MoonShade wrote:

Easy
00:11:326 (1) - add clap (repeats, 00:19:674 (1) ...)
00:41:065 (2,2) - overlapping
00:51:239 (2,1) - overlapping, you should fix this one, e.g. try to put (1) more to the bottom
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:08:456 - place circle?
01:09:761 - ^
01:37:413 (5,1) - overlapping
01:46:804 (1) - spacing: too much distance to the previous circle
01:57:239 - map till this point, start break here?
02:06:109 (1,2) - you can make this a slider to make it easier to catch (2) bit it isn't necessary (repeats)

Normal
00:11:326 (2) - add clap (repeats like in easy)
00:18:109 (3) - remove clap (repeats: 01:49:935 (3) ...)
00:34:283 (2) - add clap (it's on the 2nd reverse arrow)
00:36:109 (2) - ^
00:37:935 (1,2) - one grid down
00:38:196 (2) - ^ (repeats)
00:53:065 (1) - add clap (reverse arrow)
00:58:804 - add finish (slider end)
01:07:152 (1,2,3) - make this a short reverse slider
01:07:674 - add circle
01:57:239 - place something here with a finish sound

Hard
00:16:543 (6,1) - place them in a horizontal line (place 1 more to the bottom)?
01:02:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Insane
01:02:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't know if they are necessary
01:09:239 (9,10,11) - shouldn't they be on the same place as 01:08:717 (7) slider end? it looks kind of ugly how they are placed at the moment
01:15:500 (1) - move the slider 3 grids to the left
01:45:239 (4) - slider looks unsymmetric
02:00:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't know if they are necessary

Nice map, Star :3

MakJang wrote:

이지랑 노말 ㅇㅅㅇ;

[ Easy ]

00:00:630 (B) - 브레이크타임이 너무 길어요 ㅇㅅㅇ; 패턴을 추가했으면 함 )=> 죄송합니다 도저히 엄두가 안나요..ㅠㅠ
00:51:239 (2,1) - 너무 가깝내요. 거리 떨구세요
00:57:761 (5,1) - 거리가 가까운건 물론 (5)는 상하반전 하시거나 새로운위치로 ㅇㅅㅇ
01:11:326 (1) - 좌표 x:120 y:80 로?
01:36:370 (1) - 좌표 x:112 y:232 로?
01:46:282 (3) - 좌표 x:312 y:176 로?
01:46:804 (1,2) - 재생각에는 거리를 주는것이 좋을것 같내요.
01:54:891 (B) - 여기도 패턴 추가했으면 좋갰내요. 또는, 브레이크 타임을 줄여보시는건... )=> ㅜㅜㅜㅜ
02:06:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 개인적으로 재가 보기에는 이지난이도에서는 약간좀 어려울수도 있다고 봄. (1)(2)를 슬라이더로 바꾸시거나 다른 패턴으로 짜보시는건 어떨까요? => 아무래도 반복이라서 괜찮을것 같기도..

[ Normal ]

00:00:630 (B) - 이지와 동일
00:23:848 (x) - 이곳에 서클 추가?
01:54:891 (B) - 이지와 동일

나머지는 IRC로...

2번째맵 힘내센여 ㅇㅅㅇ;
STAR~★

Wiinter wrote:

Hello ^_^

General
The quality of the bg is so bad >__<"
I tried to make it look a little better, but I'm not really sure it worked. D: Anyways, I'll leave it here in case you want. ._.' Thanks.. but I'll keep mine

SPOILER

[attachment=0:0963d]Battle of rose.jpg[/attachment:0963d]

And oh, as soon as there are two green combo colours I suggest you to make the purple one in the middle of them, in the way it is now it can be a little confusing.

Easy
00:52:543 (1) - bad spacing D:

Hard
00:19:152 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:674 (4) - this silenced slider is a little silly imo D:

Insane
weird silenced notes lol (exeppt for 00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and 00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) >_>)
01:09:109 (8,9,10,11) - 0 distance spacing?
01:11:848 (11) - new combo

Well, that's it. Nice map for a nice song, have a star.

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

i'm somewhat flexible with the 120BPM rule

insane

00:35:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make better looking?

00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same
01:09:239 (9,10,11) - just stack it all on one spot, like this its just ugly

hard

ok

normal

nice

easy

00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - place these more nicely
good map, star!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Thanks for asking for a mod.

[Easy]

00:14:978 (1) - This spinner would probably be disorienting for new players, as there are notes to hit a beat after it. Maybe you could make it a nice U slider and lead it into the note?

00:50:456 (2,1) - The spacing of 2 and 1 is really close, which with this approach rate would be really confusing.

[Normal]

Looks a lot like easy o.o

I can't really find anything bad.

[Hard]

Looks like a Normal+ lol. Aaah, can't find anything wrong. ;;

[Insane]

00:16:413 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - This parts' hitsounds soung wrong.
01:08:717 (7,8,9,10,11) - Uhh..

Wow, uh, yeah, all I can do. ;;

1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)

1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".

1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.

1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.

1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.

nante wrote:

[General]
Current kiai time is too long:
01:21:761 (1) - end 1st kiai here
01:32:456 (2) - start 2nd kiai here

[Easy]
01:11:326 (1) - 2 grids left to go in line with previous 2 notes
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here
02:06:109 (1) - make a slider that ends on (2). Hitting 1/4 note in easy is a bit too hard
02:08:196 (1) - ^
02:10:283 (1) - ^
02:12:370 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:07:152 (1,2,3) - either make it a repeating slider, or delete 2 and 3
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Hard]
01:15:500 (1) - I don't think that silence is necessary here

[Insane]
00:33:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why chaning distance between streams? Don't do that. Same goes for the rest of the streams.


quite nice, star

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. TAGS: Remove "Rozen", "Maiden" and "OST" , Those are already included in the source.
2. Lead In is different for Insane. (Just use 2000 for all the diffs)

Easy

1. 00:17:065 (1,2,3) - Try to move patterns around, this pattern is like "under" the last pattern. Something like this
2. 00:34:022 (2) - In my opinion , you should NOT use these kind of repeating sliders on Easy. Try this, You get the same effect and the slider is acceptable for easy. (The same suggestion for similar sliders)
3. 00:50:456 (1,2) - This slider placement is bit confusing for rookies, try this, It's easier to read and less confusing.
4. 01:07:152 (1,2) - The same situation about the 1/4 repeating sliders, Try making the slider "1/2" longer then add a repeat and remove (2). e.g.
5. 01:09:239 (1) - ^
6. 01:16:543 (2) - Read above (00:34:022)
7. 02:06:109 (1,2) - Since (2) is placed on 1/4 , It's a bit hard to hit on the right time, So I suggest to change (1) & (2) for a single slider, remember to make things as simple as possible for "Easy".

Normal

1. 00:56:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent, The objects are placed at the same distance in the timeline, so use the same spacing for all of them.
2. 01:07:152 (1,2,3) - You should save 1/4 triplets for Hard and Insane. Repeating sliders are ok because those are easier to hit but I'm not too sure about this one. Even if the BPM 115 this is out of place imo.
3. 01:08:456 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern is too hard for normal imo, Uhm the object placement makes it even harder to play. If you won't change the pattern, at least change the way the objects are placed to something easier to read.

Hard

1. 01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This sounds better like this, Try it.

Insane

1. 02:13:934 (1) - You used the same spinner for the other 3 diffs, try this for Insane.

Nice Hitsounds and Mapset~