[General]Great song choice! But challenging to map imo.
I'm not sure about the BPM. I think you accidentely doubled it. Using half-BPM and 1/4 note placements for streams in the harder diffs seems more reasonable than 230+(!!!) BPM and 1/2 note placements. The metronome does sound off with this high BPM but fits perfectly with half-BPM. Maybe ask for a timing check (Doomsday, Selee, ...) as I am not 100% sure (but 98%).
[Easy]01:37:929 (3,1,2,2) - The claps on slider-endings would indicate they end on the later white ticks (+1/2) but they end on the lyrics which sounds and plays "wrong". Keep the claps and end them 1/2 tick later on the white ticks or get rid of the claps
02:32:892 (1) - remove clap from turning point...add clap on ending (keep whistles)
02:34:963 (2) - ^
02:34:186 (1) - remove clap
02:36:258 (1) - remove clap
02:36:906 (2) - sounds and plays off (especially for an easy). start 1/2 tick earlier, end 1/2 tick later (small white tick to small white tick), add finish to slider ending
02:40:134 - set hitsounds to normal for this timing point as the soft finish of 02:38:086 (1) doesn't fit at all here. Hitsounds are set to "soft" anyway with the inherited point at 02:51:178
03:41:581 (1,2) - don't know if it is a good idea to follow the guitar here as the beat is still more dominant and this might be too subtle for beginners.
[Normal]Hitsounds: Don't use claps randomly on 1/2 (red-) ticks. The rhythm pattern of the song is complex enough and this throws beginners/normal players completely off the rhythm!
00:23:103 (X) - plays and sounds weird without a note here. Maybe add a circle and turn the following 4 notes into a 2x repeat slider
00:27:247 (X) - ^
00:31:519 (1) - strange (wrong?) timing. Focus is on the guitar here but as it starts just in the middle of the melody it plays very off. Maybe shorten the spinner and use the same pattern you used here: 00:34:756 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:47:186 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This part is not mapped as good as the rest of this map imo. It plays weird with inconsistent breaks and no real rhythm patterns.
00:58:062 (1) - weird timing. Move back 1/1 tick (to previous white tick) and add 1x repeat
01:33:656 (3,4) - sounds and plays completely off. Stay focused on the rhythm here. Move both back 1/2 tick and extend the slider ending to the same red tick it was before. Or use something like 01:41:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:35:210 (2) - again off-timed. move back 1/2 tick and extend slider lenght to end it on the big white tick. remove clap from turning point
01:48:546 (3) - add 1x repeat
02:34:186 (1) - add 1x repeat
02:37:164 (3) - use slider from red tick to red tick to match the lyrics
03:32:906 (X,X) - add notes on white and red tick or this will sound weird because you start just in the middle of this guitar section and follow it. Maybe adjust difficulty by using (repeating) sliders.
03:37:049 (X,X) - ^
03:41:192 (X,X) - ^
[Hard]Hmm this doesn't really follow the beat and seems very random overall. Maybe focus more on the beat and don't jump between beat/melody/vocals all the time and even sometimes inside one combo. Some unfitting insane patterns are placed here and there (looking at you, 5-note-180°turn-stream!). Overall this would be VERY similar to [Aquatic] if you remap the 60% random noteplacements and follow the beat. Maybe get rid of this diff, find someone who will do a taiko and just keep Aqua's diff as hard/insane
[Aquatic]Playable and mostly on beat but you should definetely fix all those spacing and allignment errors (especially for streams/triplets). I suggest using compressed streams for EVERY triplet/stream that is not stacked. And disable gid-snapping when placing those...
00:01:731 (4) - Huh? Maybe delete this note. It kills the slower pace of the intro imo.
00:02:697 (2) - ^
00:13:158 (3,4,5) - This seems completely random. Why not follow the beat pattern you start with (3)? (read: stay on white ticks)
00:15:572 (1,2,3) - wrong timing. Triplet should start 1/2 earlier on red tick
00:24:139 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - spacing (use compressed stream patterns)
00:27:506 (3,4,5) - ^
00:34:756 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:900 (4,5,6) - ^
00:40:453 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:820 (4,5,6) - ^
00:45:374 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:49:258 (1,2,3) - ^
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You see where this is going. Almost all patterns are playable and perfectly fit the beat/song but overall this diff could use some work. Polish it up and this might be one of the few rock/alternative song-maps that are challenging and fun to play!
~star
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