not writing point is all fixed!
Thx modding!!!

リチェックの続きなのさ！！！！

Good luck!

• 
  [Extra]

1. 00:03:483 (3,4) - 自分的には無理に音を拾うより『しーんねーん』の『ねーん』で伸びてるので1/1スライダーを使います
   
2. 00:05:915 (1) - NC外しましょう
   曲調的だったり譜面的に考えて00:06:239 (1) - から早くなって行ってるのでNCは微妙です
3. 00:09:158 (1) - ここになぜNCですか？
   曲がでかくなっているわけでもなく歌詞が途切れているわけでもなく
4. 00:09:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stackを活かしたりしませんか？
   stackばっかりになってしまうとかでしたら番号順の連打みたいな配置にしてみては？
   たとえばこんな感じで(2)だけを連打みたいな配置にしたり
5. 00:11:429 (5) - NC入れてもっとジャンプしても良いかも
6. 00:26:347 (5,6,7) - overmapかな？
   キックスライダー=２連打のようなものなので00:26:347 - ここから00:26:672 - ここまで５連打があるようなものだけどそんな音はどこにもないです。 わかりやすく5連の音鳴ってるんですが・・・ no change
7. 00:31:861 (2,3) - ここに連打が入るような音は無いと思います。
   音取りに困るようでしたら00:31:374 (1) - の後に２連打で良いと思います
8. 00:36:401 (6,7) - 上記に同じく(7)Delete
9. 00:39:888 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - スライダー後の数の多い偶数連打はとても押しづらいです。
   00:39:888 (2) - をDeleteしませんか？その後の配置は任せます (2)から音が鳴ってるのに偶数だからと言う理由で消したら、むしろそのほうが叩きにくいとおもうんですが。no change
10. 00:42:564 (1,2,1,2) - びっくりしました。結構なジャンプやスライダーの繋ぎのジャンプが多いのでいきなりなので
    (1.2)stackで距離をとりませんか？ 保留させてください
11. 00:43:212 (1,2,3) - 場所のあるところで(1.3)の重なりは不恰好に見えます。stackだったりもう少し離しませんか？
12. 00:47:753 (1,2,3) - 00:49:050 (1,2,3) - 同じような感じなのに同じ配置にしないのはなぜですか？
13. 00:51:645 (6) - NC入れたほうが自分は好き！！！！というか00:51:645 (6,7,1,2) - こういう交差ジャンプのときって1.2ごとにNC入れるから(6)からNC入れたい！！！！
14. 00:54:564 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - ここから配置が雑に見えます。どういう意図があるのかがまったく読めませんでした上記に書いたとおりstackを活かしたりしませんか？
    サビから白線からの三連打が多いですが三連打は大体が赤線から始まるのが多いです。
    はっきりと白線から三連打が聞こえるって部分以外は大体赤線じゃないと変に感じます
    修正するかしないかは任せます

Good luck!

赤字以外は直しました－
modありがとうございました！。

Yasaija 714 wrote:

リチェックの続きなのさ！！！！

• 
  [Mocha's Insane]

1. 00:44:996 (2,1) - こういう風にstackするなら00:45:483 (3,2) - もstackしてほしい保留させてください
2. 00:48:401 (1,2) - (2)を(1)の終点にstackしませんか保留させてください
3. 00:50:672 (4) - 00:50:672 (4,2,3) - blanketしているのはわかりますが00:50:347 (3,4) - だけを見ると適当にしか見えないのでこうしませんか？
   説明しづらいのでメモ帳貼り付けでお願いします修正しました
   ああ

   148,252,50672,2,0,P|192:256|227:237,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   104,112,50996,6,0,L|74:37,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4. 00:51:483 (2,3) - 赤線から始まるスライダーはここでは違和感しかないので00:51:483 - に単発置いてずらしませんか？
   ↑が採用された場合は00:52:131 (4) - Delete保留させてください
5. 00:52:780 (2,3) - blanketがずれています修正しました
6. 00:56:347 (2,1,2,1,2) - deleteで休憩入れるほうが好き
   というか00:55:699 (6,7,8,9) - の後にこの急な停止感？とまった感じは叩きにくいです今の状態が好きなの保留で
7. 01:09:645 (3,4,5) - 無理に音をとらなくても良いと思います
   そして対策としての説明がとてもめんどくさいので使ってください修正しました
   
   あああ

   251,40,69158,6,0,L|216:128,1,80,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   64,200,69483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   0,96,69645,2,0,P|96:80|156:124,1,160
   234,280,70131,2,0,P|284:272|328:236,1,80
   302,130,70456,6,0,L|247:188,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   86,330,70780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   158,162,70942,2,0,P|168:238|233:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   471,219,71429,2,0,B|427:203|427:203|328:222,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,256,71753,6,0,L|336:357,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   
   だいたいこれぐらいです。
   
   Mochaさんがんばってください

modありがとうございます！

M4M from your queue

[Easy]
00:05:104 (5) - dunno if its just me or is this rhythm kinda off with this note?
00:10:456 (2,3) - fix blanket a wittle bit
00:40:942 (1,2) - space these out a bit?
00:42:239 (1,2) - fix blanket?
00:46:780 (2,1) - no blanket? like 00:45:483 (2,1) -
01:00:077 (3) - i would put the first point closer to the head of the slider
01:15:969 - add a ntoe here?
01:18:564 - ^
01:26:672 (1) - this sounds off

[Normal]
00:05:591 (1,2) - blanket?
00:27:969 (1) - this sounds off but idk :/
00:30:239 (5,1) - i dun really like this overlap but hey your choice
00:36:401 (1,2) - stack?
01:26:672 (1) - slider starts here? 01:26:834 -

[Hard]
00:05:915 (2,3) - space this out farther like 00:05:591 (1,2) - ?
00:07:537 (3,4) - closer?
00:34:131 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:51:645 (3) - bring this to the left & higher more?
01:01:699 (1,2,3) - thsi kinda looks ugly to me but you can keep it
01:03:158 (2,2) - overlap D:
01:08:510 (1,1) - fix blanket

[Mocha's Insane]
00:22:456 (1,2) - big jump
00:23:915 (2) - doesnt slider start 00:23:753 -
00:49:374 (5,1) - fix blanket

[Extra]
00:02:672 (5,1) - maybe blanket?
00:05:591 (6,1) - put these closer?
00:05:915 (1,1,1) - equal spacing?
00:06:239 (1,2) - overlap?
00:32:510 (5,1) - blanket or fix blanket
00:40:942 - nice section

that's it from me
nice map cant wait for rank ^^
also, im sure you know but you dont have to do what i say. your map you do what you want~

sounds off = rhythm doesnt match?

blocking pm from non mutuals

Shiratoi wrote:

your mod

M4M from your queue

[Easy]
00:05:104 (5) - dunno if its just me or is this rhythm kinda off with this note?
00:10:456 (2,3) - fix blanket a wittle bit
00:40:942 (1,2) - space these out a bit?
00:42:239 (1,2) - fix blanket?
00:46:780 (2,1) - no blanket? like 00:45:483 (2,1) -
01:00:077 (3) - i would put the first point closer to the head of the slider oh nice suggestion fix
01:15:969 - add a ntoe here? sory keep this because it need big change in this part. but maybe ill change it.
01:18:564 - ^
01:26:672 (1) - this sounds off change the slider form. fix

[Normal]
00:05:591 (1,2) - blanket?
00:27:969 (1) - this sounds off but idk :/ mmm i think it fit drum sounds. keep
00:30:239 (5,1) - i dun really like this overlap but hey your choice
00:36:401 (1,2) - stack?
01:26:672 (1) - slider starts here? 01:26:834 - no change because Easy start to this point.

[Hard]
00:05:915 (2,3) - space this out farther like 00:05:591 (1,2) - ?
00:07:537 (3,4) - closer?
00:34:131 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:51:645 (3) - bring this to the left & higher more?
01:01:699 (1,2,3) - thsi kinda looks ugly to me but you can keep it mmm keep, but if same mod by other's, ill fix this
01:03:158 (2,2) - overlap D:
01:08:510 (1,1) - fix blanket

[Extra]
00:02:672 (5,1) - maybe blanket? sory no change because this point copy 00:02:023 (2,4) -
00:05:591 (6,1) - put these closer?
00:05:915 (1,1,1) - equal spacing?
00:06:239 (1,2) - overlap? no change
00:32:510 (5,1) - blanket or fix blanket woops. fix~
00:40:942 - nice section thx! :3

that's it from me
nice map cant wait for rank ^^
also, im sure you know but you dont have to do what i say. your map you do what you want~

sounds off = rhythm doesnt match?

blocking pm from non mutuals really sory.....

red color: no change
without red, all fixed.
thx modding!
ill mod your map soon.
but today so sleepy. ill mod tommorow sory

Hi~ M4M from your queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:14:672 (1,2) - Replace with 2 sliders? Though it sounds same, but 2 sliders fit the rhythm well in my opinion.
2. 00:15:969 (3) - May miss some notes and I prefer make drum clickable. what about this rhythm :
   
3. 00:17:266 (4) - NC
4. 00:19:861 (4) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:20:510 (1) -
5. 00:22:456 (5) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:23:753 (1) -
6. 00:27:158 add a slider here and finish at 00:27:483 ?
7. 00:27:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Though fit the song, but I recommend you use this rhythm:
   
   If you do not like the idea, then NC at 00:30:239 (4) - cancel at 00:31:212 (3) - , NC at 00:32:834 (1) -
8. 00:34:131 (1) - 3/2 rhythm here seems a little strange, maybe you wanna follow vocal here, but as you followed drum in this part, maybe replace it with 2 slidders to fit the drum seems better.
9. 00:34:131 (3) - cancel NC, add NC at 00:35:429 (1) - , cancel NC at 00:36:401 (3) - .
10. 00:47:753 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 00:48:401 (4) -
11. 00:50:347 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 00:50:996 (1) -
12. 01:03:969 (1) - NC here , cancel NC at 01:05:266 (2) -
13. 01:06:564 (5) - NC
14. 01:13:050 (4) - NC, cancel NC at 01:13:699 (2) -
15. 01:14:347 (3) - NC
16. 01:16:293 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 01:16:942 (3) -
17. 01:18:888 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 01:19:537 (3) -
18. 01:19:537 (1) - NC

[Normal]

1. 00:27:969 (1,2) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ?
2. 00:30:239 (5) - NC, and cancel at 00:30:888 (1) -
3. 00:32:672 (1) - NC, and cancel at 00:33:483 (1) -
4. 00:44:510 (4) - ,01:01:374 (4) - , 01:03:969 (4) - , cancel NC
5. 01:08:834 (1) - cancel NC and add NC at 01:09:158 (2) -
6. 01:11:429 (1) - cancel NC and add NC at 01:11:753 (2) -
7. 01:22:131 (1,1) - reverse? as there are clear drums at 01:22:456 and 01:22:942

[Hard]

1. 00:19:212 (3,4) - replace both with a 1/2 slider? there are drums at 00:19:374 and 00:19:699
2. 00:23:429 (3) - replace it with a 1/2 slider and a circle? I think it will be better to make 00:23:753 clickable.
3. 00:22:456 (4) - 00:27:483 (4) - NC here.
4. 00:32:023 add a note? though nothing here, add a note to make flow only.
5. 00:42:672 (6) - use 1/3 rhythm to add kick here ? drums here and put something here would be better.
6. 00:53:429 add a note and move spinner to 00:53:510 ?

It seems you add NC when vocal starts. But I prefer add NC when a bar start. NC in my mod just opinions, you can ignore them if you do not like the style I add NC.

Good luck~~

Shiratoi wrote:

M4M from your queue

[Mocha's Insane]
00:22:456 (1,2) - big jump
00:23:915 (2) - doesnt slider start 00:23:753 -
00:49:374 (5,1) - fix blanket

All fixed

ty~

Vanillas wrote:

Hi~ M4M from your queue~

your mod

[Easy]

1. 00:14:672 (1,2) - Replace with 2 sliders? Though it sounds same, but 2 sliders fit the rhythm well in my opinion.
2. 00:15:969 (3) - May miss some notes and I prefer make drum clickable. what about this rhythm : sory not use your suggestion but put note to fit drum sounds
   
3. 00:17:266 (4) - NC
4. 00:19:861 (4) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:20:510 (1) -
5. 00:22:456 (5) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:23:753 (1) -
6. 00:27:158 add a slider here and finish at 00:27:483 ?
7. 00:27:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Though fit the song, but I recommend you use this rhythm: mmm keep sory
   
   If you do not like the idea, then NC at 00:30:239 (4) - cancel at 00:31:212 (3) - , NC at 00:32:834 (1) -
8. 00:34:131 (1) - 3/2 rhythm here seems a little strange, maybe you wanna follow vocal here, but as you followed drum in this part, maybe replace it with 2 slidders to fit the drum seems better. ya good suggestin thx :3 fix
9. 00:34:131 (3) - cancel NC, add NC at 00:35:429 (1) - , cancel NC at 00:36:401 (3) - .
10. 00:47:753 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 00:48:401 (4) -
11. 00:50:347 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 00:50:996 (1) -
12. 01:03:969 (1) - NC here , cancel NC at 01:05:266 (2) -
13. 01:06:564 (5) - NC
14. 01:13:050 (4) - NC, cancel NC at 01:13:699 (2) -
15. 01:14:347 (3) - NC
16. 01:16:293 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 01:16:942 (3) -
17. 01:18:888 (1) - cancel NC, add NC at 01:19:537 (3) -
18. 01:19:537 (1) - NC

[Normal]

1. 00:27:969 (1,2) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ?
2. 00:30:239 (5) - NC, and cancel at 00:30:888 (1) -
3. 00:32:672 (1) - NC, and cancel at 00:33:483 (1) -
4. 00:44:510 (4) - ,01:01:374 (4) - , 01:03:969 (4) - , cancel NC
5. 01:08:834 (1) - cancel NC and add NC at 01:09:158 (2) -
6. 01:11:429 (1) - cancel NC and add NC at 01:11:753 (2) -
7. 01:22:131 (1,1) - reverse? as there are clear drums at 01:22:456 and 01:22:942

[Hard]

1. 00:19:212 (3,4) - replace both with a 1/2 slider? there are drums at 00:19:374 and 00:19:699
2. 00:23:429 (3) - replace it with a 1/2 slider and a circle? I think it will be better to make 00:23:753 clickable.
3. 00:22:456 (4) - 00:27:483 (4) - NC here.
4. 00:32:023 add a note? though nothing here, add a note to make flow only. no change bacause there is a sound but so small volume
5. 00:42:672 (6) - use 1/3 rhythm to add kick here ? drums here and put something here would be better. mm keep sory it is difficult to compose
6. 00:53:429 add a note and move spinner to 00:53:510 ? no change, Easy and Normal start this point too

It seems you add NC when vocal starts. But I prefer add NC when a bar start. NC in my mod just opinions, you can ignore them if you do not like the style I add NC.

Good luck~~

Red : no change
Fix many NC.
nice NC suggestion.
thx modding!

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ NM from my queue

Easy

1. 00:12:726 (2) - ctrl + J
2. 01:14:347 (1) - ^
3. 00:24:726 (4) - x:396 y:300
4. 00:36:401 (3,4,5) - this triangle can looks better

Normal

1. 00:07:537 (2,3,4) - this triangle can looks better
2. 00:08:834 (5,1) - this pattern can looks better
3. 01:07:050 (2,3) - this sliders can looks better
4. 01:22:618 (1,1) - delete NC
5. 01:09:159 - delete inherited point

Hard

1. 00:03:969 (3) - this slider can looks better
2. 00:31:537 (1) - ^
3. 00:50:347 (4) - ^
4. 00:32:672 (4,2) - this pattern can looks better
5. 00:44:185 (3) - ctrl + J
6. 01:01:374 (4) - NC
7. 01:10:293 (5) - ^
8. 01:01:699 (1) - delete NC

Good Luck~

all fixed!
thx a lot

こんにちわ～ PMから

[General]
このゲームMetadetaに関して結構厳しいです。"Resonant Heart<TV edit>" って表記があるのでこっち使った方がいいです
タグの "kerberos" を "Cerberus" に直しましょう
endcard_03a.jpgの解像度がおかしいです。1366x768にしましょう

[Easy]
00:02:996 (2,1,2,3) - 静かなパートで難易度もEasですのでこんな音取りどうでしょう？
00:22:131 (4) - 手前の赤線の音が強いのでここの音を拾った方がいいと思います。
　　　　　　　　00:21:158 (3) のRevers消して00:21:807 から1/2 Slider
00:15:320 (2,3) - (2)を1/2にして(3)を00:15:807 から00:16:618 まで
00:52:942 (5) - Finishいらないと思います。Whistle
01:00:077 (3) - 難易度的にも01:00:726 まで伸ばした方が違和感無いです
01:02:672 (3) - ＾ ボーカルで取ってると思いますが上を変えたならこっちも変えた方がいいです
01:15:320 (2) - ボーカルが伸びてるので01:15:807 までSlider伸ばしましょう
01:17:915 (2) - ＾
01:25:861 (1,1) - EasyでこのNCの使い方はDQだったと思います。NC外しましょう

[Normal]
00:26:347 (4) - NCあるといいと思います
00:31:374 (3) - 前後のパートでここの音を拾ってないので、無くてもいいと思います
01:15:320 (3) - 1/1
01:17:915 (3) - ^
01:23:104 (1) - Easyと同じです
01:24:888 (1,2) - SliderとCircle入れ替えた方がいいです

[Hard]
00:06:239 (2) - 00:06:077 から1/1で00:06:564 にCircle
00:58:131 (3) - DQでは無いですが、1/2の2回リバースは読みにくいと思います。1/2二つでいいのでは？

[Mocha's Insane]
Hitsound中心に書いていきます

00:06:564 (2) - Finishの音で代用できると思います
00:09:483 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 白線だけClap
00:10:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全てClap
00:24:888 (4,5,1) - Clap
00:25:374 (2,3,4) - 白線Clap
00:26:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全てClap
00:35:429 (1) - Finish
00:38:023 (1,2) - Clap
00:38:510 (3) - 先端Finish
00:38:996 (1,2,3) - 上と同じ
00:40:618 (1) - Whistle
00:43:212 (1) - Finish
00:46:780 (2,3) - 終端と(3)にWhistle
00:50:996 (1) - Finish
00:53:429 (1) - ^
00:53:915 (2,3) - 白線Clap
00:54:564 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 全部Clap
01:15:320 (4) - Finish
01:16:942 (1,4) - ＾
01:19:537 (1,2,3) - 白線Clap
01:22:131 (1,2) - Circleと先端にClap
01:22:618 (1,2) - ^
01:23:104 (1,2) - ^
01:26:023 (2) - Finishいらないです
01:26:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (5)まで全部Clapで(6)だけFinish

多分聞き漏らしてるので、これ見ながら修正してください（）

[Extra]
00:10:942 (2,4) - additionsでDrum付いてますが、Autoに戻してClapの方がいいと思います
00:31:861 (2,3,4,5) - この音取りを試してみてください
00:37:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - Clap
00:42:564 (1,2,1,2) - 00:42:564　にD:C2の緑線を追加して全てにClap
01:13:699 (1,2) - ^
00:55:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Clap
00:57:483 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

力尽きたのでここまで
わからないところあれば聞いてください。
ランクド頑張ってください～

-Maruk- wrote:

こんにちわ～ PMから

[General]
このゲームMetadetaに関して結構厳しいです。"Resonant Heart<TV edit>" って表記があるのでこっち使った方がいいです

Source

タグの "kerberos" を "Cerberus" に直しましょう

Source

endcard_03a.jpgの解像度がおかしいです。1366x768にしましょう

[Easy]
00:02:996 (2,1,2,3) - 静かなパートで難易度もEasですのでこんな音取りどうでしょう？

img

00:22:131 (4) - 手前の赤線の音が強いのでここの音を拾った方がいいと思います。
　　　　　　　　00:21:158 (3) のRevers消して00:21:807 から1/2 Slider
00:15:320 (2,3) - (2)を1/2にして(3)を00:15:807 から00:16:618 まで
00:52:942 (5) - Finishいらないと思います。Whistle
01:00:077 (3) - 難易度的にも01:00:726 まで伸ばした方が違和感無いです
01:02:672 (3) - ＾ ボーカルで取ってると思いますが上を変えたならこっちも変えた方がいいです
01:15:320 (2) - ボーカルが伸びてるので01:15:807 までSlider伸ばしましょう
01:17:915 (2) - ＾
01:25:861 (1,1) - EasyでこのNCの使い方はDQだったと思います。NC外しましょう

[Normal]
00:26:347 (4) - NCあるといいと思います
00:31:374 (3) - 前後のパートでここの音を拾ってないので、無くてもいいと思います
01:15:320 (3) - 1/1
01:17:915 (3) - ^
01:23:104 (1) - Easyと同じです
01:24:888 (1,2) - SliderとCircle入れ替えた方がいいです

[Hard]
00:06:239 (2) - 00:06:077 から1/1で00:06:564 にCircle
00:58:131 (3) - DQでは無いですが、1/2の2回リバースは読みにくいと思います。1/2二つでいいのでは？

[Extra]
00:10:942 (2,4) - additionsでDrum付いてますが、Autoに戻してClapの方がいいと思います
00:31:861 (2,3,4,5) - この音取りを試してみてください

img

00:37:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - Clap
00:42:564 (1,2,1,2) - 00:42:564　にD:C2の緑線を追加して全てにClap
01:13:699 (1,2) - ^
00:55:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Clap
00:57:483 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

力尽きたのでここまで
わからないところあれば聞いてください。
ランクド頑張ってください～

全部修正しましたー
Easyの音取りとかすごい参考になりました。
modありがとうございました！

-Maruk- wrote:

こんにちわ～ PMから


[Mocha's Insane]
Hitsound中心に書いていきます

00:06:564 (2) - Finishの音で代用できると思います
00:09:483 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 白線だけClap
00:10:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全てClap
00:24:888 (4,5,1) - Clap
00:25:374 (2,3,4) - 白線Clap
00:26:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全てClap
00:35:429 (1) - Finish
00:38:023 (1,2) - Clap
00:38:510 (3) - 先端Finish
00:38:996 (1,2,3) - 上と同じ
00:40:618 (1) - Whistle
00:43:212 (1) - Finish
00:46:780 (2,3) - 終端と(3)にWhistle
00:50:996 (1) - Finish
00:53:429 (1) - ^
00:53:915 (2,3) - 白線Clap
00:54:564 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 全部Clap
01:15:320 (4) - Finish
01:16:942 (1,4) - ＾
01:19:537 (1,2,3) - 白線Clap
01:22:131 (1,2) - Circleと先端にClap
01:22:618 (1,2) - ^
01:23:104 (1,2) - ^
01:26:023 (2) - Finishいらないです
01:26:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (5)まで全部Clapで(6)だけFinish

多分聞き漏らしてるので、これ見ながら修正してください（）

全て修正しました

ありがとうございますー

NM From my Weekend Modding Queue

Normal:
• 00:03:483 (2) - i prefer remove this note and put (3) at this timing point
• 00:06:239 (2,1) - this not flow well
• 00:08:834 (5,1,2) - prefer this http://puu.sh/pwYIW/343c3d8088.jpg
• 00:10:780 (1) - this meant to blanket?
• 00:12:726 (2) - light curve instead
• 00:17:266 (7) - slider feel better start here, and end at white tick
• 00:21:807 (4) - decrease the curve
• 00:23:753 (2) - this meant to blanket next (1)? perfect it then
• 00:25:699 (2) - x332 y172
• 00:28:942 (3) - this flow feels wrong
• 00:34:131 (3) - you looking for this slider prolly http://puu.sh/pwYXq/ddd7be0018.jpg
• 00:39:483 (4,5,6) - not feel nice
• 00:42:888 - missing note
• 00:58:780 (1) - straight slider imo
• 01:03:320 (3) - better slider
• 01:09:807 (2,3,4) - this one http://puu.sh/pwZ5j/f4ab328aee.jpg
• 01:19:537 (1) - just mirror slider (2) is fine
• 01:25:537 (3) - move the angle to middle

Hard:
• 00:04:293 (1) - perfect this blanket
• 00:06:077 (2) - ^
• 00:12:888 (4) - add light down curve
• 00:34:618 (2) - blanket?
• 00:46:293 (2) - perfect this blanket
• 01:06:564 (1) - this meant to blanket?
• 01:12:239 (2,4) - if possible dont make this touch one of other

Thats its, good luck

eclipselotus wrote:

NM From my Weekend Modding Queue

Normal:
• 00:03:483 (2) - i prefer remove this note and put (3) at this timing point
• 00:06:239 (2,1) - this not flow well
• 00:08:834 (5,1,2) - prefer this http://puu.sh/pwYIW/343c3d8088.jpg
• 00:10:780 (1) - this meant to blanket? you mean that should use other pattern? no change
• 00:12:726 (2) - light curve instead
• 00:17:266 (7) - slider feel better start here, and end at white tick no, same to other diffi
• 00:21:807 (4) - decrease the curve
• 00:23:753 (2) - this meant to blanket next (1)? perfect it then
• 00:25:699 (2) - x332 y172
• 00:28:942 (3) - this flow feels wrong
• 00:34:131 (3) - you looking for this slider prolly http://puu.sh/pwYXq/ddd7be0018.jpg no change
• 00:39:483 (4,5,6) - not feel nice
• 00:42:888 - missing note
• 00:58:780 (1) - straight slider imo
• 01:03:320 (3) - better slider
• 01:09:807 (2,3,4) - this one http://puu.sh/pwZ5j/f4ab328aee.jpg looks good pattern thx :3
• 01:19:537 (1) - just mirror slider (2) is fine
• 01:25:537 (3) - move the angle to middle

Hard:
• 00:04:293 (1) - perfect this blanket
• 00:06:077 (2) - ^
• 00:12:888 (4) - add light down curve
• 00:34:618 (2) - blanket?
• 00:46:293 (2) - perfect this blanket
• 01:06:564 (1) - this meant to blanket?
• 01:12:239 (2,4) - if possible dont make this touch one of other

Thats its, good luck

red: not change
all fixed without red
thx modding~

Hihi! M4M from ur queue <3 my map -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479175






Whoo! Nice extra diff
GL~!

m4m~

General*

- Really dunno if that "<TV edit> " is really nessesary, i checked some sources and didn't find any tv edit tho.

Easy*

- 00:04:293 (1,2) - This blanket doesn't look good visualy at all, you can make it better!
- 00:13:699 (4) - Curves like this is rather a meh decision imo, could you just use slightly curved slider instead?
- 00:16:942 (4,1) - Check spacing, it's inconsistent~
- 00:24:726 (4) - Personally, i'd like to see this circle on 370/274 for better flow end :3
- 00:43:212 (4) - It's better to replace that Whistle with Finish, since i hear more crashes sounds tho.
- 00:50:347 (4) - :/ That slider just looks meh in editorrr awww.. please do something with him xd. Also 00:50:347 (4,3) - dat overlap could be avoided~
- 00:50:996 (1) - Add finish.
- 00:53:429 (1) - It's sad to avoid such a cool loud sound by using spinner. I would move this spinner on next white beat 00:53:591 - and replace it a circle on 00:53:429 - to emphasis that nice sound + also add finish on it. One more thing, if you do that 00:53:591 (1) - don't forget to move end on 00:56:185 -
- 01:03:969 (1) - Really unnessesarily curves, really straight slider works better a lot!
- You should work more on sliders structure, cause some of them looks messy for me, but overall it's not bad~

Normal*

- 00:00:402 - Unrankable! Diffirent volumes for green and red line at the same time - please delete greenline, since it doesn't change SV.
- 00:03:483 (2) - Move this slider on 204/46 so, flow could be works nicer~
- 00:10:131 (2,1) - I really love pointing blanket things, so y know what to do.
- 00:35:429 (1) - Add finish on first head.
- 00:36:564 (1) - Seems like u follow previous NC per two big white ticks, so maybe just remove this one for consistency?
- 00:40:456 (6) - Loud clap on end sounds really noisy af :c
- 00:53:429 (1) - Like in Easy~
- 01:00:077 (1,4) - Swap NCs, then swap 01:02:672 (1,4) - and remove this one 01:05:266 (1) - if you want consistent NC things in kiai
- 01:19:537 (1,2) - Aww, make a cutier blanket tho, i know you can do it :3
- 01:27:239 (1) - Should move this spinner start at red beat, since 1/4 things in Normal is a big no
- Better than Easy, but it could be better tho :3

Hard*

- 00:03:969 (3,1) - Y know what to do, i mention this few times xd
- 00:04:780 (2,4,5,1) - That overlap just bug me, i don't like him arghh.. please avoid xd
- 00:06:564 (3,1) - 00:11:591 (4,5) - Consider more spacing between those, because it might be misleading for ppl.
- 00:17:266 (3,1) - Swap NCs, since (3) starts a new stanza.
- 00:26:347 (1,2) - Personally 399/113 works much better than now imo.
- 00:40:050 (2) - 00:39:077 (4) - Sounds kinda overmapped, thou.
- 00:40:456 (6) - Like in Normal, about that clap on end~
- 00:53:429 (1) - I notice that spinner like in Easy and Normal lol.
- 01:08:510 (1) - I don't see any sense with NC this slider, so maybe remove this instead?
- 01:12:726 (3) - Missing Clap~

Extra*

- 00:00:402 - Unrankable! Same as in Normal~
- 00:09:483 (1) - Move it around 340/84 so you can avoid overlap with 00:08:834 (4) -
- 00:15:888 (7) - I really don't hear any sound on this tick tho
- 00:17:266 (5,1) - Swap NC, since (5) starts a new stanza.
- 00:17:753 - Also really weird to skip this vocal start imo, i would map it map it map it!
- 00:22:293 (4,1) - Swap NC
- 00:27:969 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of this edgy flow, you can make something diffirent here~
- 00:34:131 (1) - Missing Clap on end
- 00:55:537 (3) - Prefer to continue this 1 -2 NC pattern, so yea, can u put NC here?
- 01:03:807 (1) - I want to have this big white tick clickable!!!!
- 01:05:266 (1) - Remove clap on this head, because i don't hear any clap-sound thing here : /
- 01:15:320 (4) - Remove Whistle and add Finish instead.

Ok, that's all. Uffff, hope i helped with something, good luck :3/

Star (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ ~☆

hello
m4m from your queueueueueu (sorry im late)

• [Extra]

1. 00:11:429 (1) - the jumps are getting bigger and bigger, so maybe move this more outwards than 00:10:942 (2) -
2. 00:15:320 (5) - i think a circle + slider fits better
3. 00:31:374 (1) - why smaller spacing here?
4. 00:42:564 (1,2,1,2) - this feels a little weird to play, maybe try something like this?
5. 00:54:401 (2) - maybe blanket this with 00:53:429 (5) - ?
6. 01:12:726 (5) - blanket with 01:11:753 (2) - ?
7. 01:24:888 (1) - maybe move closer to 01:24:401 (5) - to avoid confusion of a 1/2?
   
   [Mocha's Insane]
8. 00:27:158 (5) - try spacing it further or stacking under 00:26:834 (4) - to show its a 1/1 and not a 1/2
9. 00:40:618 - there isn't a very strong sound here, so maybe just extend the repeat slider to this note?
10. 01:03:807 (5,6,1) - maybe move this up a little further from 01:04:131 (2) -
11. 01:19:415 - sounds more like its 1/8 later
12. 01:22:050 (7) - i dont hear a sound here for this
13. 01:26:672 (2) - maybe just make this a stream too?

sorry, i can't really help on lower difficulties

GL!

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Hihi! M4M from ur queue <3 my map -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479175

Extra

1. 00:02:996 (1,3) - blanket
2. Fun diff

Hard

1. HP 6?
2. 00:01:699 (1) - straight slider down seems better imo
   
3. 00:02:672 (4) - why not make it straight and parallel with 00:02:996 (1)
4. 00:03:969 (3) - make a curve slider and blanket with 00:03:483 (2)
5. 00:03:969 (3,1) - less curve for blanket
6. 00:05:104 (3,4,5,1) - no touching
7. 00:06:564 (3) - why not a slider?
8. 00:14:672 (1,2,3) - equal distance
9. 00:22:293 (6,1) - unstack?
10. 00:33:158 (1,2,3) - more distance gap between them is better
11. 00:34:131 (1,2) - blanket
12. 00:35:104 (3) - ctrl g if you want no
13. 00:43:699 (2,3) - fix blanket
14. 00:46:780 (3) - further up from 2 a bit
15. 00:49:050 (5,6,1) - spacings like this? http://puu.sh/pYYcN/91d171b780.jpg
16. 01:01:699 (3,4,5) - nicer patterns maybe, it looks quite ugly ugly? i dont looks so. no change
17. 01:12:239 (2,3,4) - don't make the flow so sharp http://puu.sh/pYYls/d2d1b8709b.jpg
18. 01:13:699 (1,2) - why can't use 1/4 here? 1/3 drum sounds here.
19. 01:24:888 (1) - Last part's flow and plcaing which seems better. If you want to use it go ahead.
    
    SPOILER

    [HitObjects]
    153,115,84888,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    153,115,85050,2,0,P|208:88|230:27,1,112,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    313,100,85537,2,0,L|323:222,1,112,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,280,86023,2,0,B|212:280|212:280|176:268|176:268|127:268,1,112
    63,199,86510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    63,199,86672,2,0,L|54:152,6,28,2|0|0|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,87239,12,0,89266,0:0:0:0:

Normal

1. 00:03:483 (2,1) - possible blanket? need it? i dont think so. no change
2. 00:05:591 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:08:834 (5,1,2,1,2) - blanket
4. 00:21:158 (3,4) - ^ no
5. 00:28:293 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:36:564 (1) - http://puu.sh/pYYOQ/313f153d30.jpg
7. 01:02:672 (1) - blankeet
8. 01:19:537 (1,2) - ^?

Easy

1. 00:04:293 (1,2) - blanket
2. 00:18:564 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:21:807 (4,1) - if you can blanket then pls do
4. 00:35:429 (1,2) - Blanket
5. 00:42:239 (3,4) - nicer ^
6. 01:14:347 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:16:942 (1,2) - ^
8. 01:25:861 (2,3) - ^
   Sorry for being a blanket nazi ;-;

Whoo! Nice extra diff thxxx
GL~!

23konG wrote:

Star (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ ~☆ OMG, thxxxxxx

red : no change
without red, all fixed
Thx all for modding!!!

どうも、その節はありがとうございました

red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.





とりあえずrhythmx中心にEとN見ましたがこれだけでも結構な作業量になると思うので終わりましたらまた連絡ください(次第残りみます)
また分からない点などあればPM、Ingameチャットください

m4m. sorry for late

[Insane]

1. 00:05:591 (1) - こちらのスライダーをコピペしたものに差し替えてみてはどうでしょうか(00:04:780 (2) -)
2. 00:15:320 (4) - このサークルのみスタックされているので流れが不自然に止まっているように感じます。添付画像のように再配置してみては如何ですか
   
   img

   
3. 00:17:753 - ノーツが欲しい…!!
4. 00:27:969 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
   00:27:969 (2,3,4,5,6) - を正三角形配置にすると見栄えが良くなるかと思います。2と345は00:27:483 (1) - にblanketされているみたいなので活用して、120°回転させて正三角形を作ってみて下さい。2と345でblanketの度合を統一すると、6がスライダーに重ならなくなるのでお勧めです。
   尚、この配置にした場合00:28:456 (6,7,1) - の流れが壊滅的になるので、345と6の位置を入れ替えて7のスライダーを反転させると対策できるかと思います。
   長々と説明してよくわからないことになってしまいましたが、画像とcodeを添付しますのでよかったら試してみてください。
   
   img

   
   code

   259,138,27969,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   96,172,28131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   208,296,28293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   208,296,28374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   208,296,28455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   85,260,28618,2,0,P|45:265|8:279,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:49:050 (4,5) - 近すぎる感じもします。4をずらすのが一番手っ取り早いかなと。

[Extra]

1. 00:20:185 (2,3,1) - 音取りに違和感を感じます。
   00:17:753 (2,3,4,5) - と同じ音取りか
   又は00:20:510 - にサークルを入れて後二つのスライダーを1/2ずつずらすのもアリかと。
2. 01:05:266 (1,2) - 両方ともctrl+gしてみては。
3. 01:23:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - blanketの修正含め配置の提案です。
   
   img

   
   code

   90,165,83429,6,0,P|144:158|191:184,1,104.500003189087,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   345,260,83753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   383,187,83915,2,0,P|329:180|282:206,1,104.500003189087,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   139,341,84239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   139,341,84401,2,0,L|125:215,1,104.500003189087,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

ぐっどらっく！！

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