m4m~General*
- Really dunno if that "<TV edit> " is really nessesary, i checked some sources and didn't find any tv edit tho.
Easy*- 00:04:293 (1,2) - This blanket doesn't look good visualy at all, you can make it better!
- 00:13:699 (4) - Curves like this is rather a meh decision imo, could you just use slightly curved
slider instead?
- 00:16:942 (4,1) - Check spacing, it's inconsistent~
- 00:24:726 (4) - Personally, i'd like to see this circle on 370/274 for better flow end :3
- 00:43:212 (4) - It's better to replace that Whistle with Finish, since i hear more crashes sounds tho.
- 00:50:347 (4) - :/ That slider just looks meh in editorrr awww.. please do something with him xd. Also 00:50:347 (4,3) - dat overlap could be avoided~
- 00:50:996 (1) - Add finish.
- 00:53:429 (1) - It's sad to avoid such a cool loud sound by using spinner. I would move this spinner on next white beat 00:53:591 - and replace it a circle on 00:53:429 - to emphasis that nice sound + also add finish on it. One more thing, if you do that 00:53:591 (1) - don't forget to move end on 00:56:185 -
- 01:03:969 (1) - Really unnessesarily curves, really straight slider works better a lot!
- You should work more on sliders structure, cause some of them looks messy for me, but overall it's not bad~
Normal*- 00:00:402 -
Unrankable! Diffirent volumes for green and red line at the same time - please delete greenline, since it doesn't change SV.
- 00:03:483 (2) - Move this slider on 204/46 so, flow could be works nicer~
- 00:10:131 (2,1) - I really love pointing blanket things, so y know what to do.
- 00:35:429 (1) - Add finish on first head.
- 00:36:564 (1) - Seems like u follow previous NC per two big white ticks, so maybe just remove this one for consistency?
- 00:40:456 (6) - Loud clap on end sounds really noisy af :c
- 00:53:429 (1) - Like in Easy~
- 01:00:077 (1,4) - Swap NCs, then swap 01:02:672 (1,4) - and remove this one 01:05:266 (1) - if you want consistent NC things in kiai
- 01:19:537 (1,2) - Aww, make a cutier blanket tho, i know you can do it :3
- 01:27:239 (1) - Should move this spinner start at red beat, since 1/4 things in Normal is a big no
- Better than Easy, but it could be better tho :3
Hard*- 00:03:969 (3,1) - Y know what to do, i mention this few times xd
- 00:04:780 (2,4,5,1) - That overlap just bug me, i don't like him arghh.. please avoid xd
- 00:06:564 (3,1) - 00:11:591 (4,5) - Consider more spacing between those, because it might be misleading for ppl.
- 00:17:266 (3,1) - Swap NCs, since (3) starts a new stanza.
- 00:26:347 (1,2) - Personally 399/113 works much better than now imo.
- 00:40:050 (2) - 00:39:077 (4) - Sounds kinda overmapped, thou.
- 00:40:456 (6) - Like in Normal, about that clap on end~
- 00:53:429 (1) - I notice that spinner like in Easy and Normal lol.
- 01:08:510 (1) - I don't see any sense with NC this slider, so maybe remove this instead?
- 01:12:726 (3) - Missing Clap~
Extra*- 00:00:402 -
Unrankable! Same as in Normal~
- 00:09:483 (1) - Move it around 340/84 so you can avoid overlap with 00:08:834 (4) -
- 00:15:888 (7) - I really don't hear any sound on this tick tho
- 00:17:266 (5,1) - Swap NC, since (5) starts a new stanza.
- 00:17:753 - Also really weird to skip this vocal start imo, i would map it map it map it!
- 00:22:293 (4,1) - Swap NC
- 00:27:969 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of this edgy flow, you can make something diffirent here~
- 00:34:131 (1) - Missing Clap on end
- 00:55:537 (3) - Prefer to continue this 1 -2 NC pattern, so yea, can u put NC here?
- 01:03:807 (1) - I want to have this big white tick clickable!!!!
- 01:05:266 (1) - Remove clap on this head, because i don't hear any clap-sound thing here : /
- 01:15:320 (4) - Remove Whistle and add Finish instead.
Ok, that's all. Uffff, hope i helped with something, good luck :3/