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Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV Size)

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-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 5. Januar 2012 at 17:58:07

Artist: Takahashi Hitomi
Title: Aozora no Namida (TV Size)
Source: Blood+
Tags: Weezy kino77 samiljul Mapper 31 opening tears of the blue sky
BPM: 175,08
Filesize: 9020kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4,83 stars, 383 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 218 notes)
  3. kino's Hard (4,77 stars, 197 notes)
  4. Normal (3,45 stars, 99 notes)
  5. Weezy's Easy (1,45 stars, 61 notes)
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV Size)
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd map, blood+ opening 1~

[Weezy's Easy]: by Weezy
[Normal]: by me
[kino's Hard]: by kino77
[Insane]: by me
[31's Taiko]: by Mapper 31

special thanks to kino77 ,Weezy for their guest difficulties,
Mapper 31 for the Taiko diff
and Louis Cyphre for the Taiko BG and other help :3
Last edited by -maJu , edited 110 times in total.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Hey~

[Generall]

Die .osb datei ist nutzlos... lösch sie

[Normal]

Slider tick rate auf 0,5?

00:14:462 (1) - Neuer combo weg machen
00:32:286 (1) - ^
00:32:629 (5) - Add finish
00:34:000 (1) - ^
00:58:338 (2) - Anfänger können selten bis schwer so schnell hintereinander klicken und dannach auch noch weiter machen.. entfern den circle und setz den slider auf den weißen tick rate und mach ihn so lange bis er wieder auf den weißen tick rate trifft. Vergiss dannach nicht das spacing der anderen circles/slider zu fixxen ;)
01:21:989 (1) - Wie wärs mit einem stillen ende?

Passt~


[Insane]

Overall diff +1?

00:15:662 (2) - Der slider passt hier nicht hin..
00:37:428 (1) - Der langsame slider kommt so unerwartet... entweder du setzt hier via SB eine warnung hin oder du entfernst den und machst normale..
00:48:740 (9) - Setz es so dan wirds symmetrisch
SPOILER
01:14:705 (4) - Setz evtl ein circle?
01:22:675 (5) - Hier das selbe wie oben..
01:23:532 (1) - Wie wärs mit einem stillen ende?

Hard aber nice~


Netter song und nette map :)

Star~
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

lennox989 wrote:

Hey~

[Generall]

Die .osb datei ist nutzlos... lösch sie ok../

[Normal]

Slider tick rate auf 0,5? no :/

00:14:462 (1) - Neuer combo weg machen no :/
00:32:286 (1) - ^ no :/, but did at 00:31:256 ;)
00:32:629 (5) - Add finish no :/
00:34:000 (1) - ^ no :/
00:58:338 (2) - Anfänger können selten bis schwer so schnell hintereinander klicken und dannach auch noch weiter machen.. entfern den circle und setz den slider auf den weißen tick rate und mach ihn so lange bis er wieder auf den weißen tick rate trifft. Vergiss dannach nicht das spacing der anderen circles/slider zu fixxen ;)
"normal"
01:21:989 (1) - Wie wärs mit einem stillen ende? ok...

Passt~


[Insane]

Overall diff +1? no :/

00:15:662 (2) - Der slider passt hier nicht hin.. no :/
00:37:428 (1) - Der langsame slider kommt so unerwartet... entweder du setzt hier via SB eine warnung hin oder du entfernst den und machst normale.. no :/
00:48:740 (9) - Setz es so dan wirds symmetrisch fixed
SPOILER
01:14:705 (4) - Setz evtl ein circle? no :/
01:22:675 (5) - Hier das selbe wie oben.. no :/
01:23:532 (1) - Wie wärs mit einem stillen ende? ok..

Hard aber nice~


Netter song und nette map :)

Star~
thanks for fast modding and the star..
I just fixed a few things as you can see ><
Last edited by -maJu , edited 1 time in total.
nante
248 posts
Joined December 2009
nante
[General]
Set BMP to 175,000
Different previev time points in both diffs. Open .osu files in notepad and fix it.
Kiai times must end at the same time in all diffs.

[Normal]
1st timing section isn't on a thick
01:01:765 (T) - add a note
01:05:536 (5) - stack it where (3) was?
01:12:734 (T) - add a note
01:18:219 (1) - remove new combo?

[Insane]
These triple streams are iritating a bit. Mostly cuz of distance...

nice, star
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hello ^o^~

General
I think you'll need to make an easier diff here. Not sure. >_<

Normal
00:25:774 (1) - I'd start this slider at 00:25:431. In case you do it, add another repeat on it
00:58:509 (3) - this slider sounds really off >.< Delete it and add a note in 00:58:680 instead?

Hard
The slider speed in the begining is kinda too slow.. But meh, whatever.
00:35:029 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:536 (8) - new combo

That's all ^-^ Have a star
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
410 posts
Joined November 2009
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[General]

Consider make a Hard. Easy you don't need imo. the normal is fair enough.
Ask for a experienced mapper, who knows 'bout BPM. I have a BPM analyzer here, not 100% acc., but have a huge discrepancy. Your map have 175,04 and the BPM Analyzer says 87,51. Someone should check this.

After you check this, i'll be back for a proper mod.

ATM, Star.
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Consider make a Hard. Easy you don't need imo. the normal is fair enough.
Ask for a experienced mapper, who knows 'bout BPM. I have a BPM analyzer here, not 100% acc., but have a huge discrepancy. Your map have 175,04 and the BPM Analyzer says 87,51. Someone should check this.

After you check this, i'll be back for a proper mod.

ATM, Star.
BPM analyzer often only has just 1/2 BPM... I won't change BPM now..

fixed all other mods :D

Edit: remapping Insane ><
Edit 2: remapping done :>
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Nice breaking my rules D: (no WIP)
Since I like this song I'll let this slip ;)

Insane
00:13:434 (5) Delete this note and move the next slider to this spot
00:14:462 (1) Add a beat here
00:14:633 (2) ^same
00:15:662 (5) A circle works better then the slider
Only other issue I got is with the long combos, try cutting them in half or something?

Normal
00:50:454 (1) End spinner at 00:52:168 (always players some recovery time)
00:58:509 (3) Delete
01:03:136 (1) Delete

Nice map and gooood luck with it
Glad to see someone is re-mapping this :D
Star POWER!
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

Weezy wrote:

Nice breaking my rules D: (no WIP) I thought I saw "WIP, which are almost finished are ok" And I think this is almost finished, there are only 2 diffs missing, but the others are finished... but sorry If I'm wrong ><
Since I like this song I'll let this slip ;) yay xD

Insane
00:13:434 (5) Delete this note and move the next slider to this spot fixed
00:14:462 (1) Add a beat here fixed
00:14:633 (2) ^same fixed
00:15:662 (5) A circle works better then the slider I dunno but for me it works too ><
Only other issue I got is with the long combos, try cutting them in half or something? yea i forgot to change that after I was remapping the diff xD

Normal
00:50:454 (1) End spinner at 00:52:168 (always players some recovery time) 00:52:510 is ok too? xD
00:58:509 (3) Delete fixed
01:03:136 (1) Delete I'll leave this..

Nice map and gooood luck with it
Glad to see someone is re-mapping this :D lol there is only a old full ver ranked . and a grav'd TV size xD
Star POWER!
Thanks for modding and the star :>
Last edited by -maJu , edited 2 times in total.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Nice map~
Can I add a "Hard" diff?
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

kino77 wrote:

Nice map~
Can I add a "Hard" diff?
of course you can,
really thanks :)
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
i feel like making an easy for this :/
may i?

and why not add a video?
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

Weezy wrote:

i feel like making an easy for this :/
may i?

and why not add a video?
thanks, it would be great :D

I could add a video right ><,
can someone please help me to find a good one? D: i found one myself..
I will upload it when the other diffs are finished ><

Edit: why it shows at description just "thanks to", bug? T_T
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Normal
00 27 145 wrong distance snap

Insane is no problem

I'll come here again when this map has other guest diffs, too ><

Star
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
All finished :D
Remember to add my name to the tags for all the diffs

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [Weezy's Easy].osu
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
[General]

If you don't have special reason, remove the osb file.

[Normal]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly.

00:20:289 (1) - finish?

00:27:145 (4) - spacing

00:48:739 ~ 00:50:111 - break? Why don't you mapped that part?

00:56:966 - clap

[Insane]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly.

00:26:545 (6) - spacing


star.
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

[Shalon] wrote:

[General]

If you don't have special reason, remove the osb file.

[Normal]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly. fixed

00:20:289 (1) - finish? fixed

00:27:145 (4) - spacing fixed

00:48:739 ~ 00:50:111 - break? Why don't you mapped that part? lazy? xDDDD, but i think this is ok ><

00:56:966 - clap fixed

[Insane]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly. fixed

00:26:545 (6) - spacing fixed


star.
thanks for modding [Shalon] :D

Weezy wrote:

All finished :D
Remember to add my name to the tags for all the diffs
Thanks, I fixed some smal stuff at your diff, but the diff is good :3
I hope it's ok for you.. ><

I upload later D:
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Ohoh~~Here it comes~
BTW,I feel timing a little off but not for sure,better to call someone good at it to check~
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

kino77 wrote:

Ohoh~~Here it comes~
BTW,I feel timing a little off but not for sure,better to call someone good at it to check~
[attachment=0:1aaca]Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu[/attachment:1aaca]
wow, awesome diff :D
I am really glad to have such a diff in my mapset,
really nice job ^^
thank you very much~~

Yes, the timing could be off since i am NOOB at timing :lol:
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
Irc modding :)
And star,by the way ;)
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
on my diff:

00:44:969 (1) Why is it broken up into 2 spinners? This change wouldn't fit in an easy so keep it as one spinner :/

and please leave any mods to my diff to me, I'll decide whether to put them in our not.

Also add kino77 to all the tags

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [Weezy's Easy].osu
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

Weezy wrote:

on my diff:

00:44:969 (1) Why is it broken up into 2 spinners? This change wouldn't fit in an easy so keep it as one spinner :/

and please leave any mods to my diff to me, I'll decide whether to put them in our not.

Also add kino77 to all the tags
I forgot that that is too hard.. it just fitted the music.. my fault
sorry ><
I hope you aren't too angry D:
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Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Overall: Kiai time should be at 00:53:196
Kiai time should end at 01:15:134

Weezy's Easy[/size]
HP Drain -1
00:13:434 (2) - One grid down to match the distance with the next slider and note
00:24:202 (3) - This might be too near from the previous note
00:53:196 (1) - Add finish
I think the spacing is a bit far for an Easy

Normal
HP Drain +2
00:34:000 (1) - Add finish

kino's Hard
00:32:629 (1) - The note is too near the previous note
00:52:105 (1) - ^
01:15:476 (2) - ^
01:16:848 (2) - ^

Insane
HP Drain +2 or 3
00:37:428 (1) - Remove this and add a spinner
00:53:196 (1) - Add a finish here
___________________________________
Havva star ;)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

DragonSparta wrote:

kino's Hard
00:32:629 (1) - The note is too near the previous note Fixed~
00:52:105 (1) - ^ I made that on purpose
01:15:476 (2) - ^ ^
01:16:848 (2) - ^ ^


EDIT:Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

DragonSparta wrote:

Overall: Kiai time should be at 00:53:196 no fixed
Kiai time should end at 01:15:134 no, sorry ><, I made it end like in kino's diff :)

Normal
HP Drain +2 really no, it would be higher than in "Hard" and that's not very awesome ><
00:34:000 (1) - Add finish fixed

Insane
HP Drain +2 or 3 no
00:37:428 (1) - Remove this and add a spinner no
00:53:196 (1) - Add a finish here fixed
___________________________________
Havva star ;)


thanks for modding :>

kino77 wrote:

EDIT:[attachment=0:c65cf]Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu[/attachment:c65cf]
updated your diff :)

Edit: changed preview point at your diff too i hope it's ok for you >< If not i will change back of course... Just it sounds better now D:
I'm sorry if I'm wrong :/
Last edited by -maJu , edited 2 times in total.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Countdown on kino's difficulty is disabled.I suggest you to disable it on all other diffs,cause it doesn't fit well with song.

[Weezy]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 - ^
00:34:000 (1) - ^
00:44:284 - Finish doesn't fit well,I'd remove.
00:53:196 (1) - Finish.
00:58:680 (1) - ^
01:01:423 (1) - ^
01:04:165 - ^
01:23:018 - Finish doesn't fit here.

[Normal]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 (2) - ^
00:34:000 (1) - ^
00:44:969 - Breaks seems unnecessary,anyway,add a note with finish here?
00:50:454 (1) - Remove finish and place it to 00:53:196 (1).
00:58:680 (3) - Finish.
01:01:423 - ^
01:02:622 - ^
01:04:165 (3) - ^
01:09:649 (2) - ^
01:15:134 - ^

[kino]
00:22:174 (5) - Please remove this note,otherwise it breaks whole rhytm.
00:29:716 (6,7,8,9) - I'd point out all these objects in one combo.
00:44:969 (1) - Add finish here?
01:01:765 - Add a note here?
01:12:734 - ^ Same,plays/sounds better.
01:15:134 (1) - Finish.
01:15:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this stuff is technically fine,cause spacing changes after each note,that means you need to put new combo for every single note,but that'd be awkward,so maybe it can be marked as exception.

[Insane]
00:14:633 - I'd add a note.
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 (1) - ^
00:34:000 (5) - ^
00:53:196 - ^
00:58:680 (6) - ^
01:01:423 (4) - ^
01:02:622 (7) - ^
01:04:165 (7) - ^
01:09:649 (3) - ^
01:12:391 (3) - ^
01:13:591 - ^
01:15:134 (4) - ^
01:20:618 (5) - ^
01:23:360 - ^

Otherwise fine to me.
Star~

Before modding last difficulty I noticed new updates,so consider some of my suggestions may repeat and can be already in effect.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
-BG exceeds max size (1024*768)
Just resize it (make sure that it's in 3:4

[Insane]
00:16:004 (4) - down 1 grid
00:18:575 (4) - up 1 grid
00:23:546 (2) - make the patterns smooth, place this at x:160 y:96
01:02:622 (7) - 1 beat slider?
01:17:190 (4) - make this symmetrical
01:18:390 (3,4,5) - (3,4) left 1 grid, (5) down 1 grid

[kino's hard]
00:18:747 (5) - down 1 grid
00:28:687 (2) - down 1 grid?
00:32:972 (2,4) - (2) right+up 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid
00:50:968 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - right 1 grid
01:04:508 (2,3,4) - up 1 grid

Spacing in other diffs seems fine.star~
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

IceBeam wrote:

Countdown on kino's difficulty is disabled.I suggest you to disable it on all other diffs,cause it doesn't fit well with song.
fixed at my diffs, Weezy please do that later too ;)

[Normal]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish. fixed
00:32:629 (2) - ^ fixed
00:34:000 (1) - ^ fixed
00:44:969 - Breaks seems unnecessary,anyway,add a note with finish here? I want to leave the break xDD
00:50:454 (1) - Remove finish and place it to 00:53:196 (1). fixed
00:58:680 (3) - Finish. fixed
01:01:423 - ^ fixed
01:02:622 - ^ fixed
01:04:165 (3) - ^ fixed
01:09:649 (2) - ^ fixed
01:15:134 - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:14:633 - I'd add a note. fixed
00:23:031 (1) - Finish. fixed
00:32:629 (1) - ^ fixed
00:34:000 (5) - ^ fixed
00:53:196 - ^ fixed
00:58:680 (6) - ^ fixed
01:01:423 (4) - ^ fixed
01:02:622 (7) - ^ fixed
01:04:165 (7) - ^ fixed
01:09:649 (3) - ^ fixed
01:12:391 (3) - ^ fixed
01:13:591 - ^ fixed
01:15:134 (4) - ^ fixed
01:20:618 (5) - ^ fixed
01:23:360 - ^ fixed

haha hitsounds~~ xDDD

Otherwise fine to me.
Star~ :)

Before modding last difficulty I noticed new updates,so consider some of my suggestions may repeat and can be already in effect.
Just 1 thing xD
Beam~~

thanks for modding :D
Last edited by -maJu , edited 1 time in total.
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
-maJu

wmfchris wrote:

-BG exceeds max size (1024*768)
Just resize it (make sure that it's in 3:4)
fixed. Oh my fault, I put "1204 x 768" without noticing it xDD

[Insane]
00:16:004 (4) - down 1 grid fixed
00:18:575 (4) - up 1 grid fixed
00:23:546 (2) - make the patterns smooth, place this at x:160 y:96 fixed
01:02:622 (7) - 1 beat slider? you mean the whole pattern? >< I will not fix since i don't understand
01:17:190 (4) - make this symmetrical fixed
01:18:390 (3,4,5) - (3,4) left 1 grid, (5) down 1 grid fixed, but a bit different ;)

Spacing in other diffs seems fine.star~
WTF power modding today xDDD
I'm kinda exhausted now ><

thanks wmf anyways :)
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