oh I considered mapping this song but have no time, so let mod it
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[ Scar ]
00:14:535 (14535|3,14892|3,15249|3,15607|3) - move these to col 5 for better balance
00:21:499 (21499|0,21767|6) - use doubles for sudden stopping sound?
00:38:285 (38285|0) - the main is actually 1/2 here, spell them out?
00:43:999 (43999|0) - ^
00:49:535 (49535|3) - this sound should be 1/4 earlier
00:54:714 (54714|2,54892|0) - due to the main going to 1/8 here, you may want to put 1/4 notes here to emphasize that
00:58:285 (58285|3,58404|2,58523|1) - mirror for pitch
01:06:857 - cymbal present, add note?
01:18:106 - ^
01:22:928 - the kick is 1/2 from this point on. Change to 1/2s and remove doubles?
01:25:071 - kicks is 1/4 in this measure but spelling all those is too hard for N. Simply use an LN?
01:31:499 (91499|0,91678|1) - swap for pitch
01:33:642 (93642|1,93820|1,93999|3,94178|3,94356|5,94535|5) - main don't suggest jacks here, what about 1,0,3,2,5,4?
01:36:142 (96142|3) - move to 5 for balance
01:40:249 (100249|0,100428|1,100606|2) - 1,3,5 for balance?
01:59:534 (119534|3,119713|4,119713|2,119891|3) - this sounded completely different to 01:58:820 (118820|3,118998|2,118998|4,119177|3,119356|1,119356|5) - and probably should not use same pattern. What about 4,3,2?
02:02:570 (122570|4) - move to 5 to avoid jacking with 02:03:106 (123106|4) -
02:07:391 (127391|1) - move to 2 to avoid same col as 02:07:927 (127927|1) -
02:05:427 (125427|0) - as 00:38:285 (38285|0) -
02:10:963 (130963|3) - as 00:49:535 (49535|3) -
02:16:141 - as 00:54:714
02:19:713 (139713|2,139832|1,139951|0) - mirror for pitch
[ Injury ]
00:12:392 (12392|3,12571|3,12749|3) - jacks is unwarranted. 4,3,2?
00:39:714 (39714|2) - move to 3 as different pitch
00:40:071 (40071|2,40160|4,40249|6,40339|3,40428|0,40517|2,40607|4,40696|6) - use more columns would be better. What about 0,2,5,3,1,2,4,6?
00:40:785 - add note for kick as in 00:41:142 (41142|0) -
00:42:571 (42571|2) - as 00:39:714 (39714|2)
00:45:785 - as 00:40:071
00:46:499 - as 00:40:785
00:49:446 (49446|0,49446|6,49535|4,49535|2) - the cymbal is 1/4 earlier
01:18:285 (78285|3) - the SE is 1/2 later
01:37:928 - 01:38:999 - using doubles for 1/2 here results in de-emphasizing strong sound such as 01:36:856 - , which is not good. Use singles?
01:40:785 - 01:42:213 - ^ keep doubles for where cymbals are present
01:43:553 (103553|6,103642|4,103731|2) - shift 1 col left as lower pitch
02:02:927 - same as the entire section of 00:39:714, not repeating, revise
02:18:998 (138998|2,139088|0) - shift 1 col right for higher pitch
[ Pain ]
00:05:249 (5249|0) - bell appears absent here. Remove?
00:06:321 (6321|0) - ^
00:15:249 (15249|3,15339|2,15607|4,15696|2) - swap to be consistent with previous
00:18:732 (18732|2,19089|1) - 00:19:446 (19446|5) - and more - avoid ghost notes. remove?
00:41:678 (41678|5,41767|3,41857|5,42035|1,42214|5,42303|3,42392|5,42571|4,42749|1) - shift 1 col right for more variety
00:44:535 (44535|5,44624|3,44714|5,44892|2,45071|5,45160|3,45249|5) - ^
00:49:535 (49535|2) - remove? does not appear to go anywhere
00:58:404 (58404|5,58404|2,58523|1,58523|4) - swap for pitch
00:58:642 - 01:07:214 - mirror the entire section for more variety compare to 00:24:357 -
01:10:249 (70249|1,70338|2,70428|3,70517|4) - shift 1 col left would be prettier and more pitch relevant
01:18:821 (78821|1,78910|2,78999|3,79088|4) - ^
01:26:142 (86142|5,86187|6,86231|0,86276|1,86321|2,86365|3,86410|4,86454|5,86499|1,86499|0,86499|6) - mirror for pitch
01:36:767 (96767|2) - move to 3 to avoid shield which is not called for
01:38:285 (98285|3,98285|5,98463|6,98463|4) - move 1 col left to avoid 1/2 jacks
01:41:678 (101678|6,101856|2) - these sounds seems to have too many notes (sound not that strong). remove one note each?
02:10:963 (130963|5) - remove? no sound?
02:17:302 - add note for main
[ Torture ]
00:17:214 (17214|6,17214|0,17392|0,17392|6) - revise this pattern to avoid unwarranted jacks. what about 00:17:392 (17392|6,17392|0,17482|5,17482|1,17571|4,17571|2) - to (24)(06)(15) and repeat?
00:18:732 (18732|3) - as in Pain, avoid ghost notes
00:24:357 - 00:32:928 - seriously consider fitting the main instrument in here instead of still using doubles like previously
00:49:535 (49535|2) - as in Pain, remove?
00:58:404 (58404|4,58404|5,58404|6,58523|1,58523|5,58523|3) - mirror for pitch?
00:58:999 - missing note? (compared to 00:59:357 - and 00:59:714 - )
01:00:071 - ^
01:01:142 - ^ (Check all missing notes (2,2,3 chords) and ensure consistency, lots of missing notes in this section)
01:10:249 (70249|1,70338|2,70428|3,70517|4) - as Pain, revise
01:30:606 - ^
01:45:784 - arrrggggghhh minijacks.........
anyway the instrument which jack corresponds to has a pitch which actually does not match the position of jacks. Jacks should really be used only when the sound is the same. You may want to revise and follow the instrument more tightly.
02:03:284 - where are the main instrument????
..... 02:05:784 - ...and you suddenly revive it here......
02:10:784 (130784|0,130844|1,130903|0,130963|1,131022|0,131082|1) - 1/6 ringtrills, ouch........
swap cols for 02:10:844 (130844|1,130963|1,131082|1,131141|2) - ?
02:11:141 (131141|6,131201|5,131260|6,131320|5,131379|6,131439|5,131498|6) - again. move 02:11:201 (131201|5,131320|5,131439|5) - to 4?
02:08:730 (128730|2) - as in Pain, revise
02:11:498 - this measure seem disproportionately easy from the section around it. What about mapping the main instrument as double here? You probably want to do doubles in 02:08:641 - too
p.s. I don't think it worth ★11~12 as the patterns are relatively easy to read and hit. around ★8~10 I guess?
Good luck~
(you may want to mod one of my maps if you want
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