 ㅠㅠ
01:18:609 (6,1,2) - 노래는 각 음에 강조가 필요한데 동선이 너무 완만해요.. DS가 점점 증가하도록 표현했으니 충분하다고 생각합니다!
01:43:583 (3,4,5) - 앞쪽이랑 노래는 같은데 리듬이 달라요! 수미상관 추천 하드와 같은 이유로..

굳럭!

Euny wrote:

came from my queue❤

Easy
00:21:502 (2,3,1,2,1) - 쉬는 부분들이 정말 어쩔 수 없는 케이스 외에는 음들 잔뜩 들리니 1/1 쉬는박자 그대로 이어오셔도되요. 키아이부분처럼 새롭게 쉬는박자를 세운게 아닌 이상은 다른 부분들은 맞춰주는게 이지채보에서는 제일 이상적이에요. 예시 드리구 갈게요. Fixed.
00:39:776 (1,2,3) - 이지는 단조로워두 되요 그니까 잘 이어오셨던 1/1 쉬는 틈 깨는거 보단 00:39:776 (1) - 을 리핏처리 하시는게 좋아요. 더군다나 플레이할때, 이어오던 리듬이 저렇게 깨져버리면 00:40:690 (2) - 여기서 혼동될 확률이 높아요. 확실히 그렇긴 한데 (1)도 리버스를 시켜버리면 그곳에서만 3개에 리핏슬라가 있어가지고 멈춰있는 느낌을 받을 것 같아요.. 일단 이대로 두고 싶습니다.
01:46:781 (2,3) - 맨 처음 말씀드렸던 부분이랑 같아요. 똑같이 진행해주세요. Fixed.
Normal
00:27:593 (1,2) - 이지/노멀 오브젝트 스택중에요, 특정 끝이나 첫부분만 아닌 슬라랑 같이 진행 도중에 1/2도 스택쓰시고 1/1도 스택쓰시면 헷갈린다고 지적 많이 받아요. 매핑하실때 정해두고 하시는게 좋아요. 제 생각엔 떨어트려 배치하는게 좋을거 같아요. 레프트님 모딩에서 풀었습니다.
01:10:233 (1) - 큰흰틱 두개씩 콤보 넣어오셨으니 여긴 뉴콤 필요 없어보여요. 헉 왜있지 ㄷ
01:44:040 (3,4) - 처음말씀드렸던 부분(00:27:593 (1,2) 과 같아요. 떼어 배치 해주시는게 좋을거같습니다. Fixed.
Hard
00:17:847 (1,2,3) - 1자 배치하시면 간격 이쁘게 조금만 더 신경써주세요 3번꼬리 쫌만 더 왼쪽으로 빼면 잘 맞을거같아요. 최대한 맞도록 노력해봤습니다.
01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 스택도 잘 되어있고 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 여기랑 비교했을때 hp충분한 하드난이도에 뉴콤 이렇게 많이 넣을 필요가 없어요.00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 얘네 같이 떨어져있어 구분상명목이라면 괜찮지만요. 음.. 이부분은 hp드레인보다는 강조의 의미로 넣은 뉴콤이라서 빼기가 좀 그렇네요. 이부분 SB를 보셔도 번쩍번쩍하는 부분에는 뉴콤을 넣었으니 이대로 두고 싶습니다.
Insane
00:12:365 (1) - 이거 피아노 짖누르는 소리랑 스냅이 안맞아요. 25%로 들어보심 뒤는 맞는데 앞은 안맞는거 들으실 수 있을거에요. 차라리 데일리님꺼 처럼 앞에 00:12:213 (1) - 여기부터 3타 제대로 들리는부분에 리핏슬라 넣으시던지 아님 그냥 저부분 슬라 처리해버리세요. 그렇군요. 리핏길이를 줄여서 확실한 부분에 놓았습니다!
00:37:492 (2) - 별차이 안나는데 그냥 보기 이쁘게 00:36:121 (1) - 얘랑 스택하시는게 어때요 Fixed.
01:12:060 (3) - 제 맵 3/4에 대해 모딩해주셨는데 버젓이 음이 들리는데 굳이 3/4로 늘렸다가 디퀄당한적이 있어서 저도 그 이후로 불필요한부분은 안넣구있어요. 여기도 보심 01:12:213 들을 수 있잖아요. 근데 01:16:324 (1,2) - 이런부분은 재밌게 처리 잘하셨어요 여기는 쿵 하는 리듬이 안들리니까 괜찮네요. 이부분은 확실히 그렇네요. 고쳤습니다!
01:17:999 (3) - 여기두요위와같은이유로 1/2처리가 더 맞는 부분이겠죠 이부분은 보컬이 이어간 느낌이 더 강하다고 생각하기에 두고 싶습니다.
01:34:598 (1) - ^같은이유에요. 물론 선택은 다운님이..이곳도 고치는게 맞네요. Fixed!
맵들이 너무 좋네요 랭크 화이띵!

두분 다 모딩 감사합니다!!

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-06-04T04:23:51+00:00

@Zero
00:19:675 (3,4) - fixed whole patterns xd

@Euny
00:24:700 (4,1,2) - 이거는 지금의 흐름이 더 좋아서 오버랩에도 불구하고 이리 둔거여서.. 만약 고치게 된다면 후자쪽을 고려해볼게욥
00:56:528 (1) - 뉴콤한게 더 깨끗해보여요 ㅠㅠㅠ

Fixed all except what i mentioned above
Thank you all ~

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Kyouren

5,582 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-06-12T15:11:00+00:00

As request!

Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]

Hmm...I think your sb is not good like this part: http://puu.sh/ppYy1/405a44cef8.jpg
Maybe you can resize it or make a spectrum is a bit big

[Easy]

00:16:781 (3) - Maybe you need to used slider from 00:17:847 (1), so it's look nice flow (just Ctrl+C and Ctrl+H, don't forget remove revenge)
00:59:268 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:761 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:19:675 (5,1) - I don't like this blanket flow, maybe change flow? ;w;
00:21:654-,00:21:959- - Why you ignore this strong sound? :/
00:30:639 (2,3,4) - Blanket?
00:33:685 (3,4) - I prefer like if slider (4) is used for blanket slider (3) in tail, since it's ugly flow :<
01:02:923 (4,5) - Can you fixed a bit blanket?
01:18:761 (1) - How about used like this slider?
01:25:309 (4,1) - Click here!
01:44:040 (3,4) - Blanket is error!
01:50:284-,01:50:436-,01:50:588- - Why you ignore this strong sound? :/

[Hard]

00:22:720 (5) - It's overmapping, i don't hear a sound!
01:47:999 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:12:517 (1) - Can you make it lower volume? It's noisy when you used higher volume ;w;
00:16:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's weird flow lol, maybe you can used other flow?
00:22:720 (5) - It's overmapping, i don't hear a sound!
00:38:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's confuring ;w;
00:47:543 (2,3) - Blanket
00:48:152 (1,2) - Too large spacing lol
00:53:786 (4,5) - ^
01:02:162 (3,4,5) - Please, i don't think it's nice flow ;w;
01:07:035 (3,4,5) - ^
01:09:015 (1,2,3,4) - If you want used triange flow, you can used like this?
01:16:629 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think about this flow, it's triangle?
01:21:045 (1,2) - Blanket
01:47:999 (5) - It's overmapping, i don't hear a sound!

[Extra]

01:43:355 (2,2) - I feel distrub when hear this note, it's weird and do not connect
01:45:791 (2,2) - ^

No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~

Down

Featured Artist

643 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Down 2016-06-12T15:50:57+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
As request!

Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT
[General]
Hmm...I think your sb is not good like this part: http://puu.sh/ppYy1/405a44cef8.jpg
Maybe you can resize it or make a spectrum is a bit big yep.. I'll consider it
[Easy]
00:16:781 (3) - Maybe you need to used slider from 00:17:847 (1), so it's look nice flow (just Ctrl+C and Ctrl+H, don't forget remove revenge) Fixed!
00:59:268 (1) - Remove NC This NC is necessary. because it is 2 down beat that NC cycle of this map.
01:18:761 (1) - ^ ^
[Normal]
00:19:675 (5,1) - I don't like this blanket flow, maybe change flow? ;w; Fixed a bit.
00:21:654-,00:21:959- - Why you ignore this strong sound? :/ It's okay in the normal diff. It's too dense if I add them.
00:30:639 (2,3,4) - Blanket? I didn't intend a blanket :3
00:33:685 (3,4) - I prefer like if slider (4) is used for blanket slider (3) in tail, since it's ugly flow :< Good, fixed.
01:02:923 (4,5) - Can you fixed a bit blanket? Fixed!
01:18:761 (1) - How about used like this slider? Okay, nice suggestion.
01:25:309 (4,1) - Click here! OMG.. but it's impossible because the distance.
01:44:040 (3,4) - Blanket is error! Also I didn't intend a blanket!
01:50:284-,01:50:436-,01:50:588- - Why you ignore this strong sound? :/ This has already been mentioned above.
[Hard]
00:22:720 (5) - It's overmapping, i don't hear a sound! Nope. This place hear the sound of base drum. It's not overmapping.
01:47:999 (5) - ^ ^
[Insane]
00:12:517 (1) - Can you make it lower volume? It's noisy when you used higher volume ;w; Sure~
00:16:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's weird flow lol, maybe you can used other flow? It's zigzag pattern. I intended that and I love this flow..
00:22:720 (5) - It's overmapping, i don't hear a sound! Same with hard
00:38:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's confuring ;w; Ok, Fixed a bit
00:47:543 (2,3) - Blanket I didn't intend a blanket :3
00:48:152 (1,2) - Too large spacing lol It's fine for the insane diff.
00:53:786 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:02:162 (3,4,5) - Please, i don't think it's nice flow ;w; Why do you think like that? It is gradually increased the distance and fit the song.
01:07:035 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:09:015 (1,2,3,4) - If you want used triange flow, you can used like this? Nice, but I didn't intend a triangle flow.
01:16:629 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think about this flow, it's triangle? It is different from each person that think about flow. I don't think that this flow isn't good. lol
01:21:045 (1,2) - Blanket oh man, I didn't intend a blanket Xd
01:47:999 (5) - It's overmapping, i don't hear a sound! This has already been mentioned above.
No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~

Thanks for the mod, Kitty~

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-06-14T08:02:36+00:00

@KittyAdventure

just adjusted volume :p thanks for mod~

SPOILER

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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-06-24T18:38:17+00:00

콤보 컬러 파란색은 좀 바꿔야 할 것 같아요. 뒷 배경이 너무 퍼래서 ar 인식에 어려움이 있습니다.
[easy]
01:06:578 (1,2,3) - 모딩은 아니고 개인적인 코멘트인데요. (1,2)가 60도 회전이고, (2)에서 직선 흐름으로 (3) 시작하고, (3) 꼬리를 (1)에 블랭킷 시킨 거잖아요. 그런데 플레이 화면에서 확인하면 (2) 끝나고 (3) 칠 때 쯤이면 이미 (1)은 거의 없어져서 시각적인 효과가 크지는 않아요. 개인적으로 노력 대비 효율이 좋지 못한 류의 패턴이라고 생각해요.
[normal]
00:17:847 - 피니시.
00:32:466 (1,2) - 패턴 연계도가 다소 낮네요. (1)도 평행 슬라이더로 만드는게 더 안정적이지 않을까 싶습니다.
00:34:903 (1,2,3,4) - 이 시점에서 고치기 다소 난해합니다만.. 수치상으로는 1.00x 간격이 동일합니다. 그러나 시각적으로 확인해보시면, (1,2)의 슬라이더 사이의 간격과 (2,3) 슬라이더 사이의 간격에 차이가 남을 확인하실 수 있습니다. 그 간격을 위해서 distance를 직접적으로 건드리는 건 추천하지 않습니다만, 다음 매핑에는 수치상의 간격을 지킴과 동시에 시각적인 간격도 지킬 수 있게 노력해주세요.
00:38:558 - 피니시가 많이 부족해보이네요 이 주변에.
[hard]
틱2가 더 적합해보이네요.
00:22:111 (3) - 간격을 조금 가까이..
00:33:685 (4) - 뉴콤 빠졌습니다.
01:42:822 (5) - 이전 슬라이더에서 변화가 있는 것 같은데, (3,4)가 평행이라서 얘만 너무 이질적입니다. (4)도 틀어서 아예 대칭으로 만들거나, (5)도 평행으로 만드는게 덜 어중간하고 더 완결성 높을 것 같습니다.
[insane]
00:37:340 (1) - 클랩 제거.
00:42:213 - 볼륨 너무 작아요. 30%로 올립시다. 전 난이도 공통.
00:59:878 - 클랩.
01:08:406 (3) - 뉴콤 넣는게 더 패턴 리딩에 좋아보이네요.
01:18:609 (6,1,2) - 음.. 흐름상 (1,2)가 너무 구별이 안되는데.. 어떻게 다르게 처리해보실래요?
01:44:345 (1,2) - 01:46:781 (1,2) - (2)부터 뉴콤 넣는게 더 패턴에 적합하지 않을까 싶습니다.

아무래도 블랭킷 활용의 여지가 적은 노말과 점프가 많은 인센이 퀄이 다소 떨어지는 모습이 보인것 같네요.
데일리케어님 무결점 엑스트라에 별 쏘고 갑니다.

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Featured Artist

643 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Down 2016-06-24T18:41:12+00:00

와 손닉님 정말 감사합니다 ㅠㅠ 아침에 일어나서 수정하도록 하겠습니다ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-06-24T19:38:15+00:00

Hey, from my queue!

[General]

Where did you get the MP3 file from? Did you cut it yourself, or get it from Monstrata's set. IIRC, this might need some tweaking for timing purposes, because supercell.
Awesome storyboard!

[Normal]

01:48:609 (2,3,4) - Spacing?

[Hard]

00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:48:152 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I have my doubts whether this kind of anti-spacing pattern is appropriate for a Hard difficulty. Perhaps try something like 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - instead.

[Insane]

00:12:517 (1) - The last blue tick is overmapped + pretty sure this is 1/6 instead.
Try to use more finishes in non-KIAI parts too (ex: 00:12:822 (1) - 00:15:258 (1) - 00:17:847 (1) - etc.) It really feels lacking at some parts now. (applies to other diffs too)

[Dailycare's]

00:18:456 (2,3) - 00:20:893 (2) - I find it hard to find out what you're trying emphasis here. I don't think I even hear beats on (2), yet the largest jump is there?
00:36:578 (4) - rip guitar
01:13:735 (1) - Wouldn't skip the cymbal here if I were you.
01:23:482 (1) - 01:33:228 (1) - Finish?`
01:39:472 (1) - Clap?
The constant back and forth gets a little lame after a while - perhaps you can add more variety in future maps. Other than that, really lovely style.

Decent set actually... feel free to call me back!

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Featured Artist

643 posts

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Down 2016-06-24T22:21:21+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
콤보 컬러 파란색은 좀 바꿔야 할 것 같아요. 뒷 배경이 너무 퍼래서 ar 인식에 어려움이 있습니다. 노란색? 계열로 바꿨습니다.
[easy]
01:06:578 (1,2,3) - 모딩은 아니고 개인적인 코멘트인데요. (1,2)가 60도 회전이고, (2)에서 직선 흐름으로 (3) 시작하고, (3) 꼬리를 (1)에 블랭킷 시킨 거잖아요. 그런데 플레이 화면에서 확인하면 (2) 끝나고 (3) 칠 때 쯤이면 이미 (1)은 거의 없어져서 시각적인 효과가 크지는 않아요. 개인적으로 노력 대비 효율이 좋지 못한 류의 패턴이라고 생각해요. 아 그렇군요. 나름 괜찮게봤는데 효과가 크진 않군요..
[normal]
00:17:847 - 피니시. 으악
00:32:466 (1,2) - 패턴 연계도가 다소 낮네요. (1)도 평행 슬라이더로 만드는게 더 안정적이지 않을까 싶습니다. Fixed.
00:34:903 (1,2,3,4) - 이 시점에서 고치기 다소 난해합니다만.. 수치상으로는 1.00x 간격이 동일합니다. 그러나 시각적으로 확인해보시면, (1,2)의 슬라이더 사이의 간격과 (2,3) 슬라이더 사이의 간격에 차이가 남을 확인하실 수 있습니다. 그 간격을 위해서 distance를 직접적으로 건드리는 건 추천하지 않습니다만, 다음 매핑에는 수치상의 간격을 지킴과 동시에 시각적인 간격도 지킬 수 있게 노력해주세요. 넵 조언 감사합니다.
00:38:558 - 피니시가 많이 부족해보이네요 이 주변에. 피니시는 전 난이도에 걸쳐서 대대적인 수정을..
[hard]
틱2가 더 적합해보이네요. Fixed.
00:22:111 (3) - 간격을 조금 가까이.. Fixed.
00:33:685 (4) - 뉴콤 빠졌습니다. Fixed.
01:42:822 (5) - 이전 슬라이더에서 변화가 있는 것 같은데, (3,4)가 평행이라서 얘만 너무 이질적입니다. (4)도 틀어서 아예 대칭으로 만들거나, (5)도 평행으로 만드는게 덜 어중간하고 더 완결성 높을 것 같습니다. (4)번을 틀어서 부채꼴 형태? 를 만들어 봤습니다.
[insane]
00:37:340 (1) - 클랩 제거. ㅠㅠ
00:42:213 - 볼륨 너무 작아요. 30%로 올립시다. 전 난이도 공통. Fixed.
00:59:878 - 클랩. 아 힛사 복붙기가 말을 안듣네요.
01:08:406 (3) - 뉴콤 넣는게 더 패턴 리딩에 좋아보이네요. Fixed.
01:18:609 (6,1,2) - 음.. 흐름상 (1,2)가 너무 구별이 안되는데.. 어떻게 다르게 처리해보실래요? 01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이걸 전체적으로 회전시켜서 그럴싸하게 고쳐봤습니다.
01:44:345 (1,2) - 01:46:781 (1,2) - (2)부터 뉴콤 넣는게 더 패턴에 적합하지 않을까 싶습니다. Fixed.

아무래도 블랭킷 활용의 여지가 적은 노말과 점프가 많은 인센이 퀄이 다소 떨어지는 모습이 보인것 같네요. 인센은 그래도 어느정도 감은 오는데 노말같은 경우에는 뭔가 잘 안찍히네요ㅋㅋ 더 연습이 필요하다고 생각합니다.
데일리케어님 무결점 엑스트라에 별 쏘고 갑니다. ㄹㅇ

모딩 감사합니다!
~~놀라서 잠이안오는..~~

appleeaterx wrote:
Hey, from my queue!

[General]
Where did you get the MP3 file from? Did you cut it yourself, or get it from Monstrata's set. IIRC, this might need some tweaking for timing purposes, because supercell. I got it from Monstrata's set. I'll be fine.
Awesome storyboard! Thank you!!!!!
[Normal]
01:48:609 (2,3,4) - Spacing? Fixed.
[Hard]
00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:48:152 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I have my doubts whether this kind of anti-spacing pattern is appropriate for a Hard difficulty. Perhaps try something like 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - instead. I love this pattern and want to give a differentiated in this part.
[Insane]
00:12:517 (1) - The last blue tick is overmapped + pretty sure this is 1/6 instead. It's difficult to fix. I just make a 1/1 slider in here. 00:12:365 -
Try to use more finishes in non-KIAI parts too (ex: 00:12:822 (1) - 00:15:258 (1) - 00:17:847 (1) - etc.) It really feels lacking at some parts now. (applies to other diffs too) Added a lot of finishes..
[/list]

Decent set actually... feel free to call me back!

Thanks for the mod!! I'll call you when Dailycare finished the fixing.

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-06-25T09:20:06+00:00

@Sonnyc
헉.. 감사합니다ㅠㅠ

appleeaterx wrote:
[Dailycare's]
00:18:456 (2,3) - 00:20:893 (2) - I find it hard to find out what you're trying emphasis here. I don't think I even hear beats on (2), yet the largest jump is there? // adjusted DS
00:36:578 (4) - rip guitar // ;w;
01:13:735 (1) - Wouldn't skip the cymbal here if I were you. // uh but it sounds weak to me.. so i skipped x.x
01:23:482 (1) - 01:33:228 (1) - Finish?`
01:39:472 (1) - Clap?
The constant back and forth gets a little lame after a while - perhaps you can add more variety in future maps. Other than that, really lovely style. // Thanks xd

Thanks to check it xD

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 80284
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Great Distance
TitleUnicode:Great Distance
Artist:ryo (supercell) feat.chelly
ArtistUnicode:ryo (supercell) feat.chelly
Creator:Down
Version:Dailycare's Extra
Source:ブレイブリーセカンド
Tags:chelly bravely second end layer opening theme square enix 吉田明彦 akihiko yoshida egoist nintendo Dailycare
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Kawashiro

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Kawashiro 2016-06-25T10:19:22+00:00

저도 스토리보드 해주세요

별쏘고 감

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-06-25T13:02:44+00:00

Nominated.

Mint

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Mint 2016-06-25T16:04:06+00:00

Still looks good to me.
Qualified!

Beige

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Beige 2016-06-25T16:16:03+00:00

ㅊㅋㅊㅋ~

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Thanks a lot!!

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cccc!!!

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Kaitjuh

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Kaitjuh 2016-06-25T17:50:54+00:00

The storyboard background has inconsistent scaling on my end at the transition from bg to bg1 01:21:045 although they're the same scaling with 0.64 which is kinda strange
Giving the bg1 scaling 0.65 seemed to fix this problem for me. Is this only on my end?

Dailycare

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Dailycare 2016-06-26T00:11:26+00:00

이걸 이렇게...?!

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Dailycare wrote:
이걸 이렇게...?!

겟난캐리 감사요ㅋㅋ

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