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nameless - Toumei Elegy [Taiko]

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mintong89
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, June 22, 2018 at 9:28:10 PM

Artist: nameless
Title: Toumei Elegy
Tags: n-buna ouka alice megpoid gumi utau vocaloid lop -S_a_I_k_A-
BPM: 220
Filesize: 6144kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.41 stars, 584 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.95 stars, 373 notes)
  3. lop's Extra (6.13 stars, 1565 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.13 stars, 907 notes)
  5. Oni (4.41 stars, 1314 notes)
  6. Ura Oni (5.23 stars, 1570 notes)
Download: nameless - Toumei Elegy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All source from Awaken.
Overall spread could be slightly higher :( I have nerfed my easier diff, and it look like shit!
其实本家那边的状态也不是一直在诈称
lop's Extra is by lop
Jonah
Hope to get rank!!

Seriously
alunv
Hello! :)
General
Why not add メグッポイド グミ to tags (megpoid gumi written in katakana)
Raise volume at kiais? (70%)
Kantan and Futsuu seem very hard... Perhaps consider renaming them Futsuu and Ura Futsuu, respectively. (Diff naming conventions)
Kantan
00:02:758 (4) - you can delete this note, because the 2/1 stream seems too long for a 220 bpm kantan, also I think that will emphasize next notes.
00:14:962 (25) - this note is on a 1/4 tick (probably should be on the next 1/1)
00:28:122 (50,53,56) - this section is much more calm than before; I think that many 1/1's dont fit. It may not be true, it's up to you.

01:00:031 (103,104,105,106,107) - it may be better to change this to k ddk:
01:00:031 (103) - here the "ba" has higher pitch than the syllable before so k
01:00:303 (104) - this syllable sounds less important than others so delete
01:01:394 (107) - it may be better to put the finisher when she says "ko" so it will be easier to play
and more obvious for the player, because notes before are mapped to vocals rather than guitar.
01:07:667 (121,122,123) - maybe change to d d k or because the last syllable sounds somehow different
01:10:394 (129) - consider deleting to give some rest after the 1/1 stream.

01:11:758 (131,133,135,136,138) - same as before, these 1/1's seem too hard for this section (even harder than before)
01:18:031 (143,144,145) - change to d k d so it better suits the music?
01:21:303 (151) - ^
01:37:667 (177) - change to k?

01:54:577 (212,213,214,215,216) - ^?
02:02:213 (230,231,232) - I think d d d here is ok
02:04:940 (238) - ^ (but before this you can delete 02:04:122 (236) to emphasize "mo")

02:05:485 (239,240,241) - maybe change to: K k d

03:06:577 (342,343,344,345,346) - ^, but the first note may be d
03:14:213 (360,361,362) - k k k / d k k?
Futsuu
00:02:758 (5,15) - move them a 1/2 before, I think this will make these notes more natural to play. (not the k in the middle because it is mapped to vocals. not drums)
00:17:758 (52,54) - delete to make a rest? (if you delete this, delete 00:26:485 (87,89) too)

01:21:576 (272) - delete this too for a rest, because 1/1 triplets from before are rather straining

02:01:122 (403) - k is better for vocals

02:28:122 (493,494,495,496) - I think d d d d is better: you were mapping to drums
before in this section, so sudden switch to vocals may seem odd (at least for a futsuu).
Or you can change 02:28:531 (495,496) to k k to emphasize the vocals.
02:38:212 (518,519,520,521) - k d k d or k d k k may go better with vocals.
Muzukashii
00:23:212 (109,110,111,112,113) - k d d k d may be better here (I missed at this part)

00:35:622 (155) - it will be more comfortable if you delete this
00:44:349 (185) - ^

01:20:622 (387) - delete because this 1/2 stream seems blind (and it's still a muzukashii)
01:37:122 (442,443,444,445,446) - here K d d d k may be better
01:47:894 (500) - delete to emphasize the finisher?
02:05:349 (612) - delete to make a little rest before the next section?

02:05:894 (615) - delete so that the player will have easier time with starting this part

02:55:531 (853) - delete to emphasize "bu"

03:08:622 (56) - delete too

03:33:030 (207,208,209,210,211) - ^
Oni
00:18:440 (105) - delete
00:24:167 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - there may be kkk d kdd to go better with music

02:04:803 (745,746) - ctrl-g to make "ne" more contrasting?

02:05:485 (749) - finisher at the beginning of a new section
02:05:622 (750,751) - you can delete these (same reason as in muzukashii)

03:38:485 (306) - a drumroll may be better here, place it here if you want
Ura Oni
00:09:985 (36) - d makes this note more contrasting to kkd, please change to d

00:39:576 (237,238,239) - maybe k k d?

00:53:622 (316) - d ^
01:09:303 (466,467,468) - ddd may be more intuitive

01:47:349 (665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673,674,675) - I had big difficulty playing this stream.
ddkdkkddkkd feels much better.
01:56:894 (758) - change this to d too.

02:52:122 (1138,1139,1140,1141,1142) - maybe k k d d k will be better.

03:00:167 (5) - ^ d too
03:05:212 (56) - d is good here

03:38:485 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - here d d d d's are ok, doesn't have to be a slider.
This song was one of my favorites in osu!standard!
I hope that this mod isn't too picky... You can take my guest diff:
Kantan (SR: 1.37*)
osu file format v14

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Title:Toumei Elegy
TitleUnicode:透明エレジー
Artist:nameless
ArtistUnicode:nameless
Creator:mintong89
Version:alunv's Kantan
Source:
Tags:n-buna ouka alice megpoid gumi utau vocaloid
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Good luck on making it ranked! :D
Also, if you have some time, I'll be very grateful if you suggest something to my mapset: click
Topic Starter
mintong89

alunv wrote:

Hello! :)
General
Why not add メグッポイド グミ to tags (megpoid gumi written in katakana) Umm there is no gumi in the song?
Raise volume at kiais? (70%) oops I'm forget to do that, thanks!
Kantan and Futsuu seem very hard... Perhaps consider renaming them Futsuu and Ura Futsuu, respectively. (Diff naming conventions)
Kantan
00:02:758 (4) - you can delete this note, because the 2/1 stream seems too long for a 220 bpm kantan, also I think that will emphasize next notes. I put this for balancing the spread, everything should be harder than usual
00:14:962 (25) - this note is on a 1/4 tick (probably should be on the next 1/1) oops
00:28:122 (50,53,56) - this section is much more calm than before; I think that many 1/1's dont fit. It may not be true, it's up to you.

01:00:031 (103,104,105,106,107) - it may be better to change this to k ddk: I think it is better too leave mono-colour, because new player are not used to switch quickly for don and kat, just like in taiko no tatsujin
01:00:031 (103) - here the "ba" has higher pitch than the syllable before so k
01:00:303 (104) - this syllable sounds less important than others so delete
01:01:394 (107) - it may be better to put the finisher when she says "ko" so it will be easier to play
and more obvious for the player, because notes before are mapped to vocals rather than guitar. umm? but there is break before, I think it's fine
01:07:667 (121,122,123) - maybe change to d d k or because the last syllable sounds somehow different yup
01:10:394 (129) - consider deleting to give some rest after the 1/1 stream.

01:11:758 (131,133,135,136,138) - same as before, these 1/1's seem too hard for this section (even harder than before)
01:18:031 (143,144,145) - change to d k d so it better suits the music?
01:21:303 (151) - ^
01:37:667 (177) - change to k? sure

01:54:577 (212,213,214,215,216) - ^?
02:02:213 (230,231,232) - I think d d d here is ok
02:04:940 (238) - ^ (but before this you can delete 02:04:122 (236) to emphasize "mo")

02:05:485 (239,240,241) - maybe change to: K k d

03:06:577 (342,343,344,345,346) - ^, but the first note may be d
03:14:213 (360,361,362) - k k k / d k k? yes
Futsuu
00:02:758 (5,15) - move them a 1/2 before, I think this will make these notes more natural to play. (not the k in the middle because it is mapped to vocals. not drums) yes
00:17:758 (52,54) - delete to make a rest? (if you delete this, delete 00:26:485 (87,89) too) uhh it's quite easy for futsuu tho

01:21:576 (272) - delete this too for a rest, because 1/1 triplets from before are rather straining yes

02:01:122 (403) - k is better for vocals i would like to put d to emphasize new beat

02:28:122 (493,494,495,496) - I think d d d d is better: you were mapping to drums yes
before in this section, so sudden switch to vocals may seem odd (at least for a futsuu).
Or you can change 02:28:531 (495,496) to k k to emphasize the vocals.
02:38:212 (518,519,520,521) - k d k d or k d k k may go better with vocals. same, i would like to emphasize new beat
Muzukashii
00:23:212 (109,110,111,112,113) - k d d k d may be better here (I missed at this part) there is high pitch at 5th note

00:35:622 (155) - it will be more comfortable if you delete this umm i don't see why?
00:44:349 (185) - ^

01:20:622 (387) - delete because this 1/2 stream seems blind (and it's still a muzukashii)
01:37:122 (442,443,444,445,446) - here K d d d k may be better I use other pattern
01:47:894 (500) - delete to emphasize the finisher? I would like to keep it to make consistent with oni and inner
02:05:349 (612) - delete to make a little rest before the next section?

02:05:894 (615) - delete so that the player will have easier time with starting this part ok

02:55:531 (853) - delete to emphasize "bu" i think finisher is enough

03:08:622 (56) - delete too

03:33:030 (207,208,209,210,211) - ^
Oni
00:18:440 (105) - delete umm why?
00:24:167 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - there may be kkk d kdd to go better with music yes but little change

02:04:803 (745,746) - ctrl-g to make "ne" more contrasting? i think k d is better so emphasize song is stopping the drum rhythm

02:05:485 (749) - finisher at the beginning of a new section yess
02:05:622 (750,751) - you can delete these (same reason as in muzukashii) hmm i would like to keep it, it's not that hard

03:38:485 (306) - a drumroll may be better here, place it here if you want ehhh i would like to keep it
Ura Oni
00:09:985 (36) - d makes this note more contrasting to kkd, please change to d yes

00:39:576 (237,238,239) - maybe k k d? stick it because of drum kick

00:53:622 (316) - d ^ yes
01:09:303 (466,467,468) - ddd may be more intuitive ok

01:47:349 (665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,673,674,675) - I had big difficulty playing this stream. maybe because i'm kkdd player this is very easy for me lol
ddkdkkddkkd feels much better.
01:56:894 (758) - change this to d too. yes

02:52:122 (1138,1139,1140,1141,1142) - maybe k k d d k will be better. ok

03:00:167 (5) - ^ d too same
03:05:212 (56) - d is good here hmm? i think k is better for drum snare

03:38:485 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - here d d d d's are ok, doesn't have to be a slider.
This song was one of my favorites in osu!standard!
I hope that this mod isn't too picky... You can take my guest diff:
Thank you very much for your mod :)
As for your diff, I would like to looking forward more mods first, I might add your diff if the spread is getting discussed.
I will mod your map later, thanks again!
[MTF] Wolfette
Oni:

00:11:076 (44,45,46) - Make this a triple. I feel it fits better
00:35:348 (195) - Make this a Katsu
01:19:940 (466,467,468) - Make these katsu as well
01:20:485 (471,472,473) - Make this a dkk pattern
01:40:940 (558) - Sound here but no note placed here
01:57:712 (686,687,688) - I think a kdd pattern fits better
vrnl
hello!

lop's extra:

why the name is extra?? Inner Oni or something similar is probably better
please look over the whole map for inconsistent finishers. there are places where there is no cymbal hit but there is finish, and places where there is a cymbal hit but no finish.

00:08:622 (35,36,37,38) - make this triple ddk please ;_;

01:22:940 - starting here, delete all these red tick notes, 01:23:349 (563,568,573) - it is confusing when there is no sound

02:20:758 - 02:22:940 - i think this part should be mapped more aggressively. its very passive with small 1/4 triple and 1/2 notes. i think it should be just as heavy as 02:13:803 - 02:18:985 - this section for example

02:40:258 - k here?

ura oni:

01:15:303 (510) - why finish ?

02:40:053 (1122) - maybe delete this, i think 5plet is too much for this calm section

03:15:031 (158) - change d, high vocal stops on 03:14:894 (156) - so it sounds weird with all k

oni:

00:22:531 - 2 notes stacked on top of each other. please fix this.
03:32:349 - here too.

00:45:917 (235) - move to 00:45:781 - ?

01:15:303 (446) - i think remove finish, no cymbal hit here

01:19:667 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473) - make some of these k, i think it needs variety

01:40:462 (553) - move to 01:40:326 - ?

01:47:690 - i thinkk you can add d here. the build up is important so i think 5 note stream is ok for oni.

i think muzu futsuu kantan look nice!! i cant give any help to them. good luck rank :3
Bowashe
lop's Extra
00:01:940 - imo this triples could be mapped better - you follow the voice here, yet you skip these slight changes in pitch, and because of kdddk on white ticks it sounds a bit odd. try changing 00:02:622 (8) - to k
00:13:122 - kkddkdkdk? the pitch doesnt go down like on this one 00:11:485 - and yet, these are mapped the same | 00:21:849 - same
00:53:758 (319) - d to put more emphasize on the voice entering on the next triple
01:05:144 - delete to make it more consistent with 01:03:849 - ?
01:23:349 - no sound here? ik that you wanted to make it consistent with 01:22:258 - but its still nothing here and it sounds a bit weird if you wanted to emphasize voice, it should be 1/2 later | 01:25:531 - 01:27:712 - same
01:42:576 - here you emphasized that slight voice pitch change at the end with k, but here 01:43:667 - where it has jumped a lot more, you put d | 01:42:440 - change to k d and 01:43:667 - k
02:04:258 - k d? to emphasize that drop in the pitch - and to make it more consistent w/o this finisher at the end with 02:04:940 -
02:09:099 - add a note here? it sounds really similiar to 02:08:758 -

Ura Oni
00:25:258 - maybe go with kkd kdd kdddk and 00:26:758 - ddddk? it feels like the pitch here gets lower and lower here 00:25:258 -
00:45:985 - this triple feels weird because it sounds like it should be synced with drum beats - try something like that 00:45:849 - ddk k k d
01:52:053 - delete a note here and add notes on 01:52:190 - and 01:52:326 - ? you had such a strong entrance into this part (01:47:349 - ) and then you go mainly with triple and some quinplets. (although its consistent with being only triplets and quinplets, so idk...)
02:33:031 - kd dkdk? sound better imo

Oni
00:41:758 - 00:40:940 - delete and add a notes here 00:43:122 - 00:40:803 - ? its more consistent with voice then like 00:39:031 - here you had it for the whole pattern and here 00:41:212 - only on the 2 first notes
03:32:349 - double note here - i see Astolfo already mentioned that ;w;

Muzukashii
00:14:076 - k? to give more emphasize on the next note
00:20:622 - k? same reason as before
00:41:758 - 00:42:031 - delete and add a note here 00:41:894 - ? same reason as oni
00:44:758 - K? i dont think that d finisher is enough here, when the voice get so high
00:57:576 - kdd ddk/kdk ddk? the voice on the second triple get highest at the end
01:53:197 - dkk(kkk)dk? sounds better to me
02:28:122 - ctrl+g, so itll be dkdkdk? fits voice better i think
03:03:167 - k? the pitch gets really high here
03:23:894 - k? same reason as in the begging

Futsuu
00:34:667 - kdkkDd? to emphasize that guitar more
00:51:031 - ddkk? to put some variation into this pattern
01:36:303 - delete and 01:36:576 - delete? same reason as in higher diffs
01:45:849 - ddkk again?

Kantan
02:38:212 - k? the voice gets pretty high here already
03:24:781 - snapped 1/4 too early
EdamaMe411
hi~mint! from PM
I'm not good at English. So please forgive me in incorrect English XD
Go!
General

01:29:485 (416) - I think that it is better to have the length of this slider at all difficulties.(01:30:303 - or 01:30:440 - )
02:57:849 (1) - same reason.I think that it is better to unify.

K

None!

F

00:11:349 (26) - , 00:20:076 (61) - 1/2 left///These are Notes not in M. Also, there is no sound to emphasize greatly. So you should put the note in the part where the sound is clear.(00:11:076 (25) - and 00:19:803 (60) - )
00:50:622 - add d///For consistency with 00:46:258 (139) -
00:52:122 (161) - del///I want to bresk time in F.


M

00:17:349 (72) - del///I think that it is a little long Notes line.Also,00:17:212 (71) - I think that I can clearly emphasize this notes as well.

00:56:349 (251) - del///I think I hear the lyrics better if I cut this note, I think that playing will be comfortable as well.

01:01:258 (283) - del///01: 01: 394 (283) - By emphasizing here, it will improve the comfort of playing.

01:06:985 (317) - del///Because the difference with F has spread too far.

01:19:667 (379) - ~01:21:303 (391) - Please cut it somewhere. I felt it was a bit too long.



O

00:02:076 (5) - del///because same Ura Oni.You should sapalate note pattern.

01:38:826 (542,543) - del///I felt suddenly difficult from the current flow.

01:44:553 (580) - 01:44:894 (583) - del///^

01:44:758 (581) - change d ///if you accept one before modding XD

03:38:485 (306,307,308,309,310,311) - del!!///I think that it is very useless placement. You should not put a note here.


Ura

00:06:985 - add d///To distinguish from oni. And I want you to pick up the bass drum.

00:18:235 (118) - del///I felt this note did not match well. Also I thought that it was a bit over expression.

03:38:485 (306,307,308,309,310,311) - del!!///I think that it is very useless placement. You should not put a note here.


Good Luck!
Cinnamon_54
mintong map my favourite
Topic Starter
mintong89

Consified wrote:

mintong map my favourite
:) :) aww thx for the stars
Topic Starter
mintong89

[MTF] Wolfette wrote:

Oni:

00:11:076 (44,45,46) - Make this a triple. I feel it fits better hmm I think this will make too hard for Oni player since they already got triple at beginning and after
00:35:348 (195) - Make this a Katsu The sound are all similar so I don't get the reason to make it k
01:19:940 (466,467,468) - Make these katsu as well I put it like this for fun, lol
01:20:485 (471,472,473) - Make this a dkk pattern ^
01:40:940 (558) - Sound here but no note placed here ok added note
01:57:712 (686,687,688) - I think a kdd pattern fits better hmm I think currently is more fit to the song

Astolfo wrote:

hello!

ura oni:

01:15:303 (510) - why finish ? I think it more fit with finish, lol

02:40:053 (1122) - maybe delete this, i think 5plet is too much for this calm section you can feel that the rhythm begin from calm to densely for a second, then become calm again

03:15:031 (158) - change d, high vocal stops on 03:14:894 (156) - so it sounds weird with all k yup

oni:

00:22:531 - 2 notes stacked on top of each other. please fix this.
03:32:349 - here too. oops fixed

00:45:917 (235) - move to 00:45:781 - ? ok

01:15:303 (446) - i think remove finish, no cymbal hit here

01:19:667 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473) - make some of these k, i think it needs variety the reason can be seen above

01:40:462 (553) - move to 01:40:326 - ? ok

01:47:690 - i thinkk you can add d here. the build up is important so i think 5 note stream is ok for oni. hmm ok

i think muzu futsuu kantan look nice!! i cant give any help to them. good luck rank :3

Bowashe wrote:

Ura Oni
00:25:258 - maybe go with kkd kdd kdddk and 00:26:758 - ddddk? it feels like the pitch here gets lower and lower here 00:25:258 - Your suggestion is great but I wanna try like this for fun, also I think kdd is kinda break flow
00:45:985 - this triple feels weird because it sounds like it should be synced with drum beats - try something like that 00:45:849 - ddk k k d yep
01:52:053 - delete a note here and add notes on 01:52:190 - and 01:52:326 - ? you had such a strong entrance into this part (01:47:349 - ) and then you go mainly with triple and some quinplets. (although its consistent with being only triplets and quinplets, so idk...) ok
02:33:031 - kd dkdk? sound better imo yup

Oni
00:41:758 - 00:40:940 - delete and add a notes here 00:43:122 - 00:40:803 - ? its more consistent with voice then like 00:39:031 - here you had it for the whole pattern and here 00:41:212 - only on the 2 first notes I'll stick for now for consistency lol
03:32:349 - double note here - i see Astolfo already mentioned that ;w; yep ;-;

Muzukashii
00:14:076 - k? to give more emphasize on the next note
00:20:622 - k? same reason as before
00:41:758 - 00:42:031 - delete and add a note here 00:41:894 - ? same reason as oni
00:44:758 - K? i dont think that d finisher is enough here, when the voice get so high Because there are already K before, so I'll avoid for looking like spam
00:57:576 - kdd ddk/kdk ddk? the voice on the second triple get highest at the end
01:53:197 - dkk(kkk)dk? sounds better to me
02:28:122 - ctrl+g, so itll be dkdkdk? fits voice better i think
03:03:167 - k? the pitch gets really high here
03:23:894 - k? same reason as in the begging other else are fixed

Futsuu
00:34:667 - kdkkDd? to emphasize that guitar more
00:51:031 - ddkk? to put some variation into this pattern
01:36:303 - delete and 01:36:576 - delete? same reason as in higher diffs
01:45:849 - ddkk again? other else are fixed

Kantan
02:38:212 - k? the voice gets pretty high here already
03:24:781 - snapped 1/4 too early other else are fixed
wip uuuuu
i'm missing modding v2
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