Heyho M4M
[General]
I think the first offset should be around 254 instead of 231. Second one seems good.
Kiai is unsnapped.
[Kantan]
SV changes in a Kantan are rather discouraged so please keep consistent SV throughout the map. Also due to 230 BPM a Base SV of 1.2 would be good.
00:15:097 (17,18) - k d for matching the pitch
00:16:159 (1) - this might be a bit too short in a Kantan, you could replace it with a k
00:20:854 (4,5,6,7,8) - how about a k d k d k d pattern here? It would match the pitch and remove this ghost note 00:22:421 (6) -
00:28:168 (13) - finisher for a better impact
00:29:213 (14,15,16,17,18) - how about d d k d k d?
00:33:392 (19) - remove, there is no real beat and add a k on 00:34:176 - if you do
00:37:572 (24,25,26,27,28) - d d k d k d or d d k d k k?
00:44:886 (33) - finisher as above
00:45:930 (34,35,36,37,38) - d d k d k d?
00:50:893 - add k
01:04:738 (57,58,59,60,61) - this is a bit weird. How about d d k k k d? And remove 01:08:394 (62) - for a nice break
02:14:742 (145,146) - k d
02:19:966 (151) - k
02:24:145 (157) - d
02:29:370 (164) - k
02:33:027 - add d
[Futsuu]
Could be a little harder in general, currently it's just like Kantan with a harder first kiai.
00:18:765 - add d
00:38:094 (27,28) - d k
00:50:110 (42) - like in Kantan, remove and add k here 00:50:893 -
00:52:199 (44,45,46) - In Kantan you put k k d but here it's d d k. I think k k d fits the descending motion more.
01:50:711 (10,11) - ctrl+G, the finisher fits better to begin the new part imo
[Oni]
There's an extra timing point you don't need on 00:18:760 -
00:18:765 - add d
00:31:564 (51,52,53) - d k d fits nicely here
00:35:743 (70,72) - remove for more contrast with the parts before and after
01:46:531 (189,190,191,192) - k k d k d
02:08:473 - There should be a beat here
02:12:652 (15,16,17,18,19) - k k d d k also fits nicely here
02:15:787 (29) - remove finisher there's no need imo
02:25:190 - There should also be a beat here
02:40:863 - Starting here you took out a lot of tension and I don't see why. The music didn't really change, so just add some beats there.
02:48:177 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - You missed a few finishers here
[Determined]
It's common to name the higher diffs Oni so how about Determined Oni for this diffname?
Nice diff
00:53:897 (186,187,188) - ddddk
00:59:252 (229,230,231) - ^
01:02:256 (251,252,253) - ^
That's all. Good luck with ranking!
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